XpOeT 1-0 vs. ~!O!~ 1-0

Strike · 06-06-2005, 03:38 PM

RBL South Rules & Regulations.

-Duedates-
All Verses due Friday night 12:00am pacific.
All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm pacific
(Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

-Line Limit-
All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
A line is 1 length of the screen.

-Voting-
5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

-General Rules-
--No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
--No editing after BOTH verses are posted
--Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
--No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
--Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

-Mod AIM Contacts-
Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
strike --- Syncerity77777
J o o k --- get off the blok

XpOeT · 06-06-2005, 04:43 PM

checkin in.....i'll post alil later

~!O!~ · 06-06-2005, 04:48 PM

~Yeah...going 20-24 if I post first.~

XpOeT · 06-06-2005, 05:56 PM

this kid's pathetic, somebody pump his veins with toxic anestheics/
Cuz i'm a batter'em til he wearin prostetics appendages for aesthetics/
so he dares to claim that his pesonality is magnetic?/
for faggets maybe, atleast i can give him that credit/
somebody call a doctor, home boy is needin a medic/
he's bleeding from the rectum thanks to seamen that his dickriders injected/
whats worst is ur style ain't ur's, u biting others property/
I've heard tighter verse spit by "whose line's" Collin Mockery/
u lookin ackward G, when beef gets heated, like "head's of broccoli"/
I'll slap your Cosmic Flow and beat you into another Odessey/
"Eat a dick and bow", I'll make u preach on that philosophy/
make u shit yourself as i speach shifts to attrosities/
Ur a ugly narssasit, well i can shatter your fantasy/
u look like the retarted version of Pugsley from the Adams Family/
Battlin me is a characteristic of lost cause insanity/
Cuz i'll make it so u can't feel yourself, like i severed ur mentality from your anatimy.....

i don't feel like droppipn more...

explanation of some refferences-

"heads of brocolli"or "brocolli heads"- a vegitarian

"whose line"- a show hosted by Drew Carey on ABC, Collin Mockery is a forty'sumtin year old Canadian improve actor

anything else that might not make sence, check his sig or title....out

~!O!~ · 06-09-2005, 12:56 AM

~OK.....~

son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks
so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week//
& that's a gotdamned shame bitch. already beat ur tame script
how can u win...
when just my initial already separates your name kid?!//
u'r a loser. a mistake....a penal slip u fucking lame
sorry. I rarely miss take... XpOeT..
............maybe now you'll get some fucking fame//
I know ur type: a net geek...rarely reaches any love
plus u masturbate so much,
............. ur fucking dick comes with gloves//
with all the movies. the mangas. and cartoon print-offs
this kid beats off on so much anime.....
...... u'd fucking think Ike was involved//

~pffft......garbage. If I don't win this shit....wow.....just.....wow.~

ExodusIII · 06-09-2005, 01:24 AM

xpoet...not really feelin much in your verse...your disses were a little simplistic n played...and any attempts at witty lines were a bit of a stretch...

he's bleeding from the rectum thanks to seamen that his dickriders injected/

^^dickriders ride your dick, not the other way around...line's weak

O...your verse wasn't all that much better...although you had some attempts at wordplay it came off pretty weak....week/weak lines are played n you didn't even flip it well....at least it was a personal tho...

& that's a gotdamned shame bitch. already beat ur tame script
how can u win...
when just my initial already separates your name kid?!//

this line's weak....how does your initial seperating his name mean that he can't win?? you're using wordplay....but not flipping it into a decent diss....it's just wordplay for the sake of wordplay....not much thought put into it

but overall your verse was better than xpoet...wasn't really feelin thios battle

vote=O

Narsil · 06-09-2005, 10:29 AM

X ya had a cool rhymescheme and a pretty larg use of vocabulary...somethin about yer verse had 2000-2001 written all over it...thanx for the nostalgia...but yer shit jus wasnt hard enough...O didnt bring much but the form style just the way he wrote what he wrote makes it harder then you did..better luck next time..

vote O

Huey Fig Newton · 06-10-2005, 08:59 PM

Quote:

son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks
so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week

good
=====================

Quote:

I've heard tighter verse spit by "whose line's" Collin Mockery/
u lookin ackward G, when beef gets heated, like "head's of broccoli"/

ok

Vote = O

E Tha Real · 06-10-2005, 09:56 PM

son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks
so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week
^that took it...

Xpoet your punches weren't hard hitting and the wordchoice
and phrazing wasn't there... and if you have to explain a punch
it not worth using it honestly...

vote- 0

Endquote. · 06-10-2005, 10:19 PM

X-Poet's "Who's line" line was dope. Other than that flow was choppy and stumbled alot, could have cleaned it up easy, the punches were aite, but the sloppiness and bad spelling detracts from the verse.

