Copywritten 0-0 vs. MMM 0-0

[J o o k]

RBL North Rules & Regulations.

-Duedates-
All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
(Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

-Line Limit-
All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
A line is 1 length of the screen.
u must agree on an amount in ya check in
& match whatever amount u agree on

-Voting-
5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler.
1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!!
And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
First to 8 votes wins the battle, & it'll be closed afterwards

-General Rules-
--No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
--No editing after BOTH verses are posted
--if u post a no show verse, & ya opponent posts after
u do, then u can't edit another verse in
so get ya editing done before BOTH verses are posted!
--Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted
will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
--No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
--Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend
rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

-Mod AIM Contacts-
Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
strike --- Syncerity77777
J o o k --- get off the blok

[Copywritten]

checkin in..how many you feel like goin?

[J.Q.]

16 bars homie, that cool wit u??

[Copywritten]

yeah, that's good..good luck

[J.Q.]

Before 12:00 am Wednesday nite Pacific time


Your rhymes dry like dicks in basic*, I'm never spittin fake shit
In due time I'll be sent north quicker than convicted rapists
This don't take much thought, off the dome I'll slaughter ya
And leave your ass stuck south like your permanent home's in Florida
I'll lose the day u see lyrically 50 blessin tracks
Vs me, u the time square ball...dropped in 60 seconds flat
That's fucked up Eyedeal got me abusing this minor
Who prolly just another geek online cause he aint been introduced 2 vagina
Every verse of yours I ever read it sucked
I get u clipped off and make Copy disappear like Edit-Cut
Your style more played than TNT did Tom and Jerry
Prolly get more votes if u just shut the fuck up like John Kerry
Every verse I spit online takes me 10 minutes or less
I bet this clown writin his heart out like he shoving his pen thru his chest
My cockiness a hell of a virtue, this L I just served you
Make your confidence break more than Chapelle 4 commercials


*In basic training, u aint allowed 2 have sex.


I'll post the links to my votes later

[Copywritten]

i'm bein honest when i say you suck, homie what's here is meant
you should've just posted on MMM, and saved J.Q. the embarrassment
keyin this here, steer clear of audio..ya feel it? hmm
naa cuz
late night lovin from ya bitch is the only time i'm hearin' 'MMM'
why even post in this thread, you obviously ain't hot, see
you highlight and right click to see copy
i pull out the .9 and click right, then you ain't seein copy
ya gullible and sorry to trouble you but homie i'm done with you
you could be in the league forever,
and inversing ya name is the closest you'd get to a W
I take trips for days & if i break down no worries - i'm rockin triple A
While youre trippin for days, over a girl rockin Triple A's
homies scarred, for mans sake buy him some band aids
ya short stacked in this battle match.. like losin in poker or pancakes
homie ya bitch made, and yeah i'm exposing ya naked ass
switchin names to make some waves.
even when you droppin deuces you couldn't make a splash
here's a welcome to the RBL tip, so ya name isn't blazed
ever since the first week..north/south wordplays are playeddd


should be enough..

[ExodusIII]

i'm a give this to JQ...both of you had your fair share of played lines....the north/south shit...the w's...JQ just came harder overall....copy started goin downhill towards the end of the verse...pretty even match up tho

vote=JQ

[J.Q.]

these clowns takin 2 long 2 post so i'ma post my votes 1 at a time if i got 2

Phryme 2-0 vs. Ra Ill 2-0

[AniMatiX]

LMAO....nice batttle...

Copy:
i'm bein honest when i say you suck, homie what's here is meant
you should've just posted on MMM, and saved J.Q. the embarrassment

keyin this here, steer clear of audio..ya feel it? hmm
naa cuz
late night lovin from ya bitch is the only time i'm hearin' 'MMM'

here's a welcome to the RBL tip, so ya name isn't blazed
ever since the first week..north/south wordplays are playeddd

I was feeling these lines right here, damn...that some shit

MMM:
Every verse of yours I ever read it sucked
I get u clipped off and make Copy disappear like Edit-Cut

My cockiness a hell of a virtue, this L I just served you
Make your confidence break more than Chapelle 4 commercials


Overall: Vote= Copy....his verse was more hard hitting, had better wordplay, and just better punches...but this was a good battle...liked it, had to read it twice before i voted..

