58 Symmetry vs 59 NOBLE SOLDIER

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Old 02-26-2006, 11:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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58 Symmetry vs 59 NOBLE SOLDIER


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Old 02-27-2006, 02:11 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Symmetry takes it up the butt!
Checkin' in...

just like to clarify that... we have a whole week... (from now til Friday) to post our verses? That's PLENTY of time and I'm cool with that.

Second... how many lines do you want to go Noble?

Get at me and let me know... with that much time I have NO problem goin' the max.

Goodluck!

*Also... I don't think I truly understand the "linking" statement. It'd be cool if that could be explained a little better cuz it's over my head right now. Thanx!
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Old 02-28-2006, 04:19 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Where you at Noble? Whats good?
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Old 03-01-2006, 12:31 AM   #4 (permalink)
 
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Aint nothing good here homie. lol.. The max is fine... see ya in a grip...

I'll edit my votes into here..

P.S If your interested sym hit me up on the e-mail tip (justiniraq2004@yahoo.com) and we can do a collab or something.. help kick that writers block.. Peace homie..


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http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post13351248

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post13347703

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...5#post13351195

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...6#post13352996
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Old 03-01-2006, 02:00 AM   #5 (permalink)
 
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Announcer: "Ladies and Gentlemen, After a two year hiatus NOBLE SOLDIER finally makes his RBL return.."

Young kid in the audience: NOBLE?!?! Who the fuck is that?

Older gentleman: Shut up kid, he's here to show yall young punks what this shit is all about..

Ayo,

This fight isnt even, I dont care what ya name is..
Cuzz like the movie, your writings just gonna get ya Almost Famous..
Your the lamest, Where do u go off getting so cocky, whats your prerogative..
Your whack and your ugly, this isnt math, two negatives dont make a positive..
Just erase all of it, dont even post that weak verse..
I would be worried u'r gonna play off my shit, but you would have to know how to read first..
Your cursed with weak rhymes, you should kill yourself immeadiatly..
Just grab the jergens and gloves, thats the only way your beating me..
I seemingly dismiss this cat easily, like faggots in gym class..
Your sound is un-godly I dont think u could sing a hymn at mass..
You could fuck'a him in the ass, but thats your choice..
I dont discriminate, but im happy this is text and i dont have to hear your voice..
Boys will be boys, but steping to a man is whole other situation..
Your a newborn kid, u should drop the mic and get into incubation..
You need a new occupation, your technique is sloppy..
This isnt junior high homey, if you need help, u cant just copy..


G'luck kid...
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Old 03-01-2006, 08:44 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Symmetry takes it up the butt!
Ha ha... yeah no doubt man...

But fuck an introduction...


Ayo... check it...

Don't believe the hype... this dude is played/
if nobody can "see" you on the mic... its probably cuz you got booed off stage/
Nah... noone sees you… cuz you live in your Dads garage/
drive a damaged Dodge and the damn things camoflauged/
... I don't need to tell you twice if I told you once/
You're a dunce... a dumb grunt who busts spunk on the bottom of his chums bunk/
You don't carry heat... let alone hold a holster/
ain't nothin' Noble about you... and that's "No Bull... Soldier"/
claim to be in Iraq... bitch... you're in Nova Scotia stupid/
churnin' butter in windmills... doin' Windmills to Polka music/
yeah... as a kid you were a lonely violent child/
destined to short circuit... so what's your major malfunction Private Pile?/
it feels so good absorbin' it/
when I hang your body off the top of the Projects like a damn "hood" ornament/
You gon' win it huh? You should be... so fortunate/
You're too late...
cuz I'm burnin' it, torchin' it... then twistin' a torniquette on this tournament/


Yo goodluck fam!
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Old 03-01-2006, 10:48 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Vote=Noble Soldier...


Blah... both of these verses were really subpar with the punches. Symmetry really didn't have any flow, punches, or personals. Which tends to help people win battles. Noble had the weak ass intro, but at least he pretended like he wanted to throw a punch. So I voted NS just for the fact that he had some decent concepts and at least threw a punch.


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Old 03-01-2006, 11:06 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Vote: Noble Soldier

I really don't what to say that PopeJuicy didn't. Noble's was atleast consistently trying to throw punches. They might have been really weak and played, but there was an attempt at wordplay and a punch in nearly every line. symmetry just came pretty weak. The hood ornament line was a decent concept, but it was worded pretty awkward. Noble/no bull line was good, but the rest didn't help your verse at all...it actually took away from the two decent lines you had.
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Old 03-01-2006, 11:22 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Holy fuck... ha ha. This shit is... am I writin' my shit wrong? Do people not catch the lines? Do these two opinions/votes really reflect how kids on here judge verses?