O- Could tell this was a 1/2 ass verse, but you came clean with it, nice flow, cadence, punches were alright, just enough to snag the win.

Yung Impression · 06-10-2005, 10:35 PM

vote-O

cuz he had the best line in the battle

Fav. Line
son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks
so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week//
^^good line
^^

D1ck In Ur Mom · 06-10-2005, 11:24 PM

multies-tie
punches-o
wordplay-tie
meta's-tie

vote-o, better overall verse, 1 better punch i liked, decent battle.

..Heist.. · 06-10-2005, 11:43 PM

X Poet

this kid's pathetic, somebody pump his veins with toxic anestheics/
Cuz i'm a batter'em til he wearin prostetics appendages for aesthetics/
weak
so he dares to claim that his pesonality is magnetic?/
for faggets maybe, atleast i can give him that credit/
weak
somebody call a doctor, home boy is needin a medic/
he's bleeding from the rectum thanks to seamen that his dickriders injected/
weak
whats worst is ur style ain't ur's, u biting others property/
I've heard tighter verse spit by "whose line's" Collin Mockery/
weak
u lookin ackward G, when beef gets heated, like "head's of broccoli"/
I'll slap your Cosmic Flow and beat you into another Odessey/
weak
"Eat a dick and bow", I'll make u preach on that philosophy/
make u shit yourself as i speach shifts to attrosities/
weak
Ur a ugly narssasit, well i can shatter your fantasy/
u look like the retarted version of Pugsley from the Adams Family/
weak
Battlin me is a characteristic of lost cause insanity/
Cuz i'll make it so u can't feel yourself, like i severed ur mentality from your anatimy.....
weak

O

son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks
so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week//
ok
& that's a gotdamned shame bitch. already beat ur tame script
how can u win...
when just my initial already separates your name kid?!//
ok
u'r a loser. a mistake....a penal slip u fucking lame
sorry. I rarely miss take... XpOeT..
............maybe now you'll get some fucking fame//
weak
I know ur type: a net geek...rarely reaches any love
plus u masturbate so much,
............. ur fucking dick comes with gloves//
weak
with all the movies. the mangas. and cartoon print-offs
this kid beats off on so much anime.....
...... u'd fucking think Ike was involved//
weak

Vote = O

J o o k · 06-11-2005, 03:34 AM

over no shows

Narcotic · 06-11-2005, 12:52 PM

X-Poet you had the right force in your verse and you had the right idea... but that should have only been a rough draft... Make your punches a little tighter... and when you don't have to explain them... it gives them more effect in the verse when first read...

O you had everything he had and tighter punches... so I'm giving it to you

vote= O

peace

marsellus · 06-11-2005, 01:59 PM

with all the movies. the mangas. and cartoon print-offs
this kid beats off on so much anime.....
...... u'd fucking think Ike was involved//

^^thats the best line of the battle i dont kno wat yall are thinkin.. lol anime, get it? that made me laugh..

but yea

vote - O

its obvious, other buddy was worried about forcing vocab in

Deadly Lyricist · 06-11-2005, 05:56 PM

son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks
so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week//

^^^That Won It

Vote----O

Sonz1 · 06-11-2005, 07:39 PM

if vocab and flow mattered...than X would take this shit easily...but since it don't....O wins

vote= O

eyedeal · 06-12-2005, 10:02 AM

12-0 ~!O!~ wins (first to 8) 2-0
XpOeT loses 1-1

06-06-2005, 03:38 PM	#1 (permalink)
Strike packin that metal Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: illsville... Posts: 4,210	XpOeT 1-0 vs. ~!O!~ 1-0 RBL South Rules & Regulations. -Duedates- All Verses due Friday night 12:00am pacific. All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm pacific (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches) -Line Limit- All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets) A line is 1 length of the screen. -Voting- 5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all. Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes. Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts. No 1 line voting! It wont be counted! First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards -General Rules- --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask! --No editing after BOTH verses are posted --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle! --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP! --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league. -Mod AIM Contacts- Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal strike --- Syncerity77777 J o o k --- get off the blok __________________ MIC bitches Herbin Legends fuck a roster you know who we is bish got flow?

