5. Vada - (19) vs. 12. DaAlmightDolla - (7) VOTE NOW!

[J o o k]

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[DaAlmightyDolla]

lets make history
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ps spell my name right jook

[vada]

no doubt

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[DaAlmightyDolla]

"There are some things under the sun that aren't meant to be understood."

Since day 1 she already knew he wasn’t the same
because at age 2 he already knew how to spell out his name...
just by using a few wooden pieces from a children’s game
so in that one moment in time, she knew he would be just fine
as she felt cleansed by the world as she bathed in her sons shine
but when her sunshine became a bleeding rainbow..
she had no choice but to let the pain flow
but never let the pain show and have it become her main foe
because even on the rainiest days.. The grain grows
and so she knew his brainstorms will never be a drought
no mansion but still a pillar in the house
however still a figure no one could figure out
but i figured I knew what he was really all about
until she ended up dead and it scrambled the whole situation
How could ones creation lead to their termination?
no explanation for this violation
his vindication had no relation to an education
he always exceeded expectation
Could this be a culmination of pressures retaliation?
Was it life’s trails and tribulations that exceeded his toleration
and now created this monster in the human population?
an abomination of a man once credited as a genius
on this 3rd rock from the sun,1 rock right behind Venus
who stood in awe of Allah while still praising Jesus

Like the almighty he brought death right alongside
he listened to birds sing but wasn't content until the song cried
so he shot at the birds until he could finally claim a bullseye
"gotcha" he said when hitting his target right between both eyes
his attention turned on humans like you and I
and it all became a game as this world he tried to purify
he embodied the essence of do or die
do as he wishes or die with the rest
we became pawns on his board of chess
with each death a check on his graded test
a corner piece in a puzzle of 1000 or more no less
none the less and further more...
we couldn't silence this lions roar
as he infected the world with his own disease
a kidney shot that left the world on one knee
as anarchy marched he did another thing we couldn't understand
he made a tie from a rope he tied with both bleeding hands
as he hung it gave hope, as he hung from his throat a defeated man
but was this the thrill of victory or the agony of defeat
because before he made history he left one more goal to meet
there was a note tittled "the cure" taped to his feet
on his left the encrypted message on the right the cypher
could this really be the antidote for the bite of the viper


[MESSAGE]


RN KVIUVXGRLM KVIHLMRURVW, Z TLW MLG BVG KILKSVHRAVW
Z GRGZM DZRGRMT GL YV RWLORAVW YB RWOV VBVH
HL ZH BLF IVZORAV GSV DLIOWH WVNRHV, IVXLTMRAV NB HFKIVNZXB
NB YRIGS DZH Z YOVHHRMT, BLFI WVZGSH Z MVXVHHRGB
HL SZGV NB NVGSLWH YFG ZWLIV GSV IVHG LU NV
ZH ML LMV XLFOW XOZRN GSVB TLG GSV YVHG LU NV
YFG NB XLMHXRVMXV SZFMGVW DSZG DZH OVUG LU NV
HL GL NZPV GSV ELRXVH HGLK, OVG GSRH YV NB LMOB TLLW WVVW
GSV XFIV RH SRWWVM DSVIV OLHG HLFOH QLFIMVB GL YV UIVVW
GSV ZMHDVI RHMG ZH XLNKORXZGVW ZH RG HVVNH
RM LGSVI DLIWH GSV XFIV IVHRWVH SRWWVM RMHRWV BLFI WIVZNH
TLLWYBV XIFVO DLIOW. R DRM ZTZRM


[CYPHER]

Z Y X W V U T S R Q P O N M L K J I H G F E D C B A
A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

[vada]

Seal It With....Kisses
by Vada



"Blood In, Blood Out"


She sat at the table in the kitchen, a lady full of tension
Waiting for the pension to a crazy intuition
Rain drops racing on the window she stayed awake and listened
For a phone call she dozed off to wake up in ascension…

