~!O!~ 4-1 vs. Yung Impression 3-2

[Strike]

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[~!O!~]

~16..in.~

Eternal Path 11-8 vs. Dark Vybe 8-9 vs.
SKY 2-3 vs. U-TuRn 1-1
CONCOUYS 0-1 vs. .Akademik. 0-1
trey 1-0 vs. Sound 1-0
RBL North Championship: 1. Odin. 9-0 vs. 2. Purfeksion 12-4
RBL North Contendership: 3. D. Omen 4-2 vs. 4. The Post Office 2-0
5. .Young Philly. 4-1 vs. 6. ALIEN0888 2-1

[Yung Impression]

post early kid

Eternal Path 11-8 vs. Dark Vybe 8-9 vs.
XpOeT 3-2 vs. ExodusIII 3-3
Grimey Thug 2-0 vs. Kost 2-0
SKY 2-3 vs. U-TuRn 1-1
9. Spit That 4-2 vs. 10. Tremendou$ 2-1

[~!O!~]

I'll drop this lame..ya'll know that this kid is going down
when I leave yung's impression..all over the ground//
I bring the force till even Luke'll start feeling my mindwaves
and cut you in half...so in ur casket u'll be sittin sideways//
I leave ur kind blazed..pussy. a snitch that's known to narc
he's black as fuck! I'm not a kid...so whose afraid of the dark?//
this child tries to talk big shit. dropping lines about guns
but from the way u act..
we got the impression that kid was kinda yung//
but 15?!?! grow the fuck up.don't play the grown game bitch
wen u got more hair on ur eyebrows then on ur fucking dick//
shit..I laugh at this kid when Toys R Us is still the place!
plus Toys R Us...cause I will let my bullets play in ur face//
I guess me and Iron Mike got alot in common dun
when he's known 2 eat ur kids...and my bellies full of yung//
u're clean shaved with no elevation, stop faking shit bitch
or u'll get my impression, wen the imp's pressing...straight 2 ur lips//

~....ha...ha...ha....now take all day child.~

[~!O!~]

~..and oh yeah..don't feed off my verse bullet head..~

[Yung Impression]

Half of ya wins are no shows. U tryna beat me, now I know u losin it
I’ll “M.O.P” u all over the floor. like the crew signing wit G-unit
I seen ~!O!~‘s girl. And she’s a heffer, kid there ain‘t no flossin
Cuz when she walk the street. Theres warning signs sayin Cattle crossin
He say he get girls. U prolly dont fuck’em, but lets leave that alone
Girls be screamin O’s name out. Yea because he have sex wit the tv on
He tries to act hard. But I seen fam wit a gun, and that’s no lie
tryin to see if his "fireworks". but my bad its the sound of 4th of July
He have women tho. He be teach'em new shit like they was a foreigner
But his girls are prostitutes & more like hockey. Gettin rammed in every corner
U already prove to everybody that u wack. So wat gonna be ya other reason
I heard that ~!O!~ can be ill sumtimes. Yea only during cold & flu season
I can stop u from becoming a rapper. Mess up ya dreams & have u clanging
Cuz I‘ll have u standin in front of ya goal. Like u was basket hanging
Kid im not gonna take u serious. U think ya hood, bitch you finish
Plus I’ll hit ya in the “Eye” hard. Like I was fucking hurricane Dennis


i won bitch

[XpOeT]

O verse breakdown-
I'll drop this lame..ya'll know that this kid is going down
when I leave yung's impression..all over the ground//
not feelin how that was writttin

I bring the force till even Luke'll start feeling my mindwaves
and cut you in half...so in ur casket u'll be sittin sideways//
weak

I leave ur kind blazed..pussy. a snitch that's known to narc
he's black as fuck! I'm not a kid...so whose afraid of the dark?//
weak...

this child tries to talk big shit. dropping lines about guns
but from the way u act..
we got the impression that kid was kinda yung//
ehhh

but 15?!?! grow the fuck up.don't play the grown game bitch
wen u got more hair on ur eyebrows then on ur fucking dick//
thats kinda gay...

shit..I laugh at this kid when Toys R Us is still the place!
plus Toys R Us...cause I will let my bullets play in ur face//
ehhhh

I guess me and Iron Mike got alot in common dun
when he's known 2 eat ur kids...and my bellies full of yung//
weak

u're clean shaved with no elevation, stop faking shit bitch
or u'll get my impression, wen the imp's pressing...straight 2 ur lips//
weak closer...

