RSTL CHAMPIONSHIP!!! Champ: Sacrifice 9-1 vs. 2. Street Poet 4-0

[Insanevillian]

RSTL CHAMPIONSHIP!!!




RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS

RULES AND REGULATIONS - THERE'S SOME NEW SHIT SO CLICK AND READ


The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced

Due Dates

VERSES DUE: Saturday, 11:59PM PST/2:59AM EST
Verses posted after the deadline will not count!

VOTES DUE Monday, 11:59PM PST/2:59 EST
Votes posted after the deadline will not count!
[list][*]Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
[*]Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
[*]Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
[*]RECYCLING IS NOT STRICTLY PROHIBITED. You may not use any verse that you have previously used within the league at any time. Whether it was a no show, tournament verse recycled for the league or visa versa or any verse that have ever been used within the league perimeters.
[*]During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit.
[*]Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list]
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[*]No second chance votes! Editing votes for any reason must be approved by mods and explained in reason for editing.
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[*]3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd, 3rd).
anyone who does not show or vote is suspended one week and must sign-in again to be inserted the following week.[/list]


Topics: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post14176391

[SacriFICE]

The shit I'm brewin' up is looking pretty nasty.

Alright, I plan on posting tonight. Been getting ready to move all week so haven't had the chance to finish it as soon as I would have liked...

Good luck, friend.

VOTES:
1: http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/1017840-17-illweezy-31-9-vs-18-hellrzah-19-16-a.html#post14189192
2: 7. Ribonuclease 9-5 vs. 8. Krypyical 4-1
3: 15. Blackwell 0-3 vs. 16. IV 40-9
4: http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/1017839-19-rocket-4-2-vs-20-xiahou-dun-0-0-a.html#post14192212

So yeah, there's my shit.

[SacriFICE]

"We all make choices in life, but in the end it is our choices that make us."

I can't believe I thought it, of so many words spoken,
My heart beating, screaming, while leaving hers broken.

War of Words
The silent echo, vibrant in all it's kindness.
Violent in all its mindless and selfish reliance
Melted inside this body of mine, the death toll
Despite the perfect words of peace the pen wrote
-increased. Instead foes were left known as beasts.
My sword rose to meet many, I drove the piece forth
Exposed a weak source and those fiends were forced
to meet death, deceased yet, only the sword
knew the character of man enough to stand up
and reprimand the trust, with a bland lust
To hand cuts to any unwilling recipient
Fulfilling the mission with a chilling precision.
I was only a youth, far from knowing the truth,
-hard was showing the troop a heart growing improved.
Now I'm striving for survival in denial of my actions.
Alive to see my rivals die for a fallacy.
Piles of bodies surrounding me, allowing me to ask if
Life could be different would I take a separate passage?

I can't believe I wished it, of so many words spoken,
My heart beating, screaming, while leaving hers broken.

Sweet Tears
I break my bones while she waits at home,
praying so the ancient crows don't take my soul
The faintest glow from the lake is shown
Like God saw the atrocities and escaped the globe.
Something must give, the struggle is fierce
I fumble and fear the falling in this puddle of tears
Appalling is the numbing, my ears wondering here
If what they hear is really as utterly disgusting and clear
I was only a man, close to knowing the truth
though it's only a bruise, slow, exposing its roots...
Now my dignity filters an emotional conclave
Mind caged because of many reasons she's not safe.
So I pray to God for the light to witness the road's finish
If not I'll continue to show indifference to no limit.
I traveled through the cold mist so indignant
A sus.p.i.cious show of wishing a broken rapport.
Going forward, asking my soul where to focus the sword.

I can't believe I've done it, of so many words spoken,
My heart beating, screaming, while leaving hers broken.

