31. Hair Line 1-1 vs 32. DizThaChozen1 1-1

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[dizthachozen1]

yo...i'm here
i'm spittin somewhere between 12 and 16 aiight?

[dizthachozen1]

what tha fuck!?!?!?! i just noticed you didn't hardly get my name right. is "ditchthadozen" a real nigga other than me or is this some kinda fuckin joke? if so, it's not funny.(and yall wonder why there are problems with the league right now)...nah, but fa real...it's DIZTHACHOZEN1 it is on the screen right above my avatar...duh. i'd appreciate it if you were to correctly spell my name in the battle heading. jesus christ.

[Hair Line]

checkin......

[dizthachozen1]

whether you show or not...i'ma drop some heat/
you never really wade(weighed) up...you'll get rocked to sleep/
my unique techniques of subterfuge are too descrete/
for you to peep...don't blink or that ass i'll delete/
why test the best?...your shit's tarnished with no glare or shine/
you dare rhyme?...then you'll get pushed back like homer's hair line/
while i stay on point like bart and lisa's...your raps are just pure feces/
i'll twist you up like braids on my nieces...then tear that ass to pieces/
if you do show, you're gonna just wish you gave up/
put your wackness on display, bruh...your name implies you regularly need a shape-up/
i'm only goin twelve...no more lines...no need to bother/
the way i clipped and cut up hair line i should be a fuckin barber/

[Hair Line]

oh gees....u kno you get no respect when they fuck up ur entire name
i see u tryna play off HL, i'd give u the 411... but u'd get smashed just the same

let's go,
how do u play on winnin a title when the mod can't get ya name straight?
n when u get hung by the belt....
u probably won't even see ur own title on the name plate
the rbl went through an off week, it's sumthin i couldn't predict
but after readin ur trash, i see u go through 52 weeks of the shit
writer's block is not an excuse cuz that screen name speaks for itself
seems u chosen1, ironically... u'll be stuck with it for the rest of rbl
whenever opportunity knocks.. it's just there to deny entrance
cuz u are one to adore.... so don't let it hit you when u exit
let's get this shit cleared... and now that this kid is behind me
you'll never reach below 20, like thermometers in hawaii

quick key

[TyrantTMABM]

i think hair line killed diz in this battle. he tore him apart wit his punches, especially the name plate one. the thermometers line was hot too. diz ur verse was aight, but u tried to use hair lines name against him too much. ur whole verse pretty much revolved around that.

v/Hair Line

[Venamis]

Vote - Hair Line

Chozen One:

whether you show or not...i'ma drop some heat/
you never really wade(weighed) up...you'll get rocked to sleep/
Decent attempt at wordplay.
my unique techniques of subterfuge are too descrete/
for you to peep...don't blink or that ass i'll delete/
No.
why test the best?...your shit's tarnished with no glare or shine/
you dare rhyme?...then you'll get pushed back like homer's hair line/
I liked this.
while i stay on point like bart and lisa's...your raps are just pure feces/
i'll twist you up like braids on my nieces...then tear that ass to pieces/
No.
if you do show, you're gonna just wish you gave up/
put your wackness on display, bruh...your name implies you regularly need a shape-up/
Decent.
i'm only goin twelve...no more lines...no need to bother/
the way i clipped and cut up hair line i should be a fuckin barber/
2nd best punch in your verse.

Overall.. You only had two great bars. Your closer and the Home/Hair Line bars were your best. The flow was pretty much on point. Other than that your verse was really shitty, don't take this as a hate vote I'm just being honest. I feel that since the last battle I voted on with you in you have elevated a lot so keep it up. You just need to work on your wording. I can see the wordplay attempts, with the heat and Wade line. Keep it up man, you'll get it sooner or later.

HL:

oh gees....u kno you get no respect when they fuck up ur entire name
i see u tryna play off HL, i'd give u the 411... but u'd get smashed just the same
Seemed like your set-up hit harder.
let's go,
how do u play on winnin a title when the mod can't get ya name straight?
n when u get hung by the belt....
u probably won't even see ur own title on the name plate
Alright.
the rbl went through an off week, it's sumthin i couldn't predict
but after readin ur trash, i see u go through 52 weeks of the shit
I liked this.
writer's block is not an excuse cuz that screen name speaks for itself
seems u chosen1, ironically... u'll be stuck with it for the rest of rbl
Nah.
whenever opportunity knocks.. it's just there to deny entrance
cuz u are one to adore.... so don't let it hit you when u exit
I liked this.
let's get this shit cleared... and now that this kid is behind me
you'll never reach below 20, like thermometers in hawaii
Played, kind of.

Well, your verse was much structured and more skilled than Chozen Ones. I was feeling a bunch of your flips. There was only a couple of things that I wasn't feeling but you had enouhg lines to get the shit done. Keep dropping the flames man, you'll go places in this league if you keep trying to elevate, props.

