ExodusIII 0-1 vs. Ninja Kid 4-4

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Old 05-30-2005, 04:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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ExodusIII 0-1 vs. Ninja Kid 4-4



RBL South Rules & Regulations.

-Duedates-
All Verses due Friday night 12:00am pacific.
All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm pacific
(Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

-Line Limit-
All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
A line is 1 length of the screen.

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5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
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Old 05-31-2005, 02:02 AM   #2 (permalink)
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my votes are at d bottom somewhere

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Old 05-31-2005, 02:09 AM   #3 (permalink)
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guess i'll be the 1st to drop this round

we dont need you in the 'pack'
you're the sole reason the south aint up to par
you're just a 'joker' son...and i'm 'pullin your card'
leave you cryin with ya head in ya hands, coiled up
cuz you wouldn't wanna 'see me'
...in a game of poker with a royal flush
not trynna be violent when i hit him with a left n a right
this bitch is cock eyed...i'm just correcting his sight
ninja fell in love with my verse, & now he wants to marry the document
you can take the vowels bitch...(vows)
.'ll b..t y.. w.th th. c.ns.n.nts
i'm only payin compliments, when i say that this guy's stupid
cuz growin up...
his mom's told him to act his age, n not what I.Q. is
beat me? this kid is dreamin, quick somebody pinch him
cuz ninja's trynna 'hang' wit ex...but it's a str8 up lynching
threw some 'punches' in this round n they didn't even 'hit'
should've saved your verse the trouble n just given it a 'miss'
i'll probly get some no show shine n it's this bitches fault
they said he was a 'seasoned' vet...it's more like 'chicken' salt
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Old 06-01-2005, 01:20 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Ninja Kid takes it up the butt!
I won't do it like you, I do it like ninja does,
So now ya situations sticky like when you lick a dutch,
I'm wicked cuz, I get shit lit up,
His mission's fucked, cuz all he got was my dick to suck,
This ain't cards dog, it's rap mother fucker,
You came with a axe to slash mother fuckers,
I came with a mac to blast mother fuckers,
I aimed for ya cap and cracked mother fuckers,
Exodus, stick to ya quest and leave,
You the type of pest i squeeze, with the best of ease,
Essentially, these aren't war games sessions, g,
So you'll die for testin these weaponary,
People stress and sneeze, when my essence' breathed,
So if you mess wit me bitch, necks will bleed,
Pullin my card? nah dog your full of it, tard,
Cuz I won't stop till ya mouth is full of my nards,(eww)
Circles around you, you could'nt've parred,
Got you walkin on strings like what you put on guitars,
This dudes prolly as strait lookin as a pink flamingo,
I got dimes, he still cling's to fling hoes,
Him better? Ya and martin king's a gringo,
Jesus, his rhymes look like he was singin bingo...
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Old 06-01-2005, 06:11 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Exodus
we dont need you in the 'pack'
you're the sole reason the south aint up to par
you're just a 'joker' son...and i'm 'pullin your card'
ok
leave you cryin with ya head in ya hands, coiled up
cuz you wouldn't wanna 'see me'
...in a game of poker with a royal flush
weak
not trynna be violent when i hit him with a left n a right
this bitch is cock eyed...i'm just correcting his sight
good
ninja fell in love with my verse, & now he wants to marry the document
you can take the vowels bitch...(vows)
.'ll b..t y.. w.th th. c.ns.n.nts
weak
i'm only payin compliments, when i say that this guy's stupid
cuz growin up...
his mom's told him to act his age, n not what I.Q. is
straight
beat me? this kid is dreamin, quick somebody pinch him
cuz ninja's trynna 'hang' wit ex...but it's a str8 up lynching
played concept
threw some 'punches' in this round n they didn't even 'hit'
should've saved your verse the trouble n just given it a 'miss'
nope
i'll probly get some no show shine n it's this bitches fault
they said he was a 'seasoned' vet...it's more like 'chicken' salt
nice

NinJa Kid
won't do it like you, I do it like ninja does,
So now ya situations sticky like when you lick a dutch,
BLunt lines eem like the new thing to you, but weak
I'm wicked cuz, I get shit lit up,
His mission's fucked, cuz all he got was my dick to suck,
weak
This ain't cards dog, it's rap mother fucker,
You came with a axe to slash mother fuckers,
weak
I came with a mac to blast mother fuckers,
I aimed for ya cap and cracked mother fuckers,
weak
Exodus, stick to ya quest and leave,
You the type of pest i squeeze, with the best of ease,
weak
Essentially, these aren't war games sessions, g,
So you'll die for testin these weaponary,
weak
People stress and sneeze, when my essence' breathed,
So if you mess wit me bitch, necks will bleed,
weak
Pullin my card? nah dog your full of it, tard,
Cuz I won't stop till ya mouth is full of my nards,(eww)
weak
Circles around you, you could'nt've parred,
Got you walkin on strings like what you put on guitars,
ok
This dudes prolly as strait lookin as a pink flamingo,
I got dimes, he still cling's to fling hoes,
Him better? Ya and martin king's a gringo,
Jesus, his rhymes look like he was singin bingo...
weak

Nija you need to add better wordplay in ya shit

Vote = Exodus
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Old 06-01-2005, 12:32 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Exodus-overall your verse was pretty nice, I wasn't really feeling all the poker punches and shit though...but as your verse went on it got slightly better and a little more enjoyable. The vowels and vows line was pretty damn creative....i was really rolling on that part.

