10. Flowetic (7-1) vs. 9. SacriFICE (4-1)

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Old 09-28-2006, 10:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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10. Flowetic (7-1) vs. 9. SacriFICE (4-1)




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The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced

Due Dates

VERSES DUE: Saturday, 11:59PM PST/2:59AM EST
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VOTES DUE Monday, 11:59PM PST/2:59 EST
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[list][*]Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
[*]Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
[*]Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
[*]RECYCLING IS NOT STRICTLY PROHIBITED. You may not use any verse that you have previously used within the league at any time. Whether it was a no show, tournament verse recycled for the league or visa versa or any verse that have ever been used within the league perimeters.
[*]During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit.
[*]Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list]
Voting:[list][*]If you do not show you can still vote and post the links in your match to receive full voting points. In addition, if you do not show, yet vote on at least 4 matches (Or, every match available, should there be less than 4 matches to vote on) you will remain in the league.
[*]Votes must be hidden! To hide a vote, first thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. The last thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, a backslash “/”, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. Unhidden votes will not count towards the match or towards your vote requirements.
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[*]3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd, 3rd).
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Old 09-29-2006, 06:53 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 10-01-2006, 12:45 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Kiss of Darkness

Many former living deceased due to unforgiving and abhorrent sinning
Tortured, wishing the course was switching, but the swords were fitting
Between the orifices, tormented with forceful digging
Morbid emphasis on squeezing the blood from the source and lifting
The warm persistent liquid of life from the support mechanism despite
Their desperate fight... and vigorous will, as the victim was enlisted on a mission to kill...

Traveling in the darkest of nights, thirst tempting
as my worst enemy, starving to bite.
Teeth sharper than knives, larger than life,
and only by penetrating my heart with a spike,
can she turn my carnal desires to powder.
I required her flower, but the seeds failed to grow
with the higher powers denying the showers.
Teardrops finding the floor, opening the sails to go,
and leaving only the tales to show: a legend ended.
Death suspended over my best attention, strengthened
by the depth perception, seeing beyond her stressed intentions.
But only after I turned blank, she saw it coming when
she saw me running away from that awful nothingness.

The room spun as I tried to recall the events
The used gun next to me as I crawled up the fence
Running, I called and was met with an awesome attempt
At my wrongful death as I talked of regrets
It was at least eight feet tall, the longest reach
I saw the teeth, long and peaked, the strongest beast
overcame me before I could fall asleep.
The blackness between its jaws increased,
it clawed my cheeks, I all but freaked
from the thoughts to flee to trying to call police
then, letting out an awful shriek,
it threw me off my feet, and on the street,
where I coughed and wheezed, paused to breathe,
in denial, corrupted my taught beliefs, as I lost my peace,
left to crawl and bleed.
Exhausted speech erupted from my ruptured vocal chord.
"What's happening?", I spoke and
the choked retort from my throat was at most ignored.
Soaked with frozen gore, the snow had poured
and my coat was torn, confusion has chosen its course.
I was supposed to die, but I didn't, my soul was scorched,
I was born again, realizing it provoked a war.

The scene changed and recreated the way I needed hatred,
the pain alleviated.
My thought's train abbreviated, brain inebriated
by the need to murder and drink, I walked further to think
confirming the nightmare I was certain to bring.
Quite clear, it harnessed every energy despite fear,
that formally trite fear that held me back light years.
Gasping I felt around, the concrete changed to soft-sheets,
I thought she held me down, her wrath exacting
as I felt her gown, silk and flowing as I melted.
I couldn't discern if the pleasure was real,
as if my first experience occurred like I never could feel.
A weapon concealed and projecting its message in braille,
an exceptional tale about the death of a male.
Resurrected by the touch of the words, something absurd.
"I love you," it struggled to burst, up from the Earth,
kissing the darkness, I wondered if my suffering hurt
would buckle and lose its thunder...

And it had, she struck me from underneath,
from beneath that comfort and peace,
but before I crumbled to pieces, her love didn't cease.
So many confusing moments, when it’s hardest to live.
Hard to exist, when there's nothing but stars and abyss
But when I thought life couldn't get any harder it did,
So I embraced every fear I had and gave darkness a kiss.
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Old 10-01-2006, 12:49 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 10-01-2006, 08:30 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Im late you can disqualify if need be I can vote.. jus let me know

human nature


I miss you…

I look out the window and see nothing…but what’s not there anymore

Grass stains on my knees despite my moms pleas
Son please.. we cant afford you some new jeans…
Indeed… but ignorance is bliss ‘n see…
Summer break was a dream man I never fatigued…
On the field in the sand, candy in my hand…
Doin some silly dance to some kool and the gang…
I can still hear the songs but the echo’s is faint…
Jay’s laughs fade away like the peeling of paint
But I remember that day the whole colour was grey…
A lotta screamin n cussin n then my dad went away
Me Janice and jay tried to ignore regardless…
And with every scream.., we just focussed on Scooby harder
N hope remains heartless as they wouldn’t stop it
But before pops slid he took a ring out the pocket…
Said Son Ill always love you, took the ring and dropped it
Stopped quick.. turned, said son if I don’t see u again…
Work hard to be a man.. I musta been about ten…

I Return back to whats really outside my window and put down the scotch on the table…

Still wondering why… b-bal rings outside..
They as lonely as me, the rain keeps the children inside…
The house is a mess its jus like it confess…
and explains why she left from one sec to the next…
Its choking my breath, Janice even if its for the best…
You left and took my heart with like a theft…
No response… because a wall doesn’t talk…
But I don’t stop.. said ‘remember once in the park…’
When I first met u, jay said you had cooties…
N I thought you was weird when you called me a cutie
N I call you stoopid.. doodoo face lookin like droopy
They you said you knew me and ‘Ima tell ur parents..’
Jay stopped starin and ran like he had an errand
I stuttered you cant and.. you said Ill forgive you…
But I have no friends so from now on take me with u…
From then I never dissed u..always by my side…
Me you and Jay we musta been five…

I gaze at the wall smiling…

Ive loved and lost but at what serious costs…
And at who’s expense do we bill the remorse…
They say of course its better to have loved
But they don’t know what Ive lost…
I miss my dad but now I understand the struggle
Atmosphere said it best the modern man must hustle
You never ment trouble so like in jays song…
Still got love for you even tho you still did me wrong…
And yes Jan I miss you we always connected…
I guess we jus married because that’s what people expected…
But it jus wasn’t destined we were almost despairing…
Worked so hard to work the dream marriage…
You were so emberassed when we first had sex…
It was strange in a way I considered you a kin of the next…
So I guess its for the best…
…and from the things disappeared..
The only thing I really miss is my childhood years…

I Wipe away some sentiment and smile…put the scotch back in the kitchen…and prepare for another day of a life I hate …life sucks but hey.. its mine
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