39. Symptoms 1-0 vs 40. Annihilation 2-1

[-Oz-]

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[Clawz]

how does 12 bars sound?

[symptoms]

yea its watever man....

good luck

[Clawz]

votes:




nah man lol my computer fucked up sorry

[symptoms]

was that ur verse dude??

[Clawz]

12..


I'll fuck your bitch into tuesday, I put ladies into a ferver
the last Patty you greased was at McDonald's flippin' burgers
You got symptoms, ya spit sittin' over a toilet passin' gas
Cause when you drop ill shit your talking out of your ass
I’m gonna take you to school and it ain’t just a hunch
Cause I’m packing-serious-punches while your packing-your-lunch
Ure a nobody u only get on stage as a groupie, I checked
youre like an extra in a movie... beamin' down on star trek
You suck dick’s for lyrics, take ya tape n’ pause-it
Only hit you’re coming out with is out-of-the-closet
Needless to say you better fuckin’ pray for a draw
Bring your Crayola's and hope I forgot my sawed-off.



gl

[symptoms]

quick key good luck anni

lookin for some ill... shit ur in some/
and maken guts spill... quicks the symptom/
fag fuck searchin for daddy more than Orphan Anni/
came to me cuz he heard that i scorched the panties/
but didnt realize i never sport the trannies/
so he better A-bort to plan B/
cuz u spit dull, i guess u could say i clipped claws/
i give him a pencil with no tip.... pause/
and see how many votes this kid draws/
when u seen my name u smelt the loss so u aint been insense/
symptoms to intense/
i left dude punch drunk like i got the kid bent/

[Symmetry]

Clawz:

I'll fuck your bitch into tuesday, I put ladies into a ferver
the last Patty you greased was at McDonald's flippin' burgers
- Good line but what the fuck is "ferver"???

You got symptoms, ya spit sittin' over a toilet passin' gas
Cause when you drop ill shit your talking out of your ass
- Decent

I’m gonna take you to school and it ain’t just a hunch
Cause I’m packing-serious-punches while your packing-your-lunch
- Blah blah blah

Ure a nobody u only get on stage as a groupie, I checked
youre like an extra in a movie... beamin' down on star trek
- No

You suck dick’s for lyrics, take ya tape n’ pause-it
Only hit you’re coming out with is out-of-the-closet
- Just okay

Needless to say you better fuckin’ pray for a draw
Bring your Crayola's and hope I forgot my sawed-off.
- Doesn't really rhyme... not a good closer

Symptoms:

lookin for some ill... shit ur in some/
and maken guts spill... quicks the symptom/
- NO NO NO

fag fuck searchin for daddy more than Orphan Anni/
came to me cuz he heard that i scorched the panties/
- NO NO NO

but didnt realize i never sport the trannies/
so he better A-bort to plan B/
- Sport the trannies? NO

cuz u spit dull, i guess u could say i clipped claws/
i give him a pencil with no tip.... pause/
- Pause? NO MAN... damn it

and see how many votes this kid draws/
when u seen my name u smelt the loss so u aint been insense/
- Horrible

symptoms to intense/
i left dude punch drunk like i got the kid bent/
- Below average closer

I don't know what to say but neither verse was outstanding. With that said... Clawz wins "paws" down on this one. Symptoms what were you thinkin fam???

Vote= Clawz

[-Oz-]

Upping To Top

[Second Skin]

Gotta go with claws on this one. He had the basics down. I guess symptoms is a new guy to writing because I didn't see any stand out lines. But here's something to build on...the draw a win line, try and be more creative like that. Make your shit hit harder and you'll do good man.

Vote claws

[symptoms]

watever kid did u actually peep his verse????????

[Banned Name]

I’m gonna take you to school and it ain’t just a hunch
Cause I’m packing-serious-punches while your packing-your-lunch

thats about it from the house, though i must admit youre showing improvement from when you first took a stab at the other league...the wording and word choice is certainly there, its just some of the concepts were hella basic, do yourself a favour and make that one of your main focuses for improvement...

but didnt realize i never sport the trannies/
so he better A-bort to plan B/

youre suffering from the same problem as mr. clawz, your concepts are too basic, however your wording also needs work and the incorporation of multis would certainly not hurt you...