[R.A.M.]

copy took this one, he had some nasty shit, that right click to see copy sequence was dope, MMM was aight, some stretched shit, and i feel u on the north south plays (i used one myself, and its fresh so fuck yall).

but on the real copy took it, harder disses, and overall a lil more clever.

pEACE

[PopeJuicy]

Originally Posted by Copywritten

ya gullible and sorry to trouble you but homie i'm done with you
you could be in the league forever,
and inversing ya name is the closest you'd get to a W

This by far was the best bar in the battle.

Each of you had your fair share of the played lines, but Copy came harder with more consistency and flow. JQ totally fell off towards the end of the battle. Most of the bars and punches seem forced.

Vote= Copywritten

[J.Q.]

Copy-3
J.Q.-1

LMAO by the way, cause i kinda figured north/south disses woulda been used before but nothing is more played than not blind postin and feeding off your opponent's verse.

[Eternalpath]

J Q

I'll lose the day u see lyrically 50 blessin tracks
Vs me, u the time square ball...dropped in 60 seconds flat

Every verse I spit online takes me 10 minutes or less
I bet this clown writin his heart out like he shoving his pen thru his chest

The time square ball line I thought was your best...u got some skill...easily seen...nice flow..cool punches..thinking outside the box more and more...

Copywritten

I take trips for days & if i break down no worries - i'm rockin triple A
While youre trippin for days, over a girl rockin Triple A's

why even post in this thread, you obviously ain't hot, see
you highlight and right click to see copy
i pull out the .9 and click right, then you ain't seein copy

The .9 line was gully....but the triple A's joint was mad funny....Fierce flow..not bad at all..both of you could be in the north soon enough..

Yeah the south north lines are mad played..and copy u had obvious nameplays....even the .9 was easy when it comes to right clicking and all but thought out better...the triple A line was my line of the battle....both did good but I think copy got it with his closer..

My vote copywritten

[J.Q.]

Originally Posted by Eternalpath

J Q

I'll lose the day u see lyrically 50 blessin tracks
Vs me, u the time square ball...dropped in 60 seconds flat

Every verse I spit online takes me 10 minutes or less
I bet this clown writin his heart out like he shoving his pen thru his chest

The time square ball line I thought was your best...u got some skill...easily seen...nice flow..cool punches..thinking outside the box more and more...

Copywritten

I take trips for days & if i break down no worries - i'm rockin triple A
While youre trippin for days, over a girl rockin Triple A's

why even post in this thread, you obviously ain't hot, see
you highlight and right click to see copy
i pull out the .9 and click right, then you ain't seein copy

The .9 line was gully....but the triple A's joint was mad funny....Fierce flow..not bad at all..both of you could be in the north soon enough..

Yeah the south north lines are mad played..and copy u had obvious nameplays....even the .9 was easy when it comes to right clicking and all but thought out better...the triple A line was my line of the battle....both did good but I think copy got it with his closer..

My vote copywritten

I feel u, u actually took the time 2 break it down. Good luck Copy

[Phryme]

I'll lose the day u see lyrically 50 blessin tracks
Vs me, u the time square ball...dropped in 60 seconds flat
My cockiness a hell of a virtue, this L I just served you
Make your confidence break more than Chapelle 4 commercials

vs

i'm bein honest when i say you suck, homie what's here is meant
you should've just posted on MMM, and saved J.Q. the embarrassment
keyin this here, steer clear of audio..ya feel it? hmm
naa cuz
late night lovin from ya bitch is the only time i'm hearin' 'MMM'
why even post in this thread, you obviously ain't hot, see
you highlight and right click to see copy
i pull out the .9 and click right, then you ain't seein copy
here's a welcome to the RBL tip, so ya name isn't blazed
ever since the first week..north/south wordplays are playeddd

copy was way more consistent. nameplays basically got the better of this battle. closer was nice too. pretty sad on mmm's part.

v/copy

[CONCOUYS]

ok i read this shit like threa each and i could figure who i liked

so

vote tie

[Phryme]

^needs to be banned from the league. doesnt know what a consistent/solid verse is and always votes tie.

[CONCOUYS]

not allways if i can't figure out wutch one i like i just vote tie its a vote and it should be my right to vote how i see fit its my vote my word

u drop vote and your word.

i do the best i can to give every body a chance just cause one got more punches don't mean its a better verse sometimes it can be more or less of one thing or a nother

don't fuk wit my right to vote

[CONCOUYS]

and i never give senority . its all on the verses integrity

[Copywritten]

thanks for the votes everyone...good battle J.Q.