BATTLE BREAKDOWN

Overall, this battle wasn't as close as it could seem to others, Hair Line had a much more advanced verse than Chozen One did and it showed by the wordplay and punches that he brought to the table. Chozen One only had two hot punches that I was feeling and it seemed like Hair line had three or four, which is just enough to edge out Chozen One. I felt that Hair Line's structure and flow was more on point than Chozen One's but I really enjoyed reading the battle, I would appreciate it if you both positive rep me for the breakdown and vote on my battle, thanks.

[.ReLL.]

oh gees....u kno you get no respect when they fuck up ur entire name
i see u tryna play off HL, i'd give u the 411... but u'd get smashed just the same

let's go,
how do u play on winnin a title when the mod can't get ya name straight?
n when u get hung by the belt....
u probably won't even see ur own title on the name plate
the rbl went through an off week, it's sumthin i couldn't predict
but after readin ur trash, i see u go through 52 weeks of the shit
Vs
why test the best?...your shit's tarnished with no glare or shine/
you dare rhyme?...then you'll get pushed back like homer's hair line

V/hair line....this was a decent battle but hair came wit a more consistent verse wit fresher punchs wit better concepts...he gets my vote

[dizthachozen1]

Originally Posted by oz the legend

-Voting-
5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. (links)
1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!

sorry hair line...tyrant's and rell's votes don't count according to the rules...but if oz wants to let them ride i'm okay with that. cuz niggas in the league don't really like to get their vote on some times.

[Daubs]

how do u play on winnin a title when the mod can't get ya name straight?
n when u get hung by the belt....
u probably won't even see ur own title on the name plate
the rbl went through an off week, it's sumthin i couldn't predict
but after readin ur trash, i see u go through 52 weeks of the shit

Vs

why test the best?...your shit's tarnished with no glare or shine/
you dare rhyme?...then you'll get pushed back like homer's hair line


V./ Hair

[Hair Line]

Originally Posted by dizthachozen1

sorry hair line...tyrant's and rell's votes don't count according to the rules...but if oz wants to let them ride i'm okay with that. cuz niggas in the league don't really like to get their vote on some times.

yea.. but they're in the league

i've got less than 200 n i can still vote

[dizthachozen1]

yo, i said i was okay with'em anywayz...duh
i woulda still counted them.
i knew they were in the league...i just wasn't sure if that'd affect wether or not they made the post requirement for voting.

[-Oz-]

Originally Posted by dizthachozen1

what tha fuck!?!?!?! i just noticed you didn't hardly get my name right. is "ditchthadozen" a real nigga other than me or is this some kinda fuckin joke? if so, it's not funny.(and yall wonder why there are problems with the league right now)...nah, but fa real...it's DIZTHACHOZEN1 it is on the screen right above my avatar...duh. i'd appreciate it if you were to correctly spell my name in the battle heading. jesus christ.

lol, its all them letters with no spaces and shit. I be seeing the shit funny. My apologies, it is an honesty mistake (somehow), I can see how you'd be upset tho, I was wayyyy off. lol

[ThaGrimiestOne]

Originally Posted by Hair Line

oh gees....u kno you get no respect when they fuck up ur entire name
i see u tryna play off HL, i'd give u the 411... but u'd get smashed just the same

let's go,
how do u play on winnin a title when the mod can't get ya name straight?
n when u get hung by the belt....
u probably won't even see ur own title on the name plate
the rbl went through an off week, it's sumthin i couldn't predict
but after readin ur trash, i see u go through 52 weeks of the shit
writer's block is not an excuse cuz that screen name speaks for itself
seems u chosen1, ironically... u'll be stuck with it for the rest of rbl
whenever opportunity knocks.. it's just there to deny entrance
cuz u are one to adore.... so don't let it hit you when u exit
let's get this shit cleared... and now that this kid is behind me
you'll never reach below 20, like thermometers in hawaii

quick key

Vote = Hairline..

Damn kid, you KILLED that verse...everything pretty much flowed right through when you were readin it...didnt have to stop to think what you were saying or anything like that...the first lines, about the belt/nameplate was FIRE, neva saw neone come close to a hot ass line like that, propz

[Hair Line]

*throws in towel for ditchthedozen*

[Twisted Flowa]

^^
LOL

But yo this is how it works out

Ditch yo shit was just wack as fuck, that's really all I have to say

Hair Line you cam better then ditch but yo verse still wasn't all that hot. You did have a pretty ok opener

Overall Hair Line had the better set-up and Ditch really didn't have anything going for him, he had a lil flow but he wasn't really sayin shit to hurt Hair. So this goes to hair

Vote = Hair Line

[dizthachozen1]

yo it's all good...(to the comments by oz)...so what a loss is a loss. he got me here, but even michael jordan missed some shots.


i ain't gonna cry...that throws the towel in shit was funny as hell...lol. just don't get all full of yourself like the verse was the best we've all ever seen...(directed towards Hair Line).
good shit.

[$howboat]

yea hair line took this with ease in my opinion diz came with some nice concepts but reall was outclassed here

diz- homer hairline was tight and liked ya closer to

HL- ya whole verse was on point only two outlandish bars but everything was consistent all the way through... i liked the nameplate line that was hot and the 52 weeks line was funny shit

vote-HL

[-Oz-]

Upping.