RSTL CHAMPIONSHIP: 1. Mr. Mynd 1 3 -2 Vs. 2. Sacrifice 8 -1

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Old 10-24-2006, 11:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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RSTL CHAMPIONSHIP: 1. Mr. Mynd 1 3 -2 Vs. 2. Sacrifice 8 -1




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Old 10-25-2006, 01:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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You see what power is - holding someone else's fear in your hand and showing it to them!
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"These Days"

A slow unraveling shattering the fabric of past
-damage, created by the massive battleship wrath
It's a spiral descending for a while depending
On the miles we travel, or the piles of dead trees
Cutting off the human supply, losing in time
Any oxygen with problems keeping music alive.
In a song, is how we choose to survive
Continue to provide hope as lives move to the side
When most won’t even try using their minds
Usually blind drones, falling as time goes
On a trite road with the landscape barren, the land's waste
Tearing a man's face, we can't change where as
We command slaves to plant grain, in a camp slain
Concentrated like Anne Frank's parents
Too many ways, enslaved by the damn banks
-careless, funded by the man's state terrorists

In the days where the same carry the globe
In a cage we sit and pray that our heritage grows
But in these days with our fairness exposed
We sit amazed digging graves that tear at our souls

A passive aggressive, manic depressive,
savage suggestive, tragic connected avenue...
One minute there's an open road to travel through
The next minute exposes hope, but cracked in two
Hoping to have a clue about the present and past
and use the last of truths to capture new attitudes.

A marriage-divorced... in fairness they ask
Awareness we lack, lied to even as we stare at the facts
Why, do they even try, do they even lie?
I see through 'em, right through their meaningless disguise
Evenings in the skies as the sun closes curtains
I focus working, to show the earth what’s over urgent
A social burning of ties between hope and purpose
I breathe, over nervous, beneath open circuits
Decrease visual on myself, camouflaged in leaves
With the original in itself, animosity.
There isn't as much time it seems to find a crease
To find the peace society needs, through honesty
Propagated through constellations of zodiacs
The fondest hatred is concentrating to hold me back
The constant wave of mind sedation I find evasive
So I climb the gates and apply my faith upon the pages

All of us die, why? We often oblige
a coffin inscribed by the hands of the boss in our lives.

The strongest survive, and the lesser are chained.
The fault isn't quite the expected to blame.
The awkward insides of the pessimist's cage
houses cowards that allow for no effort to change.

A crystal clear vision through the minutes that tick away
On the clock face, that finality that you wish to hear
But quick to stay, the clock breaks, a fiscal year
Passes with disastrous consequences, an omnipresent
Condescendence, and not to mention the kind of weapon
That divides society into biometrics... denial sets in
As simple as pen and paper, extensive labor
Replaced by precision lasers, progressive nature
Taking control of societal infrastructure, we live to suffer
Bigger brother with his eyes out, to witness us hurt
We live within limits and minutes of becoming diminished
None of our business when death is coming to get us
And none of us discuss it; it’s easy to obey the law
When the law is made to claw away and slay us all
The fate of all society lies within a coward's deceit
Hiding the strengths of the power elite.

We have, in fact, two kinds of morality side by side: one which we preach but do not practice, and another which we practice but seldom preach.
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Old 10-28-2006, 08:09 AM   #5 (permalink)
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You've got the White motherfuckers, conducting the Black motherfuckers! We STILL eatin' out of they hands, brother."
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- Peoria, Illinois: January 13th 1947 –

They called Peoria the model city. That meant they had us nig.gers under control.
I clung to my clothes,
As the cumbersome cold, brandished its bite upon the stub of my nose.
Big, brown, and bulbous it glowed, as I was wandering home ..
.. Trudging through snow,
Which covered the roads, in this blusterous show.
Crisp, white, clusters conjoled and stuck to the soles ..
.. Of the shoes daddy had bought me,
The day they cut his parole.
My inquisitive nature often met his stubborn repose ..
.. As I yearned for more attention,
Than he ever cared enough to disclose.
My Grandmother’s brothel,
Was as close we had to a humble abode ..
.. It’s rustically old,
Cupboard‘s bestowed, with nothing but hope.
It was here that years of rice and peas had stunted my growth!
Yet also here where I would, with hindsight, discover the most…

