Mr. Damonik 3-1 vs. Opshins 3-1

[J o o k]

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[Mr Damonik]

i'll give u 16.....imma drop soon.....HOLLA

[Opshins]

16 it is

[Mr Damonik]

M.chigan ave - I.ndiana st - L.ake rd - F.redrick Douglas blvd

All these streets to get to ya mom’s crib…that’s some shit
I can‘t complain…..it turned out that all roads lead to happiness
Victoria's Secret sale is over....U must be thinkin....like FUCK
i'm closin up shop....so this fag won't "get his panties in a bunch"
and I can get personal bitch....ya shit's far from perfection
Hi Im Rusty no showed against you....
he musta entered the thread and seen his reflection
We all know you're trash Op...how you receivin props when....
vote = Mr damonik......peeps don't even "rethink their Opshins"
U spit shit...we never care....there's wack rappers everywhere
smash his face wit third base....im "beatin em fair and square"
I threw on a smooth tux now im pickin between two sluts
i'll take the road less traveled...ya mom's been around too much
My dick's like a candy bar....and since ya mom's like's snack'n 4 dinner
her favorite line's become "hungry, why wait grab a Snickers"
i'd spare ya chick...but fuck that....just ask her homie
when my 'back's against the wall'.....the bitch 'bends over backwards for me'
Ya career has come to an end....just watch n you'll see
I took this match lying down.....and you still look up to me

E.Z.

[Mr Damonik]

[url]http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=907556[url]
Copywritten 0-0 vs. MMM 0-0
RBL South Championship: ~!O!~ 5-1 vs. XpOeT 4-2 vs. Grimey Thug 3-0

[Opshins]

Join Date: Mar 2002
Crib: RMC's Finest
Posts: 2,646
Points: 1 (Donate)
Rep Level: -44577
Im willin to give u points, because i know that you're weaker
But you dont need the points system, jeff needa create u a donate votes feature
Damoniks a bright human, and i dont need college
To know that ur the TRUTH and im about to drop knowledge
Yo just kiddin you dummy, retard why u even gloatin
When ur brain waves are more like a calm night on the ocean
Ima end this kids motion, Ops known to crunch rhymes
And i'll put ' ' those around ur verse, coz im still lookin for a punchline
Just to prove your a bitch with rap ill have my weapon spray
Coz the only time he reach for a mike is gettin a hard lemonade
Call me a renegade when u see how i do this kids cranium
Ima collapse ur fucking dome, like my city needs a new indoor stadium


^^^ i didnt miss a bar, to soak up ur blood u'll need sponges
The 2 lines above this actually hit harder with more content then your punches
You must be new at text battles, so i stay bustin cherries
And have you so fucking close to death like the scythe that he carries

[marsellus]

vote - damonik

punches hit harder...

opshins - only coo like was da droppin knowledge and that is played..

We all know you're trash Op...how you receivin props when....
vote = Mr damonik......peeps don't even "rethink their Opshins"
nice

U spit shit...we never care....there's wack rappers everywhere
smash his face wit third base....im "beatin em fair and square"
ok

I threw on a smooth tux now im pickin between two sluts
i'll take the road less traveled...ya mom's been around too much
funny

i'd spare ya chick...but fuck that....just ask her homie
when my 'back's against the wall'.....the bitch 'bends over backwards for me'
lol, nice

vote - damonik

[Oliver Twist]

Mr D-

We all know you're trash Op...how you receivin props when....
vote = Mr damonik......peeps don't even "rethink their Opshins"

I threw on a smooth tux now im pickin between two sluts
i'll take the road less traveled...ya mom's been around too much

i'd spare ya chick...but fuck that....just ask her homie
when my 'back's against the wall'.....the bitch 'bends over backwards for me'
Ya career has come to an end....just watch n you'll see
I took this match lying down.....and you still look up to me


That bend over line gotta make the mag, haha. I didn't like the fact that you used so many "your mom" type of lines in a short verse though. But still overall dope.