The baby of a Christian yet with atheist intentions
A prostitute at night…by day a little fenced in
She never thought to pray, see she was pray for many rich men
Ashamed and so afraid she had to pay for this attention
She baited em and lynched them, she was a ho without a pimp
Who seduced a lot of men, and then would choke em it was sick
She put a rope around they dick, she focused on the hit
Broke a couple of their ribs and put a hole up in em quick
And the moment that they dripped and bled, she puckered up her lips
Smeared the blood around…and then she touched them with a kiss
One above the dick the belly button and their lips
3 kisses with each victim, she was the toughest one to get
On the run since 96, the body count hit 64
And detective Kristen Moore, couldn’t take this shit no more
See Kristen was the type of cop who lost her kid and formed
A grudge when her husband was found dead with the kisses...sure
She took it to heart, who wouldn’t when her family hit the morgue
By a killer with a vengeance, this was Kristen’s instant war
Her daughter was kidnapped around the time the killings formed
So of course Kristen felt her husband and daughter was killed with force
By the notorious kissing whore...Kristen sore from her losses
Took the case a decade ago, and went to war with these convicts
Conviction after conviction, with awards and an office
Promotion after promotion, she opened doors for her bosses
But the force of her conscience kept her wishing for vengeance
She almost gave up….2 years passed no victims with kisses
But she didn’t forget this she kept sending to prisons
Criminal masterminds and kept switching positions
This wasn’t different for Kristin, her dedication way designed
From the day she was deprived of her baby and her guy
She preyed at night and cried with her face up to the sky
Kristen finally got over it, and then some changes were applied
An average day she took a ride, and felt the vibe of her phone
She looked down caller ID to her surprise was unknown
She answered to a woman’s voice asking if she was riding alone
The woman said she had some info Kristen would die if she owned
She said at 9 on the dot have your phone be on time and at home
Be alone and I’ll tell you where you can find her but don’t
Think about trying to show courage, you’ll be slaughtered it’s fair
But I can tell you who the kissing whore is….I solemnly swear
Kristen sits shocked in her chair, staring an awkwardly breathing
Her head shook, she gets a lead foot and starts bobbing and weaving
Through traffic smacking her horn of course honking and screaming
Running through red lights Kristen beacame a cop with a demon
She talks to god with her reasons, and god replies that I hear you
He said I’m near you take the rosary beads from your rearview
Do what your heart says...she took a confuse look at the clear blue
With a fearful tone, she shows no remorse but her tears do
She pulls up and it’s weird to the point nothing’s in vision
She walks in the house without doubt she just runs to the kitchen
She feels funny with tension as if something is missing
She checks her purse, no phone, some other stuff and her lipstick

She sat at the table in the kitchen, a lady full of tension
Waiting for the pension to a crazy intuition
Rain drops racing on the window she stayed awake and listened
For a phone call she dozed off to wake up in ascension…


A phone rings she wakes up and he vision it needs time
To see what’s right in front her...Kristen indeed cries
To her surprise stands her daughter she gives her a free try
And asks her to her face, you know the killer? I see...why?
Did you hide all of these years admit it if we lie
We’re only hurting each other the killer indeed sighs
Her daughter said I know…the knife hits her she bleeds, dies
Then Kristen takes her daughters blood and kisses her 3 times



"If I'm close enough to see you I'm close enough to kill you."

[Lucifa]

this is a bit of a strange one ..

DAD - you know I like your "out there" stuff .. but seriously .. I can't be bothered to do that code thing .. I came in here direct from the lounge thread with the intention of doing it .. but after reading the verse .. I just really wasn't compelled to .. I do know the word "DEED" is in there though .. lol .. anyways .. the piece itself was uninspiring .. it was smooth to read but the content just didn't connect with me .. I like your writing in general but this wasn't on par for my money .. the code was a neat little idea .. but if this really adds to the verse in content then sorry .. but I can't be fucked to crack it .. I think it does add to the topic though as being something I won't understand .. lol .. *shrug* .. it's cool but not cool enough ..

Vada - this was almost a bomb .. I really .. REALLY .. enjoyed reading this .. flow was nice and the content was interesting and involving on some Se7en vybe .. imagery was there and it was all knitted together great .. aside from the odd grammar issue .. then the final stanza hit .. and it confused me .. the wording of it was very awkward and it took 3 reads to grasp what was being narrated .. which was a shame cos from the introduction of the killer to the narration of Kristen I loved it .. then I wasn't 100% sure what was going on at the end .. I think I get it - ie. daughter (number 2?) is the killer? and Kristen kills her as she did her victims, including her dad and sister .. right? .. or did the daughter (number 2?) know her mum was infact the killer and let her know so Kirsten killed her as she did her other victims? .. the latter not making sense tbh since you said she was a cop chasing the killer .. so I go back to my 1st conclusion of it .. which I'm sure it is .. but like I say .. awkward wording didn't really get this across properly ..

Vote = Vada .. yeah I know .. I didn't 100% grasp the ending .. but fuck it .. I think I know it .. and tbh .. even if the ending had been a phonecall saying "it's Hilda from number 3404 Hanbilling Street" .. I wouldn't have cared .. I enjoyed getting to the end so much it made up for it .. it had its flaws .. but this was a really enjoyable and entertaining read that I even forgot what DAD's verse was about .. Vada simply outshone and outwrote DAD here ..

[Got Life?]

Vote: will edit vote in later...just deciphered DAD's fucking shit.

Dad - First off...I can't believe I actually wasted my time deciphering all of that...hopeing that it would somehow make your piece better or bring it together...instead this was some of the most dragging and lifeless piece of writing i've read in a long time...you need to spend more time on your writing than on trying to pull some coding out of a hat...

