5. Got Life? (9-4) vs. 6. Macmili (2-0)

[J o o k]

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[Got Life?]

Lets do this one for Helmetta hahah

[Macmili]

lmao

48 lines for good measure, whatta ya say?

Contendership: 3. Juked (3-0) vs.4. S. Issue (6-3)
13. TheReturn (9-1) vs. 14. DaAlmightyDolla (6-4)
7. vada (7-2) vs. 8. TeKneeK (3-1)
15. .ApoGee. (4-3) vs. 16. Bonnie (4-1)

[Got Life?]

64 lines is sometimes to little for me, so i'll most likely be going to the limit.

votes:
1. 13. TheReturn (9-1) vs. 14. DaAlmightyDolla (6-4)
2. Contendership: 3. Juked (3-0) vs.4. S. Issue (6-3)
3. 17. Condescending (2-2) vs. 18. Lucifa (9-4)
4.

[Got Life?]

Picture this,
You're in Cancun, now eighteen years old,
It's legal to drink, so it all appears gold,
You're there with just family and friends,
Sweating and anxious at how Amalie tends,
To stretch and bend while mounting desire,
Indeed you'd perspire surmounting a fire,
That's building in you, although she's family,
You let shit build creating a great calamity,
And so a plot thickens for tonight's masquerade...
Slipping her a pill-
Leaving her betrayed,
While starting to live a lie full of regret,
So as that mask goes on, you light her cigarette,
Letting desires build and simply marinate,
Already tasting the end of this tragic date,
Knowing that the lie soon coming is costly,
Succumbing to frosty-
Lips or maybe the beer and tropical drinks,
You soon find that oh so unstoppable minx,
Twisting her hips while licking her lips,
Pinching the tips-
Of her fingers, while grasping the night,
As you start dancing she's gasping "alright",
Your hands start to roam over her flesh,
You slowly grow bolder and mesh-
Saliva off of your tongue with her sweat,
Your mind starts to writhe with regret,
Yet your lips are latched to her neck,
Emotions run wild, unmatched in a wreck,
Where big brother lures in baby sister,
Playing tongue games of crazy twister,
All because you gave her a little pill,
Burning lust that won't belittle still-
With the angel on your shoulder screaming,
Your bodies smolder, beaming-
Simply with desire, a need to just fuck,
In your own world, who'd ever trust luck,
To keep you both away from the world,
Moving onto the beach numb, now curled-
Within the very arms of one another,
Two children birthed from the same mother,
Except you're the only one who knows,
Because you chose, to expose-
Extacy and sex with feens to your baby sister,
Her big brother...an incestuous mister,
You were supposed to protect her,
Instead you chose to inject her,
Uninhibited, so you didn't use protection,
She'll wake on the beach with no recollection,
Finding herself alone, bruised and confused,
Reaching the shower and feeling so used,
As you watch her launch into a cold world,
While she witness her little grip hurled-
Until she's long lost security,
Breeding a child, the bitter cost of impurity,
A child never to know you as its father,
Yet when you look in his eyes,
You know why you feel such a bother,
All you can think when you look in her eyes,
Is how you betrayed her, parted her thighs,
And each time that malnurished baby cries,
You drink even more as a part of you dies...

[Macmili]

CIA CONFIDENTIAL:

As you know... Iran has a space program
we're not quite sure where it's based though, plans~
have been traced......
to erase all man
they need to take a seat like a baseball fan
the idea is to send a nuke straight into the moon~
during an eclipse (just so they can see the plume)
they're not gonna add another crater I'll presume
we're talkin' onomatopoeias GREATER than "Kaboom!"...
some say the moon has a face (so kids can wave it um) ................. (wave at him)
but enough Uranium will split his cranium,
turn his organized list into miscellaneous (with missiles)
get the picture? OK, Jesus...
the problem with this is the pieces will leave orbit
& if they impact Earth, it's up to people to absorb it
we're lookin at meteors, tidalwaves, & earthquakes
followed by diseased birds & a decrease in birthrates
"World War 3 will begin" is a possible prediction
which would only speed up the process of extinction
but if war doesn't break out this is what'll happen
we'll have less than 10 years left because we will be trapped in~
an unbalanced planet without tides or wind
& not to mention we could be knocked out of alignment
it's a devastating plan because that's how they designed it
& it's safe to say they really hope we didn't find it
but between me and you, there's not a thing we can do
we can't shoot down a rocket cruizin at mach 2
naa dude, even if we tried the shit's protected~
by guide rockets (to intercept our interceptors)
but there is still time, all isn't lost
we've advised the government to do whatever it costs
even if it means bombarding them with nukes
we can put Israel's entire arsenal to use...



RE: CIA CONFIDENTIAL

It's funny you really think these fuckers can kill us
you want to bomb a whole country over a couple guerillas?
we're workin towards an invasion, remember?
you can't hide a warhead from a UN inspector
plus Israel has Patriots in the vicinity
(enemies can't launch attacks within their proximity)
even if they did, they wouldn't reach past higher~
than 1000ft... then the attack would back fire
please... they couldn't pull this off in their wildest dreams
with their low budget programs & childish teams
they're years away from nucleur technology
and probably aren't too clear on their rocketry
honestly, we have bigger fish to fry
for instance, China's missions, high in the distant sky
the shit provided here is hardly as immense

-Jonathon Kametz, U.S Department of Defense



Dear Mahmoud (The President of Iran):

The silos are loaded...
we're ready to go through with the plan
we won't launch from home, 'cause we don't have the criteria
we've set up at a desolate pad in Siberia
the world won't see it coming until it's too late
Allah will clap for us when we walk through the gate
and the virgins will be waiting for us to hit em up
but until then.. we have until the next eclipse to live it up

If the world should blow itself up, the last audible voice would be that of an expert saying it can't be done.
- Peter Ustinov

[J o o k]

Technically Got Life loses via no show. But I recall macmilli saying he doesn't like to win like that so we'll leave it open for gl to edit in. Macmil if you disagree let me know and I'll close it.

