Championship: 2. Shrug (2-0) vs. 1. TheReturn (4-0)

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Old 09-28-2006, 10:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS

RULES AND REGULATIONS - THERE'S SOME NEW SHIT SO CLICK AND READ


The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced

Due Dates

VERSES DUE: Saturday, 11:59PM PST/2:59AM EST
Verses posted after the deadline will not count!

VOTES DUE Monday, 11:59PM PST/2:59 EST
Votes posted after the deadline will not count!
[list][*]Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
[*]Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
[*]Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
[*]RECYCLING IS NOT STRICTLY PROHIBITED. You may not use any verse that you have previously used within the league at any time. Whether it was a no show, tournament verse recycled for the league or visa versa or any verse that have ever been used within the league perimeters.
[*]During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit.
[*]Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list]
Voting:[list][*]If you do not show you can still vote and post the links in your match to receive full voting points. In addition, if you do not show, yet vote on at least 4 matches (Or, every match available, should there be less than 4 matches to vote on) you will remain in the league.
[*]Votes must be hidden! To hide a vote, first thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. The last thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, a backslash “/”, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. Unhidden votes will not count towards the match or towards your vote requirements.
[*]No second chance votes! If your vote has been edited, even it was only to hide it, your vote will not count towards the match or towards your vote requirements.
[*]No bias votes! If you have a personal investment in wanting someone to lose, whether because that member voted against you once, or you just don’t like that person, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match. If have a personal investment in wanting someone to win, whether because they’re crew member, or because you want to face that person in the next week’s brackets, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match.
[*]”Bias” must be confirmed by a Moderator.
[*]If there is a match which you will not be able to vote on, due to “Bias” of any type, state so within your match prior to Verses Due Deadline. If this reduces the number of matches available for you to vote on to the point where you are unable to vote on at least 4 matches, the point scale will be adjusted according to how many matches you do vote on.
[*]3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd, 3rd).
anyone who does not show or vote is suspended one week and must sign-in again to be inserted the following week.[/list][*]You will now be required to vote in the Championship and Contender's Match. These are the two matches for every no show winner to vote on and every member of the league to vote on as well. If you don't vote in those matches, you will not advance. You will recieve a win, but your rank will not change.

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Old 09-30-2006, 09:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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End of a New Beginning.... (of life)

This is 64 without the hook repeated twice. i hope thats ok.
Good luck TheReturn. breathe easy



"The deepest definition of youth is life as yet untouched by tragedy. "
Alfred North Whitehead

...End Of A New Beginning...
I travel my destiny, with all things testing me,
And my lack of cash
my burlap sac of a smile, optimism and integrity
While I walk my mission You best believe,
I pass fools, hassles, and mad •••els
But I still manage to have dues

I might pass benevolent heaven sent signs and elements
But that’s my life paths intention/ design
Divine interventions and blind intersections offering intelligence
I just hope that at the end of my journey
I’m not yearning to learn more past the gurney

As I wonder along this privileged pilgrimage
I ponder long about the importance
Of self assessed images
I get into it, rearranged the distortion
That is filling kids
Frankly, It gives me the heeby jeebies
Thinking about how easily
These emcees on Mtv’s CD’s
Feasibly can weaken knees.
creating the weekend tease. -ladies?-
With their sleezy scheme
Of money honeys and cream
Creating the illusion that they own legitimate dreams.

[Hook]
The definition of children is the life we lead
Before the tragedy of television and hi-fi feeds
Telling them what their life has to be as it magically
ignites with ease, torching up a path of sci-fi dreams
Of being astronauts, or pet vets, our best bet
Is to keep sight not what we haven’t got. …But what we had……
And ignore the ramped talk of these affiliates of silly kids


This dudes too cool!
Me? Just the usual,
Sitting in a cubicle
Pickin at my cuticles
Hoping this isn’t the extent
Of life intent,
My incentives were beautiful
Push, but I choose to pull.
This goes to those too cool to roll,
What ever happened taking the school bus
Back in the past,
When we'd act like we didn’t know what cool was
When there were no rules to bust
When we needed stools and it was tough
to get to the top shelf
When we greeted news and got help
When we weren’t conceded fools
Dwelling in our lost self.
Cause life is a moment in space
So fight the self loathing disgrace
Only homies want to chase
Through this land of ass and tits
Me? Lend me and a hand and my abacus
I’m not having this!!

