25. Criteria 3-2 vs. 26. Richard Corey 1-0

[David Lama]

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[Richard Corey]

yup yup

[Criteria]

ok, pic or no?

[Criteria]

the only reason im here and in the league is because of the RMC classic. So ionno if I post or not..shit sucks, jeff shut it the fuck down.

[Criteria]

i cant believe this retard actually raps..


the fall and leave of the RMC, wasn't really hard to see..
lets do geometry
cuz nig im 100/100 pussy.. and u dont want any part of me.
your girls a ho too.. i seen her fuckin wit fellas
her legs made enough spreads, jiffy peanut butter is jealous.

now for sum pic clownin'..
..
animal hybrid?..i know its freakisly real and its wack too..
rich got a bird chest, a bats ears...and the grill of a baboon.
get smacked goon..ya face indents, ur harmed in brawls
if people all came from apes...rich corey never got far at all.
allah quit moddin for fun; but rich? never quit jockin his nuts.
but u got style..dude match his skin tone when rockin a tux.
stoppin ur run, ya sucky dude, matta of fact its funny duke.
that im battling a munkey...who's wearing a munkey suit.
with minature ears, its hard to listen n tough to win
maan, ipod headphones are like winter earmuffs to him.
rich cant hear flows, and he knows im the cat to bring hell..
fuck winning by a hair, ill get a full breakdown from inkwell.
this geek quell's..that pic should be banished fo u pest..
cuz i thought same sex marriages were banned in the u.s?
so u like kungfu movies?, im swingin axes for a severed kill
N' im leavin a bigger part in ya temple jet li could never fill.
wit level skill, ur run in the league's more of a futile walk..
if u gain any momentum, man we should trash newtons laws.
ya stupid dawg..im astounding appeal, gonna pound for a kill
funny how u beef with oz ..when u only got an oz. of my skill.
trounce on ya grill, all ur fuckin advice is ignored n useless..
ya names rich..its just ironic noone cares bout ya two cents.
you had a 'promising' future in rap, i wont deny the facts
but lifes a bitch, n destiny had her fingers crossed behind her back.
So go n fight for an issue.. ill give u time to cry with a tissue
go the fuck back to b boys..& take ya mail-order bride with u.

28.

[Richard Corey]

Oh, and motif is pronounced (Mo-TEEF)

Now let’s go..



So he’s Asian. S’why his style of flipping makes this lame shine
its just like writing Chinese…100 of variations of the same lines
He acts like he came up hard from the streets and dirt
Criteir’s from pain?... only when we’re forced to read his verse
And what the fuck’s with this picture, this herb’s a joke
and LMAO@Cri showin’ off the few English words he knows
I can flip race shit too…with the Paintings my pen’ll spout
and after these punches you’ll need some Motif in ya mouth
Who you lookin’ at? Cause your evil eye was never scary
One punch and I’ll close down the slant like Chicago’s secondary
y'see this skinny bitch do push-ups? The police can't allow this
Knowin' damn well he’s pushin' weight by the grams and ounces
And that's why you can’t get dap when cats pass you in town
cos’ gettin’ one pound…would anchor ya light ass to the ground
dusty mouth bitch, get some lotion to slicken your face
his lips so ashy his coal sores could grill chicken and steaks
I write forewords to these novel punches I bust off
You write fourwords...
cos ya vocab ends at egg roll and duck sauce
The fuck…are you in a closet? Check his slum’s condition
It’s sad when the room in your shirt’s bigger than the one you live in
When I got your bitch in the Hotel, I force her to fuckin’ lie down
calls me the ‘telly monster…you just got the muppet’s eyebrows
I’m watchin’ MTV Tai boxing! Maybe C’s hella vicious
see, he was a SHARP boxer… when his pops sold televisions

[TyrantTMABM]

Crit u had a couple good lines lik the peanut butter and same sex marriages lines, but the destiny and newtons laws lines i feel lik ive heard a million times.

