67. ill pav 0-0 vs 68. Menso 0-0

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[ill pav]

10 lines..

[Brown Jesus]

sounds good.. ill try posting tonight..

[ill pav]

Menso?

I sense this mexican is kinda angry.. not feelin jolly
poor bitch..
The only thing you'll be unwrappin for christmas is Tomales
And during the holidays.. duke'll have nothing to joke about
So what does christmas mean to you?
''2 weeks off'a school to higher my post account!!''
Girls always think your a sweetie.. they like you extremely
When you tell'em your living in the fast lane..
Then they bounce when ya mention the squeegee
And evertime your in a match.. your verse somehow spoils it
So menso..
Clean up your act.. after your done with my floors and toilets
But me and you are pretty coo.. we could even kick a few
So the next time im feelin down in the dumps.. ill visit you

Aight..?

[Menso]

alright, its been a while.. so here goes..

I havent battled in days, but that verse was rather gay,
SHit makes you feel stupid and slap yourself like using aftershave,
Ill diss ya and wont take it back.. cus i didnt know youd come lame as that
Seriously? No one pays ya interest, Ya verse comes 90 days same as cash,
Pav signs in 0-0, figure get a newb to pad his stats,
But lose your first battle in bottom 30? Really, how bad is that?
Imma win, but it depends on good votes,
Its been a while, But.. im never washed up like wool coats,
We both came blah, but its easy to see mine is better,
Since only people showing pav-love, is psych professors,

[montana Grimey]

And during the holidays.. duke'll have nothing to joke about
So what does christmas mean to you?
''2 weeks off'a school to higher my post account!!''

And evertime your in a match.. your verse somehow spoils it
So menso..
Clean up your act.. after your done with my floors and toilets
But me and you are pretty coo.. we could even kick a few
So the next time im feelin down in the dumps.. ill visit you

^Those are my favs from, ill pay..
His lines were kinda funny, nothing Crazy just sum funny lines....







We both came blah, but its easy to see mine is better,
Since only people showing pav-love, is psych professors,

Pav signs in 0-0, figure get a newb to pad his stats,
But lose your first battle in bottom 30? Really, how bad is that?

^Only lines that stood out, and they wasent that nice either....




Imma give this to ill pay...
this was an ight battle... BLah

[PMX_And1]

both lines were wack
sucky battle but Menso easily won it
seemed like ill pay really wants to be friends with menso

Menso just had a few pretty good lines that won it, guys gotta work at that shit though

[PMX_And1]

both lines were wack
sucky battle but Menso easily won it
seemed like ill pay really wants to be friends with menso

Menso just had a few pretty good lines that won it, guys gotta work at that shit though
Menso put it perfect when he said "we both came blah, but its easy to see mine was better"

[PMX_And1]

oops my bad didnt mean to edit, i dk how that happened

[KnowSkills]

you can edit before he posts but once you do you're fucked...

editings only allowed if both verses are NOT up yet.

[Stigmeta]

/v Ill pay

I got him winning this by a long shot. His lines weren't great, but they were pretty witty. Menso came stretched, and his punches didn't really connect at all. Both seem to need a bit of work..but yea, Ill Pay came better here.

[SevenBC]

I gotta give this battle to ILL PAV, his verse was more funny, witty, and it made me laugh..
some of Menso's lines were kinda stretched, but this was overall a good battle..

Best lines of the battle:

And during the holidays.. duke'll have nothing to joke about
So what does christmas mean to you?
''2 weeks off'a school to higher my post account!!''


And evertime your in a match.. your verse somehow spoils it
So menso..
Clean up your act.. after your done with my floors and toilets

[shadows edge]

its "raise my post count" .. but anyway. ill pav had those last couple bars which were decent.. came more consistent easily... but menso definetely had the best line of the battle.. pav-love.. dope line. creative too.. so thats why he gets my vote.

v. menso

[SPuL]

v/ Menso

Ill, you cmae pretty wack in beggining, but ending was alright. Had some good lines there. But yo flow wasn't that great throughout tho. It wasn't bad, but it was aiight. good try anyways. Should have come harder.

Menso, you had better flow. You also had some strectched lines tho. In punches, you easily had better ones than him. That closer was ill. And that newb line was ok.

overall, weak battle. But IMO Menso got it.

[iLLweezy]

ILL PAV - You verse was terrible, man. I don't want to hate, but it was. You stayed on the MEXICAN thing a bit too long, and even in the beginning your Punches were bland, and not hittin' at all. I don't like your writing style at all either, it takes away from the enjoyment of your verse.

MENSO - Not really any stand out lines either. But the best line in this match came from you. The Pavlov line was nice, and I never seen that used against someone with PAV in their name. Somethin' fresh right there.

Vote - Menso on an easy margin.


Weak battle..

29. Know Skills vs. 30. ILLWeeZy - Peep my battle when It goes up.. Pz

[D.A.N.G.E.R.]

Vote-Menso

Menso:


We both came blah, but its easy to see mine is better,
Since only people showing pav-love, is psych professors,

Pav signs in 0-0, figure get a newb to pad his stats,
But lose your first battle in bottom 30? Really, how bad is that?
^^lliked them lines but liked more da bottom 30


i didnt feel at all ills verse, menso won this for da simple reason that he had some nice lines n more flow

[Ethiquette]

vote-ill pav

woah, ill pav gave this guy a pumelling with the punches, eg, down in the dumps, clean your act, etc.... so due to harder punches, my vote goes to ill pav

[A-bomb inabowl]

i hate to go along with the crowd, but yes....this was a weak battle. maybe its cause im new but, I hate ill pavs type of sentence structure. It loses emphasis on multiples, and just makes it sound stretched and wordy. His squeege line was kinda funny but wasnt executed properly.


vote-menso

[U S E R]

over no shows

[.LM.]

vote-ill pav

closeish battle

And evertime your in a match.. your verse somehow spoils it
So menso..
Clean up your act.. after your done with my floors and toilets

was cool

wasnt really any standouts in menso's verse

decent battleeee