Wisdom is my map
Wonder is my gas
Living is my task!
With women and sinning being one of the many
Spinning Impossible obstacles I’ll pass
Through tricks, dips and feats
Please keep your eye on the prize
Try not to defy your signs
Otherwise you’ll find yourself 6 feet deep

[Hook]
The definition of children is the life we lead
Before the tragedy of television and hi-fi feeds.
Telling them what their life has to be as it magically
ignites with ease, torching up a path of sci-fi dreams
Of being astronauts, or pet vets, our best bet
Is to keep sight not of what we haven’t got. …But what we had……
And ignore the affiliates of these silly kids
trying to stop you with their rampant talk
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Old 10-01-2006, 03:15 AM   #3 (permalink)
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It's all good iwth the line limit...fuck man I've had a long week. I'm drunk right now. I'll post what I have of the verse I was working on for this week, just so I won't no show.

Death sleeps in the eyes of those who love you


Eyes bathed in a green ocean, you were never one to be seen hopin'.
Just tossed me out of the nest, and prayed that my wings opened
Or that Momma would be there to catch me, but she's dopin'.
She's with a fiend, smokin', and you're too busy free loadin'
To take responsibility for a seed who might as well be homeless,
The aftermath of an accident that left a condom's seam broken.
And now my dream's hopeless,
Cause you told Momma you loved her and would keep focused,
That everything would be okay and that we'd flourish.
But now she's hurtin', and her kids have to rough it more,
It's y'all's fucking mistakes, what do we have to suffer for?
We live on the toughest floor
Of one of the worst buildings in the area of Rucker Park.
He was so fuckin smart, till he messed around with crack and shit,
And since Dad's a bitch, he had to snitch on his baddest friends.
I saw death in his eyes, when it came up and he had to split
Provin' stereotypes true, running from his favorite accident...

Those eyes are a gripping blue, mother dear, you're living proof.
Used to always laugh and hug, try to give some of my wishes truth.
Now you make me do your laundry, and clean the dishes too
And on top of that I have to be there to watch what my sisters do,
Making sure they don't mimic you, too quick to befriend a dude
And make your mistakes,
Wouldn't that be pitiful? If they lived a life just like you have,
I'd hate to see them grow up, having kids without a true dad.
I could never imagine, letting that happen would be too sad,
If they live that life I've failed, and I could never do that.
I'd beat the dude's ass
If he walked out on my sisters, the same way that you have.


Those lovely hazel eyes, batting lustifully in the wake of night
The perfect way to describe such a sexy and abrasive type.
Your glowing skin and that melting smile on a face so bright,
With stories of a bad past, I was hopin' I could make it right.
Just lemme get a taste tonight, then it's me and you forever
It's always us two together,
I'll do anything you want, but with you it's just whatever.
I don't know what you're doing, dunno if you wanna screw me,
Or just wanna hang out, and get a free ticket to the movies.
But I do know I can't handle this pain that you're inducing
Cause it's too grueling,


Those crimson eyes, masked behind this reaper's grim disguise


Sorry I oculdn't finish dude, some shit came up. This is all I got man, good lucky with eveyrhting in the league. I gotta sign out.
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Old 10-01-2006, 03:57 AM   #4 (permalink)
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no worries ive been swamped with a lot of shit this week/ was drunk when i posted that verse too. haha This week was a bad week and i knew it would be, i should have signed out. i hope the struggles work out easily. Peace and be well.
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