Don Vito 1-0 vs. tettris 1-0

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Old 05-30-2005, 04:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Don Vito 1-0 vs. tettris 1-0


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Old 05-31-2005, 04:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Checkin' in. Might drop tonight or tomorrow, not sure. 10-16, it's whatever.

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Old 06-01-2005, 11:30 AM   #3 (permalink)
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tettris takes it up the butt!
good luck homey...we'll keep it short...

We can take a vote...but i guarantee your skills won't help...
Trash you democratically when i rip you and Vito your bill of health...
See bitch...i birthed your style...cunning with all of my lines and...
Its a new Don...and you're sonning is on the horizon...
Getting to the details...you'll see shells but not up the shore...
Only time you pull bitches...you're involved in female tug of war...
Wasting my time...see i'm a killer when i spit...
I flip DV...and walk away still with the illest on my dick...
And fuck shoplifting...you're just a biter thats out to prove...
You're that bitch to steal on...atleast Winona Riders proud of you...
Heard your an emotional guy...a bitch that'll get sewn shut...
My ropes a depressing situation and youre about to get choked up...
Italian bitch...I oughta hold you hostage...
With a nose that big...the bridge charges your eyebrows a toll to cross it...
Guilty of being wack...and your lines are finished kid...
I've got the Juice...
As it Don's on V. that not even Ito would find you innocent...

16...match it...
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Old 06-01-2005, 07:46 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Ðon Vito takes it up the butt!
Good shit...

I'll disperse your pride, pen a verse that blurs your eyes
Leave you heated like sunburns in July on pale thighs
I'm accustomed to shit talkin' dudes, you're just like the rest
One big family, I guess, and I'm forced to fuck ya'll like incest
There's no convincin' me, after this shit you'll be scared to even mention me
Like confessin' to your moms how your father's the cause behind your dented knees
I'm always focused, spit words that destroy your growth like locusts
Tettris, you're hopeless, just vanish from this scene like hocus pocus
Split you at the seams, it's unfortunate I'm the one to shit on your dreams
But you gotta realize, you don't fit in rap, like fat girls in last year's jeans
Those short punches you delivered couldn't come close to clippin' Frodo's chin
So what defense you gonna have when my lines put you in a choke hold, kid?
Fuckin' with the Don'll only get you spread out like crimson tapestries
On your front lawn, let your family be eyewitness to the tragedy
Damn straight I'm Italian, so bet I'll be crafty when I'm slayin' you
Quit the audio front, 'cause your a bitch, and that whining voice is betrayin' you
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Old 06-01-2005, 08:37 PM   #5 (permalink)
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if its incest, you'd be part of the family too?


this battle was bland, one nicca had periods out the ass an the other nicca jus didnt have not one remotely good idea, both niccas seemed to try to hard but i guess that doesnt make sense cos you need to try as hard as you can but it was clear yall was too cocky about your skills when you really wasnt that good, like the first nicca sayin he birthed ya style, nevertheless, the second nicca was wack in a good way, he had a decent flow an seemed like he could structure a verse a little bit, but the stuff he was sayin was worthless and simplistic, the first nicca verse was hard to look at with all the periods an his verse wasnt structered very well but his lines were hittin alot harder than the other niccas, atleast he had some decent concepts so vote TETTRIS
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Old 06-01-2005, 10:26 PM   #6 (permalink)
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this was a weak battle, but imma give the vote to Tettris because of this line:

Italian bitch...I oughta hold you hostage...
With a nose that big...the bridge charges your eyebrows a toll to cross it...

^^best line in the battle, and the only one...
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Old 06-01-2005, 10:43 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Thats the Don Vito I like to see..

Big improvement since ya last battle mayne.

Tettris: Had some nice wordplay, and good twists in your flows. But I wasn't feeling ya punches after I read Vito's. No doubt you got Vito in skill of writing the text, but in actual punches I wasn't feeling ya stuff. My favourite lines were " Italian bitch...I oughta hold you hostage...
With a nose that big...the bridge charges your eyebrows a toll to cross it... ".

Don Vito: Nice job. Didn't come outstandingly hard or anything, but you certainly outmatched your opponent in punches (guys, this is the battle league, not topical league, were looking for hard disses!). Started off a bit flimsy but you held it down with some nice punches like " Split you at the seams, it's unfortunate I'm the one to shit on your dreams
But you gotta realize, you don't fit in rap, like fat girls in last year's jeans "and also " Those short punches you delivered couldn't come close to clippin' Frodo's chin
So what defense you gonna have when my lines put you in a choke hold, kid? ".

v/Don Vito, close battle though, peace!
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Old 06-01-2005, 10:59 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Lay Doubt. takes it up the butt!
Wasting my time...see i'm a killer when i spit...
I flip DV...and walk away still with the illest on my dick...
Heard your an emotional guy...a bitch that'll get sewn shut...
My ropes a depressing situation and youre about to get choked up...
Italian bitch...I oughta hold you hostage...
With a nose that big...the bridge charges your eyebrows a toll to cross it...


that section right there ^ took this battle for tettris. don vito's verse didn't match the wittiness of tettris' verse.. pretty one sided, just wasn't feeling don vito's punches very much, sorry.

v/ tettris
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Old 06-01-2005, 11:58 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Unexplainable takes it up the butt!
Punches: Tett
Personals: Tett
Multis: Tett
Metas: Tett
Flow: Tett

Some of the categories were close, but Tett took this easily

VOTE = Tettris

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Old 06-02-2005, 01:19 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Endquote. takes it up the butt!
Tettris took this easy... the opening four were nice... and the "nose/eyebrows" line was fucking hilarious. Vito didn't have much to contend with that. His closer was really nice, kind of grimey, best line of his verse. But still not enough to compete.

