29. Anchor 2-0 vs 30. Hair Line 2-1

[-Oz-]

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[Hair Line]

yea....im here... should be 3-1 but w/e

[Anchor.]

12 lines.

[Anchor.]

Originally Posted by Hair Lines Check In

yea....im here... should be 3-1 but w/e

Detectives baffled, 3 gays murdered, maulled & raped
Until forensics found Hair & quickly solved the case
Ya phone is empty, yet ya got a hunnid net friends
& Your two way, it leads straight into a fuckin dead end
When it comes to ya man? We know this kid'll take the booty
& End up getting a 'brokeback' trying to immitate that movie
Ur a fat & lazy head, I get crazy loot every week I spit
Yeah, I get Crazy Bread, and you, well.. you eat the shit
Your check in was gay, but you know whats clever?
Next week you'll be sayin "should be 3-2 but whatever"
Ya nameplays are wack, like ya mind got in a blank
If you 'Play on Anchor', ur sure to sink to the bottom of ranks

[Hair Line]

ya first statements were wack, shit didn't fool nobody
you'll be pushed in the background faster than 2pac in Killuminati
u kno my lines taste good, dude coughs ups Hairs whenever he spits
that weak verse receives no sympathy, 'cept for despair of fists
dude is holdin it down, which explains why'll he never rise to the top
cuz looks like this anchor gave way before he even decided to drop
ya set up's are pretty predictable like drug busts in the middle of the night
cuz ya damn flip's are so overboard....the shit is landin on another site
if rappin is ya native tongue...then your's fluento a language barrier
n ya girl ain't commited dawg, till she asked me to fuckin marry her
i ain't haven't that, HL ain't a father unless im with my collar..dude im the Godliest
i'd say ur career is underwater...but i'd be only stating what is the obvious

blah...quick 12 for you

[Venamis]

Vote - Hair Line

Hair Line:

ya first statements were wack, shit didn't fool nobody
you'll be pushed in the background faster than 2pac in Killuminati
Not bad.
u kno my lines taste good, dude coughs ups Hairs whenever he spits
that weak verse receives no sympathy, 'cept for despair of fists
Iight.
dude is holdin it down, which explains why'll he never rise to the top
cuz looks like this anchor gave way before he even decided to drop
Haha.
ya set up's are pretty predictable like drug busts in the middle of the night
cuz ya damn flip's are so overboard....the shit is landin on another site
Cool.
if rappin is ya native tongue...then your's fluento a language barrier
n ya girl ain't commited dawg, till she asked me to fuckin marry her
Nah.
i ain't haven't that, HL ain't a father unless im with my collar..dude im the Godliest
i'd say ur career is underwater...but i'd be only stating what is the obvious
Nice closer.

Pretty cool verse, a lot of nice name plays that I was feeling.
Anchor:

Detectives baffled, 3 gays murdered, maulled & raped
Until forensics found Hair & quickly solved the case
Not bad.
Ya phone is empty, yet ya got a hunnid net friends
& Your two way, it leads straight into a fuckin dead end
Nah.
When it comes to ya man? We know this kid'll take the booty
& End up getting a 'brokeback' trying to immitate that movie
USER flipped this better.
Ur a fat & lazy head, I get crazy loot every week I spit
Yeah, I get Crazy Bread, and you, well.. you eat the shit
Played.
Your check in was gay, but you know whats clever?
Next week you'll be sayin "should be 3-2 but whatever"
Decent personal flip.
Ya nameplays are wack, like ya mind got in a blank
If you 'Play on Anchor', ur sure to sink to the bottom of ranks
Alright closer.

You had a little weaker verse, some of your punches were played and forced a little

Flow was a little bit better than Hair's at times.

Kind of a close battle, but not really.

[Louisville]

vote=hairline

I liked the forensics line and the last 2 punches in your verse anchor but the rest of the verse fell off.

hairline, good shit on the whole verse, nicely worded and consistent with the punches. I get the committed line and it was a nice concept to play with.

Peace

[in fo]

hairline ya had some punches i really liked i didnt like the one about his girl however that marry her shit was corny to me but everything else was good

anchor a lot less consistent some of ya shit was bad flips of played shit ya had a better flow however but my vote goes to

v/hairline

[Anchor.]

Follow The Leader Voting Ehhh

Votes will be here...

[ARIZCATZ]

Anchor.
Detectives baffled, 3 gays murdered, maulled & raped
Until forensics found Hair & quickly solved the case
Ya phone is empty, yet ya got a hunnid net friends
& Your two way, it leads straight into a fuckin dead end
Opener was nice. Two way line okay.
When it comes to ya man? We know this kid'll take the booty
& End up getting a 'brokeback' trying to immitate that movie
Funny.
Ur a fat & lazy head, I get crazy loot every week I spit
Yeah, I get Crazy Bread, and you, well.. you eat the shit
Bahaha.
Your check in was gay, but you know whats clever?
Next week you'll be sayin "should be 3-2 but whatever"
Ya nameplays are wack, like ya mind got in a blank
If you 'Play on Anchor', ur sure to sink to the bottom of ranks
3-2 line was okay. Play on anchor was ehh. Pretty weak way to close.


Hairline
ya first statements were wack, shit didn't fool nobody
you'll be pushed in the background faster than 2pac in Killuminati
u kno my lines taste good, dude coughs ups Hairs whenever he spits
that weak verse receives no sympathy, 'cept for despair of fists
Opener was nice again here. Despair line over-setup and silly.
dude is holdin it down, which explains why'll he never rise to the top
cuz looks like this anchor gave way before he even decided to drop
Didn't really do anything.
ya set up's are pretty predictable like drug busts in the middle of the night
cuz ya damn flip's are so overboard....the shit is landin on another site
Ehh. This is not going to get the win.
if rappin is ya native tongue...then your's fluento a language barrier
n ya girl ain't commited dawg, till she asked me to fuckin marry her
This is really random.
i ain't haven't that, HL ain't a father unless im with my collar..dude im the Godliest
i'd say ur career is underwater...but i'd be only stating what is the obvious
An anchor nameplay needs to be hotter than that.

Overall I got Anchor. taking this. That bread line was really funny to me for some reason. Ha. Hairline, your verse seemed random and didn't hit hard with really anything. All the anchor nameplays were booty.

[Phlem]

Close battle, anchor, you came pretty good all the way through until your last couplets. Good verse. Hair line, despair wordplay line was nice, other than that your verse was just blahish. Best line of the battle goes to hair line, however i felt anchor was more consistent in his verse.

So vote=anchor

[Flowetic]

Hmm Anchor got this easy... shit had some nice lines to it, some would have gained impact with different wording but that could jus be a matter of taste.. the concepts were pretty good and just a bit more clever then what hairline posted...
Hairline yer wording was jus less, yer lines kinda stretched and the concepts itself were jus a bit bland... Im not sayin it sucked but yer writings jus not really refined yet

vote anchor

[N.Tavarez]

Detectives baffled, 3 gays murdered, maulled & raped
Until forensics found Hair & quickly solved the cas
Ya nameplays are wack, like ya mind got in a blank
If you 'Play on Anchor', ur sure to sink to the bottom of ranks

vs

dude is holdin it down, which explains why'll he never rise to the top
cuz looks like this anchor gave way before he even decided to drop
ain't haven't that, HL ain't a father unless im with my collar..dude im the Godliest
i'd say ur career is underwater...but i'd be only stating what is the obvious

and that 2nd one was forced to shit
i got anchor taking this man, the shit thats not quoted is pretty much filler though
v/ anchor

[Symmetry]

Anchor.:

Detectives baffled, 3 gays murdered, maulled & raped
Until forensics found Hair & quickly solved the case
- Above average opener

Ya phone is empty, yet ya got a hunnid net friends
& Your two way, it leads straight into a fuckin dead end
- Nope

When it comes to ya man? We know this kid'll take the booty
& End up getting a 'brokeback' trying to immitate that movie
- Average could've been worded better

Ur a fat & lazy head, I get crazy loot every week I spit
Yeah, I get Crazy Bread, and you, well.. you eat the shit
- I don't know... just don't really get it

Your check in was gay, but you know whats clever?
Next week you'll be sayin "should be 3-2 but whatever"
- Average

Ya nameplays are wack, like ya mind got in a blank
If you 'Play on Anchor', ur sure to sink to the bottom of ranks
- Average

Hair Line:

ya first statements were wack, shit didn't fool nobody
you'll be pushed in the background faster than 2pac in Killuminati
- WAY too stretched

u kno my lines taste good, dude coughs ups Hairs whenever he spits
that weak verse receives no sympathy, 'cept for despair of fists
- Nope

dude is holdin it down, which explains why'll he never rise to the top
cuz looks like this anchor gave way before he even decided to drop
- Good punch

ya set up's are pretty predictable like drug busts in the middle of the night
cuz ya damn flip's are so overboard....the shit is landin on another site
- Funny

if rappin is ya native tongue...then your's fluento a language barrier
n ya girl ain't commited dawg, till she asked me to fuckin marry her
- Average

i ain't haven't that, HL ain't a father unless im with my collar..dude im the Godliest
i'd say ur career is underwater...but i'd be only stating what is the obvious
- Wayyyy too stretched - not even possible... below average closer


Close battle. Overall I think Hair Line had a few better lines then Anchor. Anchor started decent but it unraveled pretty fast.

Vote= Hair Line

[-Oz-]

Upping To Top

[Second Skin]

Aiight, battle was pretty cool. I was feeling Hair Line's steez a little more, but Anchor's shit was hot also. Another close close battle. Anchor's 3-2 line and forensic line was pretty hot. While the pac and his 2 anchors line were killa. Even though I hate when cats come in threads and try and sway votes, i'ma say Anchor took this. Damn close battle.

[Banned Name]

When it comes to ya man? We know this kid'll take the booty
& End up getting a 'brokeback' trying to immitate that movie
Your check in was gay, but you know whats clever?
Next week you'll be sayin "should be 3-2 but whatever"

those two were pretty clever, everything else was rather bland

v


ya set up's are pretty predictable like drug busts in the middle of the night
cuz ya damn flip's are so overboard....the shit is landin on another site

yo that line was sick, if the rest of them were on the same level as this, you'da taken this battle with relative ease

but...they werent


V- Anchor

[-Oz-]

Tied..