51. A-bomb in bowl 1-0 vs 52. DirtBoy60 1-0

FórmÅl LôGíc · 12-20-2004, 04:42 PM

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-BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
-VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

-You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

-Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over

-NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.

-NO 1 Sentence Voting

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DirtBoy69 · 12-20-2004, 09:10 PM

checkin in hows 12 sound

A-bomb inabowl · 12-21-2004, 03:11 AM

let it be so

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post10817098

DirtBoy69 · 12-23-2004, 07:41 PM

i slash at cross sections cut you into cornered and squared selections//
disgusting end trails and organs throwen all over at random directions//
creating inventions makin new weapons destory net guys textceeing//
fleeing my lines severing limbs leaving this bomb in a bowl bleeding//
biting the eight miles' dialouge files even biting eminem's styles//
smash floor tiles on you erase you destorying your government files//
all your lines a bore all done before and unlike em your wont get an encore//
the score unblanced as a silence breaks over a scence filled with gore//
more lines in store freestyle a peice of lyrical war leave people wanting more//

i know agreed to more but i'm tired and dont have time so do whatever

A-bomb inabowl · 12-24-2004, 01:22 AM

will post either tonight or tomarrow....christmas shit keeping me busy

A-bomb inabowl · 12-24-2004, 06:57 AM

you acting big bitch, talkin raw to impress me
but your chance of winnings about as small as your testes
dirts dumb, goes to auto auctions to bid on stereos
im a true patriot, watch this eagle shit on-tario
its game time rookie, but you dont fit in the big leagues
youre ryhmes are childish, like they were written by disney
its time to grow up boy, and get off youre mommys tit
i guess you suck, cause u cant type with a hockey stick
saying youll smash me, shit you must be bluffin
cause the only good thing from canada was...nothin
youre corny threats are retarded, also illegal and cheap
dirt must be the sandman, cause hes puttin people to sleep
boy, you postin is pointless, like having a heater in hell
id talk about your hygene, but youre name speaks for itself

Merry Christmas (Hannukah, kwanza,) everybody

A-bomb inabowl · 12-24-2004, 12:59 PM

i havent had to post my votes yet....anybody wanna give me the 4-1-1 on how i would go about doing that?

A-bomb inabowl · 12-24-2004, 01:26 PM

nevermind

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10813003
67. ill pav 0-0 vs 68. Menso 0-0

montana Grimey · 12-24-2004, 02:08 PM

Dirtboy.. u had abunch a gory shit, its more of a rap text than a battle verse.
Nada stood out...

you acting big bitch, talkin raw to impress me
but your chance of winnings about as small as your testes

^Made me chuckle//

saying youll smash me, shit you must be bluffin
cause the only good thing from canada was...nothin

^ight..

boy, you postin is pointless, like having a heater in hell
id talk about your hygene, but youre name speaks for itself

^ight. closer

I see you have skills, but didnt go ya full capabilitys with Dirtboy..
This was very one-sided and

a-bomb
gets
MY
VoTe.

A-bomb inabowl · 12-24-2004, 04:08 PM

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10813533
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10813623
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10813743

Black Writer · 12-25-2004, 02:53 AM

dirtboy came wit some eh shit, ill leave it at that, no quotables.

other guy:

you acting big bitch, talkin raw to impress me
but your chance of winnings about as small as your testes

heh

boy, you postin is pointless, like having a heater in hell
id talk about your hygene, but youre name speaks for itself

decent

vote = a bomb.

U S E R · 12-25-2004, 03:57 AM

over noshows

Stephen. E · 12-25-2004, 07:38 AM

Bomb gets my vote.. wittier and an all round better verse.. Lines wernt stretched and was just a better read..

v/Bomb.

Stigmeta · 12-25-2004, 04:28 PM

Yea, nothing much to say about this battle. Dirty Boy came with stretched lines, and wasn't really hitting with his punches.

A Bomb came pretty lame too..nothing really stood out, but it looked more like a battle verse, so he gets this one based on that fact =/

/v Abomb

.LM. · 12-25-2004, 07:50 PM

pretty clear abomb won this..
neither had standouts, but dirtboy didnt have anything decent

so therefore,
v-abomb

Reflexx · 12-26-2004, 02:17 PM

dirtyboy was really just tellin'a story about what he "can" and "cant" do.. a-bomb didnt come THAT GOOD but he atleast had punches in which a battle is determined by..a-bomb took this.

vote -- abomb

Menso · 12-26-2004, 05:34 PM

Vote Abomb

Much better verse, nuthing spectacular, but enough to blow this one out of the water..

