21. Venamis 2-0 vs 22. Twisted Flowa 2-1

-Oz- · 02-17-2006, 07:14 PM

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Venamis · 02-20-2006, 02:13 AM

Check..12.

BATTLE VOTES
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...6#post13311746
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post13318084
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post13321728
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post13322618

CHAMPIONSHIP & CONTENDERSHIP VOTES
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post13331484

Twisted Flowa · 02-20-2006, 11:51 AM

Checkin
ight I can do 12

Battle Links

25. Meta Syn 1-0 vs 26. Rell 1-0
31. Hair Line 1-1 vs 32. DizThaChozen1 1-1
9. theFRANCHISE 3-1 10. Defcon 5 . 6-3

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Venamis · 02-23-2006, 09:40 PM

give up now kid, i'm giving you hunches,
but if he threw in the towel,
it'd prolly land father than his punches.
my heater sends shots that'll boil, see,
so if its long live the king, you must not be royalty.
no ones got your back - everyone gives you the boot,
i wear my rep on my sleeve, you got on ya birthday suit.
wanna know how i flow? your siblings mouthin me a blow,
i fucked twisted's sister, like groupies two decades ago.
this cats got no game, & no ones sippin barcardi,
'only girls holding twist' are the ones at smirnoff parties.
ya name is Flowa', green thumb fag my gat kills from far,
i'ma put 'pedal' to the metal, & i ain't speedin my car.

^twisted sister

Twisted Flowa · 02-24-2006, 11:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Venamis

i fucked twisted's sister, like groupies two decades ago.

^twisted sister

Yo are you gay homie

"Sighs"
Let's get it done..

Come back with a fresh start, this cat thinkin he venamis..
But my bars poison.. I'll show you where the venom is..
Yo record probably fake, you threw up 2 soon as they restarted it..
It’s improbably a mistake, It's weak dudes like you that made lama quit..
I play games with my victims, and you, you're lame as shit..
So I'll cut yo face into puzzle pieces, and rearrange yo shit..
Lame punches and sig, good for teasin, you couldn’t provoke the worst..
It’s funny ya dig, only reason you a step above me.. cuz I let you post first..
Kid thinks he’s good
But yawl know.. just look what this kid say..
He’s better off in the Dojo, with me as his sensei..
Dumb bitch, wasted time.. droppin a weak 12..
His lame shits, couldn’t find shine, even in the weak 12..(bottom 12)

ThaGrimiestOne · 02-24-2006, 02:20 PM

Aight VOTE = Twisted

Your werdplay in this verse was INCREDIBLE...i was fillin this shit from start to finish.... Each line was put together better than the one before it, with harder punches, hotter werd play, and some jokes to go along wit it...

Lame punches and sig, good for teasin, you couldn’t provoke the worst..
It’s funny ya dig, only reason you a step above me.. cuz I let you post first..

^^Lmfao, that shit had me rollin nice job twisted...propz on that line...

Venamis .... Your verse wasnt that bad but it lack of the werd play that you stepped up a little more. I kinda got bored when readin yours and shit....lines were to small....it made me NOT enjoy readin it and shit

ReX™ · 02-24-2006, 02:53 PM

venamis..

Idk yo.. you need to work on ya punches duke.. it seems like you took more time finding a pic then you did writing your verse lol... nice try doh man..

Twisted...
feelin ya style alil bit... had some nice wordplay and direct punches... could be alil better but not bad overall.. hot ish to me..

vote- TF

Meta Syn · 02-24-2006, 06:02 PM

im'a have to go against the grain honestly here. I like Twisted Flowa, he had the most honest vote in my battle, now I'm tryna return the favor.

Twisted you're in the same situation I was last year. Couldnt word it right but had good concepts all the time. Just practice ur wording and dont let it stretch out, especially that quotable by GrimiestOne, thats a perfect example of a stretched ass bar. All of youre punches had great potential but you lacked in setup and lacked in being direct, keep ur lines short and to the point with the right setup. A good setup could take any normal punch into being a dope punch.

This is the reason Venamis got my vote, especially his opener minus the typo of father/farther. That, a decent - a little above average punch was what seemed to be the best of the battle, he started off like a vet but then kinda slouched.

Unfortunately for Twisted, it was a good enough start to take the win anyway. Twisted, practice ur wording, and ur punches WILL be dope as hell, I promise.

