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hmm....ill break it down for the noobs.
Maybe in your world, ur dope, but tha test is now.
Stop runnin in circles, then tell me ur still the best around.
nto a bad concept, couldve been worded a lot better
Fag has sportsmanship, but suttins not plain to see.
You understandingly swallow the L, but explain the D.
nah this wasnt workin, no solid punch
Take time to develop, skill's slow, i aint trynna trick or yank foo's.
But by judgin..
U must of tested the water, then dove in wit bricks on ya ankles.
seen this before, but it was alright. a little forced.
Cracked out's an excuse, n yes i know tha yay rhymes are played.
But tha only thing solid behind ya lines is a possible razorblade.
haha, this i actually was feelin. nice line
Things travel in flocks, mainly tha weak, n' rhymes is some of them.
Which is explained perfect in ya verse.. wit lines 1 thru 10.
nah, not working
Names say a lot, n' over before it started is wat yours express.
By tha looks of it..
T's jus minus tha W even before he (W)recks.
pretty decent nameplay, a little forced but it got the job done. decent verse, try not to stretch shit out as much.
Kid, you think you're dope? Son, w/ u, we have no reason to fear
Cause yo, this battle is sure to all come down to the wire.... here
...no punch
Plus this kid is just a clown, yo, with these wins, I'm takin' several
Shit, I tried to see eye to eye here, but u just can't reach my level
seen this a million times, and this wasnt a good one
I'm a shoe-in for this battle, Nameless's known to bring up the rear
T-Wrecks gives low heads the boot.... while ur just loafer the year
this was a solid line, not a hard hitter but alright
So just give up, I'm serious with these battles, I drop dope spins
Cuz I'm all for holiday spirit too!... I just refuse to Passover the win
this wouldve been ok...but passover isnt part of the holiday season and the set up really ahd nothing to do with the punch
It's simple, you started off on this site, but Wrecks is just rulin' b
7 that would be all she wrote, but there's 5 minutes for his eulogy
not feelin it. overall, try to hit harder with your punches and stop streching shit out as much. keep elevatin.
v/ Nameless - for a better verse.
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