SKY 2-0 vs. Endquote 2-0

J o o k · 05-30-2005, 04:47 PM

RBL South Rules & Regulations.

-Duedates-
All Verses due Friday night 12:00am pacific.
All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm pacific
(Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

-Line Limit-
All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
A line is 1 length of the screen.

-Voting-
5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

-General Rules-
--No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
--No editing after BOTH verses are posted
--Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
--No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
--Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

-Mod AIM Contacts-
Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
strike --- Syncerity77777
J o o k --- get off the blok

Endquote. · 05-31-2005, 01:23 AM

16?

G'luck.

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post12082577

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post12062683

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post12080662

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...0#post12062750

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post12062778

SKY · 06-03-2005, 04:06 PM

quick keystyle to Game - Higher

Best believe I'll hit you where your ass hurts,
tryna step-up to sky....
Bring it on, I'll take you higher than the 'hash' herbs...
have your soul flying like a black bird,
END QUOTE IS HOT? HELL "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"....
keep up and THAT'LL be your last word...
this bastard needs some practice for this...
i'd rather battle a bitch...he like a (Jehova) Whitness on Christmas, he can't w-rap for shit!
surran wrap his lips, and rope - his - ankles...
stuff him in a body bag and note to sank you...
"Want a round two Sky?" NOPE, NO THANK YOU...
You wont be 'round to rhyme, be afloat with the angels...
i rip your every line like mo'nique wearing a pin stripe bathing suit....
this guy's razor food...soft as baby-food on stages 2...
lames as oOoOoOoOOh....don't tell me about it,
fail?.... me? I DOUBT IT, aint got be wearing hawaiian dress-shirts to get shells in your outfit,
I been 'dope' since the word was...tighter than ken folk....
stronger that men's soap, i can dis-'arm' you through pen notes...
storm through ya win-dow...and stop ya heart with a quick blow....
so slow that shit down like shopping carts at a thrift sto'....
before i get pissed bro'...and let both these fists go...
have your whole head spinnin' like u jus finished some Sisqo...
b*itch n!gga just get low....BE-FORE I TAKE YOU HIGH-ER!

Endquote. · 06-04-2005, 12:34 AM

You went over the line limit... But it doesn't matter anyhow.

Keyed to nothing...

I'ma smack this dude, and when the action's through
Everyone'll know why the Sky is black and blue
Got your hopes up, Tryin to show quote up?
To keep u out of the mag... all I had to do is show up!
Your're gassed, man... And prolly self service
Such a virgin, when u masturbate u make yourself nervous!
2-0 offa no shows..? This is where you fall man
I'll put more holes into Sky... than aerosol cans
Your verse... raw ass.. This twerp... is all trash
Break his limbs, and check Sky for... the forecast
Your content- vacant... your flows- can't take it
Wordplay's so forced, it escaped the plantation
I'll leave you in the street with your corpse splayed out
And nod as the little beat in your heart fades out
Cause you winning..? Your rhymin's too simple... too silly
Dr. Seuss would sue for damages... If you could do any.

The mag is finally rid of you.
That was easy.

ExodusIII · 06-04-2005, 06:25 AM

damn...endquote just murdered this cat

I'ma smack this dude, and when the action's through
Everyone'll know why the Sky is black and blue
dope

Got your hopes up, Tryin to show quote up?
To keep u out of the mag... all I had to do is show up!
mag lines are played, but that's the best one i've seen yet...nice

Your're gassed, man... And prolly self service
Such a virgin, when u masturbate u make yourself nervous!
hahaha...funny shit

2-0 offa no shows..? This is where you fall man
I'll put more holes into Sky... than aerosol cans
nice

Your verse... raw ass.. This twerp... is all trash
Break his limbs, and check Sky for... the forecast

aight

Cause you winning..? Your rhymin's too simple... too silly
Dr. Seuss would sue for damages... If you could do any.
and dope closer

this was a dope verse mayne...shit was solid...you should be up north

sky...man, this is a battle, not a keystyle comp

lift ya game if you wanna win battles...endquote aint a dude you keystyle a verse against

vote=endquote

SKY · 06-04-2005, 09:01 AM

rofl...he punches were old as dirt, and not creative at all...u know how many times i've heard the same lines, even on here?

this is rapmusic.com , damn and that shit was rap?

Stigmeta · 06-04-2005, 10:48 AM

Damn, stop swaying 'lil *****.

You got merked here.

I'ma smack this dude, and when the action's through
Everyone'll know why the Sky is black and blue
Got your hopes up, Tryin to show quote up?
To keep u out of the mag... all I had to do is show up!
2-0 offa no shows..? This is where you fall man
I'll put more holes into Sky... than aerosol cans

^All that was nice, and the rest went from average to solid.

SKY, you had some nice concepts, but they were worded poorly, and sometimes stretched.

