5. Pent Up 34-13 vs 6. SacriFice 1-0

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Old 08-28-2006, 05:24 AM   #1 (permalink)
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5. Pent Up 34-13 vs 6. SacriFice 1-0



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Don RodrigueZ 79: There are people who rhyme better than you, maybe flow better, word shit better, but I can't name more than 3 writers who write shit realer than you, and that to me is the ultimate compliment
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Old 08-28-2006, 06:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Checking in. I'm using all 64 lines.

[Votes]:
[1]http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1006010 [contender]
[2]http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13988763
[3]http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1006016
[4]http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1006017
[5]http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13990932
[6]

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*edit: Dope verse Pent, should be interesting. Good luck..

I'm going to do the audio version of my shit today or tomorrow so the link will be here.
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Alright, I'm finished... already.

"Every sweet has its sour; every evil its good."
Ralph Waldo Emerson

I remember the day I awoke when I got the call
From my folks, they joked before they dropped me off
The bus left, behind they watched their son's death
...begin, it's a shame all the pain that one nets to win...
The sun set and wind was upset and grim
Raining like a painting upon the success within
I suggested if... I returned I'd be a changed person
Changed yes, but I returned a chained serpent...

The innate murderous rage was determined to blaze
The fates of the persons I faced were certain to break
Trained to deal pain by way of the flying death
Swinging blades, a pendulum with lion's strength
Lead concocted metal, if not the devil then beside him rests
A Godly demon inside me screaming' of my trite intents
Running, leaning inside the tents of the enemies as darkness
Enveloped the surrounding regions, energy I sparked
Beneath those keeping watch, the war continued
Like equinox, changing like the seasons within you
The speed of flocks of demonic brutes with bleeding socks
And feet of rocks and shots of juice to keep at top
-notch viciousness, the wickedness never seemed to stop
Ubiquitous, our fleets supplying life's antithesis
by might's epitome.
Ignite the city-scene as well as all of it's citizens.

The war paused, the gore caused remained dominant
A core loss of the main populace, insane ominous
Rain as the new government reigned
Bubbling 'cane, to make myself numb in the brain
It wasn't easy, something eats me, struggling days
And flashbacks, discovering shame
Exacted wrath upon the former structure in place
As bad as blasts in Japan causing destruction and change
But something has changed, my perspective
Waking up from nightmares, its quite clear, my eyes infested
By visions of my connection, with deaths of wives and peasants
No control, in my soul, even when the signs were present
That I was destined to be cleansed...
I was the pawn of the devil, if all could be level, I'd repent...

The bus returned, I paid the fair
-placed my bag under the seat
And strained to care, living cold blooded... dissolved
Despite what my soul wanted, I took control of it
and played a key role in that disgusting resolve
I didn't know I'd become a wolf when my muzzle was off
We were a pack of rabid dogs, the puzzle they had it solved
Our minds, they had 'em washed
Were trained to kill. And paid to spill blood with amazing will
Blades and stainless steel
Blood staining, like ink when touching the page with quill
We wrote history, despite any consequence
I'm home listening, to the breeze as my mind gets rest

My mother always tells me she's glad I'm alive
But I could not explain why because of all the madness, I died
Savageness, blind, killed all because I had to survive
Mentally, passive, steadily captive by the past
and instead of reactions to love I passively ask
...to be alone, I know we were predisposed
For victory, and even though I had my medals
I asked the devil to visit me, begging him to end this misery
The sweetness of victory, brought out the evil within me
And greed and power, turned anything good into cheap and sour
Like the wilting of the sweetest flower, my dreams devoured.

Is fighting for "good", really "good" with so much evil
And isn't the sweetness sour when the power is so lethal? [64]

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good luck man... I had fun writing this.
*edited to place the topic at the beginning*
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Old 08-31-2006, 01:16 AM   #4 (permalink)
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EAST: 2. Black Beard and Moms -VS- InsaneVillian and Infinite Truth - tourney
9. GotLife 28-14 VS 10. Vigil 22-15
15. TheReturn 0-0 VS 16. disused hero 0-0
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23. MrMister 0-0 VS 24. David Lama 0-0
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Old 08-31-2006, 04:25 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Unresolved Anger

Kids these days...
Laughing from their solar plexes....
Minds altered into a game of fold up tetris
Living close to exits, looking for the only entrance
from nose to the brain via rolled up checklist.
Thinkin theyre fine in a convuluted strange affair;
Impressions made by blinks and the way they stare,
multicolored lips and how they change their hair,
instead for a brain that's to stupid to chain with care
that ball and ankle setup. they rather fuel that monster;
that ghost inside that machine that doubles as that fools imposter.
They live for drugs and FREEDOM forgetting food'll cost ya...
killing that ghost who was you before the tools that gotcha
you know,
The glass pipe that opened up a gate of extacy,
sent you on a trail of trails of fate and blasphomy.
That helped you escape reality
which breaks your actual speed leaving you straight with staggered knees,
but stand for what you believe in over ancient spirit ground,
wear your heart on a sleeve and live with your inside out.
If ever a time for resolution, then that year is now
because acid, meth, and dust will leave you weird and loud
then turn you into a shell for the conditions I mentioned
Blocking out, or over enhancing living life festive
Making you machine, with specific mission objectives:
find the crowd of kids you know will pitch in for seconds,
then go to the dealers house,
do your stash,
and skimp the collective.
But this is all an excuse,
and you're striking with your binge as your weapon....(26)

Ahhh....
Kids these days...
Ignoring their needs for a heart to heart,
when after hours of after hour garbage talk
a real exploitation of self is hard to start
so to numb the pain youll be offered pot.
But please refrain.
Please remember that host inside,
that never shows his pride and might implode tonight
if you dont describe how you feel towards his life
Please remember,
even the chosen die
and you aint that special so why pretend to be?
why don't you live like everyone else and recognize the enemy?
You're gonna have to stop partying sometime, essentially.
so why dont you start working and drag it out until it ends fully?
(38)
Ahh...
Adults these days....
looking back in time and making promises;
Thinking they know better than common sense,
avoiding past mistakes deciding what progress is.
Telling us to stay indoors, getting drunk...
and callin quits
claiming we're to young to make official accomplishments...
Pompous pricks who block goals we've sought as kids
whether through tales of H-E-Double hockey sticks
or foggy stints based on vague loopholes adults permit
(46)
I often wish to go off with it; but realized I'm just tracings paths;
generic trails crossed with time to make dating graphs;
following the timeline and erasing crap,
editing procedure and then debating laughs....
but life is a makeshift path, make it last
Stay Bright with excitement even if you take a crash
Because with one life to live if you feel slightly gipped
who cares about the machinery that you might equip
With so few miles on this odometer
Plan where to go, not what you're longing for
who cares if you started wars, or fought uproars
as long as you've stayed true and gotten yours
give credit for what the host may compell
inside the machine where his composure will dwell
Until your iced on a bed stay toasty as hell
and remember we're just that ghost in the shell
Loathing ourselves or trying to break free
but in the end we can only confide in our babies
(64)

They always say time changes things, but you actually have to change them yourself.
Andy Warhol
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Old 09-02-2006, 02:44 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 09-02-2006, 03:39 PM   #9 (permalink)
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This is one battle i wont vote on only cuz pent up will see it as a beef vote...

and nigga im still voting...

on all the battles except for yours...

and i dont want u voting in mine...

go check emcee hookups and check the message i left for your wanna be holier than thou ass...
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