5. DiC 72-19 v. 6. Shrug 10-6

[DiC GeTs GuLLy]

RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS

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[*]Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list]
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Topics Submissions And Ranks Are HERE!:
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1036561

[Shrug]

hahah. damn dude, whoever makes these rstl banners needs to work on their spelling abilities. lmao @ writting addictions.

haha anyhoo. good luck



“I wish upon the stars I could chase the sun
around the planet to stay with today.“
-Shrug

“On Mondays, I would sit and watch my sons play.
In some way it would remind me of that one phase
we live before the fun fades. Before our tongues blades
could cut through love’s gaze. It made me want to chase the sunrays
Around earth to stay within this one place…
This moment… (Of loathin’ to soak in his young age.)”

Cause as I sat and observed the facts were absurd
As the message, unable to be captured by words
was trapped in reverb of my kids laugh and his mirth.
I listened,
And almost fell back from the surge of the happiness heard.
Their habits had purged any sadness on earth
Cause they both attacked their life with a tactful might
to extract the strife of any path in sight
yet still grabbed real tight to the elements we have to preserve.

Whether life’s fickle weather is, or used to be harsh, they were
Able to use the little measures to maintain the simple pleasures
That used to be ours, but now that we’re old with bruises and scars
Blinded and useless we are, with incentives clueless and sparse.
But what if we could choose to restart, and stay in our youth to just lark?!

To stay back in the days that I’d take naps,
played jacks and make believe.
Laidback, before my escapades path chased ass
and gave daps to the hate we breed.
My days changed black, afraid a’ facts of the
grey path that my mistakes would lead.

Thinking a lot, what if we could regain the innocence lost
and obtain the slain pinnacle thoughts children concoct.

If I could connect with all of their priorities
I’d find more to me than whores and weed.
Of course! You see?!
Life’s chore is glee, and to open my door to peace
when remorseful seeds grow into sordid deeds
That besiege a hoard of grief,
all I had to do was soar thru trees,
Or explore through leaves,
take fake swords and steeds
and create a war with greed.
Race with high torque and speed,
or just lie on the floor and breathe
to discover what the orchids see!



Have we forgot what its like to just descend a slide?.....
To pretend to fly! Or befriend the lies friends tend to hide?
Or has the pretentious drive to defend our pride
left us inept, unable to accept and then subside.

As I dismantled all I could handle, my life was transformed.
Its like I was a camel and that night was the sandstorm,
My sons life was the ample candle to keep my hands warm.

….On Doomsday.
I mean, “Tuesday”,
I grabbed my suitcase,
and went off to work
for those jerks in toupees.

Next to my cubicle was the friend I talk to as usual,
A suitable fellow, always picking at the top of his cuticles
Asked me, is anything that's thought to be beautiful provable?

I said,

“My kid taught me a funny thing in case you were wondering,
but there’s no connection to those stunning dreams
you have while your slumbering and to what any money brings.
Take a wade in the summer springs while its thundering…
Make a trade of lust or bling for another thing…
Cause what we get paid, are just numbers under kings,
muttered to underlings…

Cause yesterday I just sat and observed
An attitude we’ve all had since our birth,
That adjures at first then gets trapped in this earth
with the things that haven’t real worth.
Now we practically search for hap and its perks
When everything’s black. And it hurts
To find this unpreferred path is deserved.
My kids taught me this, their mom used to say they were genius
...And at last I concur.

“He (my child) attacked everything in life with a mix of extraordinary genius and naive incompetence, and it was often difficult to tell which was which.”

[DiC GeTs GuLLy]

Topic: Manipulative Girl

Intro

His senses were stressed over every intricate step
This was his debt, prepaid so he would give it respect
Attentively kept a safe distance watching them get undressed
That's when Steve crept with sniper precision snapping pictures of flesh
Intimately meshed and as the sun's beginning to set
The light drifts to her breast, his tongue licks them to death
Her nipples erect, facial expressions looking mistfully blissed
Intensely Steve pressed the button while wishing they'd slip
And injure their necks beyond repair as he took fifty more clicks
With the camera because they're committing more sins than just sex
A classic case, but the aftertaste sickened his breath
Which would suggest a need to leave so he did to his left
A shifty exit, taking a drag from his lit cigarette
Knowing it would upset the client, but this was the risk
Into the steps of investigating the shit you'd expect
Another cheater caught at the slurpee machine sipping some dick

Investigation Day 5

James is our client and he's allowed us his place for our spy kit
With video cams hidden in plants for every angle provided
There were days it was silent, but still we waited to find it
And here they come with spearing tongues embraced in compliance
My other pics gave her ways to deny this affair
The light was unclear with sun spots on the right of from the glare
So this video shoot of her thoroughly licking this dude
Will be the proof of what promiscuous moods shifts them to do
Of course, they persisted to prove the attraction they shared
With whoever this young boy was grabbing her hair
And slapping her rear in reaction to steer ass in the air
Passion was there, they screamed of love with collapsed bodies bare
I know this will settle it, smiling while holding the evidence
'Til I had chosen to edit it and it shows she's molesting kids
The boy in question this ho's molesting looks 13 or less
But unsure because some look young to get dirty with sex


