21. KempoMRK 2-1 vs. 22. Jersey Emcee 4-4

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Old 02-06-2006, 04:24 AM   #1 (permalink)
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21. KempoMRK 2-1 vs. 22. Jersey Emcee 4-4



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Old 02-06-2006, 12:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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in...going 10...


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Old 02-06-2006, 03:03 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Here. 10's fine.

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53. Mic-illaH 0-0 vs. 54. Daubs 0-0
25. Criteria 3-2 vs. 26. Richard Corey 1-0
23. Pope Juicy 3-4 vs. 24. ReX™ 2-0
35. Venamis 1-0 vs. 36. blaquest 1-0
69. Annihilation 0-0 vs. 70. Antrel 0-0 vs. 71. Merkin Off 0-0

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Old 02-08-2006, 06:40 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Im tired of ya ego kid, I've seen you and your writings corney
Ya career'll probably last as long as the Clash of the Titans tourney
Im not gaybashin', but this no name seems so homo
Fuckin' newbie trash, your homepage should be the Dojo
And its funny how you try to act hard, bitch stop it
Beating Jersey?, that aint a safe bet like Rick Tocchet
Fuck talking kid, winning is what this battles all about
And your gonna lose without a actually person, silloute or shadow of a doubt
Your not a thug, so stop actin' like you hood all day
I'll run you with the 38 special, and I aint talking bout a football play
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Old 02-09-2006, 07:03 AM   #5 (permalink)
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21. KempoMRK 2-1 vs. 22. Jersey Emcee 4-4
Hmmm this will be close. I wanna say kem will win but I doubt he will. I mean he seems to be having writers block or something lately, and jersey has been dropping better lately so Im going with jersey taking this, it may be close though, depending on whose on and off week it is.
Chicago 110 Denver 107 - real good game is what some said,
^^^ Unrelated, but NOW theres a close match in this thread,
Thought you would no-show, but ya verse I have to laugh at,
Cos even my shirt collar can turn up better than that,
Spray my lead into ya dome, shit theres no need to brag,
I'll leave patterns on ya head...n I don't mean a doo rag,
Ya shits mad dull, it'll be easy to burn this fool,
Cos I've seen less board lines at aeroplane terminals,
Over, done, finished, this battle is already through,
I put the point first...then use your record against you.
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Old 02-09-2006, 09:08 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Vote - KempoMRK

JE:

Im tired of ya ego kid, I've seen you and your writings corney
Ya career'll probably last as long as the Clash of the Titans tourney
I used a line like this in the Titans actually.
Im not gaybashin', but this no name seems so homo
Fuckin' newbie trash, your homepage should be the Dojo
Ehh.
And its funny how you try to act hard, bitch stop it
Beating Jersey?, that aint a safe bet like Rick Tocchet
Nah.. no connection.
Fuck talking kid, winning is what this battles all about
And your gonna lose without a actually person, silloute or shadow of a doubt
No connection either.
Your not a thug, so stop actin' like you hood all day
I'll run you with the 38 special, and I aint talking bout a football play
Decent.

Your verse did not connect very well between your set-ups and your punches. The flow was alright, not special. Your finishing punches were not close from being jaw dropping but they were decent. I think you need to work better on being more witty. Some of your stuff was obvious and annoying. But keep it up, don't think that I'm dissing you because of a hater vote. I'm just trying to tell you what I am seeing, good work.

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Chicago 110 Denver 107 - real good game is what some said,
^^^ Unrelated, but NOW theres a close match in this thread,
I was feeling the idea with this.
Thought you would no-show, but ya verse I have to laugh at,
Cos even my shirt collar can turn up better than that,
Nice..
Spray my lead into ya dome, shit theres no need to brag,
I'll leave patterns on ya head...n I don't mean a doo rag,
Ehh.. weak but it connected.
Ya shits mad dull, it'll be easy to burn this fool,
Cos I've seen less board lines at aeroplane terminals,
I liked this.
Over, done, finished, this battle is already through,
I put the point first...then use your record against you.
Nah.. bad closer.

