Bern E. Lomaxx 1-0 VS Copywritten 1-0

[TeKneeK]

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[Copywritten]

I'm in..go 12?

[Bern E. Lomaxx]

sounds good.

[Bern E. Lomaxx]

turn my headphones up!!!The left one, turn dat shit up!



uhh, check it



Three words PLAYED AS FUCK, so now its time i son you whore
an everybody knows that if its Copywritten, than it's been done before.
He loves the internet cuz you can pose as a man an front huh?
Plus its where he posts his pics of him holdin hands with Usher!
So here's my 12 lines thats all i need to drop his rank
cuz I'm just makin an ass outta copy like fuckin office pranks.
All ya pics are with ya shirtless friends, my god this kid is a bitch
Liftin mad weight?
..Now we got evidence that the whole black cock shit isn't a myth.
no more pic disses?, but i got 1 more i have to throw tho
Copy's just a bit gay and ashamed like the guy that snapped the photos.
I'm a pro yo and you're gonna die for certain this time
heads say ya lines are: ehhh, blaah, Fuckin ASS!!! like behind the curtain replys!

good writtens.

[Copywritten]

Post your picture.

[Copywritten]

Since you used my pic, I’ll play off your verse and son you more
Cuz damn bro, every “Copywritten” line you used was already done before
Kids a pussy little bitch that blows fags, I know facts
The last half of his name came from his bench press…Lo-max
I'll give ya some advice, sign out or it'll surely beat up ya health
Cuz you gonna Bern up, if you can't take the heat of the south
This kid’s rappin’ for promo’s, but yo I’m smackin this homo
The truth is..
There ain’t no picture of bern cuz it was him actually snappin’ the photo
I’ma starting 5 type player, bench rider ain’t get run at ball
Call yourself Bern, Cuz you ain’t getting none at all
Youre unknown and boring, and we can tell this whore just ain’t thirsty
Because the only Bernie worth looking at, wore a Yanks jersey

[MFB]

well one used a pic and one didnt so i guess Copywritten was at a disadvantage from the start. This is how i broke it down:

Bern E. Lomaxx

4 lines i were feelin'

He loves the internet cuz you can pose as a man an front huh?
Plus its where he posts his pics of him holdin hands with Usher!
&
So here's my 12 lines thats all i need to drop his rank
cuz I'm just makin an ass outta copy like fuckin office pranks.

Copywritten

6 lines i was feelin'

Kids a pussy little bitch that blows fags, I know facts
The last half of his name came from his bench press…Lo-max
&
This kid’s rappin’ for promo’s, but yo I’m smackin this homo
The truth is..
There ain’t no picture of bern cuz it was him actually snappin’ the photo
&
Youre unknown and boring, and we can tell this whore just ain’t thirsty
Because the only Bernie worth looking at, wore a Yanks jersey

Overall good battle, but Copywritten had more standout lines in my opinion. Goodluck next week to both competitors

vote-Copywritten

[Al Murder U]

Three words PLAYED AS FUCK, so now its time i son you whore
an everybody knows that if its Copywritten, than it's been done before.
He loves the internet cuz you can pose as a man an front huh?
Plus its where he posts his pics of him holdin hands with Usher!
So here's my 12 lines thats all i need to drop his rank
cuz I'm just makin an ass outta copy like fuckin office pranks.
All ya pics are with ya shirtless friends, my god this kid is a bitch
Liftin mad weight?
..Now we got evidence that the whole black cock shit isn't a myth.
no more pic disses?, but i got 1 more i have to throw tho
Copy's just a bit gay and ashamed like the guy that snapped the photos


vs


Kids a pussy little bitch that blows fags, I know facts
The last half of his name came from his bench press…Lo-max

This kid’s rappin’ for promo’s, but yo I’m smackin this homo
The truth is..
There ain’t no picture of bern cuz it was him actually snappin’ the photo



kinda one sided battle...



bern-e got it.

[Punch______]

Bern E. Lomaxx took this one. I'm not going to put up quotes because the picture says it all. Copywritten got his rep murdered.


Bern E. Lomaxx embarassed you.



Vote = Bern

[Strike]

well Lomaxx made a kind of fucked up move usin the pic and not supplyin one..but his verse simply hit harder both had cool lines...but berns had more edge and freshness then copies..sorry

vote bern

[Monch]

vote-copy...
even wit the disadvatnage...i think he edged this one out wit more consistancy of connects...
i didnt even like bern's verse 2 much

some nice but i didn't find it as enuff

line of the battle:

Kids a pussy little bitch that blows fags, I know facts
The last half of his name came from his bench press…Lo-max

[Copywritten]

Bern E. pullin' some bitch shit..you know thats the only way you gonna win, right?

[Al Murder U]

i do understand the pic can be considered a bitch move, but thats the result of putting pics online, people can access them, and its just something people can use against you...like people can use the games tounge ring and change of heart shit against him, it's part of the game we play.

[Lord Abbadon]

Vote = Copywritten

Copy dropped some nicer lines....overall he hit harder with better lines...bern had some played lines...and his goods were not good enough to win this battle...the pic punches were weak...based the whole battle round it, stupid....Copy got ya ass this battle...good battle though

[Noobie Ned]

vote = bern

he had by far the best line of the battle:

So here's my 12 lines thats all i need to drop his rank
cuz I'm just makin an ass outta copy like fuckin office pranks.

This also hit:

no more pic disses?, but i got 1 more i have to throw tho
Copy's just a bit gay and ashamed like the guy that snapped the photos.