YI breakdown-

Half of ya wins are no shows. U tryna beat me, now I know u losin it
I’ll “M.O.P” u all over the floor. like the crew signing wit G-unit
ehhh

I seen ~!O!~‘s girl. And she’s a heffer, kid there ain‘t no flossin
Cuz when she walk the street. Theres warning signs sayin Cattle crossin
decent

He say he get girls. U prolly dont fuck’em, but lets leave that alone
Girls be screamin O’s name out. Yea because he have sex wit the tv on
whack

He tries to act hard. But I seen fam wit a gun, and that’s no lie
tryin to see if his "fireworks". but my bad its the sound of 4th of July
weak

He have women tho. He be teach'em new shit like they was a foreigner
But his girls are prostitutes & more like hockey. Gettin rammed in every corner
ehhh

U already prove to everybody that u wack. So wat gonna be ya other reason
I heard that ~!O!~ can be ill sumtimes. Yea only during cold & flu season
ok...u should have set it up as "flue & cold"flow would have been better

I can stop u from becoming a rapper. Mess up ya dreams & have u clanging
Cuz I‘ll have u standin in front of ya goal. Like u was basket hanging
...whack

Kid im not gonna take u serious. U think ya hood, bitch you finish
Plus I’ll hit ya in the “Eye” hard. Like I was fucking hurricane Dennis
nothing special about this closer....

vote- Yung cuz over all his verse was ok, while O came with nothing.

[U-TuRn]

Allright, both of yall dropped pretty dope. Both had creative punches as well as onpoint presentation. Yungs verse was allright, while i was not feeling the closer because i have seen that type of punch on the site before. I like O's verse because he really attacked one facet of Yung, and that was his age. Yung brought to the table some punches that i do not think were countered while O seemed more consistent.

Vote-O

[Dark-Vybe]

Half of ya wins are no shows. U tryna beat me, now I know u losin it
I’ll “M.O.P” u all over the floor. like the crew signing wit G-unit
ahhhh, no.....

I seen ~!O!~‘s girl. And she’s a heffer, kid there ain‘t no flossin
Cuz when she walk the street. Theres warning signs sayin Cattle crossin
ehhh, basic, but kinda ok...

He say he get girls. U prolly dont fuck’em, but lets leave that alone
Girls be screamin O’s name out. Yea because he have sex wit the tv on
nah...

He tries to act hard. But I seen fam wit a gun, and that’s no lie
tryin to see if his "fireworks". but my bad its the sound of 4th of July
nothin...

He have women tho. He be teach'em new shit like they was a foreigner
But his girls are prostitutes & more like hockey. Gettin rammed in every corner
hockey rinks dont even have corners...

U already prove to everybody that u wack. So wat gonna be ya other reason
I heard that ~!O!~ can be ill sumtimes. Yea only during cold & flu season
to basic...

I can stop u from becoming a rapper. Mess up ya dreams & have u clanging
Cuz I‘ll have u standin in front of ya goal. Like u was basket hanging
cool...

Kid im not gonna take u serious. U think ya hood, bitch you finish
Plus I’ll hit ya in the “Eye” hard. Like I was fucking hurricane Dennis
the eye of hurricanes are the softest part of the storm, bad wording...

overall, i seen the angles you were takin, but nah
alot of basic text, not much wit involved, bland verse
....

I'll drop this lame..ya'll know that this kid is going down
when I leave yung's impression..all over the ground//
basic, to easy, but ok...

I bring the force till even Luke'll start feeling my mindwaves
and cut you in half...so in ur casket u'll be sittin sideways//
nah...

I leave ur kind blazed..pussy. a snitch that's known to narc
he's black as fuck! I'm not a kid...so whose afraid of the dark?//
nah...

this child tries to talk big shit. dropping lines about guns
but from the way u act..
we got the impression that kid was kinda yung//
nah...

but 15?!?! grow the fuck up.don't play the grown game bitch
wen u got more hair on ur eyebrows then on ur fucking dick//
ok...

shit..I laugh at this kid when Toys R Us is still the place!
plus Toys R Us...cause I will let my bullets play in ur face//
nah...