Rich u had a few good lines. i liked the pain line and the muppet line.

v/ Richard Corey

[Venamis]

Vote - Richard Corey

Criteria:

the fall and leave of the RMC, wasn't really hard to see..
lets do geometry
cuz nig im 100/100 pussy.. and u dont want any part of me.
Yikes.. Gay line intro.
your girls a ho too.. i seen her fuckin wit fellas
her legs made enough spreads, jiffy peanut butter is jealous.
Ehh.. It hits, I don't like it.. seems easy.

now for sum pic clownin'..
..
animal hybrid?..i know its freakisly real and its wack too..
rich got a bird chest, a bats ears...and the grill of a baboon.
Aiight.
get smacked goon..ya face indents, ur harmed in brawls
if people all came from apes...rich corey never got far at all.
Ha.. I liked that.
allah quit moddin for fun; but rich? never quit jockin his nuts.
but u got style..dude match his skin tone when rockin a tux.
Ehh.. Not really cool, a little racy to me.
stoppin ur run, ya sucky dude, matta of fact its funny duke.
that im battling a munkey...who's wearing a munkey suit.
Again, racy.
with minature ears, its hard to listen n tough to win
maan, ipod headphones are like winter earmuffs to him.
I liked this.. hhaha.
rich cant hear flows, and he knows im the cat to bring hell..
fuck winning by a hair, ill get a full breakdown from inkwell.
Iighht.. I just flipped a hair line like this.
this geek quell's..that pic should be banished fo u pest..
cuz i thought same sex marriages were banned in the u.s?
Nice.
so u like kungfu movies?, im swingin axes for a severed kill
N' im leavin a bigger part in ya temple jet li could never fill.
kk.
wit level skill, ur run in the league's more of a futile walk..
if u gain any momentum, man we should trash newtons laws.
Yah.
ya stupid dawg..im astounding appeal, gonna pound for a kill
funny how u beef with oz ..when u only got an oz. of my skill.
Nice.. I guess.
trounce on ya grill, all ur fuckin advice is ignored n useless..
ya names rich..its just ironic noone cares bout ya two cents.
Cool... I think it could have been worded bette.
you had a 'promising' future in rap, i wont deny the facts
but lifes a bitch, n destiny had her fingers crossed behind her back.
Creative.
So go n fight for an issue.. ill give u time to cry with a tissue
go the fuck back to b boys..& take ya mail-order bride with u.
Ahhhh. I wasn't feeling the closer.

So your verse was pretty cool there was some nice flips in there that I saw, your flow was pretty decent. It wasn't anything jaw droppin' but you didn't fall off too often. I think your style is a little boring though with the way you deliver yourself. I found that the impact of your shit just wasn't hitting me the way you intended it. Maybe it is because it's so late. Whatever, keep it up. I'm feeling you.

Richard Corey:

So he’s Asian. S’why his style of flipping makes this lame shine
its just like writing Chinese…100 of variations of the same lines
Cool opening.
He acts like he came up hard from the streets and dirt
Criteir’s from pain?... only when we’re forced to read his verse
Creative imo.
And what the fuck’s with this picture, this herb’s a joke
and LMAO@Cri showin’ off the few English words he knows
Ha.. that's funny.
I can flip race shit too…with the Paintings my pen’ll spout
and after these punches you’ll need some Motif in ya mouth
That was a pretty cool worded bar, I liked it.
Who you lookin’ at? Cause your evil eye was never scary
One punch and I’ll close down the slant like Chicago’s secondary
I don't know about Chicago, maybe the Colts..but MI what!
y'see this skinny bitch do push-ups? The police can't allow this
Knowin' damn well he’s pushin' weight by the grams and ounces
Haha.. thats original.
And that's why you can’t get dap when cats pass you in town
cos’ gettin’ one pound…would anchor ya light ass to the ground
Feeling it.
dusty mouth bitch, get some lotion to slicken your face
his lips so ashy his coal sores could grill chicken and steaks
Yah, funny.
I write forewords to these novel punches I bust off
You write fourwords...
cos ya vocab ends at egg roll and duck sauce
Racy.
The fuck…are you in a closet? Check his slum’s condition
It’s sad when the room in your shirt’s bigger than the one you live in
I thought he was a skinny bitch.
When I got your bitch in the Hotel, I force her to fuckin’ lie down
calls me the ‘telly monster…you just got the muppet’s eyebrows
Kk.
I’m watchin’ MTV Tai boxing! Maybe C’s hella vicious
see, he was a SHARP boxer… when his pops sold televisions
Yah.. cool little closer.

So yah, your verse was pretty well thought out and witty. I was feeling most of your shit, for the most part, ha. I think that you have a pretty decent flow also. A few bars at the end kind of fell off and I could tell that it was getting more difficult to read, but other than that you had a pretty solid drop. I know it is a lot harder when you have to drop down huge like that. Keep it up RC, I'm really feeling your shit.

BATTLE BREAKDOWN

Overall this was a pretty nice battle. Richard Corey came with some flames, I was feeling mostly everything that he posted up. Criteria had a few down points in his verse where the shit just wasn't working for me. It seemed like I was falling asleep because it was the same old shit that I was used to hearing. Richard Corey brought some original fresh stuff that made me laugh. I was really feeling that motif line that he came with, it's funny just thinking about it. Ohh well, nice battle, this was pretty close battle. Pz.

