55. Ex-Kal 0-0 vs. 56. TyrantTMABM 0-0

[David Lama]

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[TyrantTMABM]

checkin in............ 10-12?

[TyrantTMABM]

this dude better show

[Ex-Kal]

kayyyyyyyyy

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post13284218

[TyrantTMABM]

here it is...........


you kno it aint gon take much for me to beat u
cuz u faker than the pokemon cards that u can see thru,
i dont care how good this dude drops, hes nothin to me
ive already used more words than his brains capacity,
Ex-Kals fresh meat, right out the slaughtahouse
ill eat him while stickin my fingas up his spouses blouse,
it dont matter wat u drop, im on my way to the top
youd be better off takin ur rhymes to the repair shop,
and why they got me battlin this noob ass bitch
he talks lik a toddler, someone flip his activation switch,
its time to conclude this battle so im sayin goodbye
Ty-rant rememba the name im not just some guy...................

[Ex-Kal]

wow cake


im takin this battle easy. this dude get punched fo' times,
verses remind me of night time, cuz son don't shine,
hopefully, you know this, cuz theres no hope for T,
i mean damn, dude so wack, even his aliases vote for me.
"this dude better show"? ha, bitch are you kidding?
if i WOULDA no showed, you MIGHT of had a chance of winning!
he's a fake. you won? your dreaming, son be awake,
my verse shitted on his pale ass now he looks like a zebra cake.
even ya girl'll vote for me, cuz the end i was tight
plus she'll do it from MY computer.
in the morning.
(she's spendin the night.)

[.ReLL.]

i dont care how good this dude drops, hes nothin to me
ive already used more words than his brains capacity
Vs
im takin this battle easy. this dude get punched fo' times,
verses remind me of night time, cuz son don't shine,
hopefully, you know this, cuz theres no hope for T,
i mean damn, dude so wack, even his aliases vote for me.
"this dude better show"? ha, bitch are you kidding?
if i WOULDA no showed, you MIGHT of had a chance of winning!

V/Ex-kal.....this was onesided....tyrant u came wit played weak punchs...werk on ur concepts..
Ex got this easy wit some decent punchs...that were consistent

[overtime]

i dint really wanna quote nothing cause it was like 4 exkal line vs. no trant lines. ex won this pretty easy. his conceots were at least jabs and had some sorta hit. ty's didnt do much. one sided battle here.

v/ex-kal

[Antrel]

I give this to Ex-Kal cuz Tyrant dropped way too simple with weak punches... Kal was more creative and his punches hit much harder than Tyrant's.

Vote: Ex-Kal

[TyrantTMABM]

lol ill probly get wackest verse of the week in next weeks mag

[Venamis]

Vote - Ex-Kaliber

TyrantTMABM:

you kno it aint gon take much for me to beat u
cuz u faker than the pokemon cards that u can see thru,
Weak hit, weak opener.
i dont care how good this dude drops, hes nothin to me
ive already used more words than his brains capacity,
No.
Ex-Kals fresh meat, right out the slaughtahouse
ill eat him while stickin my fingas up his spouses blouse,
No.
it dont matter wat u drop, im on my way to the top
youd be better off takin ur rhymes to the repair shop,
No Again.
and why they got me battlin this noob ass bitch
he talks like a toddler, someone flip his activation switch,
Decent.
its time to conclude this battle so im sayin goodbye
Ty-rant rememba the name im not just some guy
No, not the way to write.

Overall, your verse was horrible you had one flip that would of worked and that was your opener. The rest was garbage filler. I really am happy that you are in the league and that you are posting up and attempting to get better so I am not going to make fun of you. You still have a lot to learn about battling. So my suggestion to you, keep writing man and ask for people to tutor or help you so you can get better. Don't sign out because you're going to lost this week. There's no reason you need to do that. Keep it up man.

Ex-Kaliber:

im takin this battle easy. this dude get punched fo' times,
verses remind me of night time, cuz son don't shine,
Weak opener.
hopefully, you know this, cuz theres no hope for T,
i mean damn, dude so wack, even his aliases vote for me.
Okay.
"this dude better show"? ha, bitch are you kidding?
if i WOULDA no showed, you MIGHT of had a chance of winning!
Seen this before Ex-Kal.
he's a fake. you won? your dreaming, son be awake,
my verse shitted on his pale ass now he looks like a zebra cake.
Weak..
even ya girl'll vote for me, cuz the end i was tight
plus she'll do it from MY computer.
in the morning.
(she's spendin the night.)
Decent ender.

Okay, I know you knew that this was a cakewalk going into it but you should of dropped hot this week. You need to bring flames so you're not rusty going into the top 20. I think that your ender and your opener were your best bars. Keep it up though.

BATTLE BREAKDOWN

OVerall, this battle was pretty onesided. I knew coming into this battle that I was going to vote for Ex-Kaliber just because I know his talent and the fact that he was battling a noob. Ex' dropped a half ass weak verse that flawlessed TyrantTMABM, big deal. Ex' had weak punches but it got the job done. Ty' dropped one bar that was hot, which I am stretching the meaning of hot. That bar was your opener. Anyways, keep it up guys. Don't get discouraged TyrantTMABM, you'll get better in time.

[TyrantTMABM]

lol thx for the encouragment i was thinkin about gettin a mentor and signin out so i could dedicate more time to gettin better. P.S. its my B-day lol

[Destrukt]

happy be-lated birthday

[dizthachozen1]

damn, it really didn't seem like this was much of a problem for Ex. tyrant had nothing...i mean nothing. Ex's verse was a bit lackluster, but there are those that play up to their competition, and with the kinda verse that tyrant dropped; all we could expect from Ex was just enuff to get the win. and that's what he gave us.
Ex's closer was the best line of the entire battle. i don't have to quote it, because it's virtually the only line that any1 is going to remember...from either verse.
tyrant, if you feel the need to get a mentor, then do so, but my advise is this:
listen to how your favorite artists does it. get a feel for how he/she rides the rhythm or the song...how their delivery compliments its musical accompaniment...how he/she forms sentences around each other and how they're describing things through metaphors and similies...listen to how they're using adjectives and see if any of the words sound foreign to you(so you can look them up and find out what they mean. after you've done this, try to start writing or typing sentences that describe a certain thing or situation metaphorically. aiight...cuz what you typed was doomed from the opening lines. you showed heart though. so props for that at least.
VOTE=EX-CAL

[Meta Syn]

well, I hate to add weight to the sinking ship but I'm gonna have to go with Ex-Kal for the obvious reasons. Kal, although he did come kinda half-assed did still outshine Tyrant. No worries tho Ty it will come...

v/Kal

[Willie Dickgood]

Vote- Kal



lmao at the zebra cake line...it wasnt even that hot, it was jus funny as hell...but yea kal too this wit ease, tyrant aint the worst ive seen, but hes got hella work to do...kal took this because he actually had lines that were likeable in this verse..

[TyrantTMABM]

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post13276081
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[TyrantTMABM]

lol it would still be 2-0 Kal even if he didnt vote

[Banned Name]

"this dude better show"? ha, bitch are you kidding?
if i WOULDA no showed, you MIGHT of had a chance of winning!

the only line in the battle i might have sorta kinda possibly though about maybe feeling

V- Ex Kal

[TyrantTMABM]

lol i really got some work to do. ill come better in my next battle. easy win for u Ex. like venamis said though, bring the heat to ur next battle no matter who it is