24. Headless Verseman (19-9) vs. 23. Shrug (6-2)

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Old 11-15-2006, 11:34 AM   #1 (permalink)
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24. Headless Verseman (19-9) vs. 23. Shrug (6-2)




RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS

RULES AND REGULATIONS - THERE'S SOME NEW SHIT SO CLICK AND READ


The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced

Due Dates

VERSES DUE: Saturday, 11:59PM PST/2:59AM EST
Verses posted after the deadline will not count!

VOTES DUE Monday, 11:59PM PST/2:59 EST
Votes posted after the deadline will not count!
[list][*]Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
[*]Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
[*]Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
[*]RECYCLING IS NOT STRICTLY PROHIBITED. You may not use any verse that you have previously used within the league at any time. Whether it was a no show, tournament verse recycled for the league or visa versa or any verse that have ever been used within the league perimeters.
[*]During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit.
[*]Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list]
Voting:[list][*]If you do not show you can still vote and post the links in your match to receive full voting points. In addition, if you do not show, yet vote on at least 4 matches (Or, every match available, should there be less than 4 matches to vote on) you will remain in the league.
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[*]3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd, 3rd).
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Old 11-16-2006, 12:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
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What up Headless,

itll be a short verse this week.
some shit came up this week that I need to handle/ cant get around.

Sorry to do this mang, Best of Luck this week, take it easy.

Piece will be called "Welcome To America"
written to the "Back In The Day" beat by Pharcyde


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http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post14234141
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post14234134
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Everyone has talent. What is rare is the courage to follow the talent to the dark place where it leads- murder


"Jekyl n Hyde" Part 1. Initial Crime Spree. forshadowing- mysterious second voice towards last verse...


"Ayo I go jekyl and hyde, my mood's shifty
First I serenade then I choose serraded blades
No longer a slave in this great american paper chase
Starving Artist, carving ya carcus with blades raised in haste
Take a taste, man you simply gotta love it
Bruise rib meat till the bones start steppin out ya stomach cousin
I bet your wondering, whats teh point of all of this
There aint none, its just another alcoholic fit
Give me a drink, better yet, give me the 5th
I'ma sit sippin till you fuckin pry it off my lips,
so get lifted...and start a riot, cuz somebody's dying
I aint lying, my insanity gives me pride like lions
I'm not Onyx, but you might feel the hot iron,
from shots firing, putting cops on the block trying,
to find HIM,
you know the one with the deranged mind
crazy enough to breathe water, ill enough to change time"

(narrator)
The second corpse, and it's switching sides within his wicked mind
Dreaming feeling guilty, and always feeling misaligned
waking up sick to his stomach, like he done it
images jump in to his thoughts while he's now fucking

he's pissed off now bitch, "Why the fuck are you buggin,
Calm the fuck down, you know, I was gonna start to tongue kiss,
whats this? about me being on your local news huh?
you fucking crazy? do you need a fucking group hug?
i'm not a killer, i've never harmed a human,
I was sleeping last night, so how did I bust those two slugs?
tell me this, whats the name of the perpatrator
cuz I never in my life practiced adverse behavior,
i'm a saint living, better yet your fucking savior,
Take some time out, look around and savor
what means most, cuz you're headed for your grave bitch
thought I'd let you slide off to the cops to give a statement?...

youre fucking stupid"...*screams*

(narrator)
Back to the damsel distressed, choking on her tears
"my knive's a thought, i'll leave you open to my ideas"

"no time to think, just drop the body and dodge
hit a bar, till the 151 bacardi is gone, thats all
keep fucking drinking till the thought of her's gone,
no bleeding heart, no body that's mauled, and its all good.."


to be continued.



*ps, sorry if shits not gramatically correct or perfectly spelled, i'm typing it in the thread, my word is shot*
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We live in a place where sinning is grace,
And hindrance creates the division that fate
And coincedence make.
The citizens live within a prison with glistening gates,
Losing patience as the cadence of their nation
flows with the rhythm of hate.

We’re all spinning with haste, to optimism’s distaste,
from the velocity of our Founding Fathers philosophies.
Trying to catch onto peace in the midst of this atrocity.
Asking questions that inevitably get lost in animosity.
When will poverty take precedence over technology?
When will democracy stop to see that people are evil,
the steeples grown feeble, and simply let it stop to breathe.

The bald eagle, the symbol of monopolys and raucity,
Has almost gone extinct! We all are free? ….Hah.
We fought to be at the cost of grief, so we aught to be.

We need others to clean our shit and our mess, and those that fit that request
Get paid a fraction than those that sit at a desk? Its hard to wish for the best
When your vocation is visionless. They say this location is limitless,
But it seems the whole nations impotence doesn’t complement
my missions wish to be sittin’ rich on top of accomplishment.

We all sit back disconnected from our enemies
In complete contentment with our amenities
And pretend to be those with empathy
For other countries but are swiftly insolent.
Now we sit with our histories hinderance, blissfully ignorant
As our reputations are tarnished, its like we’re prancing with the carcass
Of our demeanors bleak remains. And as long as our leaders keep
Merely glancing at the harmless yet romancing with the carnage,
We can all remain free with glee, dancing in the darkness.
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i vote headless, lol no...uppin this


two people drop solid and nothing??? slow asses. gluck man
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Shrug wins, there's only two crew votes allowed in a match though so your vote in the champ match is dqed and you should've voted on another match. Please read the rules.

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