I guess me and Iron Mike got alot in common dun
when he's known 2 eat ur kids...and my bellies full of yung//
heh, cool, ok..

u're clean shaved with no elevation, stop faking shit bitch
or u'll get my impression, wen the imp's pressing...straight 2 ur lips//
nah..


you went for like 987398798596 name plays, most was jus ehhh
same as YI, jus some ok shit





overall, dissapointing battle
i thought this was gonna be 1 of the better south battles this week, but it looks to be the most boring, sorry jus being honest
imma vote- YI jus for the basketline & tryina think outta the box alil

[Yung Impression]

2-1 im leading

my verse...basic...lol aight..thanks for voting

next week i'll be comin much better...fa sho

[~!O!~]

~..2-1..up.~

[eyedeal]

2-1 YI

bump

[Eternalpath]

~!O!~

I leave ur kind blazed..pussy. a snitch that's known to narc
he's black as fuck! I'm not a kid...so whose afraid of the dark?//


I guess me and Iron Mike got alot in common dun
when he's known 2 eat ur kids...and my bellies full of yung//


The dark line would been cool if his name had dark in it..and the bellies line could have been taken many ways....so either u swallow cum...or u swallow Yung..either way that sounds gay...IMO your verse was eh...at best

Yung Impression

I seen ~!O!~‘s girl. And she’s a heffer, kid there ain‘t no flossin
Cuz when she walk the street. Theres warning signs sayin Cattle crossin

He have women tho. He be teach'em new shit like they was a foreigner
But his girls are prostitutes & more like hockey. Gettin rammed in every corner

Okay the first one was okay...sorta funny....the 2nd...well if Hockey was playign right now would be better and some might nto even get this line...unless they know sumthin abotu it..anyway

IMO

both didnt do much to impress me...and YI U have gotten better since I battled you..and the other guy...witht he funny sign LOL naw..this verse was eh...

IMO My vote Yung Impression (props)

[marsellus]

flow - O
mets - young
creativity - O
punches - tie

vote - O

[CONCOUYS]

yo i like both verses and i couldn't pick

qwite youngs did seem just // that munch better


vote young impression

[Yung Impression]

4-2 im up

[~!O!~]

~..I almost can't believe I'm gonna lose this battle..but then again..wow....just...wow. 4-2.~

[trey]

I'll drop this lame..ya'll know that this kid is going down
when I leave yung's impression..all over the ground//

dope, easy...unforced and worked nice

I bring the force till even Luke'll start feeling my mindwaves
and cut you in half...so in ur casket u'll be sittin sideways//

wack

I leave ur kind blazed..pussy. a snitch that's known to narc
he's black as fuck! I'm not a kid...so whose afraid of the dark?//

wack

this child tries to talk big shit. dropping lines about guns
but from the way u act..
we got the impression that kid was kinda yung//
but 15?!?! grow the fuck up.don't play the grown game bitch
wen u got more hair on ur eyebrows then on ur fucking dick//

set up was good and u didnt do anything with it

shit..I laugh at this kid when Toys R Us is still the place!
plus Toys R Us...cause I will let my bullets play in ur face//

no

I guess me and Iron Mike got alot in common dun
when he's known 2 eat ur kids...and my bellies full of yung//

terrible, stop swallowing

u're clean shaved with no elevation, stop faking shit bitch
or u'll get my impression, wen the imp's pressing...straight 2 ur lips//

sounds terrible

stop with the name flips, 1 is enough or too many



Half of ya wins are no shows. U tryna beat me, now I know u losin it
I’ll “M.O.P” u all over the floor. like the crew signing wit G-unit

no

I seen ~!O!~‘s girl. And she’s a heffer, kid there ain‘t no flossin
Cuz when she walk the street. Theres warning signs sayin Cattle crossin


a heffer? sucha bad word MFdoom wouldnt even say it, sounds like something that would be in a live battle not some text verse

He say he get girls. U prolly dont fuck’em, but lets leave that alone
Girls be screamin O’s name out. Yea because he have sex wit the tv on

no, terrible

He tries to act hard. But I seen fam wit a gun, and that’s no lie
tryin to see if his "fireworks". but my bad its the sound of 4th of July

wordplay with no diss at all

He have women tho. He be teach'em new shit like they was a foreigner
But his girls are prostitutes & more like hockey. Gettin rammed in every corner

no

U already prove to everybody that u wack. So wat gonna be ya other reason
I heard that ~!O!~ can be ill sumtimes. Yea only during cold & flu season

this is one step up from a cum line

I can stop u from becoming a rapper. Mess up ya dreams & have u clanging
Cuz I‘ll have u standin in front of ya goal. Like u was basket hanging

youre going to have him clanging?

Kid im not gonna take u serious. U think ya hood, bitch you finish
Plus I’ll hit ya in the “Eye” hard. Like I was fucking hurricane Dennis

wack




Vote = O

[~!O!~]

~..4-3..uppin'.~

[~!O!~]

~..4-3 Yung..uppin'.~