You had a pretty decent verse, one of the better ones that I've read so far this week. You had a bunch of connecting lines and punches. I was feeling most of your stuff. Your flow isn't too shabby either. I always like to see a good flow. I was impressed with the style and how you used it. Keep it up man, don't sign out.

BATTLE BREAKDOWN

Overall I felt that this battle was a tad one sided. KempoMRK outshined Jersey Emcee in mostly every catagory. He had him beat on flow and by far on the the punches. MRK's punches were by far better worded and more thought out. I liked that, I enjoyed reading his verse a lot more than I did with Jersey Emcee. This was a nice battle though. This is one of the better battles I've read so far this week. Keep up the good work guys. Don't sign out, we need the talent. Pz.
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Old 02-09-2006, 11:13 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Im tired of ya ego kid, I've seen you and your writings corney
Ya career'll probably last as long as the Clash of the Titans tourney
Vs
Thought you would no-show, but ya verse I have to laugh at
Cos even my shirt collar can turn up better than that
Ya shits mad dull, it'll be easy to burn this fool,
Cos I've seen less board lines at aeroplane terminals,

V/Kempo....he had a more consistent verse...that had better punchs that were fresh...jersey u had a decent verse but most yah lines were filler...good battle to both
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Old 02-09-2006, 11:43 AM   #8 (permalink)
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u cant be serious...


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Old 02-09-2006, 12:00 PM   #9 (permalink)
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nothin

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Thought you would no-show, but ya verse I have to laugh at,
Cos even my shirt collar can turn up better than that,

not a strong battle, but i felt that Kemp's punches were harder and more wittier, while Jersey had some blah shit.. i expected better

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Cos even my shirt collar can turn up better than that,

wtf


now, his terminal line was cool....but kempo is gimmicky as hell, the nba game box score, etc...

jersey emcee didnt come all that great either, this battle sucked fuckin •••••• nuts and im pissed im even reading a battle outside the top 10, but his last 3 were alot better then kempo's


vote jemcee


oh yea, im from jersey but im not a dickhead biased voter
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Old 02-09-2006, 03:08 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Im tired of ya ego kid, I've seen you and your writings corney
Ya career'll probably last as long as the Clash of the Titans tourney
decent
Im not gaybashin', but this no name seems so homo
Fuckin' newbie trash, your homepage should be the Dojo
I guess I missed the punch?
And its funny how you try to act hard, bitch stop it
Beating Jersey?, that aint a safe bet like Rick Tocchet
(see previous comment)
Fuck talking kid, winning is what this battles all about
And your gonna lose without a actually person, silloute or shadow of a doubt
shadow of a doubt is really played out especially this way
Your not a thug, so stop actin' like you hood all day
I'll run you with the 38 special, and I aint talking bout a football play
football play lines stopped in what is sometimes called the golden era AKA a good few years ago


Chicago 110 Denver 107 - real good game is what some said,
^^^ Unrelated, but NOW theres a close match in this thread,
like this idea but it needs to be worded for a better punch
Thought you would no-show, but ya verse I have to laugh at,
Cos even my shirt collar can turn up better than that,
another lower concept with poor wording, punch was okay
Spray my lead into ya dome, shit theres no need to brag,
I'll leave patterns on ya head...n I don't mean a doo rag,
this concept is pretty played out but its still decent
Ya shits mad dull, it'll be easy to burn this fool,
Cos I've seen less board lines at aeroplane terminals,
best so far
Over, done, finished, this battle is already through,
I put the point first...then use your record against you.
eh?

This battle was more of a eh? in all honesty. Because a lot of these concepts have been used time and time again, and others werent use because they were, well... not very good. No hate intended, but I really dont think you guys put a lot of effort into ur verses and it shows. If I had to give a vote, I guess I'd say KempoMRK for the better verse/punch. There was only one solid punch in this battle and that was the board lines, which was written by him.

v/KempoMRK
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Old 02-09-2006, 04:01 PM   #12 (permalink)
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I thought this battle was pretty weak... but I give it to KempoMRK because I was feelin' punches more than Jersey's... I also thought they were harder hitting and more creative too...

