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yo aiight...breakdown:
daubs
your not hard, you even tremble when ya speak
so il kill this pussy and let tavarez' in piece
-- okay i guess...flow, quick lil name punch. niggas like to hate on nameplays, but the truth is as long as it's creative and it flows they're good lines. so what if you here alot of nameplays about yourself...duh, it's battle rappin...wtf?..if you don't use some kind of nameplay on an opponent, the verse could really pretain to anybody. don't lines like that fall into the personals catagory? whateva man. if they're creative they shouldn't be looked down upon. that's discrediting some one's lyrical ability because you picked an easy ass name to make fuckin fun of creatively.
never step to me, loner'll be diminished
he got no friends like when the series finished
--good follw-up. since friends has been on tv for so many years, i'm sure this has been used to death. i haven't ever encountered this line before in some one's battle verse. so it's cool to me. others will certainly disagree
your a joke n' aint dope..SO FUCK WHAT YOU SAY MAN
il make ya rank drop quicker than ya pants at gaybars
--i didn't understand this at all. it didn't even rhyme. now, you could've really done something here, with more wordplay, if that's the route you wanted to take(gaybars...whoa...), but i'm gonna pass on this one
EE no showed to ya, but ask the question..we aint fallin out
theyll tell you ee would own you...and there talkin now
--i didn't really get this one either. i mean i do, but i didn't see where you were going with this.
you wack geek, you are weak, you really should practise
cos we only quote 'avere...when talkin bout dumb nazis
average...not really mindblowing. since the verse wasn't all that amazing, you should've tried to bring the house down in the closer. i don't think you tried real hard here. if you did, then god help you in this league.
n. tavarez
Look stop the faking
YOU just the next wack cat that Im facing
So Im'a threw your brains in the air like caps at graduations
-- i liked this...i think i saw a voter say that this was played, but i've never seen this. i would've gone with 'graduating' instead, but it's aiight none-the-less. okay for an opener
In my Big Toe......I got more skill then you do in all your best
Ill put my foot up your ass.....NOW you a shoe-in for success
-- aiight. gettin it in with the wordplay. good flow still.
Your girls my slide-off, I tell her save the trouble and Shush!
So fuck the president....Cuz I stay in Daubya's Bush
--good play off tha name. a lil funny. and, yeah...duh. of course his girl. wtf?
Put some loot up, I beat you before, check what the score said (5-0)
But if its money on your mind... I'll make change out you forehead
-- i never saw anything saying 5-0, but the punch after the set-up was on point. way to lead into this bar with the last two. they weren't amazing, but the verse kinda increases in intensity to me.
Same bitch, different site just makes it quicker to end him
Specially since more people hate on DA than the fucking Defendant
--bang! nice one here. i like it. some real shit. i could see you usin this on a track. and the flow is still goin strong. never really lost it. good shit for a closer to.
yo, straight up this was really one sided i felt. tavarez was more prepared for this and definately tried harder to get the win.
VOTE=N. TAVAREZ
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