/v Endquote

eyedeal · 06-04-2005, 11:19 AM

2-0 End

bump

RP2G · 06-04-2005, 06:23 PM

i cant vote, but i have to admit that those SKY punchlines were old as fuck and overused as FUCK...

Ribonuclease · 06-04-2005, 08:23 PM

/\ your hatin on him either way cock,
nice verses both way, sky, you need to just organize your lines better. Your setups and wordplay were nice, some of it was just too audio sounding. Don't write that shit to a beat it will just limit what you can do on a normal bar with a diss. Good verse though either way I thought you would have had it if there were some better punchlines at your openent. alot of it seemed like it just wasn't connecting, but it was tight.
Endquote, not that great of a verse either, Ive seen one from you before that was much better. but you had the consistency with your punches to win this battle.
good battle for the south
peace

vote - endquote

Phryme · 06-05-2005, 12:53 AM

sky- you dont belong in battlin' at all. i wasnt feel nothin in your verse, flow was garbage and the structure was the assistant trash. punches were played or they didnt even hit in cases, not a good verse you dropped kid. structure your shit and work on your flow, then try punches and wordplay....
endquote- i can see you just half-assed your verse, all you needed. nice nameplays and forecast wordplay could have been used better but was nice anyways. thats all it book...

v/endquote

Narsil · 06-05-2005, 05:52 PM

end owned...cant really say more about it....some nice lines some simple lines but the style jus worked better then skies

eyedeal · 06-06-2005, 02:11 PM

5-0 Endquote wins 3-0
SKY loses 2-1

05-30-2005, 04:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
J o o k free the oppressed. Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Bay Area, Ca Posts: 9,650	SKY 2-0 vs. Endquote 2-0 RBL South Rules & Regulations. -Duedates- All Verses due Friday night 12:00am pacific. All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm pacific (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches) -Line Limit- All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets) A line is 1 length of the screen. -Voting- 5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all. Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes. Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts. No 1 line voting! It wont be counted! First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards -General Rules- --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask! --No editing after BOTH verses are posted --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle! --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP! --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league. -Mod AIM Contacts- Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal strike --- Syncerity77777 J o o k --- get off the blok __________________ "Somewhere a True Believer is training to kill you. He is training with minimal food or water, in austere conditions, training day and night. The only thing clean on him is his weapon. He doesn't worry about what workout to do - his ruck weighs what it weighs, his runs end when the enemy stops chasing him. This True Believer is not concerned about 'how hard it is;' he knows either he wins or dies. He doesn't go home at 17:00, he is home. He knows only The Cause." Win or Die. Still want to quit?

05-31-2005, 01:23 AM	#2 (permalink)
Endquote. "The Last Word." Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 1,146	16? G'luck. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post12082577 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post12062683 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post12080662 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...0#post12062750 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post12062778 Last edited by Endquote.; 06-06-2005 at 11:18 AM.

06-03-2005, 04:06 PM	#3 (permalink)
SKY GLobaL WaRninG Join Date: Jul 1999 Location: NJ 2 GA Posts: 2,198	quick keystyle to Game - Higher Best believe I'll hit you where your ass hurts, tryna step-up to sky.... Bring it on, I'll take you higher than the 'hash' herbs... have your soul flying like a black bird, END QUOTE IS HOT? HELL "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO".... keep up and THAT'LL be your last word... this bastard needs some practice for this... i'd rather battle a bitch...he like a (Jehova) Whitness on Christmas, he can't w-rap for shit! surran wrap his lips, and rope - his - ankles... stuff him in a body bag and note to sank you... "Want a round two Sky?" NOPE, NO THANK YOU... You wont be 'round to rhyme, be afloat with the angels... i rip your every line like mo'nique wearing a pin stripe bathing suit.... this guy's razor food...soft as baby-food on stages 2... lames as oOoOoOoOOh....don't tell me about it, fail?.... me? I DOUBT IT, aint got be wearing hawaiian dress-shirts to get shells in your outfit, I been 'dope' since the word was...tighter than ken folk.... stronger that men's soap, i can dis-'arm' you through pen notes... storm through ya win-dow...and stop ya heart with a quick blow.... so slow that shit down like shopping carts at a thrift sto'.... before i get pissed bro'...and let both these fists go... have your whole head spinnin' like u jus finished some Sisqo... bitch n!gga just get low....BE-FORE I TAKE YOU HIGH-ER! __________________ HTTP://WWW.MYSPACE.COM/OKAYSK* "I don't care for most rappers, I bairly give a fuck about people period, so you might want to watch who you go after" Last edited by SKY; 06-03-2005 at 04:09 PM.

