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Old 11-07-2006, 08:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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11. Pain 20-15 vs. 12. Vigil 27-19




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The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced

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VERSES DUE: Saturday, 11:59PM PST/2:59AM EST
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VOTES DUE Monday, 11:59PM PST/2:59 EST
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[list][*]Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
[*]Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
[*]Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
[*]RECYCLING IS NOT STRICTLY PROHIBITED. You may not use any verse that you have previously used within the league at any time. Whether it was a no show, tournament verse recycled for the league or visa versa or any verse that have ever been used within the league perimeters.
[*]During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit.
[*]Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list]
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[*]No second chance votes! Editing votes for any reason must be approved by mods and explained in reason for editing.
[*]No bias votes! If you have a personal investment in wanting someone to lose, whether because that member voted against you once, or you just don’t like that person, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match. If have a personal investment in wanting someone to win, whether because they’re crew member, or because you want to face that person in the next week’s brackets, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match.
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[*]3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd, 3rd).
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Old 11-08-2006, 05:27 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 11-11-2006, 05:00 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Topic: Write a story using these four characters:
Superhero
Virgin
Villilan
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It's too easy to do this,
Some call it ruthless, or cooth, shit I call them a nuisance,
News kids! Worse shit can happen to you,
Attractiveness is what made me attracted to you,
So don't think it's an accident, shoot,
When I tackle ya boo, in the back, fracture her tooth,
Laughter ensues, on behalf of the savage produced,
The tragicness brewed through this cold passage she used,
Oh it's so tragic, I can see it already,
Tears drippin' from the bitch that used to feed her spaghetti,
But for now, I'm gonna shut my mouth,
Then I'll show her what it means to come around...


...It's so cold it's frigid, and I'm wondering why,
Why my boyfriend would leave me under the night sky,
He knows I hate pressure, and he pressures and pushes,
On my breasts and my pussy when I'm not ready to book it
to home, it's not him, but he's so offended,
That he said he wanted this whole shit ended,
What a lonesome message,
That's why I'm strollin' home through this cold mold shown decrepit,
Hold my breath in, stop, I thought heard somethin',
Looked to my left, it's all clear to go on here...


...I wish mom would know the difference between shit n kinfolk,
Don't she know that's why my eyes don't leave the window,
Shit yo, this shows my lack of hope,
Staring at a young lady as she happens to pass below,
Mom wonders why I stay next door,
Makes me wonder why I take breath for,
Shit, Dante's cool as hell,
He feeds me food to prove in truth he means well,
What's to stop me from thinkin' all is damned?
Hey what's that behind that garbage can?..


...Oh, if I could turn back the clock,
I'd instruct my ass to stop,
But, there ain't no controllin' time,
So it's back to my home where my soul resides,
I hope I find it, tonight it seemed to run away,
Far beyond recover, under the summer shade,
With my front door opened, I can feel it inside,
Still shaken from my words and reeling from pride...


...It's a man, but what could he possibly want?
He said somethin' to the lady, and she stopped where she walked,
An oddity, she's probably lost and she's scared,
I know I sure as hell wouldn't wanna be there,
He steps a little closer, she trembles a bit,
Didn't know if it was winter or the senses she hid,
But her senses proved true! He grabbed her wrists,
I gotta get Dante and stop this savageness!..


"Please stop!" I screamed,
He obviously did not agree with that philosophy,
I started to cry, hoping tears would melt the cold,
Instead they rolled, fell, then froze,
Then hell arose, put a knife to my throat,
Not incision yet, I still felt likely to choke...


..."Shut up bitch, I'm tryin' to love ya,
Cuz I'm lonely as fuck and you fly as motha,"
I laughed as the knife made a crease in her skin,
I got myself a girl that seems like a priss,
So she gonna love this I bet,
A lifetime scar, that's if she lives to regret,
My hand grabbed her tit,
Heard a kid talkin', he'll regret distractin' this...


..."Amy!" I screamed when I came to the scene,
I couldn't believe what I seen, the pain wouldn't leave,
I ran fast, fast as I could till he screamed,
"I'll kill this bitch if you come closer to me,"
So I stopped, put my hands up,
Said well that's about all I got for plan one...


...Why'd he stop? Help her Dante!
She's gonna die if you don't stop him promptly,
So screw it, I'ma grab this brick and chuck,
I know Dante can hold his own in fistacuffs...


...All I heard was a crack and the knife was ghost,
All I saw was the man that left my pride to toast,
Inside, I froze, veins became like icicles,
Dante, my Judas, what a sight to show,
I looked behind me, the man was layin' asleep,
I looked in front, saw a child too bashful to speak,
Grabbin' Dantes leg, smiling,
Saved by a superheros witness slash sidekick...
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Old 11-11-2006, 07:56 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Movements come and go, revolutions rise and fall
and the art form that's the eye which cries for all
will soon be spotted by the masses and shot dead
for preaching the same word that god once spread.
But if poetry can bring the rebirth of this nation
then sacrificing it's body will be worth it's creation.


Tonight, two young poets write to the death
with cut throat words that are as light as their breath.
Whether its from the tip of the tongue or the top of the head
they come up with concepts and only stop when their dead.
It's in their heartbeat to be part beast and part priest
and think of lines that are razor sharp like shark teeth.
Their art speaks volumes though no one lends an ear
and when their pens get near the earth bends in fear
signaling the end is here.
Cause everything shakes down when they breakdown
they drink up, you take rounds & when you sink they make ground.
They view society with raised brows from a distance
and glance at the sky but only look to themselves for assistance.
They were born into this existence with an outsider's perception
they have a mindset of an alien, fused to write out the misconceptions.
Usually they focus on the outright deceptions invented by politicians
and philosophical wizards who've manipulated minds to follow religions
and at the same time turning civilization into a column of divisions
so souls turn out hollow when their being swallowed in the prison.
But there's flaws in the system cause creative minds can't be caged
there's been poets since the beginning and their work can't be staged.
And as these two young writers clash they try to burn the paper
with fiery truths that make lies of the universe die and turn to vapor.
One writes about himself, focusing on his depression and anxiety
while the other raises questions about the oppression in our society.
Their progressing a tradition that's been passed down through miles of lifetimes
and it may be watered down but you can't take away their right to type rhymes.
But poets in the 21st Century may not be worth the attention or fame
and the art form will be exploited with nobody left to mention it's aim.
Some will be credited as the inventors but the invention will change
into something else before any convention can explain,
how a cult that was chained became a nation's domain.
So after tonight, these two poets will be a thing of the past
everybody will be mimicking the craft and ringing the cash.
Only those who didn't think it would last will get a final laugh
and since their not here I will write until then on their behalf.


Movements come and go, revolutions rise and fall
and the art form that's the eye which cries for all
will soon be spotted by the masses and shot dead
for preaching the same word that god once spread.
But if poetry can bring the rebirth of this nation
then sacrificing it's body will be worth it's creation.
And until I stand for something I'm gonna stand in the way
and take the bullet for the one thing I as a man can say,
will someday lift the weight off the masses & lead them array.
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