5. Got Life? 42-25 vs. 6. Linxz 3-2

[Baron Mynd]

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Topics Submissions And Ranks Are HERE!:
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1035644

[Linxz]

In...G'luck!

[Got Life?]

LOL...this is a fucking joke right?

[Linxz]

I Hate words Crying inside Moving slow
No one hears me Times a bitch, Yea ya Know
this place is scary, Yea I could….Rap sound good
Lost memories Murder by rhymes, gotta keep it hood
Childhood gone need Extreme cleaning, so I disburse
Out here search’n for my Daimond whispers
The Silver bullet, time does exist but I wont age

Since birth I’ve been Chosen, Notice to see life Clear
like Djs’ to juke boxes, change’n AtmoSpheres
time is limited, Reason ya end up dead…… Follow’n Peers
same fault for Listen’n, 2’rappers Garbage Last Year
been Predicted that’ll, I Overcome Fears
Writing hard, so my Wrist stressing my Tears
Nerves numb from what critics, Critique to Give

lot of Dick Riders, Damn! If I Run to Hide
Hear my Gulp, its tough to Swallow my Pride
breath of fresh Air, bring that Quietness Outside
Break’n free from Imprisonment, So let me Fly
Mental coasting visions, Got Heart I’m Ready 2’Ride
Still In the worst state, srry 4ur death & those who die
White roses of remembrance for them that Strive
At war to Live try’n Survive, whose left 2’carry the title…Thy!

Watching days as traffic fly by, put’n bullshyt Aside
While the entertainment pick to entrap our Minds
only Appeal 2’the’1s thatz Far Behind
a Zone they call a High, until Blindside in hindsight
Lost Dreams being reckless wreckage, to shatter insights
in retrospect its irrelevant 2’jive, can’t see myself 2’cop out…bribe
thousands miles stay’d focus, Drove to driven to Drive
so I do my best to Thrive, poetic Aura bitches love my Vibe
dare most to challenge Know I’m Wise, set’n to solve fractions 2’multiply

When I was Lost?
I try to put it all in the back of my mind
Only to zone out half the time
While Rolling that kush the book of rhymes
When I was lost!

We like water to oil, can’t unify might else well unionize
what ya lyrics testify, won’t justify justice to unitize
juvenile delinquent, this my clarification of my jurisdiction
no fiction with actions, all facts and truth being realistic
enlarge the count of viewers, Ya try to minimize the caption
like the jazz Renaissance , Keep my Eyes on the prize
know you relate how ya feel to Regulate, reasons of debates
religion cover only half of whatz really at state, hope 2’cover the space
wanna reach home, but I’ve been laced! place far from the plate
life tough but admit its hard, cause it gave me the shakes
probably get televise, cause in reality there’s nothing fake
Karma come running its no stunting, hope ya awake

When I was lost?
I try to put it all in the back of my mind
Only to zone out half the time
While Rolling that kush the book of rhymes
When I was lost!

I was LOST…but!

Before I could move forward
had 2’learn to Accept
where I was At&Came from
A wise man once told me
Once your born ya can’t turn Back
Ya can only recover Whatz Left
Life is full of amazement
just Gotta live to Want it
Cause in that Mind state
of having knowledge Knowing
Ya really just pay’n homage living to die...Ha
self doubt is our worst enemy, since the start of life
seeing that I’m fresh&clean, in the light I’m partial Christ
how he just flip’d his Topics, showing the bird to yall
not on that Gay shyt, but the middle Finger Bastards
scare to go first, so I guess It wont hurt
how I enlighten ya to shine out these lines
go head kick ya book head rhymes
I’mma get mine regardless no matter What Lies
BUT REMEMBER THIS!
Life isn’t a Game
Not saying its Serious
but there aint no reset BUTTON…BITCH!
Now listen When the Mic Turn Off

I was LOST…but!

"God tellin' me I'm the most brilliant man he's ever met."

NOW STEP!...HAHA

[Got Life?]

The Cure Was Her Love

Cursed with lips, that most people wouldn't purse, their gift,
Was the same as a surgeons slits,
In turn, this gift wasn't nurtured, they murdered it,
Until said person was worse for this...

...When I first approached, my pride was what hurt the most,
I used the same words to lure a hoe,
And she had worked the shows, had seen all the bursts, the flows,
The flirts, that worked on most,
But not this skirt, her thirst for hope,
Made sure she was worthy of a person's soul,
She was a fine piece of spirit, cuz it matched her figure,
She was a dime piece and clearly I had acted sicker,
And she, she, she held the cure,
I was knee-deep and quesy, but seemingly pure,
So I said, excuse me, I acted foolish,
Didn't know you were Mary cuz I practice •••ish,
So sorry for the act, I'm Louis,
You're attractive, and your words keep addin' to it,
She turned her shoulder and left,
Apparently her parenting had made her mind older than breathe,
But the weight over my chest, wouldn't let go of her scent,
It held close every moment we wrecked...

...I was played like a game in my encounters with love,
So I gave all my pain when I encountered it,
Powerful stuff, and now I'm searchin' again,
I found the person, but dispersed the rehearsed and furthered my debt...

I rubbed the disbelief out of my eyes,
When again I saw that symphony of flowers and pride,
I approached, this time with heart and sleeve combined,
I'd lose both if she'd leave my life,
She said, I'm sorry but I'm already taken,
And with that I felt my priorities changin',
With patience, I stayed and talked her down,
Said I just wanna chill, maybe walk around,
So we walked around, until found what I sought, a town,
Made of garbage, the lost and found,
Bricks split with concrete,
Above us hung someones now clean laundry,
She asked, what's here for us?
I said nothin' for you, but fear and love,
She started tearin' up, knew what was comin',
Pulled out the gun, in truth it's repugnant,
But I took what I wanted, purely for fun,
I was sick as fuck, and the cure was her love.