[Willie Dickgood]

Vote- RC


I thought this was gonna be pure rape, but criteria came kinda nice, had a few quotables here and there, but everything else besides his quotables was kinda like ehhh, or jus plain uninteresting...RC was just consistent and kept my attention way more throughout his verse by being more witty and makin me laugh at some of the asain shit...lol, thats low man...lol but yea RC takes this for me

[Criteria]

yeh, i dont go to rm much, so i didnt know how much that oz. lines is used..


dammit, I just figured out its pretty used & played.

[Meta Syn]

so far this is the best line for line battle i've seen in the bottom. Definately some funny shit from both sides but Corey came way harder with the room in the shirt line and that muppet line was hysterical.

The biggest downfall with Criteria was a few lines were poorly worded and one of his best punches was pretty played.

Although it was a damn good pic battle... im'a have to go with Corey on this one.

v/Corey

[KempoMRK]

the fall and leave of the RMC, wasn't really hard to see..
lets do geometry
cuz nig im 100/100 pussy.. and u dont want any part of me.
cool, swear thats a flip though, even near a bite
your girls a ho too.. i seen her fuckin wit fellas
her legs made enough spreads, jiffy peanut butter is jealous.
decent
now for sum pic clownin'..
..
animal hybrid?..i know its freakisly real and its wack too..
rich got a bird chest, a bats ears...and the grill of a baboon.
not bad
get smacked goon..ya face indents, ur harmed in brawls
if people all came from apes...rich corey never got far at all.
nah
allah quit moddin for fun; but rich? never quit jockin his nuts.
but u got style..dude match his skin tone when rockin a tux.
too simple
stoppin ur run, ya sucky dude, matta of fact its funny duke.
that im battling a munkey...who's wearing a munkey suit.
nah
with minature ears, its hard to listen n tough to win
maan, ipod headphones are like winter earmuffs to him.
lol, cool
rich cant hear flows, and he knows im the cat to bring hell..
fuck winning by a hair, ill get a full breakdown from inkwell.
nah
this geek quell's..that pic should be banished fo u pest..
cuz i thought same sex marriages were banned in the u.s?
nah
so u like kungfu movies?, im swingin axes for a severed kill
N' im leavin a bigger part in ya temple jet li could never fill.
decent
wit level skill, ur run in the league's more of a futile walk..
if u gain any momentum, man we should trash newtons laws.
cool
ya stupid dawg..im astounding appeal, gonna pound for a kill
funny how u beef with oz ..when u only got an oz. of my skill.
played
trounce on ya grill, all ur fuckin advice is ignored n useless..
ya names rich..its just ironic noone cares bout ya two cents.
cool
you had a 'promising' future in rap, i wont deny the facts
but lifes a bitch, n destiny had her fingers crossed behind her back.
nah
So go n fight for an issue.. ill give u time to cry with a tissue
go the fuck back to b boys..& take ya mail-order bride with u.
not feelin

So he’s Asian. S’why his style of flipping makes this lame shine
its just like writing Chinese…100 of variations of the same lines
not bad
He acts like he came up hard from the streets and dirt
Criteir’s from pain?... only when we’re forced to read his verse
ehhh
And what the fuck’s with this picture, this herb’s a joke
and LMAO@Cri showin’ off the few English words he knows
not bad
I can flip race shit too…with the Paintings my pen’ll spout
and after these punches you’ll need some Motif in ya mouth
ehh
Who you lookin’ at? Cause your evil eye was never scary
One punch and I’ll close down the slant like Chicago’s secondary
nah
y'see this skinny bitch do push-ups? The police can't allow this
Knowin' damn well he’s pushin' weight by the grams and ounces
cool
And that's why you can’t get dap when cats pass you in town
cos’ gettin’ one pound…would anchor ya light ass to the ground
nah
dusty mouth bitch, get some lotion to slicken your face
his lips so ashy his coal sores could grill chicken and steaks
nice
I write forewords to these novel punches I bust off
You write fourwords...
cos ya vocab ends at egg roll and duck sauce
lmao, ouch, nice
The fuck…are you in a closet? Check his slum’s condition
It’s sad when the room in your shirt’s bigger than the one you live in
nice
When I got your bitch in the Hotel, I force her to fuckin’ lie down
calls me the ‘telly monster…you just got the muppet’s eyebrows
nice
I’m watchin’ MTV Tai boxing! Maybe C’s hella vicious
see, he was a SHARP boxer… when his pops sold televisions
not bad

