7. Hellrzah 19-15 Vs. 8. Sd-11 2-0

DiC GeTs GuLLy · 10-17-2006, 06:01 PM

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RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS

RULES AND REGULATIONS - THERE'S SOME NEW SHIT SO CLICK AND READ

The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced

Due Dates

VERSES DUE: Saturday, 11:59PM PST/2:59AM EST
Verses posted after the deadline will not count!

VOTES DUE Monday, 11:59PM PST/2:59 EST
Votes posted after the deadline will not count!
[list][*]Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
[*]Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
[*]Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
[*]RECYCLING IS NOT STRICTLY PROHIBITED. You may not use any verse that you have previously used within the league at any time. Whether it was a no show, tournament verse recycled for the league or visa versa or any verse that have ever been used within the league perimeters.
[*]During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit.
[*]Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list]
Voting:[list][*]If you do not show you can still vote and post the links in your match to receive full voting points. In addition, if you do not show, yet vote on at least 4 matches (Or, every match available, should there be less than 4 matches to vote on) you will remain in the league.
[*]Votes must be hidden! To hide a vote, first thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. The last thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, a backslash “/”, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. Unhidden votes will not count towards the match or towards your vote requirements.
[*]No second chance votes! Editing votes for any reason must be approved by mods and explained in reason for editing.
[*]No bias votes! If you have a personal investment in wanting someone to lose, whether because that member voted against you once, or you just don’t like that person, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match. If have a personal investment in wanting someone to win, whether because they’re crew member, or because you want to face that person in the next week’s brackets, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match.
[*]”Bias” must be confirmed by a Moderator.
[*]If there is a match which you will not be able to vote on, due to “Bias” of any type, state so within your match prior to Verses Due Deadline. If this reduces the number of matches available for you to vote on to the point where you are unable to vote on at least 4 matches, the point scale will be adjusted according to how many matches you do vote on.
[*]3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd, 3rd).
anyone who does not show or vote is suspended one week and must sign-in again to be inserted the following week.[/list]

Topics: Topics and Ranks for The Week

HellRzah · 10-17-2006, 07:02 PM

I see this...

SD-11 · 10-17-2006, 08:40 PM

check..

them topics aint all tht this week...

ez..

SD-11 · 10-20-2006, 02:30 PM

aight..ima be back from work later on today, ill post then...

ez...

SD-11 · 10-20-2006, 08:52 PM

aight, juss got home from work and typed it up quick...bout to party..

anyways....Topic: "Terrorist Mindstate"

I made it short and sweet!!!

Paradise opens its gates, 72 virgins approach/
allah plays his music and waits, hearing different versions and notes/
im surrounded by my fate atlast, untill i awake in the past/
A vivid flash back begins, the second i take the task/

The quarans pages flip rapidly, i stare into the sky and freedom stares back at me/
the path that we choose to take, will make things the way they have to be/
a grenade rolls into my dining room, the star of david on it/
the attacks should have stopped weeks ago, i guess they broke there promise/
my mother and sisters hagabes go flying, shrapnel strikes my cheek/
we was just sitting down to eat, now my family pronounced deceased/
i survive the explosive fury, but left with nothing to live for/
I search for a religious leader, to give my self to this war/
I realized innocense is no match for ignorance/
my motive is my mothers death, i still miss her since/
Dangaling lightbulb in the basement, clean shave, no signs of islam barely on me/
A troops boots and suite lay on the bed, my disguise as part of the isreali army/
Ripped packaging on the floor stamped "Hamas", utilities i was provided wit/
c-4, nails and a wire kit, once i complete my mission, my people will admire it/
im officially a walking dynamite, once i feel the time is right/
i will look for a perfect location, find it and strike/
a star falls, im reminded of life prior to this/
i pray on my knees, allah accepts my words as they vibe from my lips/
I step out into the city of david, scortching heat in jerusalem/
innocent people walking freely, not knowing wht ima do to them/
Fuck patience, i make my way in to a crowded bus station/
A perfect location, alot of civilians standin around juss waitin/
I inch in, get in perfect position, im living my last seconds/
An isreali troop straped wit c-4, we using masks as weapons/
Bissmehla Akmana Rahim I scream, thru my eye's the pain is seen/
Finger kisses the button, my blood paints the scene/
If previous attacks didnt catch yall attention, this blast should/
Guts rained on survivors, only a crater left were i last stood/
Allah reaches down, collects the limbs and wipes the blood/
This wasnt all just a religous war, but also a fight for love/

SD-11 · 10-22-2006, 12:28 PM

fuck MAN!!!....this mans aint show up...this is second time in 2 weeks i win by DQ....fukin bullshit......

aight then, can i tleast get some feedback on this peice....thnx..

ez...

