35 N. Tavarez 1-0 vs 36 Daubs 1-0

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Old 02-26-2006, 10:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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35 N. Tavarez 1-0 vs 36 Daubs 1-0



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Old 02-27-2006, 12:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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N.Tavarez takes it up the butt!
lol whattup daubs
12 lines cool?
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Old 02-27-2006, 02:03 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Iiite man.

il go 10-12.

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Old 03-02-2006, 02:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Daubs takes it up the butt!
your not hard, you even tremble when ya speak
so il kill this pussy and let tavarez' in piece
never step to me, loner'll be diminished
he got no friends like when the series finished
your a joke n' aint dope..SO FUCK WHAT YOU SAY MAN
il make ya rank drop quicker than ya pants at gaybars
EE no showed to ya, but ask the question..we aint fallin out
theyll tell you ee would own you...and there talkin now
you wack geek, you are weak, you really should practise
cos we only quote 'avere...when talkin bout dumb nazi's


Sorry, keyed 10
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Old 03-02-2006, 05:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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N.Tavarez takes it up the butt!
Look stop the faking
YOU just the next wack cat that Im facing
So Im'a threw your brains in the air like caps at graduations
In my Big Toe......I got more skill then you do in all your best
Ill put my foot up your ass.....NOW you a shoe-in for success
Your girls my slide-off, I tell her save the trouble and Shush!
So fuck the president....Cuz I stay in Daubya's Bush
Put some loot up, I beat you before, check what the score said (5-0)
But if its money on your mind... I'll make change out you forehead
Same bitch, different site just makes it quicker to end him
Specially since more people hate on DA than the fucking Defendant
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Old 03-02-2006, 05:37 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Daubs takes it up the butt!
Decent bruv.

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Old 03-02-2006, 05:44 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Vote= Daubs...

overall this was a pretty weak battle. I can tell that Daubs didn't try on this shit. He still had more on the table than N. Tavarez. N really didn't have any punches at all. Had some decent concepts, but they fizzled out when the punchline should've came. All in all Daubs had some punches that hit while N. didn't. That was the deciding factor on this one...


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Old 03-02-2006, 05:47 PM   #8 (permalink)
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daubs verse had no flow at all pretty bad verse on his part

tavarez had that cap line which i thought was creative

pretty one sided. daubs needs to step his game up
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Old 03-02-2006, 06:40 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Daubs
your not hard, you even tremble when ya speak
so il kill this pussy and let tavarez' in piece
nice…your best line
never step to me, loner'll be diminished
he got no friends like when the series finished
aite
your a joke n' aint dope..SO FUCK WHAT YOU SAY MAN
il make ya rank drop quicker than ya pants at gaybars
..kinda played feelin….ish
EE no showed to ya, but ask the question..we aint fallin out
theyll tell you ee would own you...and there talkin now
..not feelin…you wack geek, you are weak, you really should practise
cos we only quote 'avere...when talkin bout dumb nazi's
hah…ok

N. Tavarez
Look stop the faking
YOU just the next wack cat that Im facing
So Im'a threw your brains in the air like caps at graduations
creative and nice
In my Big Toe......I got more skill then you do in all your best
Ill put my foot up your ass.....NOW you a shoe-in for success
Lol..ok
Your girls my slide-off, I tell her save the trouble and Shush!
So fuck the president....Cuz I stay in Daubya's Bush
Hah..you’re in his bush!?..lol
Put some loot up, I beat you before, check what the score said (5-0)
But if its money on your mind... I'll make change out you forehead
Coulda flipped it better
Same bitch, different site just makes it quicker to end him
Specially since more people hate on DA than the fucking Defendant
Ok…

Decent battle but you could tell Daubs keyed it…he had some punches and N.T. did pretty good I liked most of it. I give this win to him cuz he tried a lot harder and I liked his better…good job both of ya

v/ n. tavarez
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Old 03-02-2006, 06:58 PM   #10 (permalink)
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your not hard, you even tremble when ya speak
so il kill this pussy and let tavarez' in piece
Tremble when he speaks?? This is a text battle.....but the punch was nice..
never step to me, loner'll be diminished
he got no friends like when the series finished
Heard it...
your a joke n' aint dope..SO FUCK WHAT YOU SAY MAN
il make ya rank drop quicker than ya pants at gaybars
Noooo...
EE no showed to ya, but ask the question..we aint fallin out
theyll tell you ee would own you...and there talkin now
.....
you wack geek, you are weak, you really should practise
cos we only quote 'avere...when talkin bout dumb nazi's
Nothing special...


tav...

Look stop the faking
YOU just the next wack cat that Im facing
So Im'a threw your brains in the air like caps at graduations
Decent at best...
In my Big Toe......I got more skill then you do in all your best
Ill put my foot up your ass.....NOW you a shoe-in for success
Aight..
Your girls my slide-off, I tell her save the trouble and Shush!
So fuck the president....Cuz I stay in Daubya's Bush
I dont think Daub and Dub sound anything close to similar..
Put some loot up, I beat you before, check what the score said (5-0)
But if its money on your mind... I'll make change out you forehead
Nothing great...
Same bitch, different site just makes it quicker to end him
Specially since more people hate on DA than the fucking Defendant
Good closer...