I thought Criteria had this when I started reading Rich's verse as I wasn't feeling it much at the start. But Corey picked up towards the end and had some real nice punches. I got Corey taking this though by one nice punch. Cool battle though.

v/ Richard Corey

[Daubs]

your girls a ho too.. i seen her fuckin wit fellas
her legs made enough spreads, jiffy peanut butter is jealous.
get smacked goon..ya face indents, ur harmed in brawls
if people all came from apes...rich corey never got far at all.
stoppin ur run, ya sucky dude, matta of fact its funny duke.
that im battling a munkey...who's wearing a munkey suit.
with minature ears, its hard to listen n tough to win
maan, ipod headphones are like winter earmuffs to him.
wit level skill, ur run in the league's more of a futile walk..
if u gain any momentum, man we should trash newtons laws.
ya stupid dawg..im astounding appeal, gonna pound for a kill
funny how u beef with oz ..when u only got an oz. of my skill.
trounce on ya grill, all ur fuckin advice is ignored n useless..
ya names rich..its just ironic noone cares bout ya two cents.
So go n fight for an issue.. ill give u time to cry with a tissue
go the fuck back to b boys..& take ya mail-order bride with u.

VS

So he’s Asian. S’why his style of flipping makes this lame shine
its just like writing Chinese…100 of variations of the same lines
And what the fuck’s with this picture, this herb’s a joke
and LMAO@Cri showin’ off the few English words he knows
Who you lookin’ at? Cause your evil eye was never scary
One punch and I’ll close down the slant like Chicago’s secondary
y'see this skinny bitch do push-ups? The police can't allow this
Knowin' damn well he’s pushin' weight by the grams and ounces
And that's why you can’t get dap when cats pass you in town
cos’ gettin’ one pound…would anchor ya light ass to the ground
dusty mouth bitch, get some lotion to slicken your face
his lips so ashy his coal sores could grill chicken and steaks
I write forewords to these novel punches I bust off
You write fourwords...
cos ya vocab ends at egg roll and duck sauce
The fuck…are you in a closet? Check his slum’s condition
It’s sad when the room in your shirt’s bigger than the one you live in
When I got your bitch in the Hotel, I force her to fuckin’ lie down
calls me the ‘telly monster…you just got the muppet’s eyebrows
I’m watchin’ MTV Tai boxing! Maybe C’s hella vicious
see, he was a SHARP boxer… when his pops sold televisions

dope battle, RC killed it

V./ RC

[Antrel]

Both you guys dropped real dope, but I give it to RC cuz his punches to me seemed more consistent and harder... Both you guys had real nice punches, but I was feelin' RC's a little more.

[Mic-illaH]

v/ Richard Corey.
good battle but I think RC took it hands down.
chicken and steak line was dope.

[.Epical.]

This was a straight battle

Criteria had alot of flipped lines that are almost close to bitten shit. Newton line was flipped directly from Pharoah def from b.boys and when he battled Butler here. Pussy line.. seen somewhere else.. had a played line about Oz. Crit came with some shit tho like peanut butter.. but rest was eh or flipped/bitten... decent verse tho.


Rich came aiite from what I usually see from him.. he came coo with the foreword and grill line.. you dropped pretty consistently. Set-ups were iffy this week tho.. some shit was like thrown in there. Felt the room in ya shirt punch alot.. haha.. basically you came coo.

V/ Rich on consistency and creativity

[Serge dot T]

RC cola got tis on consistancy.

Lmao@the ounces line.

Crit is barely getitn' credit for some of the flames he spit though!!!

with minature ears, its hard to listen n tough to win
maan, ipod headphones are like winter earmuffs to him.

That was comedy. RC got it but give props when due niggas, shizzle.

[Criteria]

Originally Posted by .Epical.

This was a straight battle

Criteria had alot of flipped lines that are almost close to bitten shit. Newton line was flipped directly from Pharoah def from b.boys and when he battled Butler here. Pussy line.. seen somewhere else.. had a played line about Oz. Crit came with some shit tho like peanut butter.. but rest was eh or flipped/bitten... decent verse tho.


V/ Rich on consistency and creativity

i recycled the newton line & came up with it waay before anyonelse.

[Criteria]

richard corey wins

[.Young Philly.]

ya stupid dawg..im astounding appeal, gonna pound for a kill
funny how u beef with oz ..when u only got an oz. of my skill.

^lmfao @ dude using that.

Please see the Hensley vs Oneduh battle immediately.