19. Mr. Mister (0-0) vs. 18. Lola Cruz (0-0) vs. 17. V FOR VENDETTA (0-0)

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Old 09-28-2006, 10:05 PM   #1 (permalink)
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RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS

RULES AND REGULATIONS - THERE'S SOME NEW SHIT SO CLICK AND READ


The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced

Due Dates

VERSES DUE: Saturday, 11:59PM PST/2:59AM EST
Verses posted after the deadline will not count!

VOTES DUE Monday, 11:59PM PST/2:59 EST
Votes posted after the deadline will not count!
[list][*]Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
[*]Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
[*]Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
[*]RECYCLING IS NOT STRICTLY PROHIBITED. You may not use any verse that you have previously used within the league at any time. Whether it was a no show, tournament verse recycled for the league or visa versa or any verse that have ever been used within the league perimeters.
[*]During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit.
[*]Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list]
Voting:[list][*]If you do not show you can still vote and post the links in your match to receive full voting points. In addition, if you do not show, yet vote on at least 4 matches (Or, every match available, should there be less than 4 matches to vote on) you will remain in the league.
[*]Votes must be hidden! To hide a vote, first thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. The last thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, a backslash “/”, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. Unhidden votes will not count towards the match or towards your vote requirements.
[*]No second chance votes! If your vote has been edited, even it was only to hide it, your vote will not count towards the match or towards your vote requirements.
[*]No bias votes! If you have a personal investment in wanting someone to lose, whether because that member voted against you once, or you just don’t like that person, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match. If have a personal investment in wanting someone to win, whether because they’re crew member, or because you want to face that person in the next week’s brackets, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match.
[*]”Bias” must be confirmed by a Moderator.
[*]If there is a match which you will not be able to vote on, due to “Bias” of any type, state so within your match prior to Verses Due Deadline. If this reduces the number of matches available for you to vote on to the point where you are unable to vote on at least 4 matches, the point scale will be adjusted according to how many matches you do vote on.
[*]3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd, 3rd).
anyone who does not show or vote is suspended one week and must sign-in again to be inserted the following week.[/list][*]You will now be required to vote in the Championship and Contender's Match. These are the two matches for every no show winner to vote on and every member of the league to vote on as well. If you don't vote in those matches, you will not advance. You will recieve a win, but your rank will not change.

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Old 09-29-2006, 07:46 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 09-29-2006, 02:58 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I've arrived.

1. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...6#post14083086
2. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post14083298
3. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post14083362
4. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post14083548

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Old 09-29-2006, 04:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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8. Hellrzah (17-14) vs. 7. Got Life? (30-16)
Championship: 2. Shrug (2-0) vs. 1. TheReturn (4-0)
10. Flowetic (7-1) vs. 9. SacriFICE (4-1)
12. Pain (19-13) vs. 11. Pestilence (7-3)

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Old 09-30-2006, 06:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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5 men sit at the bar staring at their empty glass
each hoping and waiting for this moment to pass
Let us take fllight into the image of the first memory
out of the night into the mind filled with pure agony
...
intentional adultery wrapped and enveloped in congical honesty
her daily routine disabled the process of the truth becoming slippery
Lies whisperd through lips who were kissed unfaithfully
opened hips gave away what was promised to me
shattered vows broke 20 years of love and devotion
frowning brows above tears filled with a hatefull emotion
as I passionatly try to drown the pain with liquer
it only takes ME down as I keep feeling sicker
but how the hell can she tell me straight in my face
that another man is now going to take my place
...
Let us take fllight into the image of the second memory
out of the night into the mind filled with pure agony
...
I don't wanna go home I wanna be alone
their looks will fill my soul and break my backbone
how will I look my kids in their eyes
as my spirit quietly dies
as I look at my glass the bottom seems so crystal clear
I lost my job death is scary but being broke I fear
but between my home situation and the manager nagging
my patience reached boiling point and sanity started packing
I hit him in the face I know I was wrong
But I have worked there for so long
I know what to do pefectly he should just leave me be
I am not going back to that house this is now home for me
...
Let us take fllight into the image of the third memory
out of the night into the mind filled with pure agony
...
Im still here this bar took up a lot of my time
Im still drinking liquer to easy my weary mind
but now it escapes me to why I am sitting here
my brain is crowded but the reason is unclear
I must have forgotten to take my medicine
plus the liquer combination isnt a good thing
I can feel my heart hurts but the reason is abstract
I feel drunk and woozy plus my vision seems cracked
let me just shake it off and focus and take it easy
breath out " bartender come over here and hit me"
...
Let us take fllight into the image of the fourth memory
out of the night into the mind filled with pure agony
...
Im going to jail but hell if I care
fuck this life I know it aint fair
but I will bring death to his life
stop his breath ... rape his wife
stab him in the chest and rip out his heart
a whole torture plan but where do I start
first I need his adress
then I will have succes
teach him not to fuck with me
he should know Im crazy
Let me go now and take the life out of his core
*he stand up and with his exit he slams the door*
...
Let us take fllight into the image of the fifth memory
out of the night into the mind filled with pure agony
...
damn he shouldnt be drinking in his condition
I hate to be put into this position
its my job to simply supply
but his face looks like he's about to cry
plus I know he suffers from acute memory loss
and without his medicine that situation he is not the boss
but he lost his wife his job all in the same day
plus its a big chance his kids will be taken away
if he only knew the manager he hit was the one fucking his wife
he would flip go crazy and then basiclly ruin his life

too late
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Old 10-01-2006, 12:44 AM   #6 (permalink)
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kiss the darkness