Vote: KempoMRK
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Kempo shiit was maaaad played...i knew that and i havent did text battles in over 18 months until recently lol...the aeroplane line, the shirt collar line also...and that beginning line? no disrespect was THEE worst shit ive seen, ultra wack bro...Jersey honestly didnt have any standout lines himself, but none of his lines were wack or played so he takes this EASY..



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Old 02-09-2006, 04:38 PM   #14 (permalink)
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v/- Jersey Emcee

i liked jerseys opener better. didnt really think either of the closers were anything special. i liked the dojo line from jersey and the collar line from kempo, but jerseys opener was wat won my vote.
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Im tired of ya ego kid, I've seen you and your writings corney
Ya career'll probably last as long as the Clash of the Titans tourney
decent...
Im not gaybashin', but this no name seems so homo
Fuckin' newbie trash, your homepage should be the Dojo
no
And its funny how you try to act hard, bitch stop it
Beating Jersey?, that aint a safe bet like Rick Tocchet
pretty good
Fuck talking kid, winning is what this battles all about
And your gonna lose without a actually person, silloute or shadow of a doubt
didn't like.
Your not a thug, so stop actin' like you hood all day
I'll run you with the 38 special, and I aint talking bout a football play
nice



Chicago 110 Denver 107 - real good game is what some said,
^^^ Unrelated, but NOW theres a close match in this thread,
pretty funny
Thought you would no-show, but ya verse I have to laugh at,
Cos even my shirt collar can turn up better than that,
nice
Spray my lead into ya dome, shit theres no need to brag,
I'll leave patterns on ya head...n I don't mean a doo rag,
cool
Ya shits mad dull, it'll be easy to burn this fool,
Cos I've seen less board lines at aeroplane terminals,
played
Over, done, finished, this battle is already through,
I put the point first...then use your record against you.
ehhhh


v/ KempoMRK. thought Jersey's football line was nice but that was it. Kemp had a good opener and the collar line was decent, and doo rag was cool. Jersey - i'll be waiting for your hate vote.
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Old 02-10-2006, 01:33 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Im tired of ya ego kid, I've seen you and your writings corney
Ya career'll probably last as long as the Clash of the Titans tourney
decent...
Im not gaybashin', but this no name seems so homo
Fuckin' newbie trash, your homepage should be the Dojo
no
And its funny how you try to act hard, bitch stop it
Beating Jersey?, that aint a safe bet like Rick Tocchet
pretty good
Fuck talking kid, winning is what this battles all about
And your gonna lose without a actually person, silloute or shadow of a doubt
didn't like.
Your not a thug, so stop actin' like you hood all day
I'll run you with the 38 special, and I aint talking bout a football play
nice



Chicago 110 Denver 107 - real good game is what some said,
^^^ Unrelated, but NOW theres a close match in this thread,
pretty funny
Thought you would no-show, but ya verse I have to laugh at,
Cos even my shirt collar can turn up better than that,
nice
Spray my lead into ya dome, shit theres no need to brag,
I'll leave patterns on ya head...n I don't mean a doo rag,
cool
Ya shits mad dull, it'll be easy to burn this fool,
Cos I've seen less board lines at aeroplane terminals,
played
Over, done, finished, this battle is already through,
I put the point first...then use your record against you.
ehhhh


v/ KempoMRK. thought Jersey's football line was nice but that was it. Kemp had a good opener and the collar line was decent, and doo rag was cool. Jersey - i'll be waiting for your hate vote.


i dont even know you...your either a fuckin newbie who dont know shit...or a fag alias who dont know shit...why would i even vote on your match let alone reply to your nonsense...go accomplish something kid...peep the hall of fames round here kiddo...im in there...who the fuck are you???...
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right but you cared enough to come back in my thread to reply...
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