Quote:
fav lines:

not trynna be violent when i hit him with a left n a right
this bitch is cock eyed...i'm just correcting his sight
ninja fell in love with my verse, & now he wants to marry the document
you can take the vowels bitch...(vows)
.'ll b..t y.. w.th th. c.ns.n.nts
ninja- well your verse was a little bit on the ehhh side...I think you could add a little more to make your verse a bit more likeable or rather not so bland. However, I did like the motherfuckers in numerous end rhymes...reminded me kinda of a Jay-Z type flow...but I think you should try and word things a bit different and improve a little on the solidity of your punches...you'll be fine with time though

Quote:
fav lines:

This ain't cards dog, it's rap mother fucker,
You came with a axe to slash mother fuckers,
I came with a mac to blast mother fuckers,
I aimed for ya cap and cracked mother fuckers,
vote=exodus
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Old 06-01-2005, 03:44 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Exodus - aight verse...some pretty decent wordplay...liked the chicken salt line...and i liked the IQ line...pretty nice punches there

ninja kid - ur verse read more like an open mic than a battle...a few attempts at punches were evident, but for the most part you came kinda weak...i suggest readin some battles up in the North get some ideas there...stay up

vote - Exodus
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Old 06-01-2005, 10:32 PM   #8 (permalink)
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vote-Exodus

im givin him the vote because he actually had some punches and Ninja posting some open mic shit or wat eva that verse was.
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Old 06-02-2005, 12:05 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Exodus punches killed this one... had some nice ideas and they flowed well too... Ninja u just werent on point this battle... the whole mother fuckers section made me lose interest and really dropped the quality of your verse...

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Old 06-02-2005, 01:34 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Endquote. takes it up the butt!
Ninja had an awesome flow... but he wasn't really hitting anything. It's too bad... if you just put a little more effort toward punchin you'd kick alot more ass. ex def didnt have NK's flow, but he punched, and it landed. Fav line was the consonants. Not that his verse was spectacular in the way of punches, but he did punch, he battled. Ninja didn't so much.

So Ex wins IMO.
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Old 06-02-2005, 10:26 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Yeah..ninja had the better flow...unfortunately this is a battle

vote exodus


i'll probly get some no show shine n it's this bitches fault
they said he was a 'seasoned' vet...it's more like 'chicken' salt

lol this was iight

had a few other good ones but this is one of the ones that stood out the most.
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Old 06-02-2005, 05:33 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Exodus...

Not a bad drop, it was an easy win, though. You had some good shit, lots of potential. Shit is ill, though, 'cause we're both up and comin'.

we dont need you in the 'pack'
you're the sole reason the south aint up to par
you're just a 'joker' son...and i'm 'pullin your card'
leave you cryin with ya head in ya hands, coiled up
cuz you wouldn't wanna 'see me'
...in a game of poker with a royal flush
not trynna be violent when i hit him with a left n a right
this bitch is cock eyed...i'm just correcting his sight


You were killin' it with that, but you tried too hard to take advantage of battlin' in text, and fucked shit up with that crazy

you can take the vowels bitch...(vows)
.'ll b..t y.. w.th th. c.ns.n.nts


But you won, so congrats.

Ninja Kid...

No good, dog. What happened? Last week you seemed pretty straight, but you fell off bad right here, son.

Vote = Exodus
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Old 06-02-2005, 08:19 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Dont know whats going on, but I saw this totally different.

Exodus came mediocre, dropped some alright stuff but nothing special, best line was your closer "i'll probly get some no show shine n it's this bitches fault
they said he was a 'seasoned' vet...it's more like 'chicken' salt", it was aite. I totally wasn't feeling that IQ shit its real played.

Ninja Kid came with his same flow like always (not dissin you, im feelin dat), you started off a bit better then Exodus but I wasn't feeling " This ain't cards dog, it's rap mother fucker,
You came with a axe to slash mother fuckers,
I came with a mac to blast mother fuckers,
I aimed for ya cap and cracked mother fuckers" because it just didn't sound too pro, but it still flowed well and you did come back with some nice shit like " Pullin my card? nah dog your full of it, tard,
Cuz I won't stop till ya mouth is full of my nards,(eww)
Circles around you, you could'nt've parred,
Got you walkin on strings like what you put on guitars " . You've got a good flow, and that gace you the edge with my vote.

v/ Ninja Kid

PS: You can say what you like about my vote, I dont GAS, just bein honest I was feeling Ninja's flow a lot more than the standard structure of Exodus's verse that we see so often.
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Old 06-02-2005, 10:23 PM   #14 (permalink)
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both verses were kinda ehhh imo..


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Old 06-03-2005, 04:43 PM   #15 (permalink)
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weak battle..

like dude said Ninja your verse reads like an open mic, nothing to quote.
Ex you came slightly better, but you at least had punches.

vote- Exodus
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Old 06-04-2005, 11:15 AM   #17 (permalink)
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8-0 ExodusIII wins (first to 8) 1-1
Ninja Kid loses 4-5
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