Insanevillian · 10-22-2006, 02:18 PM

good opener....

a good overall piece... a little bit rushed, NEVER OPEN A VERSE SAYING U RUSHED IT... U COULD LOSE VOTES BECAUSE OF THOSE WORDS...

After that being said, good idea, pretty easy to write so the concept isnt too fresh, but u put thought into it which is apparent....

good luck next week....

SD-11 · 10-23-2006, 11:59 AM

aight thnx for feed and advice...\\

uppin for some more..

ez...

Mr. Mynd · 10-23-2006, 01:53 PM

Hey SD - You're a really promising writer man. Its shitty for you to of caugth two no-shows in a row like this, cos you actually deserve more props than your given credit for. Slick verse this week, and I loved the opener too. More heads should be taking note of you my man,

Just keep doing what you're doing and you'll soon be up there near the top.

Madd props to you on this. Solid read.

Peace!

SD-11 · 10-23-2006, 07:04 PM

aight man thnx for the feed....

ya its shitty i got caught in 2 no shows, hope this week i wont...

ez...

HellRzah · 10-24-2006, 04:20 PM

sorry I didn't show...comp fuck'd and troubles with the law..SD, good verse

pz!

SD-11 · 10-24-2006, 07:04 PM

its aight......

Insanevillian · 10-24-2006, 08:37 PM

SD-11- u are supposed to show links to advance...!!!!

if this happens again i wont let u advance...

im gonna let u slide this time...

remember to vote next time...

DiC GeTs GuLLy · 10-24-2006, 08:39 PM

SD Wins

10-17-2006, 06:01 PM	#1 (permalink)
DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 2,889	7. Hellrzah 19-15 Vs. 8. Sd-11 2-0 . RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS RULES AND REGULATIONS - THERE'S SOME NEW SHIT SO CLICK AND READ The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced Due Dates VERSES DUE: Saturday, 11:59PM PST/2:59AM EST Verses posted after the deadline will not count! VOTES DUE Monday, 11:59PM PST/2:59 EST Votes posted after the deadline will not count! [list][]Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required. []Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines. []Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show. []RECYCLING IS NOT STRICTLY PROHIBITED. You may not use any verse that you have previously used within the league at any time. Whether it was a no show, tournament verse recycled for the league or visa versa or any verse that have ever been used within the league perimeters. []During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit. []Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list] Voting:[list][]If you do not show you can still vote and post the links in your match to receive full voting points. In addition, if you do not show, yet vote on at least 4 matches (Or, every match available, should there be less than 4 matches to vote on) you will remain in the league. []Votes must be hidden! To hide a vote, first thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. The last thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, a backslash “/”, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. Unhidden votes will not count towards the match or towards your vote requirements. []No second chance votes! Editing votes for any reason must be approved by mods and explained in reason for editing. []No bias votes! If you have a personal investment in wanting someone to lose, whether because that member voted against you once, or you just don’t like that person, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match. If have a personal investment in wanting someone to win, whether because they’re crew member, or because you want to face that person in the next week’s brackets, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match. []”Bias” must be confirmed by a Moderator. []If there is a match which you will not be able to vote on, due to “Bias” of any type, state so within your match prior to Verses Due Deadline. If this reduces the number of matches available for you to vote on to the point where you are unable to vote on at least 4 matches, the point scale will be adjusted according to how many matches you do vote on. []3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd, 3rd). anyone who does not show or vote is suspended one week and must sign-in again to be inserted the following week.[/list] Topics: Topics and Ranks for The Week* __________________ 4x PTL Champion 9x RSTL Champion..75~19 4X PTL TOURNAMENT CHAMP 3X RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMP - THE TOURNAMENT KING OF THIS BITCH - ~{S.M.O.}~ Last edited by DiC GeTs GuLLy; 10-17-2006 at 06:14 PM.

10-17-2006, 07:02 PM	#2 (permalink)
HellRzah PurE EviL Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Ancient Realm of Gaul: Belgica Posts: 7,620	I see this... __________________ E.P.I.C.