Wow... heh... man... just wow.
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Old 03-02-2006, 03:00 AM   #10 (permalink)
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...The hood ornament line was a decent concept, but it was worded pretty awkward. Noble/no bull line was good, but the rest didn't help your verse at all...it actually took away from the two decent lines you had.
wtf? did i miss somethin? yo good lines are good lines regardless of how wak eveything is around them...and...those 2 lines were doper than soldier's whole verse. symetry didn't have to have an entire verse of dopeness to beat noble. now, having said that; it woulda been nice to see someone go all out against a lack-luster verse, just to furthermore prove dominance(go for the juggular), especially since symetry got the chance to post second. but i guess that's a little too much to ask.
good shit yall...almost an even match, but played lines flooded noble's verse.
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Old 03-02-2006, 02:40 PM   #11 (permalink)
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yea i think NOBLE started off good n just fell off from there. the whole math line was good but after that ya went downhill. sym's verse had nice multis and that whole spunk shit was funny as hell.

good battle

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Old 03-02-2006, 03:49 PM   #12 (permalink)
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wtf @ the first two votes lol

noble had a decent verse n shit, & he stayed fresh with it
but so did symmetry, & his wording was pretty good too
i got symmetry taking this pretty easy, iono
i was feeling his no bull line, & his hood ornament line
that hood ornament shit was the line of the battle
he could've worded it a little better, but it was still the best line

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Old 03-02-2006, 08:25 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Symmetry takes it up the butt!
Up for votes...

3-2

Where you at Soldier? Haven't nothin' from ya since the start?

Get at me!
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Old 03-02-2006, 11:49 PM   #14 (permalink)
 
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Jus chill'n homie.. dont get to spend all my time on the net.. just check'n this out and gonna vote on some battle while i got time.. Nice verse homie.. Im still trynna shake off that rust.. Its been awhile.... Holla..
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Old 03-03-2006, 12:58 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Symmetry takes it up the butt!
No doubt...

and props for servin' in the military. That battle doesn't reflect how I "really" feel... just in case you mighta thought different.

Good luck and hope you get to go home soon!
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Old 03-03-2006, 06:01 PM   #16 (permalink)
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symptoms takes it up the butt!
saymmetry....

i was feelin his flow, vocab and punches a lil more.
i was feelin the private pile line. lol. struck a funny bone..
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Old 03-03-2006, 06:17 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Symmetry takes it up the butt!
4-2 Uppin for votes.

Thanx Symptoms... I was kinda gettin the feelin that NOONE caught that line... heh.
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Old 03-03-2006, 08:03 PM   #18 (permalink)
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nice battle...solid verses from both people with some really nice both were tight but looks like symmetry won cause of his better wordplay and i really like the hood ornament line...stuck strong in my mind...i like noble's junior high line cuz that's what i always did in junior high and i still do lol...

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Old 03-03-2006, 08:12 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Vote - Symmetry

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This fight isnt even, I dont care what ya name is..
Cuzz like the movie, your writings just gonna get ya Almost Famous..
Nah.
Your the lamest, Where do u go off getting so cocky, whats your prerogative..
Your whack and your ugly, this isnt math, two negatives dont make a positive..
Iight.
Just erase all of it, dont even post that weak verse..
I would be worried u'r gonna play off my shit, but you would have to know how to read first..
Haha, I kind of chuckled.
Your cursed with weak rhymes, you should kill yourself immeadiatly..
Just grab the jergens and gloves, thats the only way your beating me..
Nah.
I seemingly dismiss this cat easily, like faggots in gym class..
Your sound is un-godly I dont think u could sing a hymn at mass..
No.
You could fuck'a him in the ass, but thats your choice..
I dont discriminate, but im happy this is text and i dont have to hear your voice..
No man.
Boys will be boys, but stepping to a man is whole other situation..
Your a newborn kid, u should drop the mic and get into incubation..
Not bad.
You need a new occupation, your technique is sloppy..
This isnt junior high homey, if you need help, u cant just copy..
Nah, no connection.

You had a lot of concepts that didn't connect man.

Symmetry:

Don't believe the hype... this dude is played/
if nobody can "see" you on the mic... its probably cuz you got booed off stage/
Nice.
Nah... noone sees you… cuz you live in your Dads garage/
drive a damaged Dodge and the damn things camoflauged/
Funny.
... I don't need to tell you twice if I told you once/
You're a dunce... a dumb grunt who busts spunk on the bottom of his chums bunk/
Nah, flows there.
You don't carry heat... let alone hold a holster/
ain't nothin' Noble about you... and that's "No Bull... Soldier"/
Nah.
claim to be in Iraq... bitch... you're in Nova Scotia stupid/
churnin' butter in windmills... doin' Windmills to Polka music/
No.
yeah... as a kid you were a lonely violent child/
destined to short circuit... so what's your major malfunction Private Pile?/
No again.
it feels so good absorbin' it/
when I hang your body off the top of the Projects like a damn "hood" ornament/
Nice ha.
You gon' win it huh? You should be... so fortunate/
You're too late...
cuz I'm burnin' it, torchin' it... then twistin' a torniquette on this tournament/
Nah.. weak close.

That hood ornamet line took it, you had three nice punches I was feeling rest was trash. Stay up.
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Just erase all of it, dont even post that weak verse..
I would be worried u'r gonna play off my shit, but you would have to know how to read first..

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You don't carry heat... let alone hold a holster/
ain't nothin' Noble about you... and that's "No Bull... Soldier"/
yeah... as a kid you were a lonely violent child/
destined to short circuit... so what's your major malfunction Private Pile?/

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