6. Mr. Mister 1-0 VS 7. Shrug 1-0

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Old 09-13-2006, 03:46 AM   #1 (permalink)
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6. Mr. Mister 1-0 VS 7. Shrug 1-0




RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS

RULES AND REGULATIONS - THERE'S SOME NEW SHIT SO CLICK AND READ


The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced

Due Dates

VERSES DUE: Saturday, 11:59PM PST/2:59AM EST
Verses posted after the deadline will not count!

VOTES DUE Monday, 11:59PM PST/2:59 EST
Votes posted after the deadline will not count!
[list][*]Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
[*]Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
[*]Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
[*]RECYCLING IS NOT STRICTLY PROHIBITED. You may not use any verse that you have previously used within the league at any time. Whether it was a no show,

tournament verse recycled for the league or visa versa or any verse that have ever been used within the league perimeters.
[*]During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to

that limit.
[*]Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will

lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.[/list]
Voting:[list][*]If you do not show you can still vote and post the links in your match to receive full voting points. In addition, if you do not show, yet vote on at

least 4 matches (Or, every match available, should there be less than 4 matches to vote on) you will remain in the league.
[*]Votes must be hidden! To hide a vote, first thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. The last thing you

type in your reply is a bracket “[“, a backslash “/”, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. Unhidden votes will not count towards the match or towards your

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[*]No second chance votes! If your vote has been edited, even it was only to hide it, your vote will not count towards the match or towards your vote

requirements.
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that person, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match. If have a personal investment in wanting someone to win, whether because they’re crew member, or

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according to how many matches you do vote on.
[*]3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd,

3rd).
anyone who does not show or vote is suspended one week and must sign-in again to be inserted the following week.[/list]


Topics: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=10085818
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Old 09-13-2006, 04:37 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Finally my slumber was peacefully quiet
I awake to the dawn yet try to deny it
the enticing screams which had filled my dreams
avoided the scenes or so it does seem
There were no dark nightmares to haunt my vision
stare at the dark ask my eyes permission
to view if the wood resembles my memory
"ever changing to ones cruellest fantasy"
those words now run through my marrow and bone
a chilling cold whispers I’m not alone
so now fear holds my trembling eyelids in place
as a death blowing wind dances on my face
my thoughts collect and reflect for me the past
where dreams and reality constantly clashed
...
I was haunted by the grip of a forest enchanted
into my dreams it did slip deemed by him as dark magic
that old traveller ... given the position of village wise man
rumours say he went to hell and back thus knowing the devils plan
"the forest is a portal, but demons cant simply rush through the gate"
"they need fear and menace or at least one with a raging dormant hate"
I don’t believe you I ranted every chance I had
Their one argument "its true" pleading please don’t make him mad
for years this continued I grew disgusted by their fear
they sacrificed goats for something which was never real clear
so after a decade of blood was spilled in vain
I was forced in the mud and he whispered my name
god grew weary of goats and he wanted a human life
a preferable atheist who was without a wife
and for all my ranting I was the perfect choice
every time he was put down it was my voice
so I was banned exiled outcast to never return
few had gone before me fate made it to be my turn
pushed into the forest to fend for myself
not a single word not even take care of yourself
those that went before me out of courage they went
I lacked that same inspiration ... no I was sent
so after a few hours walk into a place where the sun doesn’t shine
I laid my head on a bed of leaves to ease and relieve my mind
sleep came quick but so did awakening
my body reacted to something approaching
but as I am sure its right before me I’m scared to behold it
its heavily breathing as if its unable to control it
my rage my disgust are gone but fear does stick
as I hear a voice say in 3 tones "YOU" my eyes open quick
my pupils adjust to the image as I hold my breath
the image is now clear this visage is death

as the horse fully staggers my heart feels pierced by daggers
anxiety now bites onto my heart like a rabbit badger
adrenaline pumps through my veins
as all my vessels experience pains
again he says it 3 tones "YOU"
as my head pounds the same words "what to do"
as I reach my zenith of what I can bare
raise my body but the windows of my soul still stare
it feels as if this beast is familiar as his fire fills the air
I now recognize it ... this IS my nightmare
...
sorry old man for all the times I spoke ill of you
this is something I never again will do
I came to my senses after passing out in the cold
my outside sleep made me see truth is in what you told
so never again will I try to undermine your authority
so what I’m trying to say is can you please forgive me
...
finally his words will now never again be bold
I still hold my power I still maintain control
The herbs still have effect I do so love natures wealth
now that he is subdued I can put the bottle back on the shelf
a sage a sorcerer ... at my every word they cower
if they only knew I’m just a old man who loves power
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"The absence of flaw in beauty is itself a flaw. "
Havelock Ellis


Surgical Procedures

I knew this girl named Christine smith, this one unbelievable ingenious chick
She set her goals up on the highest peak, but I hear she took the scenic trip
Cause her parents conceived that she apparently couldn’t be shit
She was wonderful but couldn’t see this, when grief hit she became bulimic
I know nothing of the girl now, and if I heard how it turned out
I probably wouldn’t believe it

Sadly, her daddy got a job in Cali,
As he packed his bags gladly
She stuffed her flustered weeps and mustered heaps
of strength as she prepared reluctantly
for these tough few weeks.

The move went smoothly to Malibu Beach.
Christine spent a few weeks and grew to see
its not what it used to be. The view, heat,
and having few to preach as to who
at school she had to meet

She naturally glistened in this new world of women and sin
Trying to fit in within this prison of vixens
She maintained optimism from her pops inhibitions
Until she lost her vision and started givin’ in

"The less their ability, the more their conceit."
Ahad HaAm


Christine noticed that the friends she wished to be closest
Were wearing these clothes that showed tits,
booty and hips. But these hocus pocus show tricks,
The gluteus and moody trips, truly tricked her focus, of who she is.
But the truth is she was more tantalizing and beauteous
but through over fantasizing and closer analyzing
of other specimens of special trends,
She made vestal amends to feel more like her “celestial” friends


“No thesaurus can explain how they’re gorgeous!
A bunch of true beauty queens, no flaw to be seen
And here I stand, a more or less bland stupid teen
in this moral less quarreled mess of useless dreams”

“Look at her curved hips, she’s perfect. I wish I had her pure gift,
but I don’t deserve it cause to dad, I only belong in the circus,
but some day every dream you have needs to be refurbished.”

Out of nervousness of not being accepted by those chosen few
Who roamed and ruled, Christine bought new clothes and •••els
so she could show and prove that she too could glow at school.
As her attitude grew toward this tattered crew
I wish that she knew
That I was sad for you And what you had to do.
To be a part of that popular pack of knackered youth

This pack of zombies wearing abercrombie
(Using the money their dads blow fondly cause they have to “show bonding)
still gave her the head to toe, gawked to get up and go
Never to know, whether or not she’s clever or bold
And it severs my soul to see why her weather is cold

However now her endevoure to better herself
has severed the tether that held her to self
Addicted to cosmetics now that her dad has bills at home
She resorts to prosthetic silicone cause he can afford to accord this little clone
Now a lost pathetic drone, post surgery it hurts to see the worth she needs.
To be part of the multitude of pulchritude in this cult of few

Only if she cracked open the vault of truth and saw that the treasure
cant be measured by the faults of you.

I guess the life you play is the price to pay
If you bite the way kids exercise rights today





Human beings, by changing the inner attitudes of their minds, can change the outer aspects of their lives.
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2.) http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post14039882
3.) http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post14039938
4.) http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post14039951
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