06-06-2005, 04:48 PM	#3 (permalink)
~!O!~ ...I'll spank u... Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 350	~Yeah...going 20-24 if I post first.~ __________________ *Recognize Bitch*

06-09-2005, 12:56 AM	#5 (permalink)
~!O!~ ...I'll spank u... Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 350	~OK.....~ son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week// & that's a gotdamned shame bitch. already beat ur tame script how can u win... when just my initial already separates your name kid?!// u'r a loser. a mistake....a penal slip u fucking lame sorry. I rarely miss take... XpOeT.. ............maybe now you'll get some fucking fame// I know ur type: a net geek...rarely reaches any love plus u masturbate so much, ............. ur fucking dick comes with gloves// with all the movies. the mangas. and cartoon print-offs this kid beats off on so much anime..... ...... u'd fucking think Ike was involved// ~pffft......garbage. If I don't win this shit....wow.....just.....wow.~ __________________ *Recognize Bitch*

06-09-2005, 10:29 AM	#7 (permalink)
Narsil the unbreakable Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 273	X ya had a cool rhymescheme and a pretty larg use of vocabulary...somethin about yer verse had 2000-2001 written all over it...thanx for the nostalgia...but yer shit jus wasnt hard enough...O didnt bring much but the form style just the way he wrote what he wrote makes it harder then you did..better luck next time.. vote O __________________ Most likely I dont take you serious

06-10-2005, 09:56 PM	#9 (permalink)
E Tha Real Real Life Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Earth Posts: 3,552	son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week ^that took it... Xpoet your punches weren't hard hitting and the wordchoice and phrazing wasn't there... and if you have to explain a punch it not worth using it honestly... vote- 0 __________________ I'm so cool at night sheep count me... "You mean, let me understand this cause, ya know maybe it's me, I'm a little fucked up maybe, but I'm funny how, I mean funny like I'm a clown, I amuse you? I make you laugh, I'm here to fuckin' amuse you? What do you mean funny, funny how? How am I funny?" - Tommy DeVito; Goodfellas

06-06-2005, 04:43 PM	#2 (permalink)
XpOeT no title needed Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: J-ville Posts: 2,086	checkin in.....i'll post alil later

06-06-2005, 05:56 PM	#4 (permalink)
XpOeT no title needed Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: J-ville Posts: 2,086	this kid's pathetic, somebody pump his veins with toxic anestheics/ Cuz i'm a batter'em til he wearin prostetics appendages for aesthetics/ so he dares to claim that his pesonality is magnetic?/ for faggets maybe, atleast i can give him that credit/ somebody call a doctor, home boy is needin a medic/ he's bleeding from the rectum thanks to seamen that his dickriders injected/ whats worst is ur style ain't ur's, u biting others property/ I've heard tighter verse spit by "whose line's" Collin Mockery/ u lookin ackward G, when beef gets heated, like "head's of broccoli"/ I'll slap your Cosmic Flow and beat you into another Odessey/ "Eat a dick and bow", I'll make u preach on that philosophy/ make u shit yourself as i speach shifts to attrosities/ Ur a ugly narssasit, well i can shatter your fantasy/ u look like the retarted version of Pugsley from the Adams Family/ Battlin me is a characteristic of lost cause insanity/ Cuz i'll make it so u can't feel yourself, like i severed ur mentality from your anatimy..... i don't feel like droppipn more... explanation of some refferences- "heads of brocolli"or "brocolli heads"- a vegitarian "whose line"- a show hosted by Drew Carey on ABC, Collin Mockery is a forty'sumtin year old Canadian improve actor anything else that might not make sence, check his sig or title....out

06-09-2005, 01:24 AM	#6 (permalink)
ExodusIII Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 1,741	xpoet...not really feelin much in your verse...your disses were a little simplistic n played...and any attempts at witty lines were a bit of a stretch... he's bleeding from the rectum thanks to seamen that his dickriders injected/ ^^dickriders ride your dick, not the other way around...line's weak O...your verse wasn't all that much better...although you had some attempts at wordplay it came off pretty weak....week/weak lines are played n you didn't even flip it well....at least it was a personal tho... & that's a gotdamned shame bitch. already beat ur tame script how can u win... when just my initial already separates your name kid?!// this line's weak....how does your initial seperating his name mean that he can't win?? you're using wordplay....but not flipping it into a decent diss....it's just wordplay for the sake of wordplay....not much thought put into it but overall your verse was better than xpoet...wasn't really feelin thios battle vote=O

06-10-2005, 10:19 PM	#10 (permalink)
Endquote. "The Last Word." Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 1,146	X-Poet's "Who's line" line was dope. Other than that flow was choppy and stumbled alot, could have cleaned it up easy, the punches were aite, but the sloppiness and bad spelling detracts from the verse. O- Could tell this was a 1/2 ass verse, but you came clean with it, nice flow, cadence, punches were alright, just enough to snag the win.

06-10-2005, 10:35 PM	#11 (permalink)
Yung Impression RBL Finest'..... Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Kolumbus City Posts: 1,204	vote-O cuz he had the best line in the battle Fav. Line son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week// ^^good line ^^ __________________ Y. I The Boondocks.