Vote: Tett
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Old 06-02-2005, 03:28 PM   #11 (permalink)
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vote Tettris

Don had some nice lines but most were too drawn out, seemed kinda verse


Tettris's verse was o.k., had better punches and shit..seemed like he was a lil more prepared in this wun

Heard your an emotional guy...a bitch that'll get sewn shut...
My ropes a depressing situation and youre about to get choked up...
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Old 06-02-2005, 10:12 PM   #12 (permalink)
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multies-tet
similies/metas-tet


vote-tet, better verse, harder punches
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Old 06-02-2005, 10:50 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Tettris….wasn’t feelin your opening…your play on don’s name seemed like a bit of a stretch

Getting to the details...you'll see shells but not up the shore...
Only time you pull bitches...you're involved in female tug of war...
Dope

Italian bitch...I oughta hold you hostage...
With a nose that big...the bridge charges your eyebrows a toll to cross it...
Cool…kinda funny

Don vito

I'll disperse your pride, pen a verse that blurs your eyes
Leave you heated like sunburns in July on pale thighs

That was the only line that I was really feelin from you…you had some good concepts but didn’t quite pull em off…

Vote=tettris
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Old 06-03-2005, 12:53 AM   #14 (permalink)
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~This battle was lopsided, and all in favor of tet. Better verse, punches, wordplay, etc. blah...blah...blah...There's nothing more to say. Vote = Tet.~
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Old 06-03-2005, 05:48 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Tettris
We can take a vote...but i guarantee your skills won't help...
Trash you democratically when i rip you and Vito your bill of health...
weak
See bitch...i birthed your style...cunning with all of my lines and...
Its a new Don...and you're sonning is on the horizon...
good
Getting to the details...you'll see shells but not up the shore...
Only time you pull bitches...you're involved in female tug of war...
played
Wasting my time...see i'm a killer when i spit...
I flip DV...and walk away still with the illest on my dick...
weak
And fuck shoplifting...you're just a biter thats out to prove...
You're that bitch to steal on...atleast Winona Riders proud of you...
weak
Heard your an emotional guy...a bitch that'll get sewn shut...
My ropes a depressing situation and youre about to get choked up...
ok
Italian bitch...I oughta hold you hostage...
With a nose that big...the bridge charges your eyebrows a toll to cross it...
ok
Guilty of being wack...and your lines are finished kid...
I've got the Juice...
As it Don's on V. that not even Ito would find you innocent...
weak


Don Vito

I'll disperse your pride, pen a verse that blurs your eyes
Leave you heated like sunburns in July on pale thighs
weak
I'm accustomed to shit talkin' dudes, you're just like the rest
One big family, I guess, and I'm forced to fuck ya'll like incest
weak
There's no convincin' me, after this shit you'll be scared to even mention me
Like confessin' to your moms how your father's the cause behind your dented knees
weak
I'm always focused, spit words that destroy your growth like locusts
Tettris, you're hopeless, just vanish from this scene like hocus pocus
weak
Split you at the seams, it's unfortunate I'm the one to shit on your dreams
But you gotta realize, you don't fit in rap, like fat girls in last year's jeans
weak
Those short punches you delivered couldn't come close to clippin' Frodo's chin
So what defense you gonna have when my lines put you in a choke hold, kid?
weak
Fuckin' with the Don'll only get you spread out like crimson tapestries
On your front lawn, let your family be eyewitness to the tragedy
weak
Damn straight I'm Italian, so bet I'll be crafty when I'm slayin' you
Quit the audio front, 'cause your a bitch, and that whining voice is betrayin' you
weak

Vote = Tettris
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Old 06-03-2005, 01:37 PM   #16 (permalink)
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vote - Tettris

he murderd Don Vito lines

based on consistency, everything outshined DV a few lines i felt stood out
but overall its real one sided
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Old 06-03-2005, 05:00 PM   #18 (permalink)
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tettris - decent verse...like some lines...the sonning line was pretty dope...i liked that...had some played stuff too though

vito - came mad simple...too simple to grab the win on this one...similes get kinda tired after a while...don;t exclusively use the typical "you do/are this like this" style next week and you'll improve significantly

vote - tett
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Old 06-03-2005, 05:19 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Tettris you came a whole lot wittier. the consistency of your lines put your verse in another league to other dudes. Don, you had one or two lines worded well, i'm afraid most of your concepts were lacking.

vote- Tettris
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Old 06-03-2005, 08:38 PM   #20 (permalink)
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We can take a vote...but i guarantee your skills won't help...
Trash you democratically when i rip you and Vito your bill of health...
See bitch...i birthed your style...cunning with all of my lines and...
Its a new Don...and you're sonning is on the horizon...
Getting to the details...you'll see shells but not up the shore...
Only time you pull bitches...you're involved in female tug of war...
Wasting my time...see i'm a killer when i spit...
I flip DV...and walk away still with the illest on my dick...
And fuck shoplifting...you're just a biter thats out to prove...
You're that bitch to steal on...atleast Winona Riders proud of you...
Heard your an emotional guy...a bitch that'll get sewn shut...
My ropes a depressing situation and youre about to get choked up...
Italian bitch...I oughta hold you hostage...
With a nose that big...the bridge charges your eyebrows a toll to cross it...
Guilty of being wack...and your lines are finished kid...
I've got the Juice...
As it Don's on V. that not even Ito would find you innocent...
whole verse was fire...
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Quote:
Those short punches you delivered couldn't come close to clippin' Frodo's chin
Ok

Vote = tett, easily...bump this kid up north
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