Venamis got my vote

PS: one thing u do gotta remember which you should already know is dont play off someone's verse dawg, IE: twisted sister

much props tho on the effort and potential for real, and this is def no hate vote or noob vote, im just being honest

TyrantTMABM · 02-24-2006, 09:40 PM

i thought both of these verses were aight. venamis had some decent stuff in there, and same wit twisted. i liked the royalty and smirnoff lines from ven, but postin the pic of twisted sister was just gay lol. it wasnt necessary. twisted u had the "i let u post first line" and that was pretty much all i noticed. twisted i wasnt feelin ur verse as much cuz u used the same words at the end of lines.

v/Venamis

lol @ that wack pic tho

Venamis · 02-24-2006, 11:46 PM

2-2.. Good drop.

You made me realize that I really am not worth shit in this text stuff, so win or lose this is my last battle.

Voters drop honest votes still, don't base a vote because of this post...

Pz.

-Oz- · 02-25-2006, 05:26 AM

Upping.

$howboat · 02-25-2006, 11:24 PM

venamis- nice drop some good nameplays and punches where pretty good... i too liked the smirnoff line but the pic was gay fer sure

twist- came real nice had some good werdplay and the punches connected well.. i also liked the post first line and your ender was cool too

real close to me but i think i gotta go with twisted on this one but just by a cunt hair split in half real real close... if venamis didnt post the twisted sister pic it coulda gone his way shit it coulda gone his way anyhow good shit by both

vote-twisted flowa

Sever · 02-26-2006, 01:04 PM

This battle was very vague lol..

I'm voting for Venamis because he had two good wordplays and twisted had like one lol.. Venamis was atleast funny other dude tried to come dead serious and it kind of backfiredlol

-Oz- · 02-26-2006, 09:50 PM

Venamis wins.

02-17-2006, 07:14 PM	#1 (permalink)
-Oz- ^^^^^ Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 2-25 Posts: 25,620	21. Venamis 2-0 vs 22. Twisted Flowa 2-1 RBL Rules & Regulations. -Duedates- All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches) -Line Limit- agree on an amount with your opponent in your check in. if no agreement is reached 2nd person to drop must match the 1st person who dropped (2nd person can drop less but NOT more) -Voting- 5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. (links) 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all. Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts. No 1 line voting! It wont be counted! -General Rules- ---1st person cant edit after 2nd person posts 2nd person cant edit after a vote has been made --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 2 vote deduction from your own battle! --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP! --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league. -Mod AIM Contacts- Oz -- Jaygood259Oz Oneduh -- Anthraxspitz

02-20-2006, 02:13 AM	#2 (permalink)
Venamis RIP Proof Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Michigan Posts: 9,731	Check..12. BATTLE VOTES http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...6#post13311746 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post13318084 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post13321728 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post13322618 CHAMPIONSHIP & CONTENDERSHIP VOTES http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post13331484 __________________ circa: Dec 2002 Last edited by Venamis; 02-26-2006 at 02:07 PM.

02-20-2006, 11:51 AM	#3 (permalink)
Twisted Flowa King Has Found His Thrown Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Chicago, ILL Posts: 4,151	Checkin ight I can do 12 Battle Links 25. Meta Syn 1-0 vs 26. Rell 1-0 31. Hair Line 1-1 vs 32. DizThaChozen1 1-1 9. theFRANCHISE 3-1 10. Defcon 5 . 6-3 --------------------------------------------------- __________________ “I may be compelled to face danger, but never fear it ” ©Twisted Flowa Last edited by Twisted Flowa; 02-24-2006 at 03:39 PM.

02-23-2006, 09:40 PM	#4 (permalink)
Venamis RIP Proof Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Michigan Posts: 9,731	give up now kid, i'm giving you hunches, but if he threw in the towel, it'd prolly land father than his punches. my heater sends shots that'll boil, see, so if its long live the king, you must not be royalty. no ones got your back - everyone gives you the boot, i wear my rep on my sleeve, you got on ya birthday suit. wanna know how i flow? your siblings mouthin me a blow, i fucked twisted's sister, like groupies two decades ago. this cats got no game, & no ones sippin barcardi, 'only girls holding twist' are the ones at smirnoff parties. ya name is Flowa', green thumb fag my gat kills from far, i'ma put 'pedal' to the metal, & i ain't speedin my car. ^twisted sister __________________ circa: Dec 2002

02-24-2006, 02:20 PM	#6 (permalink)
ThaGrimiestOne Human Beatboxer Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 1,142	Aight VOTE = Twisted Your werdplay in this verse was INCREDIBLE...i was fillin this shit from start to finish.... Each line was put together better than the one before it, with harder punches, hotter werd play, and some jokes to go along wit it... Lame punches and sig, good for teasin, you couldn’t provoke the worst.. It’s funny ya dig, only reason you a step above me.. cuz I let you post first.. ^^Lmfao, that shit had me rollin nice job twisted...propz on that line... Venamis .... Your verse wasnt that bad but it lack of the werd play that you stepped up a little more. I kinda got bored when readin yours and shit....lines were to small....it made me NOT enjoy readin it and shit __________________ shut da fuck up..