06-10-2005, 11:24 PM	#12 (permalink)
D1ck In Ur Mom 95434543548284x Rbl Champ Join Date: May 2005 Location: Los angeles, Killafornia Posts: 107	multies-tie punches-o wordplay-tie meta's-tie vote-o, better overall verse, 1 better punch i liked, decent battle.

06-10-2005, 11:43 PM	#13 (permalink)
..Heist.. Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 59	X Poet this kid's pathetic, somebody pump his veins with toxic anestheics/ Cuz i'm a batter'em til he wearin prostetics appendages for aesthetics/ weak so he dares to claim that his pesonality is magnetic?/ for faggets maybe, atleast i can give him that credit/ weak somebody call a doctor, home boy is needin a medic/ he's bleeding from the rectum thanks to seamen that his dickriders injected/ weak whats worst is ur style ain't ur's, u biting others property/ I've heard tighter verse spit by "whose line's" Collin Mockery/ weak u lookin ackward G, when beef gets heated, like "head's of broccoli"/ I'll slap your Cosmic Flow and beat you into another Odessey/ weak "Eat a dick and bow", I'll make u preach on that philosophy/ make u shit yourself as i speach shifts to attrosities/ weak Ur a ugly narssasit, well i can shatter your fantasy/ u look like the retarted version of Pugsley from the Adams Family/ weak Battlin me is a characteristic of lost cause insanity/ Cuz i'll make it so u can't feel yourself, like i severed ur mentality from your anatimy..... weak O son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week// ok & that's a gotdamned shame bitch. already beat ur tame script how can u win... when just my initial already separates your name kid?!// ok u'r a loser. a mistake....a penal slip u fucking lame sorry. I rarely miss take... XpOeT.. ............maybe now you'll get some fucking fame// weak I know ur type: a net geek...rarely reaches any love plus u masturbate so much, ............. ur fucking dick comes with gloves// weak with all the movies. the mangas. and cartoon print-offs this kid beats off on so much anime..... ...... u'd fucking think Ike was involved// weak Vote = O

06-11-2005, 03:34 AM	#14 (permalink)
J o o k free the oppressed. Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Bay Area, Ca Posts: 9,650	over no shows __________________ "Somewhere a True Believer is training to kill you. He is training with minimal food or water, in austere conditions, training day and night. The only thing clean on him is his weapon. He doesn't worry about what workout to do - his ruck weighs what it weighs, his runs end when the enemy stops chasing him. This True Believer is not concerned about 'how hard it is;' he knows either he wins or dies. He doesn't go home at 17:00, he is home. He knows only The Cause." Win or Die. Still want to quit?

06-11-2005, 12:52 PM	#15 (permalink)
Narcotic I just made fun of you... Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Kettering, Ohio, USA Posts: 2,003	X-Poet you had the right force in your verse and you had the right idea... but that should have only been a rough draft... Make your punches a little tighter... and when you don't have to explain them... it gives them more effect in the verse when first read... O you had everything he had and tighter punches... so I'm giving it to you vote= O peace __________________ What's the two syllabol word beginning with "N" that you never wanna call a black man.... neighbor...

06-11-2005, 01:59 PM	#16 (permalink)
marsellus nOne siCker Join Date: May 2005 Location: city city Posts: 1,381	with all the movies. the mangas. and cartoon print-offs this kid beats off on so much anime..... ...... u'd fucking think Ike was involved// ^^thats the best line of the battle i dont kno wat yall are thinkin.. lol anime, get it? that made me laugh.. but yea vote - O its obvious, other buddy was worried about forcing vocab in __________________ "Took my ass straight to the block wit hand fulla rocks, yall, and it's my first time I'm lowin, watchin for cop cars. By the end of the night a nlgga sold all the rocks, I'm trippin out lookin at all the dough I got, I shoulda been came and sold the block and locked it. Made me some profits, so nlgga tonight my people gon' be eatin on lobster, hate to say it, but I think these streets done really created a monster. Cause now that I see how quick I can come up by breakin the law, why in the hell is you steady tellin me to go and get a job?" ~ Krayzie Bone

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06-11-2005, 05:56 PM	#17 (permalink)
Deadly Lyricist Registered User Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Da Block Posts: 51	son u'r garbage that speaks. u'r whole fucking life reeks so ur av is correct....u living, fucking punishes the week// ^^^That Won It Vote----O

06-11-2005, 07:39 PM	#18 (permalink)
Sonz1 Registration Please Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Charlotte NC Posts: 1,088	if vocab and flow mattered...than X would take this shit easily...but since it don't....O wins vote= O

06-12-2005, 10:02 AM	#19 (permalink)
eyedeal The Bad Guy Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: GA Posts: 20,306	12-0 ~!O!~ wins (first to 8) 2-0 XpOeT loses 1-1

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