Iceberg X · 12-26-2004, 07:44 PM

Dirt had too much of a rap goin. U got to diss your opponent.
A-bomb was ok, but the lines where u tried to clown him like the canada shit...eh...lol..u gotta work on that homie. But as for the other lines u had some nice lines in there. Keep it up duke, good battle.

Vote=A-bomb in a bowl

CzarKastRophee · 12-26-2004, 10:01 PM

vote- A bomb.

better overall verse, the flow was way better, & the concepts & punchlines u used were cool also. Dirt's verse didnt really appeal to me mainly because none of it made much sense to me. your bars are too stretched out & you had basically no punchlines that were affective.

Super. · 12-26-2004, 10:45 PM

bomb wins.

12-20-2004, 04:42 PM	#1 (permalink)
FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Tampa / Tallahassee, Florida Posts: 22,807	51. A-bomb in bowl 1-0 vs 52. DirtBoy60 1-0 Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return. No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff. Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations. -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN! -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN -You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically. -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)! Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked. -NO 1 Sentence Voting MOD AIM CONTACTS: -Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell -Macabre - gods encore -USER - ROFLZ MY WOFLZ -Super. - oxnardquickie __________________ ...Black Listed

12-20-2004, 09:10 PM	#2 (permalink)
DirtBoy69 why is this wrong? Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Kincardine Ontario Posts: 1,619	checkin in hows 12 sound __________________ so????

12-21-2004, 03:11 AM	#3 (permalink)
A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 83	let it be so http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post10817098 __________________ "id jizz early, inside Liz Hurley" Paul Barman Last edited by A-bomb inabowl; 12-25-2004 at 02:52 AM.

12-23-2004, 07:41 PM	#4 (permalink)
DirtBoy69 why is this wrong? Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Kincardine Ontario Posts: 1,619	i slash at cross sections cut you into cornered and squared selections// disgusting end trails and organs throwen all over at random directions// creating inventions makin new weapons destory net guys textceeing// fleeing my lines severing limbs leaving this bomb in a bowl bleeding// biting the eight miles' dialouge files even biting eminem's styles// smash floor tiles on you erase you destorying your government files// all your lines a bore all done before and unlike em your wont get an encore// the score unblanced as a silence breaks over a scence filled with gore// more lines in store freestyle a peice of lyrical war leave people wanting more// i know agreed to more but i'm tired and dont have time so do whatever __________________ so????

12-24-2004, 01:22 AM	#5 (permalink)
A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 83	will post either tonight or tomarrow....christmas shit keeping me busy __________________ "id jizz early, inside Liz Hurley" Paul Barman

12-24-2004, 06:57 AM	#6 (permalink)
A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 83	you acting big bitch, talkin raw to impress me but your chance of winnings about as small as your testes dirts dumb, goes to auto auctions to bid on stereos im a true patriot, watch this eagle shit on-tario its game time rookie, but you dont fit in the big leagues youre ryhmes are childish, like they were written by disney its time to grow up boy, and get off youre mommys tit i guess you suck, cause u cant type with a hockey stick saying youll smash me, shit you must be bluffin cause the only good thing from canada was...nothin youre corny threats are retarded, also illegal and cheap dirt must be the sandman, cause hes puttin people to sleep boy, you postin is pointless, like having a heater in hell id talk about your hygene, but youre name speaks for itself Merry Christmas (Hannukah, kwanza,) everybody __________________ "id jizz early, inside Liz Hurley" Paul Barman

12-24-2004, 12:59 PM	#7 (permalink)
A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 83	i havent had to post my votes yet....anybody wanna give me the 4-1-1 on how i would go about doing that? __________________ "id jizz early, inside Liz Hurley" Paul Barman

12-24-2004, 01:26 PM	#8 (permalink)
A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 83	nevermind http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10813003 67. ill pav 0-0 vs 68. Menso 0-0 __________________ "id jizz early, inside Liz Hurley" Paul Barman

12-24-2004, 02:08 PM	#9 (permalink)
montana Grimey tony montana's crackbaby. Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,746	Dirtboy.. u had abunch a gory shit, its more of a rap text than a battle verse. Nada stood out... you acting big bitch, talkin raw to impress me but your chance of winnings about as small as your testes ^Made me chuckle// saying youll smash me, shit you must be bluffin cause the only good thing from canada was...nothin ^ight.. boy, you postin is pointless, like having a heater in hell id talk about your hygene, but youre name speaks for itself ^ight. closer I see you have skills, but didnt go ya full capabilitys with Dirtboy.. This was very one-sided and a-bomb gets MY VoTe.

