56 Mentull vs 57 Agent Oranges

[-Oz-]

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[Agent oranges]

Hey there =)

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[Mentull]

check....

hows 10 sound?


edit my votes in here...

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post13343952
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post13344013
35 N. Tavarez 1-0 vs 36 Daubs 1-0
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post13348818

Contendor vote
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post13348847

[Mentull]

lets get this started the right way....


I'm the Main Event, I spit Hot Sauce to leave this kid Half Man-Half Amazed
Roll up in an Escalade and leave AO takin shots in the street like the And1 mixtape
This bitch is gay, even his name's a fruit, anybody feel that?
Since he's an orange.. I'll do like dyslexic shooters and cap his peel back
Send me a real cat... Voters already now I got this, won't be fun to judge
I run this bud...So like sex with the number three rank...you'll be oh, one...duh
For the Green, ya Yellow ass'll get Blue away, no IV for when ya brain blows
You tame ho..turn orange's top red like the colors of the rainbow
Only got April Fools jokes? You'll be in trouble when I vent
So Fuck Saddam Hussein...cuz when the votes come in..
....Imma do more than Double Agent*


...easy


*April Fool was the double agent that took down Hussein...brush up on your current events

[Agent oranges]

Wow, that opener was real forced, so your not a problem dude
Guess it was more of a trendsetter, the rest of the verse followed suit
Keep bragging bout your chain and peice bitch your coming after the livest one
In a stickup, you'll hand your cross over faster then iverson's
So dont try to knuckle up with me, you'll be fooled if you try
A punch will suspend you in air without a school in the sky
And i'm def winning this battle, so consider this a hand out to the kid
You'll be down with votes, to the point you'll hang out at his crib
You gotta suck dick for votes, better give that call to the feds
You winning this battle? It's all mentull, it's all in your head

[-Oz-]

Upping

[Symmetry]

Mentull:

I'm the Main Event, I spit Hot Sauce to leave this kid Half Man-Half Amazed
Roll up in an Escalade and leave AO takin shots in the street like the And1 mixtape
^ Good but... wayyyyyyyyy TOO stretched... shits like 4 lines right there really...

This bitch is gay, even his name's a fruit, anybody feel that?
Since he's an orange.. I'll do like dyslexic shooters and cap his peel back
^ Good but worded badly... every emcee had done "dyslexic" rhymes... so not original

Send me a real cat... Voters already now I got this, won't be fun to judge
I run this bud...So like sex with the number three rank...you'll be oh, one...duh
^ I just didn't get it... probably cuz I'm new here...

For the Green, ya Yellow ass'll get Blue away, no IV for when ya brain blows
You tame ho..turn orange's top red like the colors of the rainbow
^ Decent but Oranges are orange... not yellow...

Only got April Fools jokes? You'll be in trouble when I vent
So Fuck Saddam Hussein...cuz when the votes come in..
....Imma do more than Double Agent*
^ Even with the explanation I still didn't really get it... not a good closure at all...

Agent Oranges:

Wow, that opener was real forced, so your not a problem dude
Guess it was more of a trendsetter, the rest of the verse followed suit
^ Very true and kinda funny

Keep bragging bout your chain and peice bitch your coming after the livest one
In a stickup, you'll hand your cross over faster then iverson's
^ First line is real stretched... but the punch was great

So dont try to knuckle up with me, you'll be fooled if you try
A punch will suspend you in air without a school in the sky
^ Thought this was original and funny

And i'm def winning this battle, so consider this a hand out to the kid
You'll be down with votes, to the point you'll hang out at his crib
^ Thought this was also original and funny

You gotta suck dick for votes, better give that call to the feds
You winning this battle? It's all mentull, it's all in your head
^ Not a strong closure but average

Vote goes to Agent Oranges

His verse was clearly better then Mentulls and i've seen some decent stuff from Mentulls.

[Mic-illaH]

I'm the Main Event, I spit Hot Sauce to leave this kid Half Man-Half Amazed
Roll up in an Escalade and leave AO takin shots in the street like the And1 mixtape
good idea....long winded though
This bitch is gay, even his name's a fruit, anybody feel that?
Since he's an orange.. I'll do like dyslexic shooters and cap his peel back
this was funny to me
Send me a real cat... Voters already now I got this, won't be fun to judge
I run this bud...So like sex with the number three rank...you'll be oh, one...duh
decent
For the Green, ya Yellow ass'll get Blue away, no IV for when ya brain blows
You tame ho..turn orange's top red like the colors of the rainbow
ehh ok
Only got April Fools jokes? You'll be in trouble when I vent
So Fuck Saddam Hussein...cuz when the votes come in..
....Imma do more than Double Agent*

good closer


Wow, that opener was real forced, so your not a problem dude
Guess it was more of a trendsetter, the rest of the verse followed suit
wow haha
Keep bragging bout your chain and peice bitch your coming after the livest one
In a stickup, you'll hand your cross over faster then iverson's
decent
So dont try to knuckle up with me, you'll be fooled if you try
A punch will suspend you in air without a school in the sky
nice
And i'm def winning this battle, so consider this a hand out to the kid
You'll be down with votes, to the point you'll hang out at his crib
nice
You gotta suck dick for votes, better give that call to the feds
You winning this battle? It's all mentull, it's all in your head
good closer.


v/ Agent Orange. A lot more consistent. Mentull had some decent shit, but some with awkward wording and some long winded. decent battle.

[symptoms]

although he built a little bit little bit i was feelin agents verse a lil more. i like the use of the iverson cross up punch. wording was tight..

vote agent

[.Epical.]

didn't feel Mentull's verse all that much.. Agent had better wording with 2 coo concepts.

V/ Agents.

[NOBLE SOLDIER]

Vote Oranges.. Mentulls shit was steached.. and had alot more played lines then orange.. Better flow and better overall content won it for him...

[N.Tavarez]

Wow, that opener was real forced, so your not a problem dude
Guess it was more of a trendsetter, the rest of the verse followed suit
So dont try to knuckle up with me, you'll be fooled if you try
A punch will suspend you in air without a school in the sky

vs

Only got April Fools jokes? You'll be in trouble when I vent
So Fuck Saddam Hussein...cuz when the votes come in..
....Imma do more than Double Agent*
This bitch is gay, even his name's a fruit, anybody feel that?
Since he's an orange.. I'll do like dyslexic shooters and cap his peel back






v/ AO
mentull had some ehh shit and AO had a decent verse, those two i quoted were good

[Defcon_5]

vote=AO

reason: although mentull had the right idea...his lines were just way to stretched to have any impact....AO started out with a feed off his verse but the rest of his verse was just constitent so he took the win

[Louisville]

Vote=Agent Oranges
I know where you were going Mentull but it took a long time to get there.
If the wording was better you would've won, cuz you had alot of original concepts that made me forget about the dyslexic joint and the WHOLE DAMN AND1 ROSTER.

Lines that stood out...
Wow, that opener was real forced, so your not a problem dude
Guess it was more of a trendsetter, the rest of the verse followed suit
(haha)
So dont try to knuckle up with me, you'll be fooled if you try
A punch will suspend you in air without a school in the sky
And i'm def winning this battle, so consider this a hand out to the kid
You'll be down with votes, to the point you'll hang out at his crib
(good shit)

[-Oz-]

Agent Oranges Wins