vote: Taverez....he was much more consistent than Daubs. His punches hit slighlty harder.
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Old 03-02-2006, 07:02 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Old 03-03-2006, 08:57 AM   #12 (permalink)
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werd nice battle
and when i say
Im in daubya bush..............I mean daubs girlfriend
not daubs himself
^ thats directed at one of the voters by the way
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Old 03-03-2006, 11:24 PM   #14 (permalink)
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tavarez had a little more consistancy, but he still had the worst concept-lines of the battle with the shoe-in/graduation lines

daubs was coo, opening wordplay was dope, but then u really drifted off

im giving it to tavarez on consistancy
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Old 03-04-2006, 12:30 AM   #15 (permalink)
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yo aiight...breakdown:

daubs
your not hard, you even tremble when ya speak
so il kill this pussy and let tavarez' in piece
-- okay i guess...flow, quick lil name punch. niggas like to hate on nameplays, but the truth is as long as it's creative and it flows they're good lines. so what if you here alot of nameplays about yourself...duh, it's battle rappin...wtf?..if you don't use some kind of nameplay on an opponent, the verse could really pretain to anybody. don't lines like that fall into the personals catagory? whateva man. if they're creative they shouldn't be looked down upon. that's discrediting some one's lyrical ability because you picked an easy ass name to make fuckin fun of creatively.
never step to me, loner'll be diminished
he got no friends like when the series finished
--good follw-up. since friends has been on tv for so many years, i'm sure this has been used to death. i haven't ever encountered this line before in some one's battle verse. so it's cool to me. others will certainly disagree
your a joke n' aint dope..SO FUCK WHAT YOU SAY MAN
il make ya rank drop quicker than ya pants at gaybars
--i didn't understand this at all. it didn't even rhyme. now, you could've really done something here, with more wordplay, if that's the route you wanted to take(gaybars...whoa...), but i'm gonna pass on this one
EE no showed to ya, but ask the question..we aint fallin out
theyll tell you ee would own you...and there talkin now
--i didn't really get this one either. i mean i do, but i didn't see where you were going with this.
you wack geek, you are weak, you really should practise
cos we only quote 'avere...when talkin bout dumb nazis
average...not really mindblowing. since the verse wasn't all that amazing, you should've tried to bring the house down in the closer. i don't think you tried real hard here. if you did, then god help you in this league.

n. tavarez
Look stop the faking
YOU just the next wack cat that Im facing
So Im'a threw your brains in the air like caps at graduations
-- i liked this...i think i saw a voter say that this was played, but i've never seen this. i would've gone with 'graduating' instead, but it's aiight none-the-less. okay for an opener
In my Big Toe......I got more skill then you do in all your best
Ill put my foot up your ass.....NOW you a shoe-in for success
-- aiight. gettin it in with the wordplay. good flow still.
Your girls my slide-off, I tell her save the trouble and Shush!
So fuck the president....Cuz I stay in Daubya's Bush
--good play off tha name. a lil funny. and, yeah...duh. of course his girl. wtf?
Put some loot up, I beat you before, check what the score said (5-0)
But if its money on your mind... I'll make change out you forehead
-- i never saw anything saying 5-0, but the punch after the set-up was on point. way to lead into this bar with the last two. they weren't amazing, but the verse kinda increases in intensity to me.
Same bitch, different site just makes it quicker to end him
Specially since more people hate on DA than the fucking Defendant
--bang! nice one here. i like it. some real shit. i could see you usin this on a track. and the flow is still goin strong. never really lost it. good shit for a closer to.

yo, straight up this was really one sided i felt. tavarez was more prepared for this and definately tried harder to get the win.
VOTE=N. TAVAREZ
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Old 03-04-2006, 07:49 AM   #17 (permalink)
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your not hard, you even tremble when ya speak
so il kill this pussy and let tavarez' in piece
^ No

never step to me, loner'll be diminished
he got no friends like when the series finished
^ No

your a joke n' aint dope..SO FUCK WHAT YOU SAY MAN
il make ya rank drop quicker than ya pants at gaybars
^ Huh? Doesn't rhyme...

EE no showed to ya, but ask the question..we aint fallin out
theyll tell you ee would own you...and there talkin now
^ Nope

you wack geek, you are weak, you really should practise
cos we only quote 'avere...when talkin bout dumb nazi's
^ Not a chance and again it doesn't rhyme...

N. Tavarez:

Look stop the faking
YOU just the next wack cat that Im facing
So Im'a threw your brains in the air like caps at graduations
^ Stretched like a mafucka... but cool concept

In my Big Toe......I got more skill then you do in all your best
Ill put my foot up your ass.....NOW you a shoe-in for success
^ first line was worded badly but decent concept

Your girls my slide-off, I tell her save the trouble and Shush!
So fuck the president....Cuz I stay in Daubya's Bush
^ First line "your girls my slide off" ???? But the punch was the best in the battle...

Put some loot up, I beat you before, check what the score said (5-0)
But if its money on your mind... I'll make change out you forehead
^ Another pretty good one

Same bitch, different site just makes it quicker to end him
Specially since more people hate on DA than the fucking Defendant
^ And yet another decent one

My vote goes to = N. Tavarez

Tav started off weak but gained momentum... I don't know what Daub was doin' at all here... he couldnt seem to put anything good together...

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Old 03-04-2006, 03:43 PM   #19 (permalink)
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your not hard, you even tremble when ya speak
so il kill this pussy and let tavarez' in piece
never step to me, loner'll be diminished
he got no friends like when the series finished

^Felt this even tho they my have been average at best. The others weren't connecting at all...plus they didn't rhyme.

N.T.

In my Big Toe......I got more skill then you do in all your best
Ill put my foot up your ass.....NOW you a shoe-in for success
Put some loot up, I beat you before, check what the score said (5-0)
But if its money on your mind... I'll make change out you forehead
Same bitch, different site just makes it quicker to end him
Specially since more people hate on DA than the fucking Defendant

^The first couplet was...kinda played man....the other two made up for it tho....THought these made the difference

V/ N. Tavarez
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