12-24-2004, 04:08 PM	#10 (permalink)
A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 83	http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10813533 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10813623 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10813743 __________________ "id jizz early, inside Liz Hurley" Paul Barman

12-25-2004, 02:53 AM	#11 (permalink)
Black Writer I'm THAT dude. Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Where people still say "Yes Massa!" till I flip shit and spit that text atcha. Posts: 198	dirtboy came wit some eh shit, ill leave it at that, no quotables. other guy: you acting big bitch, talkin raw to impress me but your chance of winnings about as small as your testes heh boy, you postin is pointless, like having a heater in hell id talk about your hygene, but youre name speaks for itself decent vote = a bomb. __________________ And all that vital respect that you’re DYIN’ to get.... Wellllll....You live in New York and spend all your time on the net Your every move is a study in futility. God knows you’re no Carl Lewis but I can see you runnin’ with Agillity. - Ajax.

12-25-2004, 07:38 AM	#13 (permalink)
Stephen. E Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 14	Bomb gets my vote.. wittier and an all round better verse.. Lines wernt stretched and was just a better read.. v/Bomb.

12-25-2004, 04:28 PM	#14 (permalink)
Stigmeta Patience to gain Wisdom Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Checkerboard Slums Posts: 246	Yea, nothing much to say about this battle. Dirty Boy came with stretched lines, and wasn't really hitting with his punches. A Bomb came pretty lame too..nothing really stood out, but it looked more like a battle verse, so he gets this one based on that fact =/ /v Abomb

12-25-2004, 07:50 PM	#15 (permalink)
.LM. minds better than urs Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 721	pretty clear abomb won this.. neither had standouts, but dirtboy didnt have anything decent so therefore, v-abomb __________________ tdot hero

12-26-2004, 02:17 PM	#16 (permalink)
Reflexx [insert cool thing here] Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: new york. Posts: 3,284	dirtyboy was really just tellin'a story about what he "can" and "cant" do.. a-bomb didnt come THAT GOOD but he atleast had punches in which a battle is determined by..a-bomb took this. vote -- abomb __________________ www.myspace.com/brettrapsdude Omen: just cuz dzk said its coo for me to come thru Omen: and I wanna be there when bux records teh sexy brett: youre recording with dzk Omen: yea teh sexy brett: how you both fit in the same room Omen: died.

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12-26-2004, 05:34 PM	#17 (permalink)
Menso No Brown Baggers Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 14,077	Vote Abomb Much better verse, nuthing spectacular, but enough to blow this one out of the water..

12-26-2004, 07:44 PM	#18 (permalink)
Iceberg X Registered Drug-User Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 354	Dirt had too much of a rap goin. U got to diss your opponent. A-bomb was ok, but the lines where u tried to clown him like the canada shit...eh...lol..u gotta work on that homie. But as for the other lines u had some nice lines in there. Keep it up duke, good battle. Vote=A-bomb in a bowl __________________ Berg from the Burg... Jags & T-Wolves

12-26-2004, 10:01 PM	#19 (permalink)
CzarKastRophee Registered User Join Date: May 2004 Location: Yamomsroomville, USA. Posts: 332	vote- A bomb. better overall verse, the flow was way better, & the concepts & punchlines u used were cool also. Dirt's verse didnt really appeal to me mainly because none of it made much sense to me. your bars are too stretched out & you had basically no punchlines that were affective. __________________ MASTERMINDS UNDEFINED - King Grimet [] DiC GeTs Gully [] Sephiroth [] MetaSin [] CzarKastRophee -

12-26-2004, 10:45 PM	#20 (permalink)
Super. Lovin' it Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: California Posts: 25,518	bomb wins.

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