V- Claws

[ARIZCATZ]

Annihilation
I'll fuck your bitch into tuesday, I put ladies into a ferver
the last Patty you greased was at McDonald's flippin' burgers
Ha. Nice
You got symptoms, ya spit sittin' over a toilet passin' gas
Cause when you drop ill shit your talking out of your ass
Heh. Nice again.
I’m gonna take you to school and it ain’t just a hunch
Cause I’m packing-serious-punches while your packing-your-lunch
Blah
Ure a nobody u only get on stage as a groupie, I checked
youre like an extra in a movie... beamin' down on star trek
Eh. okay. Waste of bars though.
You suck dick’s for lyrics, take ya tape n’ pause-it
Only hit you’re coming out with is out-of-the-closet
Losing momentum.
Needless to say you better fuckin’ pray for a draw
Bring your Crayola's and hope I forgot my sawed-off.
Bah. Weak line again.

Symptoms
lookin for some ill... shit ur in some/
and maken guts spill... quicks the symptom/
Needs better wording. Punch doesn't really say anything.
fag fuck searchin for daddy more than Orphan Anni/
came to me cuz he heard that i scorched the panties/
Eh. Not bad.
but didnt realize i never sport the trannies/
so he better A-bort to plan B/
Heh. REally nice flow.
cuz u spit dull, i guess u could say i clipped claws/
i give him a pencil with no tip.... pause/
and see how many votes this kid draws/
Ehh. Not much here.
when u seen my name u smelt the loss so u aint been insense/
symptoms to intense/
i left dude punch drunk like i got the kid bent/
Weak closer.

Overall I think the first 4 from Annihilation took this one.

[Mic-illaH]

I'll fuck your bitch into tuesday, I put ladies into a ferver
the last Patty you greased was at McDonald's flippin' burgers
decent
You got symptoms, ya spit sittin' over a toilet passin' gas
Cause when you drop ill shit your talking out of your ass
ehhh
I’m gonna take you to school and it ain’t just a hunch
Cause I’m packing-serious-punches while your packing-your-lunch
decent
Ure a nobody u only get on stage as a groupie, I checked
youre like an extra in a movie... beamin' down on star trek
no
You suck dick’s for lyrics, take ya tape n’ pause-it
Only hit you’re coming out with is out-of-the-closet
played
Needless to say you better fuckin’ pray for a draw
Bring your Crayola's and hope I forgot my sawed-off.
decent


lookin for some ill... shit ur in some/
and maken guts spill... quicks the symptom/
huh?
fag fuck searchin for daddy more than Orphan Anni/
came to me cuz he heard that i scorched the panties/
what
but didnt realize i never sport the trannies/
so he better A-bort to plan B/
no
cuz u spit dull, i guess u could say i clipped claws/
i give him a pencil with no tip.... pause/
where's this going
and see how many votes this kid draws/
when u seen my name u smelt the loss so u aint been insense/
no
symptoms to intense/
i left dude punch drunk like i got the kid bent/
wow no


v/ Claws. easily. other dude sucked ass.
claws threw some decent punches, other kid didn't throw one.

[theFRANCHISE]

clawz:
I’m gonna take you to school and it ain’t just a hunch
Cause I’m packing-serious-punches while your packing-your-lunch
You suck dick’s for lyrics, take ya tape n’ pause-it
Only hit you’re coming out with is out-of-the-closet

um, a few decent punches here.... could have been better..

symptoms:
lookin for some ill... shit ur in some/
and maken guts spill... quicks the symptom/
fag fuck searchin for daddy more than Orphan Anni/
came to me cuz he heard that i scorched the panties/
but didnt realize i never sport the trannies/
so he better A-bort to plan B/
cuz u spit dull, i guess u could say i clipped claws/
i give him a pencil with no tip.... pause/
and see how many votes this kid draws/

this flowed nice....

the A/B line was cool...

close, but vote - symptoms

return the favor vote on theFRANCHISE v. young philly

[Clawz]

Votes:

1- 21. ARIZCATS 2-0 vs 22. Brock Sampson 2-0
2- 63. Flowetic vs 64. Kool La!d
3- 35. In Fo 1-0 vs 36. Untouchable 1-0
4- 15. Meta Syn 3-0 vs 16. Willie Dickgood 4-1

Championship:

5- RBL Championship Match: 1. Spit That 6-0 Vs 2. Oneduh 5-0

[Antrel]

Overall this was a weak battle. With that said I have to give my vote to Clawz for having stronger punches than Symptoms. Symptom's drop was way too simple and basic and the punches didn't hit. Clawz's dropped a very beatable rap, but Symptoms couldn't take advantage of it. Keep workin' at it tho.

v- Clawz

[-Oz-]

Clawz wins

Post on your other name, got me confused.