02-24-2006, 02:53 PM	#7 (permalink)
ReX™ dyno mite! Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Chicago, il Posts: 208	venamis.. Idk yo.. you need to work on ya punches duke.. it seems like you took more time finding a pic then you did writing your verse lol... nice try doh man.. Twisted... feelin ya style alil bit... had some nice wordplay and direct punches... could be alil better but not bad overall.. hot ish to me.. vote- TF __________________ ReX da TeX MoNsTeR!

02-24-2006, 06:02 PM	#8 (permalink)
Meta Syn Registered User Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 194	im'a have to go against the grain honestly here. I like Twisted Flowa, he had the most honest vote in my battle, now I'm tryna return the favor. Twisted you're in the same situation I was last year. Couldnt word it right but had good concepts all the time. Just practice ur wording and dont let it stretch out, especially that quotable by GrimiestOne, thats a perfect example of a stretched ass bar. All of youre punches had great potential but you lacked in setup and lacked in being direct, keep ur lines short and to the point with the right setup. A good setup could take any normal punch into being a dope punch. This is the reason Venamis got my vote, especially his opener minus the typo of father/farther. That, a decent - a little above average punch was what seemed to be the best of the battle, he started off like a vet but then kinda slouched. Unfortunately for Twisted, it was a good enough start to take the win anyway. Twisted, practice ur wording, and ur punches WILL be dope as hell, I promise. Venamis got my vote PS: one thing u do gotta remember which you should already know is dont play off someone's verse dawg, IE: twisted sister much props tho on the effort and potential for real, and this is def no hate vote or noob vote, im just being honest Last edited by Meta Syn; 02-24-2006 at 06:03 PM.

02-24-2006, 09:40 PM	#9 (permalink)
TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: cincy, OH Posts: 320	i thought both of these verses were aight. venamis had some decent stuff in there, and same wit twisted. i liked the royalty and smirnoff lines from ven, but postin the pic of twisted sister was just gay lol. it wasnt necessary. twisted u had the "i let u post first line" and that was pretty much all i noticed. twisted i wasnt feelin ur verse as much cuz u used the same words at the end of lines. v/Venamis lol @ that wack pic tho __________________ .........

02-24-2006, 11:46 PM	#10 (permalink)
Venamis RIP Proof Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Michigan Posts: 9,731	2-2.. Good drop. You made me realize that I really am not worth shit in this text stuff, so win or lose this is my last battle. Voters drop honest votes still, don't base a vote because of this post... Pz. __________________ circa: Dec 2002

02-25-2006, 05:26 AM	#11 (permalink)
-Oz- ^^^^^ Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 2-25 Posts: 25,620	Upping.

02-25-2006, 11:24 PM	#12 (permalink)
$howboat knockout king Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: in tha gutz of ya main ho Posts: 478	venamis- nice drop some good nameplays and punches where pretty good... i too liked the smirnoff line but the pic was gay fer sure twist- came real nice had some good werdplay and the punches connected well.. i also liked the post first line and your ender was cool too real close to me but i think i gotta go with twisted on this one but just by a cunt hair split in half real real close... if venamis didnt post the twisted sister pic it coulda gone his way shit it coulda gone his way anyhow good shit by both vote-twisted flowa __________________ $howboat comin wit c-4 hits markin anotha battleship casualty

02-26-2006, 01:04 PM	#13 (permalink)
Sever Sir Sever Sunwalker Slice Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Undisclosed Posts: 11,124	This battle was very vague lol.. I'm voting for Venamis because he had two good wordplays and twisted had like one lol.. Venamis was atleast funny other dude tried to come dead serious and it kind of backfiredlol __________________ Sever on Myspace --> *() NAD Coming SOON and I mean soon**

02-26-2006, 09:50 PM	#14 (permalink)
-Oz- ^^^^^ Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 2-25 Posts: 25,620	Venamis wins.

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