I Lied
Approaching that old decision of a cold tradition
A blizzard snow condition quickly froze my image
No witness told depictions of a close description
In fact, no witness had made it alive
I was patient and tried taking my time
But, as sacred as God I went crazy and died.
Waking to find my body trapped in catharsis
A light in my peripheral flashed into darkness
Des.p.i.cable acts are the hardest to craft into shards
of truth, I scarred the mutually exclusiveness, roots
of beauty in us, usually plush now crucially ruptured.
Maneuvering structure to evil, vague and deranged
I changed... heart beating, speaking and placing the blame
MYSELF... the admittance, I made it with haste
As she cried, nails like rain, painting my face
As she tried, understanding why, I struggled answering
Dusk in the sky, clouds demanding sun to arise
Nebulous clusters of regret taking shapes of lament
Creations of depth... like my body placed in cement

Shadows Of Your Thoughts
Tasting the death of that once traditional love
Tears screaming for release, pores trickling blood
The source pounding, as she proudly performs her horse mounting
Still trying to get why I chose the sword of immorality.

[Street Poet]

A debtly rabbit hole

Plastered to heights he started to rattle his vice
A tacky ass guy who dressed in khacki's with ties
racking snake eyes until his drink practically dried
Grabbing the dice as to dampen his sighs

Two fingers crossed...and the other three?
Sundering around the glass that he's guzzeling
struggeling to find his cup among the drinks
thoughts being focused on just winning

shootin all craps
dwindelling the loot in his stash
Betting wrong till his debt is long, proving the stats
People boo him to pass until he gets a seven
the one time everyone bets against him

Luck doubles the sum of his dough, stunning the folks
Knowing no end and going all in like moneys a joke
hitting a hot sweep with eleven's sittin the hot seat
Flipping his loss streak and insisting he's godly

with a gorge as his pot he starts ordering shots
ones short of the top, and I'd Normally watch
But I couldn't afford him to stop
So I offered for me to "Pour you one boss"
The horror consumed and he poured himself two
the gore and the doom he looked forward to soon
exhorted and bloomed as his face morbidly viewed
a force that he knew for performin a few
cou de grâs,
he took the dice and threw'em hard
His ruined heart hoping that luck knew its part

The reason for this was that Ethan owed chips
to grown ups called loan sharks and people of cliques
and this week on the tenth he'd cease to exist
if his feeble attempts didnt reach their limits
Taking loans so he can get wet and then bet
then barrowing elsewhere to settle his debt
the streets became tired of lending him checks
and getting upset when he'd tell'em 'don't fret'

So they desired to get rid of a problem
Givin' him options but all he did was just taunt'em
With the desire to live unforgotten
So they pissed in his coffin and ordered at midnight to off him

And when we locked eyes he sped off like flies
Sensing my ties to his ending life lines
Paranoid of this scary void, he travels the street
Spending the remains of his money to cash out his dreams
Just an unlucky rabbit it seems looking for carrots to eat
Or Karats of peace, but in this language he's absent of speech
His eyes graphically leak, his vision is blackened with streams
Of light wrapping this scene of a lost cause unmasked to nothing
Wandering into bars looking as dragged as can be
For the first time other people seemed saddened and weak
Everyone in gravity's reach was trapped so they'd see
A warm, compassionate theif, persuaded by savage money
The root of his evil, and roothlessly people persue this with lethal
Choices,
and just like his, they may choose to be feeble
A Vegas hooker gave him pussy for free and pushed it with glee
Some other guys that stumbled by hooked up some drinks
Ths luckiest day of his life wasn't displayed on the dice
That's what was missing - love that made him feel nice
He found serenity in his enemies as they chopped off his limbs
The pain tortured his brain, but not feeling as lost as he did
His killers were steered differently with him pillaged and weird
Even they vowed to be good people as they slit off his ear
He didn't have any friends in life, but his death was the cause
Of getting applause for the very the last breaths from his jaws
It was because in his very last seconds, he saw
That if he would talk about more than losing, he'd win after all

All human actions have on or more of these 7 causes(in order of appearance by stanzas): passion, nature, chance, compulsion, habit, reason, & desire
Aristotle

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[Got Life?]

I have strong biases against both Pent and Sac so I shall refrain from voting.

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[Mr. Mynd]

Just wanted to see how this one was playing out, sick verses from you both though man. Truly dope.

[TheReturn]

Well, I've pretty much broken down each of your verses to y'all on AIM so I'm gonna pull a Baron and just peep in. I definitely agree on the dopeness of both verses too.

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[Xiahou Dun]

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