Copy could match the heat of either of those lines

[Bern E. Lomaxx]

i dont got a pic online, searched your posts...saw one battle (a no-show verse) and saw a picture thread.

bitch move or not, thats how it goes.

4-3 me.

[GammoN]

hmm..interesting..

Bern:

All ya pics are with ya shirtless friends, my god this kid is a bitch
Liftin mad weight?
..Now we got evidence that the whole black cock shit isn't a myth.

Last time I checked the 'black cock myth' was a good thing..you just basically said that he was 'hung'..nohomo..

I'm a pro yo and you're gonna die for certain this time
heads say ya lines are: ehhh, blaah, Fuckin ASS!!! like behind the curtain replys!
^best punch in your verse..

Using the pic is messed up, man..crutches ain't cool..

Copywritten..

Youre unknown and boring, and we can tell this whore just ain’t thirsty
Because the only Bernie worth looking at, wore a Yanks jersey
^good stuff, C..

Kids a pussy little bitch that blows fags, I know facts
The last half of his name came from his bench press…Lo-max
^good wordplay here..

Vote: Copywritten..his punches were wittier..

[Copywritten]

Originally Posted by Rezor_X

three words PLAYED AS FUCK, so now its time i son you whore
an everybody knows that if its Copywritten, than it's been done before.
decent

He loves the internet cuz you can pose as a man an front huh?
Plus its where he posts his pics of him holdin hands with Usher!
ehhh, forced

So here's my 12 lines thats all i need to drop his rank
cuz I'm just makin an ass outta copy like fuckin office pranks.
ok


All ya pics are with ya shirtless friends, my god this kid is a bitch
Liftin mad weight?
..Now we got evidence that the whole black cock shit isn't a myth.
nope

no more pic disses?, but i got 1 more i have to throw tho
Copy's just a bit gay and ashamed like the guy that snapped the photos.
ok

I'm a pro yo and you're gonna die for certain this time
heads say ya lines are: ehhh, blaah, Fuckin ASS!!! like behind the curtain replys!
no


Since you used my pic, I’ll play off your verse and son you more
Cuz damn bro, every “Copywritten” line you used was already done before
ok

Kids a pussy little bitch that blows fags, I know facts
The last half of his name came from his bench press…Lo-max
decent

I'll give ya some advice, sign out or it'll surely beat up ya health
Cuz you gonna Bern up, if you can't take the heat of the south
no


This kid’s rappin’ for promo’s, but yo I’m smackin this homo
The truth is..
There ain’t no picture of bern cuz it was him actually snappin’ the photo
nice

I’ma starting 5 type player, bench rider ain’t get run at ball
Call yourself Bern, Cuz you ain’t getting none at all
no

Youre unknown and boring, and we can tell this whore just ain’t thirsty
Because the only Bernie worth looking at, wore a Yanks jersey
ok


pretty close but

vote = copy

the photo line done it for me

Rezor voted in emcee hookups, so I just copy & pasted it here..
Here's the link: Bern E. Lomaxx 1-0 VS Copywritten 1-0


Votes are 5-4, favoring me.

[penacILLin]

bern e:

Three words PLAYED AS FUCK, so now its time i son you whore
an everybody knows that if its Copywritten, than it's been done before.

pretty good.

He loves the internet cuz you can pose as a man an front huh?
Plus its where he posts his pics of him holdin hands with Usher!

ahahaha dope punch here, nice one.

So here's my 12 lines thats all i need to drop his rank
cuz I'm just makin an ass outta copy like fuckin office pranks.

lmfao this had me cracking up.

All ya pics are with ya shirtless friends, my god this kid is a bitch
Liftin mad weight?
..Now we got evidence that the whole black cock shit isn't a myth.

lol. nice.

no more pic disses?, but i got 1 more i have to throw tho
Copy's just a bit gay and ashamed like the guy that snapped the photos.

blehhh, wasn't feeling it too much.

I'm a pro yo and you're gonna die for certain this time
heads say ya lines are: ehhh, blaah, Fuckin ASS!!! like behind the curtain replys!

lol pretty good closer.

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copywritten:

Since you used my pic, I’ll play off your verse and son you more
Cuz damn bro, every “Copywritten” line you used was already done before

i hate playing off verses, but i'll give this one to ya..it was pretty dope and it gets boring after hearing so many of the same old ass played lines done over and over.

Kids a pussy little bitch that blows fags, I know facts
The last half of his name came from his bench press…Lo-max

nice.

I'll give ya some advice, sign out or it'll surely beat up ya health
Cuz you gonna Bern up, if you can't take the heat of the south

nice.

This kid’s rappin’ for promo’s, but yo I’m smackin this homo
The truth is..
There ain’t no picture of bern cuz it was him actually snappin’ the photo

lmao pretty good.

I’ma starting 5 type player, bench rider ain’t get run at ball
Call yourself Bern, Cuz you ain’t getting none at all

lol pretty good, kinda falling off.

Youre unknown and boring, and we can tell this whore just ain’t thirsty
Because the only Bernie worth looking at, wore a Yanks jersey

nice.

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overall, as everyone else said..copywritten was at a disadvantage but he still came out with confidence and pure fire. bern-e had some okay lines, kinda stayed on the pic/copywrite played lines. you came alright though. copywrite came out with better punches, flowed more nicely, and came wittier plus at a disadvantage..he gets it by edging it out a bit.

vote - copywritten

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[Super.]

upping.