I knew what I was getting myself into
sucking in its passion of lust inhaling the death tube.
The plague making my heart very vague
Christians don't want to see me like opposite of day.
it was the night when my mom wasn't home
working two jobs trying to shed light in this dark dome
sitting in the room with my best friend Karen
writing a poem-just unleashing my tight barren
emotions being bottled up, tired of being poor
and I'm getting irritated with the yelling next door.
Heard a lock unlatching, means momma is home,
rustle of a baggage-she went and got grocery
I smell foul booze, oh here comes the misery.
Faces on the wall and they see everything
while I can't, but hear the pain and suffering.
Karen looks up at my face, she see's the fear
like positive and negative attracts-she comes near.
Holds my arms thinking that I'm going to blow up,
my eyes ticking and ready to bomb those teary suds.
They're dishing it out, death is about to be served
or have left over with mom on the ground hurt.
Put my face on Karen shoulders-this is hard to bare
I'm naked for peace and I don’t have any clothes to wear.
Lightning hits the cords and shuts off the lights
then a thunder explodes through the illuminated night.
Foul odor sneaks up my nose and twinge my lungs,
wetness on my lips and my eye see's a tongue
it was Karen’s, mumbling- "Don't be scared"
and for the first time, I felt comfortable in my life, I swear.
It seems that all the problems of despair
has disappeared in the, non-tasteless and seeing, air.
We both got •••••'ed, hearing the knob turning
lights came on, and my mom standing there
with a gun in her hand, smoke escaping as if its burning.
On that same night, I found something that I'll cherish
& never regret, I found peace and Love while I was being perished.
As the time went on, I’ve knew I kissed darkness
Cause my life is fucked, as a living carcass and god abortionist

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Old 10-01-2006, 03:48 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Moment of Truth.............

...Here it was, my day with God, I didnt know what to say;
I put away my cross, got down on my knees & began to pray.
I looked away, & to my aray, there I saw the conclusion,
With no point proven, I saw the light or the mere illusion.


*Sunrising*...Back to the beginning...


The light shown bright, another day, another good & evil fight,
...Wrong vs Right, but today had the feel of a different type.
Despite the feeling, I didnt hesitate to proceed & kiss the ceiling;
Reiling from yesterday, I left for the chruch to keep on healing.
Dealing with the sins of others, another day of cheating lovers,
Mothers asking bout abortions, cause they forgot to use a robber.
All undercover, with an occasional sister who loves her brother,
Hunger, all this in the wood works, in a world full of lumber.
Under the covered sun, theres no lighting but thunder of the gun.
Run down buildings, a park w/ hustlers & junkies looking for fun,
Nothing to be done, city officials run to elect, church the answer.
The cities anger reigns, & pain makes the situation damper,
The cancer of a slowing dying city placed on in my hands;
With no fans of my plans, I fear I cant meet the streets demands.
I can see the grand building, wheelding the hopes of many,
With plenty of dreams, streaming from a river that was empty.

*Entering the chruch*

Something lurked inside still, I could seemingly feel the hurt,
But I cursed it off, thought nothing of it & got back to work.
I searched my thoughts all day, as I preached and lectured,
Pressured, knowing the point, but not able to define the texture.
Never would I ever imagined what was to happend next,
I took a breath, & there I could feel him, & this nearness of death.
...Preplexed; I didnt know who, what, when, where & why;
The sky opened, & rain poured, as if God were in pain & cried.

*A shadowed figure lept from alley*

Sadly, thats when I figured it all out, but I wasnt going to pout,
Or scream & shout, you'd think a priest would have more clout.
Without a doubt, I knew this was it, this was my time to go,
So I asked him what he wanted; I could feel a lump in my throat
"Yo I want all your dough, and then get on your knees queer!"
In my ear I heard God's voice preaching, "There's nothing to fear"


*Revert to the top if you dont understand*


*Sitting down*

...Im not upset about what happend, in fact Im laughing...
...Interacting with nurses that are only acting...
...Fact being Im better off here, that man's end is gory...
...Sure we had different fates, but I got all the glory...
...There's the story to it all, I hope I made it clear...
...I never felt fear, now God could you please pass me a beer...
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Bad mod mr tali bad mod!

This battle is tied UNTIL tali comes in here andlabels hiis vote 1,2,3

And if he places lola second then lola and vendetta are tied

But if mrmr is second on his lis lola and mrmr lose
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ok so i got the confirmatiuon from tali and thsi match si TIED

Lola Cruz and V for Vendetta advance, both at 1-0

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