MFB 1-0 VS TrueEmcee 0-2

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Old 02-15-2005, 10:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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MFB 1-0 VS TrueEmcee 0-2




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All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 10:00 EST
(Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

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Old 02-17-2005, 07:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Well they say numbers don’t lie and it’s truly a fucking sin…
When last week the votes against me are the same as your wins…
No one knows who you are…so they’re the facts whore…
You reaching the north is a slower walk then postin’ on the board…
Put ya money where ya mouth is, you'll be in debt fag...
Let’s be honest...your verse has more filler then Tek’s mag…
I’m the man homie… the south ain’t got anyone iller…
True has more dudes grabin’ his crotch then Jacko in Thriller…
With a name like True, you're the reason parents shouldn't have kids…
Cause everyone has the right to be ugly, but you abused the privilege…

a nice no show verse for ya....
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Old 02-17-2005, 09:51 PM   #4 (permalink)
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TrueEmcee takes it up the butt!
goin against me... look at this grave ya pourin'
ya mother's regretted the decision not to take an abortion
it's all cancelled out as i'll lay mfb to an infinite dream now
what'chu been doin wit ya life... you almost at sixteen thou
have ya scream now... mad at the world, for once ya breathless
closest thing to love, cuz we both know you never had a girl
beggin ya sister for a sip of the candy store
ya kindred teachin ya how to deal like mandy moore
took me less than two seconds two write this verse
but this M.otha F.uckin B.itch won't know,
he's gon leave this night in a herse...
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Old 02-17-2005, 11:57 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Well they say numbers don’t lie and it’s truly a fucking sin…
When last week the votes against me are the same as your wins…
No one knows who you are…so they’re the facts whore…
You reaching the north is a slower walk then postin’ on the board…
Put ya money where ya mouth is, you'll be in debt fag...
Let’s be honest...your verse has more filler then Tek’s mag…
I’m the man homie… the south ain’t got anyone iller…
True has more dudes grabin’ his crotch then Jacko in Thriller…
With a name like True, you're the reason parents shouldn't have kids…
Cause everyone has the right to be ugly, but you abused the privilege…



nice shit


vs

trueemcee. sign out of the league. cancel your internet connection, pick up a metalica cd, and never, ever, think about rap again.



obvious, mfb...
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Old 02-18-2005, 12:48 AM   #6 (permalink)
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vote-MFB

actually had a battle verse....
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Old 02-18-2005, 03:48 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Vote = MFB

dont got a clue what the fuck True was spittin there....99% didnt rhyme and 1% was hitting hard...shit was wack...MFB had striaght punch and flow combining to destroy True in this battle...one sided BIG time...enough said
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Old 02-18-2005, 09:31 AM   #8 (permalink)
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goin against me... look at this grave ya pourin'
ya mother's regretted the decision not to take an abortion
NO

it's all cancelled out as i'll lay mfb to an infinite dream now
what'chu been doin wit ya life... you almost at sixteen thou
HUH

have ya scream now... mad at the world, for once ya breathless
closest thing to love, cuz we both know you never had a girl
ABSOLUTEY NOT

beggin ya sister for a sip of the candy store
ya kindred teachin ya how to deal like mandy moore
WHERE ARE YOU GOIN W/ THIS

took me less than two seconds two write this verse
but this M.otha F.uckin B.itch won't know,
he's gon leave this night in a herse...
AWFUL

MFB
Well they say numbers don’t lie and it’s truly a fucking sin…
When last week the votes against me are the same as your wins…
UHHH NICE

No one knows who you are…so they’re the facts whore…
You reaching the north is a slower walk then postin’ on the board…
EHHH

Put ya money where ya mouth is, you'll be in debt fag...
Let’s be honest...your verse has more filler then Tek’s mag…
HA COO

I’m the man homie… the south ain’t got anyone iller…
True has more dudes grabin’ his crotch then Jacko in Thriller…
HA HA AIIGHT (kinda Played bUT)

With a name like True, you're the reason parents shouldn't have kids…
Cause everyone has the right to be ugly, but you abused the privilege…
ILLL CLOSER

vote=mfb for having a solid verse
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Old 02-18-2005, 09:33 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Yung Impression takes it up the butt!
vote-MFB nice verse, u'll be moving to the North in no time, good punches and flow and overall a way better verse than TE
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Old 02-18-2005, 10:21 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Copywritten takes it up the butt!
This battle was closer than I thought it should be, but MFB had better punches and came at him a lot harder. Both verses seemed rushed, so it wasn't the best battle I've ever read, nor the worst.

Put ya money where ya mouth is, you'll be in debt fag...
Let’s be honest...your verse has more filler then Tek’s mag
..probably the best line in the match right there

Vote - MFB
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Old 02-18-2005, 11:12 AM   #11 (permalink)
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This battle was lopsided.

MFB had some ill lines with both the opener and closer. The jacko line was cool, made me think of the retarded scene in the video. So ya had like 3 lines i really felt.

True had the abortion line as the only line i felt at all, but that shits played to death.
Just didn't bring the heat this week.