06-04-2005, 09:01 AM	#6 (permalink)
SKY GLobaL WaRninG Join Date: Jul 1999 Location: NJ 2 GA Posts: 2,198	rofl...he punches were old as dirt, and not creative at all...u know how many times i've heard the same lines, even on here? this is rapmusic.com , damn and that shit was rap? __________________ HTTP://WWW.MYSPACE.COM/OKAYSK "I don't care for most rappers, I bairly give a fuck about people period, so you might want to watch who you go after"

06-04-2005, 06:23 PM	#9 (permalink)
RP2G Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: CALI Posts: 90	i cant vote, but i have to admit that those SKY punchlines were old as fuck and overused as FUCK... __________________ size 5 font or smaller

06-04-2005, 12:34 AM	#4 (permalink)
Endquote. "The Last Word." Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 1,146	You went over the line limit... But it doesn't matter anyhow. Keyed to nothing... I'ma smack this dude, and when the action's through Everyone'll know why the Sky is black and blue Got your hopes up, Tryin to show quote up? To keep u out of the mag... all I had to do is show up! Your're gassed, man... And prolly self service Such a virgin, when u masturbate u make yourself nervous! 2-0 offa no shows..? This is where you fall man I'll put more holes into Sky... than aerosol cans Your verse... raw ass.. This twerp... is all trash Break his limbs, and check Sky for... the forecast Your content- vacant... your flows- can't take it Wordplay's so forced, it escaped the plantation I'll leave you in the street with your corpse splayed out And nod as the little beat in your heart fades out Cause you winning..? Your rhymin's too simple... too silly Dr. Seuss would sue for damages... If you could do any. The mag is finally rid of you. That was easy.

06-04-2005, 06:25 AM	#5 (permalink)
ExodusIII Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 1,741	damn...endquote just murdered this cat I'ma smack this dude, and when the action's through Everyone'll know why the Sky is black and blue dope Got your hopes up, Tryin to show quote up? To keep u out of the mag... all I had to do is show up! mag lines are played, but that's the best one i've seen yet...nice Your're gassed, man... And prolly self service Such a virgin, when u masturbate u make yourself nervous! hahaha...funny shit 2-0 offa no shows..? This is where you fall man I'll put more holes into Sky... than aerosol cans nice Your verse... raw ass.. This twerp... is all trash Break his limbs, and check Sky for... the forecast aight Cause you winning..? Your rhymin's too simple... too silly Dr. Seuss would sue for damages... If you could do any. and dope closer this was a dope verse mayne...shit was solid...you should be up north sky...man, this is a battle, not a keystyle comp lift ya game if you wanna win battles...endquote aint a dude you keystyle a verse against vote=endquote

06-04-2005, 10:48 AM	#7 (permalink)
Stigmeta Patience to gain Wisdom Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Checkerboard Slums Posts: 246	Damn, stop swaying 'lil *****. You got merked here. I'ma smack this dude, and when the action's through Everyone'll know why the Sky is black and blue Got your hopes up, Tryin to show quote up? To keep u out of the mag... all I had to do is show up! 2-0 offa no shows..? This is where you fall man I'll put more holes into Sky... than aerosol cans ^All that was nice, and the rest went from average to solid. SKY, you had some nice concepts, but they were worded poorly, and sometimes stretched. /v Endquote

06-04-2005, 11:19 AM	#8 (permalink)
eyedeal The Bad Guy Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: GA Posts: 20,306	2-0 End bump

06-04-2005, 08:23 PM	#10 (permalink)
Ribonuclease Registered User Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 1,047	/\ your hatin on him either way cock, nice verses both way, sky, you need to just organize your lines better. Your setups and wordplay were nice, some of it was just too audio sounding. Don't write that shit to a beat it will just limit what you can do on a normal bar with a diss. Good verse though either way I thought you would have had it if there were some better punchlines at your openent. alot of it seemed like it just wasn't connecting, but it was tight. Endquote, not that great of a verse either, Ive seen one from you before that was much better. but you had the consistency with your punches to win this battle. good battle for the south peace vote - endquote __________________ Internet Icons You Ain't One Of Us

06-05-2005, 12:53 AM	#11 (permalink)
Phryme lets get it. Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Westcoast, Cali Posts: 887	sky- you dont belong in battlin' at all. i wasnt feel nothin in your verse, flow was garbage and the structure was the assistant trash. punches were played or they didnt even hit in cases, not a good verse you dropped kid. structure your shit and work on your flow, then try punches and wordplay.... endquote- i can see you just half-assed your verse, all you needed. nice nameplays and forecast wordplay could have been used better but was nice anyways. thats all it book... v/endquote

06-05-2005, 05:52 PM	#12 (permalink)
Narsil the unbreakable Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 273	end owned...cant really say more about it....some nice lines some simple lines but the style jus worked better then skies __________________ Most likely I dont take you serious

06-06-2005, 02:11 PM	#13 (permalink)
eyedeal The Bad Guy Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: GA Posts: 20,306	5-0 Endquote wins 3-0 SKY loses 2-1

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode