49. MENACE 1-0 vs 50. DA PUERTO RICAN 1-0

FórmÅl LôGíc · 12-20-2004, 04:42 PM

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MENACE · 12-20-2004, 06:43 PM

Checkin in
16 or less
U drop first
OnE

MENACE · 12-22-2004, 09:21 PM

(Written to Showbiz and A.G's Next Level Instrumental faster BPM)

NO SHOWS A NO NO.... LOCO .... YO YO.... Im Drunk and aint even tryn... Will It Be My Undoing? Let's Find out shall we.....

Yo fuck da puerto rican.....tha fat one in class alwayz in tha corner eatin'//
in skool gettin beatin by euro-peans and four portugeese kids//
writtens reakin like a corpse's-body or porta-potty outta order, Jesus!//
Someone save him, it's dubious, he gon' make it in tha muzik biz//
Soul Stealer? Call me Lucifer's, U cross me and ima cross you on a crucifix//
Fuck Tres' Seis muthafucka, you gon call me qua~~~~le-six//
Marticone, like your father, thats if you even know who he is//
Wipe my ass with your loose leaf bitch, puto, u-know i won this battle//
cuz I murder ink like Irv, 1-8-7 like tha shit Pun did with Fat Joe//
serve u like burger king, have it your way, u cant come with tha fast flow//
Fuck you, stick you up like I did your momz with my thumb in her asshole//
Say Whoa like black robb, Gringo beat u , check my roots like you Black thought//
Ya I know that was pretty wack ya'all, dont care................ now after that pause//
I continue to rip you to shreads// you prolly lookin like a bitch with some dreads//
Hair braided so it wont get pulled when you givin some head//
Dawg I dunno why you in it, if you in it to lose it//
Playa, before you get on my dick, let ya mutha finish what she's doin...."

OnE

Aiight I know tha bars is kinda long, i sped up tha record so put that in consideration....

MENACE · 12-23-2004, 12:33 PM

yo my fault, I know im not suppose to reply to this battle more than twice but I CANNOT edit my posts or use my signature. I dont want votes to be deducted so ima have to reply unless you can help me......

Wraw Vs. Czartasrophy
63. Wraw 0-0 vs 64. CzarKastRophee 0-0

DA PUERTO RICAN · 12-25-2004, 02:42 AM

Yo

The only thing this dude is a menace to is society
He would be alright...if he actually had a variety
Damn straight I'm Puerto Rican, just call me a theif
Cuz im gonna steal the show and keep Menace's career breif
I'm heartless so if u start shit...i'll leave you breathless
Take your life from ya, end the strife for ya
I'm sick of fucking people's wife...so im gonna start taking people's lives
If these are punchlines, I'm only throwin jabs
Still leave you there trying to breathe like Fab
Cuz i gotta tab on your ass and I'm ready to blast
I'll leave you in a full body cast...thats my task
Bound to be accomplished...it's hard to miss
When I'm dealing with the next Fat Albert...and that ain't a diss
I pop bullets to cris', leave your head amiss
Cuz Menace takin headshots like a photographer
I was hesitant to even battle this dude...he's a gay porneographer!
Just like Boston vs. Yanks, this battle is fixed
Cuz AI knew Menace had no chance from throwin up bricks to choking on his own dick

U S E R · 12-25-2004, 03:37 AM

over noshows

U S E R · 12-25-2004, 04:06 AM

bleh, again

Stephen. E · 12-25-2004, 07:36 AM

blah battle..

But v/ peurto rico.. was less gay.. others guys verse just pissed me off to be honest.

If these are punchlines, I'm only throwin jabs
Still leave you there trying to breathe like Fab

line of the battle.. and even thats played as fuck..

v/peurto

.LM. · 12-25-2004, 07:42 PM

not a goo dbatlte but it needs votes so i'll vote DA PUERTO RICAN

neither had standouts...

next time come harder boys.

v-puerto rican

montana Grimey · 12-25-2004, 08:24 PM

Dawg I dunno why you in it, if you in it to lose it//
Playa, before you get on my dick, let ya mutha finish what she's doin...."

MENACE had a battle-rap.. sum shit 2pac or Fat Joe wud rap..
Not a battleverse, I guess hommie thought P.R. wasent gon show..
But nuthin was a stand-out, had me chukle sumtimes but thats all...

Take your life from ya, end the strife for ya
I'm sick of fucking people's wife...so im gonna start taking people's lives
If these are punchlines, I'm only throwin jabs
Still leave you there trying to breathe like Fab

P.R. came out Bleh also...
But won this battle.

Boriqua won this...

Stigmeta · 12-26-2004, 01:06 PM

Yea...this battle was pretty bad.

MENACE came horribly. I wasn't feeling a single punch in his verse. Most of it didn't even make sense, and the structure was bullshit- everything was stretched. Nothing hit, or even made sense. Bad verse.

Puerto came pretty bad too. His verse flowed alot better, but it was really simple and most of his punches were played, or just plain bad. However, his punches DID actually hit sometimes, so...

/v Puerto

Menso · 12-26-2004, 06:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stephen. E

blah battle..

But v/ peurto rico.. was less gay.. others guys verse just pissed me off to be honest.

If these are punchlines, I'm only throwin jabs
Still leave you there trying to breathe like Fab

line of the battle.. and even thats played as fuck..

v/peurto

Can i just cosign this? Im upset i read this, and more upset i might have to break it down..

Vote Puerto Rican

Iceberg X · 12-26-2004, 07:55 PM

vote=rican

Menace....alot of your shit was hard to follow, not just the lines being long but the punches i just couldnt really grasp. And alot of times i didnt even know if you were dissin him, just confused me kinda.

DPR....had some ok lines in there (i.e. fat albert) but the main thing is u were on point dissin him and that's what counts. Good battle esse.

Ill William · 12-26-2004, 09:07 PM

puerto rican got this easily i think because that fab line was really nice in his verse and menace didnt have shit really, hes on some newb shit i think

gotta go with puerto, he was way nicer and less newb

CzarKastRophee · 12-26-2004, 10:03 PM

my vote goes to ..
the freakin Rican.

better structed verse for the most part, decent rhyme scheme & good punchlines really rounded off your verse for the W.

Super. · 12-26-2004, 10:48 PM

rican wins.

12-20-2004, 04:42 PM	#1 (permalink)
FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Tampa / Tallahassee, Florida Posts: 22,807	49. MENACE 1-0 vs 50. DA PUERTO RICAN 1-0 Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return. No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff. Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations. -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN! -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN -You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically. -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)! Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked. -NO 1 Sentence Voting MOD AIM CONTACTS: -Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell -Macabre - gods encore -USER - ROFLZ MY WOFLZ -Super. - oxnardquickie __________________ ...Black Listed

12-20-2004, 06:43 PM	#2 (permalink)
MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: BOSTON 6-1-7 muthafuckaz Posts: 2,825	Checkin In Checkin in 16 or less U drop first OnE __________________ *"Im TOXIC* when I TALK-SICK " ~-JIMMY FRIDAY THA MENACE-~** ReCo Rd WiN: [3] LoSe: [0] Knock-outs: [1] DEFEATED: KNB (2x) Tha Otha Nova RBL 1~0 WhOsE's NeXt 2 GeT SeRvEd------------> Da Puerto Rican

12-22-2004, 09:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: BOSTON 6-1-7 muthafuckaz Posts: 2,825	Battle A No Show? (Written to Showbiz and A.G's Next Level Instrumental faster BPM) NO SHOWS A NO NO.... LOCO .... YO YO.... Im Drunk and aint even tryn... Will It Be My Undoing? Let's Find out shall we..... Yo fuck da puerto rican.....tha fat one in class alwayz in tha corner eatin'// in skool gettin beatin by euro-peans and four portugeese kids// writtens reakin like a corpse's-body or porta-potty outta order, Jesus!// Someone save him, it's dubious, he gon' make it in tha muzik biz// Soul Stealer? Call me Lucifer's, U cross me and ima cross you on a crucifix// Fuck Tres' Seis muthafucka, you gon call me qua~~~~le-six// Marticone, like your father, thats if you even know who he is// Wipe my ass with your loose leaf bitch, puto, u-know i won this battle// cuz I murder ink like Irv, 1-8-7 like tha shit Pun did with Fat Joe// serve u like burger king, have it your way, u cant come with tha fast flow// Fuck you, stick you up like I did your momz with my thumb in her asshole// Say Whoa like black robb, Gringo beat u , check my roots like you Black thought// Ya I know that was pretty wack ya'all, dont care................ now after that pause// I continue to rip you to shreads// you prolly lookin like a bitch with some dreads// Hair braided so it wont get pulled when you givin some head// Dawg I dunno why you in it, if you in it to lose it// Playa, before you get on my dick, let ya mutha finish what she's doin...." OnE Aiight I know tha bars is kinda long, i sped up tha record so put that in consideration.... __________________ *"Im TOXIC* when I TALK-SICK " ~-JIMMY FRIDAY THA MENACE-~** ReCo Rd WiN: [3] LoSe: [0] Knock-outs: [1] DEFEATED: KNB (2x) Tha Otha Nova RBL 1~0 WhOsE's NeXt 2 GeT SeRvEd------------> Da Puerto Rican

12-23-2004, 12:33 PM	#4 (permalink)
MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: BOSTON 6-1-7 muthafuckaz Posts: 2,825	yo my fault, I know im not suppose to reply to this battle more than twice but I CANNOT edit my posts or use my signature. I dont want votes to be deducted so ima have to reply unless you can help me...... Wraw Vs. Czartasrophy 63. Wraw 0-0 vs 64. CzarKastRophee 0-0 __________________ *"Im TOXIC* when I TALK-SICK " ~-JIMMY FRIDAY THA MENACE-~** ReCo Rd WiN: [3] LoSe: [0] Knock-outs: [1] DEFEATED: KNB (2x) Tha Otha Nova RBL 1~0 WhOsE's NeXt 2 GeT SeRvEd------------> Da Puerto Rican

12-25-2004, 07:42 PM	#9 (permalink)
.LM. minds better than urs Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 721	not a goo dbatlte but it needs votes so i'll vote DA PUERTO RICAN neither had standouts... next time come harder boys. v-puerto rican __________________ tdot hero

12-25-2004, 02:42 AM	#5 (permalink)
DA PUERTO RICAN Registered User Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 19	Yo The only thing this dude is a menace to is society He would be alright...if he actually had a variety Damn straight I'm Puerto Rican, just call me a theif Cuz im gonna steal the show and keep Menace's career breif I'm heartless so if u start shit...i'll leave you breathless Take your life from ya, end the strife for ya I'm sick of fucking people's wife...so im gonna start taking people's lives If these are punchlines, I'm only throwin jabs Still leave you there trying to breathe like Fab Cuz i gotta tab on your ass and I'm ready to blast I'll leave you in a full body cast...thats my task Bound to be accomplished...it's hard to miss When I'm dealing with the next Fat Albert...and that ain't a diss I pop bullets to cris', leave your head amiss Cuz Menace takin headshots like a photographer I was hesitant to even battle this dude...he's a gay porneographer! Just like Boston vs. Yanks, this battle is fixed Cuz AI knew Menace had no chance from throwin up bricks to choking on his own dick

12-25-2004, 07:36 AM	#8 (permalink)
Stephen. E Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 14	blah battle.. But v/ peurto rico.. was less gay.. others guys verse just pissed me off to be honest. If these are punchlines, I'm only throwin jabs Still leave you there trying to breathe like Fab line of the battle.. and even thats played as fuck.. v/peurto

12-25-2004, 08:24 PM	#10 (permalink)
montana Grimey tony montana's crackbaby. Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,746	Dawg I dunno why you in it, if you in it to lose it// Playa, before you get on my dick, let ya mutha finish what she's doin...." MENACE had a battle-rap.. sum shit 2pac or Fat Joe wud rap.. Not a battleverse, I guess hommie thought P.R. wasent gon show.. But nuthin was a stand-out, had me chukle sumtimes but thats all... Take your life from ya, end the strife for ya I'm sick of fucking people's wife...so im gonna start taking people's lives If these are punchlines, I'm only throwin jabs Still leave you there trying to breathe like Fab P.R. came out Bleh also... But won this battle. Boriqua won this...

12-26-2004, 01:06 PM	#11 (permalink)
Stigmeta Patience to gain Wisdom Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Checkerboard Slums Posts: 246	Yea...this battle was pretty bad. MENACE came horribly. I wasn't feeling a single punch in his verse. Most of it didn't even make sense, and the structure was bullshit- everything was stretched. Nothing hit, or even made sense. Bad verse. Puerto came pretty bad too. His verse flowed alot better, but it was really simple and most of his punches were played, or just plain bad. However, his punches DID actually hit sometimes, so... /v Puerto

12-26-2004, 07:55 PM	#13 (permalink)
Iceberg X Registered Drug-User Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 354	vote=rican Menace....alot of your shit was hard to follow, not just the lines being long but the punches i just couldnt really grasp. And alot of times i didnt even know if you were dissin him, just confused me kinda. DPR....had some ok lines in there (i.e. fat albert) but the main thing is u were on point dissin him and that's what counts. Good battle esse. __________________ Berg from the Burg... Jags & T-Wolves

12-26-2004, 09:07 PM	#14 (permalink)
Ill William Registered User Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 171	puerto rican got this easily i think because that fab line was really nice in his verse and menace didnt have shit really, hes on some newb shit i think gotta go with puerto, he was way nicer and less newb

12-26-2004, 10:03 PM	#15 (permalink)
CzarKastRophee Registered User Join Date: May 2004 Location: Yamomsroomville, USA. Posts: 332	my vote goes to .. the freakin Rican. better structed verse for the most part, decent rhyme scheme & good punchlines really rounded off your verse for the W. __________________ MASTERMINDS UNDEFINED - King Grimet [] DiC GeTs Gully [] Sephiroth [] MetaSin [] CzarKastRophee -

12-26-2004, 10:48 PM	#16 (permalink)
Super. Lovin' it Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: California Posts: 25,518	rican wins.

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