[Harvest]

1-100

Linxz:

Structure: 43
Story Progression: 21
Rhythm: 36
Originality: 30
Vocabulary: 30
Multi Rhymes: 27

Total: 187/600

Fav lines:

Childhood gone need Extreme cleaning, so I disburse
Out here search’n for my Daimond whispers

know you relate how ya feel to Regulate, reasons of debates
religion cover only half of whatz really at state,

Got Life?:

Structure: 30
Story Progression: 41
Rhythm: 45
Originality: 35
Vocabulary: 30
Multi Rhymes: 39

Total: 220/600

Fav lines:

When I first approached, my pride was what hurt the most,
I used the same words to lure a hoe,

She said, I'm sorry but I'm already taken,
And with that I felt my priorities changin',
With patience, I stayed and talked her down,

vote: Got Life?

good read guys

[Got Life?]

votes go here:

1. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post14461395
2. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post14461437
3. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post14461437
4. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post14461565

[MrMister]

vote Gl

Linx - this was a nice piece it was ready for recording or so it seems
but it read away easy and you used the topics which were put up
in this piece that was nice but it was just a story to read and not a story
to leave me like wow

Gl - you basicly won this due to your wordplay
the flow was ok and the story itself was nice
but the mechanics eventho u used them to death were still enough to win this

nice match up

[Vigil]

Linxz - that was a fun verse to read but some of the lines were choppy and plain confusing. But I dig the keystyles, I like the frankess in your topic, you're really blunt. The flow was okay in some parts, and not so good in others, but I liked the content up until the last part. Again, this was a fun verse to read, it was enjoyable but the writing wasn't all that.

know you relate how ya feel to Regulate, reasons of debates
religion cover only half of whatz really at state, hope 2’cover the space
wanna reach home, but I’ve been laced! place far from the plate
life tough but admit its hard, cause it gave me the shakes
probably get televise, cause in reality there’s nothing fake
Karma come running its no stunting, hope ya awake
^droppin that knowledge, good shit...

got life - I liked the flow in the begining and thru out, the rhymes were okay, and the content was good as well. It was a pretty self-explainatory piece, the title said it all. I thought the writing was better than linxz' but im guessing you rushed this verse or didn't come your best cause i've seen better from you. But you brought enough, the writing was strong where it needed to be, the beginning and the end.

So I said, excuse me, I acted foolish,
Didn't know you were Mary cuz I practice •••ish,
So sorry for the act, I'm Louis,
You're attractive, and your words keep addin' to it,
She turned her shoulder and left,
Apparently her parenting had made her mind older than breathe,
But the weight over my chest, wouldn't let go of her scent,
It held close every moment we wrecked...
^nice flow..

I liked both verses, but I thought got life's writing was more sound and his flow was less choppy and his verse had more clarity, and organization.

vote - got life

[SacriFICE]

Vote: Life

Linxz, I see what you were trying to do here, and for some of the time you pulled it off, but as a whole it seemed moreorless like a stretch, trying to tie the verse together well using those topics. Flow and rhyming were a bit difficult to read and overall the topic was decent... Not much more that I can say other than, hearing this in audio would probably do it more justice.

Life: I see you trying to utilize some slightly more complex schemes, and trust me when I say, it makes your writing some alive. Hate aside (I don't hate you), bullshit aside as well, your style is getting so much easier to follow and your writing more enjoyable to read. Keep on this path and I honestly think I might become more of a fan than a critic of your stuff. Each week you show more of what you are actually capable of... this is no exception.

[DiC GeTs GuLLy]

Originally Posted by Harvest

1-100

Linxz:

Structure: 43
Story Progression: 21
Rhythm: 36
Originality: 30
Vocabulary: 30
Multi Rhymes: 27

Total: 187/600

Fav lines:

Childhood gone need Extreme cleaning, so I disburse
Out here search’n for my Daimond whispers

know you relate how ya feel to Regulate, reasons of debates
religion cover only half of whatz really at state,

Got Life?:

Structure: 30
Story Progression: 41
Rhythm: 45
Originality: 35
Vocabulary: 30
Multi Rhymes: 39

Total: 220/600

Fav lines:

When I first approached, my pride was what hurt the most,
I used the same words to lure a hoe,

She said, I'm sorry but I'm already taken,
And with that I felt my priorities changin',
With patience, I stayed and talked her down,

vote: Got Life?

good read guys

That's an interesting way to vote, but it's not legal... you need to break down the verses in actual words. Can't just quote shit and not really give any feedback. This is why I keep telling people to read the rules so they won't keep attempting to make their own rules. Here's the rule

-your vote must include 2 lines of analysis on each verse at the least for every verse that isn't a no show verse. quotes will not count as lines of analysis towards your vote, but you can include them if you wish to do so to make your point.

[DiC GeTs GuLLy]

Linxz, this was interesting.... but there were too many awkward sequences within it that made me pause... the odd lined rhyme sequence didn't really work to well for the start of this because there wasn't additional rhyming to make up for the aukwardness really... some of it had some nice flow, but it wasn't consistent. More focus needs to be placed on some creative ideas and multi rhyme schemes I think.

Life, some nice flow to start it off with. some bad grammar word sequences as well that kinda fucked up the read of it too. Like this

Didn't know you were Mary cuz I practice •••ish,

lol, you don't practice •••ish... that's just foolish

it's jeudism that would be practiced. The concept just seemed really corny like a horrible movie. It wasn't told too badly really, but there wasn't any parts of it that stuck out to me at all either. The dramatic parts were just lacking any entertaining details and left everything pretty bland.

Didn't really like this match much

Vote Life