Oliver Twist 1-0 vs. Punch 1-0

[Super.]

RBL North Rules & Regulations.

-Duedates-
All Verses due Friday night 12:00 Pacific time.
All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 10:00 EST
(Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

-Line Limit-
All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
A line is 1 length of the screen.

-Voting-
5 Votes per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
Voting is open to anyone with at least 100 posts.
No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!

-General Rules-
--No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask
--No editing after BOTH verses are posted
--Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
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[Punch______]

Checkin in.....
You call it, how many lines?

[Oliver Twist]

match me

[Oliver Twist]

Snappin ur frame, I'ma have to kill another rapper in vain
U'll be seein a flat line longer than the one after ur name
He said the wrong thing, I swung, now his jaw is swelling
& if u keep on talking dun u'll see God Son like Nas's belly
U aint got no vocal skills dunny its bigger than bling bling
So I'll lock u up just to see if u can really SingSing
In the game of life I'm startin, but staight suck dude
Because u reside on the bench more than a judge do
U the type to creep up & try to hit a brotha, but
I'll put my dick to ya lips cuz ur just a sucker Punch

[Punch______]

Originally Posted by Oliver Twist

Crib: Rap Orphanage

Matched ya 10, I was hopin to drop like 16.


You’d kill to be North, but ya opener isn’t a scare
Cause Al Murder U is a threat that just isn’t there
So I don’t care, like u being an orphan to rap….I laughed
That means you got caught in the game without a wrap
Punch is the perfect act, even so you’re still a fake
And in this game if I’m wrong, your still the big mistake
Your magic’s late, no showtime the game isn’t 4 O.T.
Cause after regulation his assists only abbreviate H.I.V.
See fact is your gay, put your foot in your mouth faggit
Even if I used punches, only you can kick the habit

[Copywritten]

Snappin ur frame, I'ma have to kill another rapper in vain
U'll be seein a flat line longer than the one after ur name
very nice personal
He said the wrong thing, I swung, now his jaw is swelling
& if u keep on talking dun u'll see God Son like Nas's belly
good
U aint got no vocal skills dunny its bigger than bling bling
So I'll lock u up just to see if u can really SingSing
haha
In the game of life I'm startin, but staight suck dude
Because u reside on the bench more than a judge do
ehh, aight
U the type to creep up & try to hit a brotha, but
I'll put my dick to ya lips cuz ur just a sucker Punch
best line in the match


You’d kill to be North, but ya opener isn’t a scare
Cause Al Murder U is a threat that just isn’t there
ehh, playing off his verse..kinda gay
So I don’t care, like u being an orphan to rap….I laughed
That means you got caught in the game without a wrap
weak, bad flow
Punch is the perfect act, even so you’re still a fake
And in this game if I’m wrong, your still the big mistake
...
Your magic’s late, no showtime the game isn’t 4 O.T.
Cause after regulation his assists only abbreviate H.I.V.
wtf? retarded
See fact is your gay, put your foot in your mouth faggit
Even if I used punches, only you can kick the habit
played

Oliver, you had a solid verse with online 1 line I didn't really..and that line probably hit harder than Punch's best.
Punch, I hope you posted that verse because you knew you couldn't beat it and didn't have to waste good lines, because that was horrible.

In this match Oliver looked like he's outta Punch's league.
Vote - Oliver

[Punch______]

Copywritten there should be laws against faggets voting, go jack off to your boyfriend.

[Copywritten]

You got merked, bitch.

[krazed15]

yo this was an iight battle i inticipated more for some reason....
but i was feelin olivers opener he came in and cought punch lovely with the flat line bar... pretty creative dude...
punch ur verse was lacking dude in most areas u had an alright flow... but theres was just too much nonsense to look past... so u loose.

vote:oliver

[Punch______]

Originally Posted by Copywritten

You got merked, bitch.

I'd rather be a bad text battler than a fucking faggit....seriously you are a faggit, don't make me post the picture.

[Mr.13]

this was a bad battle but oliver twist came with the better punches
he also had a more consistent flow..
punchs said a few hot lines..
but in the end I felt

vote .. oliver....
pz

[Soular Guided]

Oliver...

'Snappin ur frame, I'ma have to kill another rapper in vain
U'll be seein a flat line longer than the one after ur name ' - lmao

'He said the wrong thing, I swung, now his jaw is swelling
& if u keep on talking dun u'll see God Son like Nas's belly'- Nice


Punch...

'You’d kill to be North, but ya opener isn’t a scare
Cause Al Murder U is a threat that just isn’t there' - Nice...