RN KVIUVXGRLM KVIHLMRURVW, Z TLW MLG BVG KILKSVHRAVW

IM PERFECTION PERSONIFIED, A GOD NOT YET PROPHESIZED

Z GRGZM DZRGRMT GL YV RWLORAVW YB RWOV VBVH

A TITAN WAITING TO BE IDOLIZED BY IDLE EYES

HL ZH BLF IVZORAV GSV DLIOWH WVNRHV, IVXLTMRAV NB HFKIVNZXB

SO AS YOU REALIZE THE WORLDS DEMISE, RECOGNIZE MY SUPREMACY

NB YRIGS DZH Z YOVHHRMT, BLFI WVZGSH Z MVXVHHRGB

MY BIRTH WAS A BLESSING, YOUR DEATHS A NECESSITY

HL SZGV NB NVGSLWH YFG ZWLIV GSV IVHG LU NV

SO HATE MY METHODS BUT ADORE THE REST OF ME

ZH ML LMV XLFOW XOZRN GSVB TLG GSV YVHG LU NV

AS NO ONE COULD CLAIM THEY GOT THE BEST OF ME

YFG NB XLMHXRVMXV SZFMGVW DSZG DZH OVUG LU NV

BUT MY CONSCIENCE HAUNTED WHAT WAS LEFT OF ME

HL GL NZPV GSV ELRXVH HGLK, OVG GSRH YV NB LMOB TLLW WVVW

SO TO MAKE THE VOICES STOP, LET THIS BE MY ONLY GOOD DEED

GSV XFIV RH SRWWVM DSVIV OLHG HLFOH QLFIMVB GL YV UIVVW

THE CURE IS HIDDEN WHERE LOST SOULS JOURNEY TO BE FREED

GSV ZMHDVI RHMG ZH XLNKORXZGVW ZH RG HVVNH

THE ANSWER ISNT AS COMPLICATED AS IT SEEMS

RM LGSVI DLIWH GSV XFIV IVHRWVH SRWWVM RMHRWV BLFI WIVZNH

IN OTHER WORDS THE CURE RESIDES HIDDEN INSIDE YOUR DREAMS

TLLWYBV XIFVO DLIOW. R DRM ZTZRM

GOODBYE CRUEL WORLD. I WIN AGAIN

Vern - I think i've written to many gore pieces because reading your piece, i'm like...it's either the daughter or kristen moore is bi-polar...the ending worked...the rhyming was smooth and the story just pulled you in so much that it just all worked...nothing over the top this week, but just a great execution...

the daughter confronting the mother, the mother realizing her bi-polar disorder, yet still killing her...

it just works.

vote = Vada.

[J o o k]

Over the no shows

[Mound 10]

dad - i think that your plot was semi-creative, I even appreciate the coding that you spent time doing. it's just the piece was so average. nothing about it really stood out. one thing i would work on if i were you and going to continue writing, is your writers voice. it's just not strong, it doesn't carry me through the piece. i had to kind of force myself at points. i think once you develop that you will be a good writer indeed.

vada - this is probably the 2nd best piece i read this week, i can definitely see this being a lifetime movie (laughs). but on the other hand the flow was smooth as a babies ass, and the use of vocab grabbed me and gave me a sense of freshness. this was a very good read, keep doing your thing. good twist too.

vote = vada

[TheReturn]

DAD - Ok, I've said how I feel about the cipher. Honestly, it wouldn't be that bad of an idea if the verse itself was worthy of it. I was just so bored through the read that I got to the code and was like "are you kidding me?" and gave up. Now that Got Life? has decoded it, I'm glad that I didn't spend my time doing it. Just not a verse that really offered very much entertainment in my opinion.

Vada - Much better written, much better flow, idea was good but the ending wasn't done well in my opinion. If it was a second daughter you certainly never mentioned her, and the fact that the mother would kill her own daughter in the same manner (or any manner for that matter) is just weird and kind of unrealistic. If the mother was the killer, why was she spending all her time chasing the killer? That would be some schitzophrenic type shit, but honestly it doesn't even matter because the piece as a whole was more than enough to get my vote over DAD's piece.

So, vote = vada.

[Lord Drama]

I really liked the creativity aspect of Dads verse.. shit was original and to be honest, I dont even know how to unscript that shit.. but I read what gotlife had posted after breaking it.. The verse itself had strong areas such as the emotion level and explanations for why this special dude was not good..

vada.. cool story.. the flow of your wording was above and beyond.. I liked the character development and steady pace of the story, which by the way was told with more clarity than your oponents.. it had more direction... solid drop.

vote vada

[J o o k]

DAD came with that shit. He is always very creative. I think this is another instance of him being creative. Good flow, good storyline. I think you could develop your plots a little more thoroughly, and not even the plot more so character familiarization and background. I am a fan of your writing and this was a pretty cool piece, definitely no disappointment to end the season on. Vada killed it this week in my opinion. He didn't even dumb down the verse like he typically does and I think that's what makes him, him. Because recently he was dumbing down to much and I was like this isn't Vern. Welcome back. Dope flow, dope story, and shit was nice. Can't wait to see what you bring next week against Got Life?.

Vote - Vada.

[RICO]

wow.

Dad, awsome peice, in my opinon, i liked the whole code thing, it gave me something to and ended the story in with perfection. your flow is right on, i could easily read this with out, having to go back and re-read. very very creative since i been in the leauge i havent that.


Vada-how can anything you do look bad? i mean you flow is nice, its always creativce, and you have a nice way of tie'n things together. the whole ending though was kinda......what? i mean i get it but, wasnt where i thought you where going...... but then again i cant say nothing bad about your shit.


vote-dad


i somply enjoyed his peice more.....thats all


nothing personal