Vote- MFB
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Old 02-18-2005, 04:15 PM   #12 (permalink)
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lol true wasnt as bad as people make it out to be...but yer lines were a bit cliche and overused...and not all complexx thass cool..cause south is the division where yer supposed to learn but its gay when people jus tell you you were shit...specially when at least half couldnt write a dope verse to save their life so dont mind em...
yer flow was pretty decent sometimes nice sometimes choppy it was clear what you wanted to say you need to make it a little more surprising tho dont jus lay it out..write it like a joke where U really want to see the clou feel me?

MFB lol I spent too much time critiquein True but yer verse was cool could use some more edge at time..like stop playin go for the troath feel me...thass all really everything else its a nice verse

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Old 02-18-2005, 05:06 PM   #13 (permalink)
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MFB:

Well they say numbers don’t lie and it’s truly a fucking sin…
When last week the votes against me are the same as your wins…

pretty good.

No one knows who you are…so they’re the facts whore…
You reaching the north is a slower walk then postin’ [ ] on the board…

lmao nice.

Put ya money where ya mouth is, you'll be in debt fag...
Let’s be honest...your verse has more filler then Tek’s mag…

lol everyone likes concepts about teks mag this week, it was okay.

I’m the man homie… the south ain’t got anyone iller…
True has more dudes grabin’ his crotch then Jacko in Thriller…

ahahaha. pretty nice.

With a name like True, you're the reason parents shouldn't have kids…
Cause everyone has the right to be ugly, but you abused the privilege…

LOL it was dope, but its played and maybe a recycled line? it was good though.

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true emcee:

goin against me... look at this grave ya pourin'
ya mother's regretted the decision not to take an abortion

pretty good.

it's all cancelled out as i'll lay mfb to an infinite dream now
what'chu been doin wit ya life... you almost at sixteen thou

bleh, it was okay..didn't flow too well.

have ya scream now... mad at the world, for once ya breathless
closest thing to love, cuz we both know you never had a girl

bleh this line fucked up your structure, and messed up the flow on it.

beggin ya sister for a sip of the candy store
ya kindred teachin ya how to deal like mandy moore

pretty good.

took me less than two seconds two write this verse
but this M.otha F.uckin B.itch won't know,
he's gon leave this night in a herse...

blah, i'm not really feeling the closer. i hate the "i'll this, i'll that" type of lines, and what'll happen lol.

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overall i'm seeing MFB taking this battle. it wasn't as big as a blow out as the other voters stated it as. true emcee, it seems like you rush your verse..don't do that. your punches weren't all that bad, just alotta filler. MFB had more punches, his flow was alright. overall MFB just came a bit wittier.

vote - MFB
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Old 02-19-2005, 04:15 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Old 02-19-2005, 11:11 AM   #15 (permalink)
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True -

goin against me... look at this grave ya pourin'
ya mother's regretted the decision not to take an abortion
ok
it's all cancelled out as i'll lay mfb to an infinite dream now
what'chu been doin wit ya life... you almost at sixteen thou
lol nice
have ya scream now... mad at the world, for once ya breathless
closest thing to love, cuz we both know you never had a girl
rhyme?
beggin ya sister for a sip of the candy store
ya kindred teachin ya how to deal like mandy moore
wasn't feelin that
took me less than two seconds two write this verse
but this M.otha F.uckin B.itch won't know,
he's gon leave this night in a herse...
concept is played.

MFB -

Well they say numbers don’t lie and it’s truly a fucking sin…
When last week the votes against me are the same as your wins…
nice
No one knows who you are…so they’re the facts whore…
You reaching the north is a slower walk then postin’ on the board…
eh
Put ya money where ya mouth is, you'll be in debt fag...
Let’s be honest...your verse has more filler then Tek’s mag…
seen something like this in a few other battles this week
I’m the man homie… the south ain’t got anyone iller…
True has more dudes grabin’ his crotch then Jacko in Thriller…
nice
With a name like True, you're the reason parents shouldn't have kids…
Cause everyone has the right to be ugly, but you abused the privilege…
good closer

Overall better showing by MFB.
vote = MFB
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Old 02-19-2005, 03:38 PM   #16 (permalink)
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True - Hopefully, you're new to this, so I'm not gonna diss you. Just make sure that the last word in each couplet rhymes.

MFB - First two lines were kinda funny. Last three were weak. I've seen you do better, and it's obvious why you didn't try.

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Old 02-19-2005, 07:40 PM   #17 (permalink)
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MFB...

'Well they say numbers don’t lie and it’s truly a fucking sin…
When last week the votes against me are the same as your wins…' - LMAOOOO...

True..

The mandy moore reference... lets everyone know you listen to Mandy Moore!

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Old 02-20-2005, 03:24 PM   #18 (permalink)
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This wasn't too close at all. MFB had come cool lines...wasn't feeling anything from TE

TrueEmcee...you rhymed "breathless" with "girl"

please kill yourself

MFB got this easily

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Old 02-20-2005, 10:58 PM   #19 (permalink)
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