10. Ron Deau 1-0 VS 11. Infinite Truth 41-9

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Old 09-19-2006, 10:28 PM   #1 (permalink)
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10. Ron Deau 1-0 VS 11. Infinite Truth 41-9




RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS

RULES AND REGULATIONS - THERE'S SOME NEW SHIT SO CLICK AND READ


The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced

Due Dates

VERSES DUE: Saturday, 11:59PM PST/2:59AM EST
Verses posted after the deadline will not count!

VOTES DUE Monday, 11:59PM PST/2:59 EST
Votes posted after the deadline will not count!
[list][*]Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
[*]Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
[*]Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
[*]RECYCLING IS NOT STRICTLY PROHIBITED. You may not use any verse that you have previously used within the league at any time. Whether it was a no show, tournament verse recycled for the league or visa versa or any verse that have ever been used within the league perimeters.
[*]During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit.
[*]Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list]
Voting:[list][*]If you do not show you can still vote and post the links in your match to receive full voting points. In addition, if you do not show, yet vote on at least 4 matches (Or, every match available, should there be less than 4 matches to vote on) you will remain in the league.
[*]Votes must be hidden! To hide a vote, first thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. The last thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, a backslash “/”, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. Unhidden votes will not count towards the match or towards your vote requirements.
[*]No second chance votes! If your vote has been edited, even it was only to hide it, your vote will not count towards the match or towards your vote requirements.
[*]No bias votes! If you have a personal investment in wanting someone to lose, whether because that member voted against you once, or you just don’t like that person, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match. If have a personal investment in wanting someone to win, whether because they’re crew member, or because you want to face that person in the next week’s brackets, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match.
[*]”Bias” must be confirmed by a Moderator.
[*]If there is a match which you will not be able to vote on, due to “Bias” of any type, state so within your match prior to Verses Due Deadline. If this reduces the number of matches available for you to vote on to the point where you are unable to vote on at least 4 matches, the point scale will be adjusted according to how many matches you do vote on.
[*]3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd, 3rd).
anyone who does not show or vote is suspended one week and must sign-in again to be inserted the following week.[/list][*] You will now be required to vote in the Championship and Contender's Match. These are the two matches for every no show winner to vote on and every member of the league to vote on as well. If you don't vote in those matches, you will not advance. You will recieve a win, but your rank will not change.

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Old 09-20-2006, 02:41 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Ron Deau takes it up the butt!
Hell yeah! 1 and zero!!! I'm in. I ain't afraid of your... 41-9. hahaha. How about something not terribly long? 40-50 lines? something around there sound ok?

You can go 60 if ya want, I probably won't go over 50 though...

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Old 09-20-2006, 10:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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yea. 50's fine.
seeing as i haven't done this in a while,
i'll want to get as creative as i can.
i'll try to keep it no longer than 40.
no promises though.
the rules seem pretty legit now.

side note-
shit,
didn't realize my record got so shitty. hahaha.
16-0 to 41-9?
i suck. haha.

good luck.
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Old 09-23-2006, 02:31 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Ron Deau takes it up the butt!
Hit me again bartender, and make it a stiff one.
Cuz when court resumes session, I’m going to prison.
Incidentally, it’s essentially a case of mistaken identity.
I’m meant to be a student with just coeds tempting me,
not an innocent man condemned to be a convicted felon.
Hit me again bartender, this time make it Ketel One.
Straight or Citron, either way it’s gone in one draught.
What’s not to drink about? Dad fucked mom at a truck stop,
9 months dropped me freshly onto this messy planet’s court
alone. Barely born, but already I’m 2 parents short.
Hit me again bartender, a double Wild Turkey,
cuz even those two birdies can’t match a third of how life’s hurt me,
and I’m thirsty. I’ve got to forget about that bitch’s eyes,
staring at me as she spits fits of lies, see, I’m the one being victimized.
She picked a prize in poor me, with no one to help get the truth out.
Hit me again bartender, and this time leave the vermouth out.
Then pour me two stouts: Guinness, and Guinness, and again this
feels like I’ve been sentenced to relive this same five minutes.
My state appointed guardian barging in, barfing gin,
swats the light, and in the darkness, then the scars begin.
Hit me again bartender, the cheapest ya got,
Cuz, hell, I’m gonna spend the rest of my life sleepin in cots.
It won’t altogether clash with weathered storms of the past,
before the last drop of class was wrung then torn from my grasp.
Child abuse ruined me, truthfully, so I plead:
Hit me again bartender, I’m on my knees
Give me reason to believe in the light again,
to remember the plight of men, remember right from sin.
I’ve always been the last on to-do lists, no one gave two shits
while I played Russian roulette alone… Oh, screw it.
Hit me again bartender, Dom Perignon Champagne.
No less than the best to address and drown the pain.
I announce the game over, but I was doomed from the start,
raised where love’s a part of glove, not from the heart.
Scarred by the belt, still I felt did my best with the cards I was dealt.
Hit me again bartender, I feel it all starting to melt,
and like I should, I stood amazed reliving childhood days,
on the swing, my foot grazed the ground, and I could say
first grade was great, until Gray, Dave’s dog tried to bite me,
so I stomped simply til he stopped whimpering and trying to fight me.
Hit me again bartender. Cut off? Not likely,
I might be slightly drunk, but the most frightening
thing I’ve yet discovered, as I hovered over that bloody mess,
was that after taking a life, I didn’t feel any fucking less.
Not in the head or chest, don’t know who I was ever fooling,
so, truly. Hit me again bartender
…cuz each, and every time, I knew exactly what I was doing.
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Old 09-24-2006, 03:53 AM   #5 (permalink)
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told you you werent shit Infinite

Ron, vote on'em
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Old 09-24-2006, 05:21 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Ron Deau takes it up the butt!
Since the contendership was a no show, I voted on a different match instead...

14. Hellrzah 17-13 VS 15. Got Lif? 29-16
Championship Match: 1. Sacrifice 4-0 VS 2. TheReturn 3-0 VS 3. Thaumaturge 12-0
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Old 09-25-2006, 01:36 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Shame he no-showed, you're pretty good kid. Lot of potential in there. Figured Id at least give you a bit of feed after you took the time to write a verse. Lol.

I.T. - Doing things like THIS is the reason your record is so bad, its not that you suck! Lol.

Ron, you remind me a lot of Ninja Kid or whatever he calls himself now. You have similar styles from what I remember of him. Better luck next week,

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Old 09-25-2006, 02:34 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Yeah I guess I'll comment on this since there's only 2 battles to vote on. This was a pretty nice piece. I really liked the reoccuring theme of "hit me again bartender" throughout the piece and the flow throughout the piece was pretty tight. Sucks that IT no showed, but yeah solid verse here. I enjoyed it.
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