Vote=Oliver

[purfeksion]

Decent battle. Oliver had the better overall verse. The only line that I was feeling from Punch was the one about Al Murder U. Oliver's best line was the Nas one.

Not bad.

Vote - Oliver Twist

[Al Murder U]

ive been seeing my name in a lotta battles recently....im must be getin my name out there...


Snappin ur frame, I'ma have to kill another rapper in vain
U'll be seein a flat line longer than the one after ur name
He said the wrong thing, I swung, now his jaw is swelling
& if u keep on talking dun u'll see God Son like Nas's belly


vs

You’d kill to be North, but ya opener isn’t a scare
Cause Al Murder U is a threat that just isn’t there


From what i took it as....dunno bout it tho, rest of the verse was iffy to me...



vote-oliver...

[penacILLin]

oliver:

Snappin ur frame, I'ma have to kill another rapper in vain
U'll be seein a flat line longer than the one after ur name

nice.

He said the wrong thing, I swung, now his jaw is swelling
& if u keep on talking dun u'll see God Son like Nas's belly

..nice.

U aint got no vocal skills dunny its bigger than bling bling
So I'll lock u up just to see if u can really SingSing

pretty good.

In the game of life I'm startin, but staight suck dude
Because u reside on the bench more than a judge do

blehh it was alright.

U the type to creep up & try to hit a brotha, but
I'll put my dick to ya lips cuz ur just a sucker Punch

dope closer. either the best line of yours or 2nd.

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punch:

You’d kill to be North, but ya opener isn’t a scare
Cause Al Murder U is a threat that just isn’t there

lol pretty nice.

So I don’t care, like u being an orphan to rap….I laughed
That means you got caught in the game without a wrap

pretty good...not the best.

Punch is the perfect act, even so you’re still a fake
And in this game if I’m wrong, your still the big mistake

blehh you're approaching a more sly-type-of punch here..but you kinda worded it wrong.

Your magic’s late, no showtime the game isn’t 4 O.T.
Cause after regulation his assists only abbreviate H.I.V.

pretty good.

See fact is your gay, put your foot in your mouth faggit
Even if I used punches, only you can kick the habit

lol nice.

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overall i just see oliver taking this since he came more wittier with better punches, flow, and creativity and all. punch didn't come too bad but he didn't have any outstanding lines that coulld make me yell-oh like hobo's teeth. pretty good battle though in my opinion...stay up punch, don't let haters and shit get to you..just don't mouth off to voters lol you got talent..keep it up. so what if you lose one battle..don't give up. oliver gets this..keep it up guys.

vote - oliver.

[KOzS]

Originally Posted by Oliver Twist

Snappin ur frame, I'ma have to kill another rapper in vain
U'll be seein a flat line longer than the one after ur name
ouch

He said the wrong thing, I swung, now his jaw is swelling
& if u keep on talking dun u'll see God Son like Nas's belly
strait

U aint got no vocal skills dunny its bigger than bling bling
So I'll lock u up just to see if u can really SingSing
I must say, I don't get this... so I'm not counting it,

In the game of life I'm startin, but staight suck dude
Because u reside on the bench more than a judge do
nice

U the type to creep up & try to hit a brotha, but
I'll put my dick to ya lips cuz ur just a sucker Punch
lmao

Originally Posted by Punch______

Matched ya 10, I was hopin to drop like 16.


You’d kill to be North, but ya opener isn’t a scare
Cause Al Murder U is a threat that just isn’t there
I get it, but I don't see a hit..

So I don’t care, like u being an orphan to rap….I laughed
That means you got caught in the game without a wrap
ok

Punch is the perfect act, even so you’re still a fake
And in this game if I’m wrong, your still the big mistake
ok

Your magic’s late, no showtime the game isn’t 4 O.T.
Cause after regulation his assists only abbreviate H.I.V.
nah

See fact is your gay, put your foot in your mouth faggit
Even if I used punches, only you can kick the habit
eh

vote OT

[BlackDef]

Upping For Votes

[DeadKing]

Snappin ur frame, I'ma have to kill another rapper in vain
U'll be seein a flat line longer than the one after ur name

dopest line of the battle



You’d kill to be North, but ya opener isn’t a scare
Cause Al Murder U is a threat that just isn’t there


lol, this kat gotta be feeling how everything thinks hes wack


punchs verse really didnt say much, punches were very ehhhh....

and twist had a much better flow anyways.....

plus that opener sealed it right off the bat, even though i loved the al murder line....

vote - twist

[Strike]

8-0 twist wins