63. Wraw 0-0 vs 64. CzarKastRophee 0-0

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[CzarKastRophee]

im game.

[Wraw]

10 lines.

[Wraw]

I found out he’s a net geek, plus a fag who’s boring’…
when I did a search on his name… ‘n only got links to the porn forum…
it’s festive season, and this gay boy’s leading the bash toll,
plus him preparing turkey dinner…
… is only one more excuse to stuff another asshole..
his sex life with his bf got no rules, they love dick wholly…
cuz those fags like to have No Holds Barred, more than Mick Foley
you poor jerk, my tracks ain’t for the needy…
I rocked a “Free Artest” cap, n his fam rushed me asking for CDs..
This, is a quick key I’m beating u with… so try adoptin’
Shit, I was so confident in wastin’ no time, I even used the “Quick Reply” option

[CzarKastRophee]

u got an herbish mouth, u talk alot dirty but now the word is out.
& you can go up under the list of ~~~~~s ive never heard about.
leave u disturbed with doubts, now we'll finally see whosa bitch.
cause if you ever took a leap of faith, u'd land right ona crusifix.
get used to this, cause whoever reads any of your text its a no.
& onlyway ur hardcore cus ur usernames from a wrestling show.
your best line was your check in, so you already close to die ..
gangsta? dont even hope to try,
cause the only click u wit is post reply.
disgrace & abuse em .. & battles i know you're hating to lose em.
but you'll never eat me, like bringing home the bacon to muslims.

[montana Grimey]

I found out he’s a net geek, plus a fag who’s boring’…
when I did a search on his name… ‘n only got links to the porn forum…
it’s festive season, and this gay boy’s leading the bash toll,
plus him preparing turkey dinner…
… is only one more excuse to stuff another asshole..


This, is a quick key I’m beating u with… so try adoptin’
Shit, I was so confident in wastin’ no time, I even used the “Quick Reply” option


^My favs. from you.
Only thing I didnt like, you stayed on that gay-tip for alot of ya punches.....





get used to this, cause whoever reads any of your text its a no.
& onlyway ur hardcore cus ur usernames from a wrestling show.
your best line was your check in, so you already close to die ..
gangsta? dont even hope to try,
cause the only click u wit is post reply.
disgrace & abuse em .. & battles i know you're hating to lose em.
but you'll never eat me, like bringing home the bacon to muslims.


^My favs. from you.

You had sum nice lines, and u hit em in every direction.

Unlike Wraw who came one-dimensional with the "ur gay" lines..








This was a nice battle but imma give it to Czar..
Much props to both of yall, yall got sum fire..

[shadows edge]

v. Czar... leap of faith was really the only decent line i saw.. rest was eaither just been done before (and better) or just horribly worded... just keep at it and you can improve....

for instance that turkey line is just corny as hell... try to avoid shit like that. and the wrestler name line.. is just lame.

[MENACE]

Wraw

I found out he’s a net geek, plus a fag who’s boring’…
when I did a search on his name… ‘n only got links to the porn forum…

thas an aiight openin'

it’s festive season, and this gay boy’s leading the bash toll,
plus him preparing turkey dinner…
… is only one more excuse to stuff another asshole..

ha-ha pretty funny

his sex life with his bf got no rules, they love dick wholly…
cuz those fags like to have No Holds Barred, more than Mick Foley

so so, i get it but it didnt hit as hard as it coulda

you poor jerk, my tracks ain’t for the needy…
I rocked a “Free Artest” cap, n his fam rushed me asking for CDs..

hottness

This, is a quick key I’m beating u with… so try adoptin’
Shit, I was so confident in wastin’ no time, I even used the “Quick Reply” option

LoL nice endin'

[MENACE]

(Vote Continued)

My fault I replied by accident and im too drunk to find tha edit icon.... Where tha fuckz it at?

Any wayz.....Where was eye?



CzarKastRophee------------

u got an herbish mouth, u talk alot dirty but now the word is out.
& you can go up under the list of ~~~~~s ive never heard about.

haha hotter opener than wraw

leave u disturbed with doubts, now we'll finally see whosa bitch.
cause if you ever took a leap of faith, u'd land right ona crusifix.

Lol hottness, so far Im feeling u more

get used to this, cause whoever reads any of your text its a no.
& onlyway ur hardcore cus ur usernames from a wrestling show.

ha that was aiight

your best line was your check in, so you already close to die ..
gangsta? dont even hope to try,
cause the only click u wit is post reply.

LMAO

disgrace & abuse em .. & battles i know you're hating to lose em.
but you'll never eat me, like bringing home the bacon to muslims.

ha ha aiight ending wraw's was better

but Czar still spit harder, better punches

it was a nice battle, keep spittin...

OnE


Vote= CzarKastRophee

[break911]

I say the punches were both weak except for the asshole line.... but i had a much easyer time reading czars verse.. flow was much better.. plus the multis..

my vote is for czar..

[SPuL]

v/ Czar..

I wasn't really feeling the first verse. IT started out nice, wit the porn forum lines and stuff, but you really gotta work on yo flow man. It was off a lot. Ruined it for me really. But keep elevating, you'll get better.

Czar, I liked yo verse better. One thing was the flow was better than his, although it too went off. I liked that Click line. lmfao that was tight shit. And you had much harder personals than him.

This was pretty one sided imo tho. props to both. pc

[D.A.N.G.E.R.]

Wraw:

Nice opener

n

Nice closer


Csar:

& onlyway ur hardcore cus ur usernames from a wrestling show.
your best line was your check in, so you already close to die ..
^^nice

Vote-Czar

had overall ••••• verse, i liked to best line was in checkin...all he neeeded to win actually

[Ethiquette]

Vote-wraw

I liked Czar's only click you wit line. For wraw, his quick reply line was cool and so was the turkey one, so those won it for me

[A-bomb inabowl]

Czar good shit. Nice multis. Keep it up dawg


Vote-czar

[U S E R]

over noshows

[Doc Richards]

& onlyway ur hardcore cus ur usernames from a wrestling show.
your best line was your check in, so you already close to die ..

lmao, that one wins it


V- Czar

[~*dAiLy-SiNs*~]

czar wins this...

punches just flurried and like someone else said earlier wraw was just too one dimensional

[Iceberg X]

Good battle...

Wraw...had some aiight lines with good humor but damn, one too many gay lines in there. Threw your verse off par level easy. Nice try tho, just work on puttin some variety in your verse.

Czar...You got really nice flow and i can see in the future u will be a good battler. You have some pretty good concepts, all i would work on is wording them to be the most effective. Good verse, overall just better than Wraw's.

Czar got this.

[Super.]

czar wins.