Op-
Im willin to give u points, because i know that you're weaker
But you dont need the points system, jeff needa create u a donate votes feature
Damoniks a bright human, and i dont need college
To know that ur the TRUTH and im about to drop knowledge

After this point of your verse the punches tapered off. Was expecting a little more.


vote-- Mr Damonik


Overall more enjoyable read, more quotables.

[Opshins]

wow....good votes...0-2

[trey]

Originally Posted by marsellus

We all know you're trash Op...how you receivin props when....
vote = Mr damonik......peeps don't even "rethink their Opshins"
nice

You would think that was a good line you Neanderthal...that's on par with your AO a 0 in his loss column line from last week (that you still think isn't trash._ You cant just use someone's name just because it fits in where you want it...just like what Mr. damonik did. I mean, you can...but its not clever or even a diss at all. If you don't understand what I'm saying you are undeniably stupid.

Rethink their opshins = Rethink their options...which isn't a diss or derogatory, its just useless wordplay.





Now thats out of my system....




M.chigan ave - I.ndiana st - L.ake rd - F.redrick Douglas blvd

All these streets to get to ya mom’s crib…that’s some shit
I can‘t complain…..it turned out that all roads lead to happiness


wtf...no



Victoria's Secret sale is over....U must be thinkin....like FUCK
i'm closin up shop....so this fag won't "get his panties in a bunch"


you work at victorias secret? hahahaha....why didnt u just say 'they're' closing up shop??? nice line, weird and suspect wording tho


and I can get personal bitch....ya shit's far from perfection
Hi Im Rusty no showed against you....
he musta entered the thread and seen his reflection

true maybe...but ehh

We all know you're trash Op...how you receivin props when....
vote = Mr damonik......peeps don't even "rethink their Opshins"

:P

U spit shit...we never care....there's wack rappers everywhere
smash his face wit third base....im "beatin em fair and square"

wack

I threw on a smooth tux now im pickin between two sluts
i'll take the road less traveled...ya mom's been around too much


wack

My dick's like a candy bar....and since ya mom's like's snack'n 4 dinner
her favorite line's become "hungry, why wait grab a Snickers"


no

i'd spare ya chick...but fuck that....just ask her homie
when my 'back's against the wall'.....the bitch 'bends over backwards for me'

nice, sorta played

Ya career has come to an end....just watch n you'll see
I took this match lying down.....and you still look up to me


no



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Im willin to give u points, because i know that you're weaker
But you dont need the points system, jeff needa create u a donate votes feature

ha, nice open

Damoniks a bright human, and i dont need college
To know that ur the TRUTH and im about to drop knowledge

nice flip

Yo just kiddin you dummy, retard why u even gloatin
When ur brain waves are more like a calm night on the ocean


dope, worked real good with 2 lines before it too

Ima end this kids motion, Ops known to crunch rhymes
And i'll put ' ' those around ur verse, coz im still lookin for a punchline

nice, your best line

Just to prove your a bitch with rap ill have my weapon spray
Coz the only time he reach for a mike is gettin a hard lemonade

ha not bad

Call me a renegade when u see how i do this kids cranium
Ima collapse ur fucking dome, like my city needs a new indoor stadium

ok


^^^ i didnt miss a bar, to soak up ur blood u'll need sponges
The 2 lines above this actually hit harder with more content then your punches

i like

You must be new at text battles, so i stay bustin cherries
And have you so fucking close to death like the scythe that he carries

Fire




this isnt even close...