Nigguhs need to stop wishing and hoping for no shows that's how you get fucked.

[Got Life?]

Mac and I know each other so I'm sure he's not going to pull some gay shit like that, I just put my verse up, was at the bar last night and got back in no condition to look at the net...I figure it's safe for people to vote up.

[Macmili]

technically I noshowed cuz he had a noshow verse up and I posted after the deadline with a full verse. in any case, I'm not gonna press charges...

[Lucifa]

interesting ..

GL? - this was rather simple in concept by certain standards for you .. however .. atleast no-one died .. I think the flow with this piece was one of it's stronger points .. it read really smoothly with little to no forced wording to carry it off .. like I say .. the concept itself wasn't anything special .. but I think the simple change in tact you used to revert it from a straight forward story into a blend of 1st and 3rd person narrative (ie telling the story as it happens but projecting it as telling the reader "this is what you did") worked quite well .. I don't however see how you felt so confident in the verse of the week comment you made .. this wasn't setting any fires .. it was a cool read in general though ..

Mac - mixed feelings on this .. it had it's merits .. the content and approach to the topic was pretty good .. the structure wasn't working for me though .. I also don't really see the point in the brackets .. I'm reading it and looking for the relevence of the brackets and distracting myself from the piece .. and that's your fault not mine .. (ya feel me?) .. the structure was a bit strange and this had a knock on effect for the flow .. had the flow and structure of the verse been more consistent then this woulda been close cut .. but ..

Vote = Got Life? .. it is close as far as the content goes .. cos I did like how Mac approached his topic .. it just wasn't showcased as well as GL?'s verse .. who had a stronger flow and far more solid structure .. a smooth and pretty interesting read if lacking in creativity as far as the concept goes .. cool battle though ..

[S. Issue]

GL?: well, this wasnt your normal story in many senses. while the flow was good and smooth, you also negotiated the piece in a slightly different nature than usual. it was interesting to see you going with some changes here and there, as well as your pretty straight up and down approach to the topic. i did, however, find the use of topic interesting and it kept me wanting to read because, although the twist was fairly obvious, it was done well and, as Luc said, with "tact".

Mac: obviously, you took some time to digest the topic you picked and it showed by your use of structuring and theme of your verse. it was very interesting as we were showed different characters, but it didnt capture me emotionally as i thought it would. GL?'s verse at least brought along pent up feelings of fear because of how taboo the incestuous relationship is within the piece. your story, however, didnt captivate me like the relation of the other piece. your flow stumbles along at points and you really should work on setting up your verse, because it was interesting, but i agree with Luc, the parenthesis were messing with me head.

vote: GL?

[Bonnie Bathory]

Lemme start off by sayin Ima bit of a grump today, so I'm likely to be more rude and critical than sweet and forgiving in my votes, its nothin personal...

GL?: After the first few lines I am suspecting you didn't feel you needed your A game this week... got all the way thru it the first try... as usual with most twisted verses... I duno why grotesque writing appeals to me more, but it does... some of your lines were meh, coulda been better written, not a fan of the calamity line for instance... but for the most part this was nicely done... flow varied, storys progression was descriptive and easy to follow, it was engaging... concept was gross but thats probably 75% of it's charm

Mac: I was working with you to get into this until the baseball fan line... not a good line to throw in on the topic IMO... concept of some of your lines was meh, corny i guess... others were awkward... and some were pretty creative and appriciated for that... having to think too much about what youre saying behind your metaphors throughout this first part of this piece takes away from your story progression, and then a few more lines into your piece your nice flow you had goin on breaks into too much
bunch of unrhyming words rhymingword
bunch of unrhyming words rhymingword
which Im seeing is common, but not particularly skillful or interesting IMO, and VS Got Life? complex and varying flow is nessecary since his doesn't lack much often...
Ok I've finished... the story was there and was alright, good use of the topic, it wasnt written in an appealing way to read however...

V> GL?... his verse was written better mechanically and his story was more appealing to read...

[TeKneeK]

mods: as much as i despise GOT LIFE and the easy-possibility of me voting against him on every possible occasion...

i am not able to or will vote on this match... as does wit THERETURN's match... just a FYI

[TheReturn]

GL? - You sick fuck. I'm proud of you for not killing anyone in this one, and I like how you went with the pictures at the beginning and the end. This was written pretty well, flow stayed on track, Amalie is a weird name I would probably have chosen something different. Little Amalie maybe, but seriously this wasn't anything outstanding or horrible. Just a nice piece to keep you rolling into the playoffs.

Macmili - When I read the first line I was thinking fuck here comes another political piece, but I was happy you took it a different direction. The flow started off really good with some inner rhyme and such thrown in, but then as it went on it kind it's like you lost that mindset and went back to simplicity. The story was good and I didn't have any trouble reaching the end, but I don't feel like you were as polished at Got Life? in this one.

Gotta vote GL? here, more enjoyable, better written, all that stuff.

[Got Life?]

lol at Tek's explanation, vote against me all you want Tek you're going to stand out like a sore vagina.