I can remember when the air was clean and sex was dirty.
George Burns

It was the bitter end of October when I fumbled and probed ..
.. With my winter-jacket,
Making sure the buttons were closed.
When I became the unwitting victim two thugs would provoke ..
.. Inside the school-yard,
And leave looking like a couple of jokes.
I was the class cut-up,
My audiences and subject-matter grew ..
.. By age fourteen,
I was on stage performing with an amateur dramatics group.
And come early March `64 -
There was NO stopping me!
I’d decided to take a bite out of the Big Apple through stand-up comedy.
But I would lack a ‘voice’ of my own,
Until my style refined ..
.. So I imitated that of Bill Cosby,
The man I idolised.
But later I would find,
The material toothless and without purpose ..
.. Spendin’ the rest of the decade,
Concentratin’ on the underground circuit.
When I resurfaced in `74,
I spoke on EVERYTHING I’d lived, seen, or heard ..
My analytical views,
No longer suppressed by mainstream concerns.
I’d tired of those same comedians,
Always sitting on the fences ..
.. And attacked the White Establishment -
Regardless of the consequences!
My career soared,
Which the plaudits found surprising as hell ..
.. Of course, the Black audience loved it -
And the White audience had lined up as well!
As my career looked on the up,
In the public eye ..
.. My private life had spiralled out of control,
From the drugs I’d tried.
It was 1980,
When I next hit the headlines of the fervid press ..
.. After an attempt at freebasing cocaine,
Had almost left me burned to death.
A succession of films, and failed marriages,
Followed my path into showbiz ..
.. Until in 1986,
I was stricken down with Multiple Sclerosis.
Wheelchair bound,
I finally lost the long-fought bout when I died ..
.. On the Tenth of December. in 2005.
But through the medium of comedy,
I’d achieved more than the others ..
.. I’d transcended racial barriers, and opened doors for my brothers.
I’d gone from having a lonely childhood,
Coloured by ignorance ..
.. To poking fun at racial differences, and having the world at my fingertips.
From rags to riches,
And then back again in my tragic life ..
.. But I discovered,
There was a lot more to the bigger picture than just Black and White.
There was a lot more to ME than just black and white,
As I could fully relate to the biography,
That sat in my lap tonight.

WHO AM I?!



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December 1, 1940 – December 10, 2005
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http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/1016462-15-ribonuclease-8-5-vs-16-r3drum-1-0-a-post14167350.html
9. TheReturn 11-3 Vs. 10. Vigil 26-18
13. Blackwell 0-2 Vs. 14. Got Life? 31-19

Alrighty then... good luck Mr. Mynd.
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Damn, I was really hoping I wouldn't have to pick a winner in this one, but since there is only 3 other battles up besides mine I guess I'll have to break this shit down.

SacriFICE:
Writing was fucking sick, top notch. Flow was definitely there, read pretty fast-paced and was still easy to keep up with. Content was nice and I liked the way you pulled the two topics together. This segment here was particularly nice:

A passive aggressive, manic depressive,
savage suggestive, tragic connected avenue...
One minute there's an open road to travel through
The next minute exposes hope, but cracked in two
Hoping to have a clue about the present and past
and use the last of truths to capture new attitudes.



Mr. Mynd:
First off, the white/black take on that picture was dope as fuck. The first half of this verse is dope as fuck. Then after your first rhyme scheme runs out and transitions into the next I felt like it started to fall off. The content is still there and the piece is still on topic, but it didn't have that Baron feel of writing. It started to rhyme every other line and the scheme didn't carry out over long periods and still make sense like your writing normally does. You redeemed yourself with the ending though, really made me think that you wrote this piece because the biography of this man had such an influence on you. Really believeable ending which is one thing I always try to incorporate in my verses.


Anyways, damn, like I said I hate having to pick a winner in a battle like this but here is how I see it. SacriFICE had a nice piece throughout with good mechanics and structure, and Baron had a story that was easier to follow and yet still held my attention throughout. Although the ending to Baron's was somewhat anti-climatic because I had never heard of the comedian, it was still a good ending because of the take on the topic and how he portrayed it as taking him over so much that it made him write a piece about it this week. I do feel like the end part of Baron's verse was a bit of a let down writing wise though and that's why I'm giving my vote to SacriFICE because I felt like he kept it consistenly dope throughout the whole piece. Really good battle though I will emphasize that!
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