10-17-2006, 08:40 PM	#3 (permalink)
SD-11 The Iron Curtain Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 95	check.. them topics aint all tht this week... ez.. __________________ Stand up for the Topical King

10-20-2006, 02:30 PM	#4 (permalink)
SD-11 The Iron Curtain Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 95	aight..ima be back from work later on today, ill post then... ez... __________________ Stand up for the Topical King

10-20-2006, 08:52 PM	#5 (permalink)
SD-11 The Iron Curtain Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 95	aight, juss got home from work and typed it up quick...bout to party.. anyways....Topic: "Terrorist Mindstate" I made it short and sweet!!! Paradise opens its gates, 72 virgins approach/ allah plays his music and waits, hearing different versions and notes/ im surrounded by my fate atlast, untill i awake in the past/ A vivid flash back begins, the second i take the task/ The quarans pages flip rapidly, i stare into the sky and freedom stares back at me/ the path that we choose to take, will make things the way they have to be/ a grenade rolls into my dining room, the star of david on it/ the attacks should have stopped weeks ago, i guess they broke there promise/ my mother and sisters hagabes go flying, shrapnel strikes my cheek/ we was just sitting down to eat, now my family pronounced deceased/ i survive the explosive fury, but left with nothing to live for/ I search for a religious leader, to give my self to this war/ I realized innocense is no match for ignorance/ my motive is my mothers death, i still miss her since/ Dangaling lightbulb in the basement, clean shave, no signs of islam barely on me/ A troops boots and suite lay on the bed, my disguise as part of the isreali army/ Ripped packaging on the floor stamped "Hamas", utilities i was provided wit/ c-4, nails and a wire kit, once i complete my mission, my people will admire it/ im officially a walking dynamite, once i feel the time is right/ i will look for a perfect location, find it and strike/ a star falls, im reminded of life prior to this/ i pray on my knees, allah accepts my words as they vibe from my lips/ I step out into the city of david, scortching heat in jerusalem/ innocent people walking freely, not knowing wht ima do to them/ Fuck patience, i make my way in to a crowded bus station/ A perfect location, alot of civilians standin around juss waitin/ I inch in, get in perfect position, im living my last seconds/ An isreali troop straped wit c-4, we using masks as weapons/ Bissmehla Akmana Rahim I scream, thru my eye's the pain is seen/ Finger kisses the button, my blood paints the scene/ If previous attacks didnt catch yall attention, this blast should/ Guts rained on survivors, only a crater left were i last stood/ Allah reaches down, collects the limbs and wipes the blood/ This wasnt all just a religous war, but also a fight for love/ __________________ Stand up for the Topical King

10-22-2006, 12:28 PM	#6 (permalink)
SD-11 The Iron Curtain Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 95	fuck MAN!!!....this mans aint show up...this is second time in 2 weeks i win by DQ....fukin bullshit...... aight then, can i tleast get some feedback on this peice....thnx.. ez... __________________ Stand up for the Topical King

10-22-2006, 02:18 PM	#7 (permalink)
Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Oakland, Ca Posts: 16,322	good opener.... a good overall piece... a little bit rushed, NEVER OPEN A VERSE SAYING U RUSHED IT... U COULD LOSE VOTES BECAUSE OF THOSE WORDS... After that being said, good idea, pretty easy to write so the concept isnt too fresh, but u put thought into it which is apparent.... good luck next week.... __________________ ELITE

10-23-2006, 11:59 AM	#8 (permalink)
SD-11 The Iron Curtain Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 95	aight thnx for feed and advice...\\ uppin for some more.. ez... __________________ Stand up for the Topical King

10-23-2006, 01:53 PM	#9 (permalink)
Mr. Mynd ¿ dn apisumop Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 597	Hey SD - You're a really promising writer man. Its shitty for you to of caugth two no-shows in a row like this, cos you actually deserve more props than your given credit for. Slick verse this week, and I loved the opener too. More heads should be taking note of you my man, Just keep doing what you're doing and you'll soon be up there near the top. Madd props to you on this. Solid read. Peace! __________________ I'll Calzaghe your title hopes. Keg Party! Baron Mynd

10-23-2006, 07:04 PM	#10 (permalink)
SD-11 The Iron Curtain Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 95	aight man thnx for the feed.... ya its shitty i got caught in 2 no shows, hope this week i wont... ez... __________________ Stand up for the Topical King

10-24-2006, 04:20 PM	#11 (permalink)
HellRzah PurE EviL Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Ancient Realm of Gaul: Belgica Posts: 7,620	sorry I didn't show...comp fuck'd and troubles with the law..SD, good verse pz! __________________ E.P.I.C.

10-24-2006, 07:04 PM	#12 (permalink)
SD-11 The Iron Curtain Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 95	its aight...... __________________ Stand up for the Topical King

10-24-2006, 08:37 PM	#13 (permalink)
Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Oakland, Ca Posts: 16,322	SD-11- u are supposed to show links to advance...!!!! if this happens again i wont let u advance... im gonna let u slide this time... remember to vote next time... __________________ ELITE

10-24-2006, 08:39 PM	#14 (permalink)
DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 2,889	SD Wins __________________ 4x PTL Champion 9x RSTL Champion..75~19 4X PTL TOURNAMENT CHAMP 3X RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMP - THE TOURNAMENT KING OF THIS BITCH - ~{S.M.O.}~

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