Vote = opshins

[Phryme]

Victoria's Secret sale is over....U must be thinkin....like FUCK
i'm closin up shop....so this fag won't "get his panties in a bunch"
I threw on a smooth tux now im pickin between two sluts
i'll take the road less traveled...ya mom's been around too much
i'd spare ya chick...but fuck that....just ask her homie
when my 'back's against the wall'.....the bitch 'bends over backwards for me'

vs

Ima end this kids motion, Ops known to crunch rhymes
And i'll put ' ' those around ur verse, coz im still lookin for a punchline
Just to prove your a bitch with rap ill have my weapon spray
Coz the only time he reach for a mike is gettin a hard lemonade
You must be new at text battles, so i stay bustin cherries
And have you so fucking close to death like the scythe that he carries


going against the majority so far, again.

both had the ups and downs in there verse but damonik seems like he lacked anything more then those lines above. less traveled line i left in cause it was decent but the other two were better then decent. on the other hand, opshins palmed it. 3 solid lines and the rest of his verse wasnt up to par but outweighted the rest of damoniks verse. more consistent and that was easy to see. hop opshins dont get robbed.

v/opshins

[Absent Minded]

word em up....shits tied...uppin

[CONCOUYS]

so i gues this text shit is really just insult after insult and
those are what u call punches.
and its all about who can get the better punches

that shit is laim thats why yall aint voten for my verse att all
cause u don't like the fack im tryna spit in a spontainious style
will see if i get this text bull on my next battle. i know i must get it a litle bit cause i do
still have more then to wins off actual votes except one win on this is is a noshow
any way check the litle break down below

Mr. Damonik
All these streets to get to ya mom’s crib…that’s some shit
I can‘t complain…..it turned out that all roads lead to happiness
nice

Hi Im Rusty no showed against you....
he musta entered the thread and seen his reflection
this was funny and creative liked allot.


i mest my post by clicking submit too soon so just this ;; i liked mr d verse a lot
especially the lines above

but there were atleast two lines in opstions verse i liked as munch or better so


vote- O

[Mr Damonik]

^^^^^

Originally Posted by CONCOUYS

fahget it... yo im droppen now... im meh drop 10-24
ill see how i feel. you'll match me or not; like Akademik did.


aight u not arround/
kinda like akademik did'nt know how to get down/
so those who don't prepare well?
will suffer the consiqwences/
i come serious/ hard all the time/
in all seriousness/
i don't come soft like ra ill, akademik, and sound/
come on man. how da hell would that sound/
that would sound like me runnin for president/
like john kerry saying he comming hard/ and hes not even putting the full effort in// except hes all up in his bitch ugly ass hynes/ [cumming hard]/
i bet you her botle an't qwite as tite as a bottle of hynes/
and i don't know a thing about this cat sound/
but this is an educated gues/ he probably can 't even tell you how real lyrics sound/
must be a he she<>a bitch fuken a grey hound/
not natural sound/ i think u howda learn how a strait drumkick sounds/
he left crying cause i drouned his dumn boy/girl bitch at the ground round/
then alieed his body to a pulp / [deep,,deep] in to the ground/
i tryed this time really hard/
to make it easy for all the sukka emcee voters to read and understand jus how im beaten sounds ass in the here and now/
im going to try and cut to twenty four/
but i don't know/
he looked at me all angry mad and meann/all sad, angry pist and mad/
but he started it shit/it was eather him or CONCOUYS/
and you know me im gonna stay CONCOUYS/so i'd say / it an't really all that sad/
that i had to beat his ass/retire bitch /im hiphop and i all readdy disowned you/
and don't even try it dumn ass/ because the blues is myne too/////>>>>


RBL, all MCs<>means bitch u an't a emcee[just a BITCHASS MASTER of the CLITERIS], all the world: u ben served

Op on da real man this kid is trash......please tell me that vote don't count

[Opshins]

word em up.....vote dont count....still stands at 2-2

[Mr Damonik]

^^^^ i respect that in you fam.........



2-2 vote homos.........

[Opshins]

uppppppp

[PopeJuicy]

Although I didn't like the beginning I'ma have to go for...

Vote= Opshins

The verse came together better after the first 4 bars. Punches were there and the wordpaly was good.

Mr. Dam... Your verse was ok, but I just wasn't feeling some of the lines; such as the dinner/snickers line....

2

[Mr Damonik]

3-2 keep it goin.....