Joey Grecco from Cheater's has emerged on the steps
To tell Mark, his wife does more at home than surfing the net

"Your suspicions of her are correct, you see them flirting and kiss.
I'm sorry you have to see this, but look at her purged on his d$%#
The day furthered in this when you let us furnish your den
With cameras lurking within and you can see she's first to begin
This thirst she extends, that day Kate said she's working 'til 10
Also, he looks too young for her to be learning from him



The Confrontation - Uncensored

Mark is confused with every act they've trapped for scarring his view
His heart was in two, the pieces dropped and shattered with parts turning blue

"I've seen more than enough. I can't believe this whore was my 1
Take me to them right now so I can torture their fun."

Everything was on course to expunge this source that erupts
Soon as she's forced to get bust from her own torridous lust
There's more of a fuss as Kate exits and goes to her beige Lexus
"What's up bitch? I saw the blow job you gave Kevin.
I wondered why before I met you, you were hovering by
And waking me up to cuddle through nights after chugging Bud Lights
To front as my wife, lying like I'm the love of your life
When it's my son that you like,
WTF, you dumb cunt, I'm done bitch good-bye
Thanks for making my boy a man, he's a chip off the block
You must be the reason he's always scratching an itch on his cock
Aye Kevvy, when you get done, you'll need prescriptions and gloves
From a physician because I doubt penicillin’s enough"

They all gave in and laughed while Kate cried and crashed in regret
Kevin left with his dad who of course gave him dap for the shit
In the parking lot, covering her face to mask what she did
So they aided her shame with loogies to make her a bath of their spit

Topic: Damage Control

[Pent uP]

wtf is dic doing switching verses last minute?

[DiC GeTs GuLLy]

The first verse I posted was a no show verse..... don't bring ur punk ass in my matches swaying shit

I haven't broken any rules so kindly stay the fuck outta my thread.

[Shrug]

hahah, i was wondering that myself. i still had a good few hours to show too.
=-/ i guess ive built myself an unsolicited reputation.


vote.
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post14475410

[Vigil]

shrug - The rhymes, mulits and flow were all strong in this verse. It was an enjoyable read, and far better than I expected it to be after I read the first couple of stanzas. I liked where you took the verse. But I tought the verse was too long, and the structure of the verse lakced coherency. But that didn't hurt the verse because it had very good flow.

If I could connect with all of their priorities
I’d find more to me than whores and weed.
Of course! You see?!
Life’s chore is glee, and to open my door to peace
when remorseful seeds grow into sordid deeds
That besiege a hoard of grief,
all I had to do was soar thru trees,
Or explore through leaves,
take fake swords and steeds
and create a war with greed.
Race with high torque and speed,
or just lie on the floor and breathe
to discover what the orchids see!
^I liked this stanza the most.

DIC - Another showcase of good storytelling. I like the originality of the verse, I don't think any writer has tackled this topic. The beginning of the verse was real strong as far as rhyming and flow goes, and then the writing started to fall of in the middle but it picked up again near the end. This verse was just a great example of good writing, the flow, rhymes and story were all satisfactory and very good. But I think the creativity and execution of this story is what made this verse stand apart from your opponent's verse.

The whole first stanza is quotable, exceptionally writing.


This battle is very close, both of you wrote ambiguous piece that were enjoyable. DIC's writing is better, its more revised, and his verse was written with more skill. Shrug's flow and rhymes were tight and his layout of stanzas is unconventional, and I liked that. But I think Shrug's writing was not as good as DIC's. And DIC's story was more creative, and it was something new to read. Shrug's approach to the topic was fresh, and his message good and true but I enjoyed the story over the philosophical topical. You both great pieces, but DIC's writing and story skills overshadow Shrug's.

vote - DIC

[SacriFICE]

Well, my net went out as I was typing my vote, so it's a half hour late, but given the state of things... I'd say it shouldn't be a problem to accept this one.

Anyway...

This one came down to personal preference for me, because both pieces were written quite well. I actually think you two are very skillful writers. I don't think either did better with their respective pieces. Both had solid rhyming, both had solid flow, progression and development. At the end of each piece I was left with a satisfied feeling, usually that doesn't happen from two pieces in a match. Writing styles are a bit different, yet the multis were well done from both sides. Shrug though really captured me with some of his rhyming and inner rhyming. It really made the content of his piece stand out for me. DIC's piece rhymed like his usually do, good rhyming and good content. But as I said before, this match came down to PREFERENCE for me and Shrug's piece really captured me, a lot more than DIC's, in the end it came down to which piece had the strongest effect on me, and that was Shrug's. So many dope lines, and dope ideas presented made his piece more than just a topical, but an entity in and of itself. DIC's piece was dope, enjoyable... no real outstanding flaws... but Shrug got this one for me...

You probably won't want to count this vote because it's late, if that's the case, so be it... Shrug took this one for me either way.

[DiC GeTs GuLLy]

it's not even 12am yet Sac so you vote counts

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