47. Blackberries (1-0) vs. 48. Word-Scape (1-0)

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[Blackberries]

Yooo, we make it 'bout 12-16 & drop early

[Word-Scape]

i say like 10 but whoever drops first =/

[Blackberries]

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semen/seamen least/leased

Take 20 minutes of you're time to match my key..


Yoooo,
This nerd is stray & herb’n gay, I bang daily gals,
This kid’s more covered in semen than men causing navy brawls.
We in 2004, date’s fittin verse,
I’m TV. Poets & novelists will hate me for killing written Words.
U aint nice and also stated easy afraid,
You’ll never be dope like Marihuana plants confiscated in police raids.
I bring it further as I unfurl the scares,
Because I’m swearing ON YA niceness: That the World is square.
^^That means u’re bad, get melted goon,
Fuck Kongo & Nigeria homeless. U’re Oxfam’s priority for sheltering wounds.
Plus I’m shelling soon, this foo’s a bitch fake,
Rankings? Only times u hear ‘Word up’ is in old DJ Clue mixtapes.
It shakes now, I hound em first,
Call me ‘Picture’. You all know ‘an image is worth a thousand Words’.
Chubby kid, I rag on this skeet hoe,
Has ‘chips on his shoulders’, lackin’ space in his arms for the other bags of Tostitos.
Scape’s frail & weak, I flounce at gays,
You’re skills are ‘least’ like most houses & apartments today.
Losing kid, for starts you a lona’,
& its quite sad when ya circle of life is portrayed by the mark on ure sofa.

drop soon[/ARIAL]

[Word-Scape]

C'mon kid, with verses like that, i woulda much rather seen you duck
I'll deliver slices in LESS than twenty minutes like workin at Pizza Hut
It's simple kid, soon the whole league will know this guy's a fool
Cuz imma drop black quicker than principals at private schools
And no need for quotations, kid imagine that
Plus ya name says it all...black is berry berry whack
And forget eatin this fool, imma fuckin consume him
Cuz if he spits state of the art, then im the fuckin union!
Ya lifes miserable son, you know that you dont really care
So once you and my blade meat, it'll all be grave-y from there
I got this on lock kiddie its actually quite easy to see
The whackness is all up to you...
..........and you musta been high when you keyed

I'll be done now...

[Yuneek]

My vote goes to Blackberries for better punches and more wit.

Vote: Blackberries

[S T F U]

Vote BB Less wack.. both were pretty bad.. get some practice and read top 30 battles..

[B L E S S]

Blackberries

lol @ Blacks verse, way funnier.. better wording..
side by side, other dude seemed undeveloped..

[Chase Murda]

i dont know really what to say for this one both of these could have been better but i like word scapes approach.. my vote ...

word scape

[..Methadon..]

Terrible verses both came mad wack

Vote = Black berries

[Ibeechur Moms]

nah...they werent that whack...in fact I liked a few lines...just needed to word some of them better

BB:
I bring it further as I unfurl the scares,
Because I’m swearing ON YA niceness: That the World is square.
^^That means u’re bad, get melted goon,
Fuck Kongo & Nigeria homeless. U’re Oxfam’s priority for sheltering wounds.
Losing kid, for starts you a lona’,
& its quite sad when ya circle of life is portrayed by the mark on ure sofa.

vs.

W.S

It's simple kid, soon the whole league will know this guy's a fool
Cuz imma drop black quicker than principals at private schools
Ya lifes miserable son, you know that you dont really care
So once you and my blade meat, it'll all be grave-y from there


vote= Blackberries.....


Both needed to word there shit better...but Word's needed MORE help.

[Black Writer]

yoooo..

first off... BB is tryin da Resin style a bit too much, but minus da wittiness.. i still like da style tho..u used alotta played shit..

We in 2004, date’s fittin verse,
I’m TV. Poets & novelists will hate me for killing written Words.

(see what I mean... line was decent.. but worded way too Resin-ish)

Plus I’m shelling soon, this foo’s a bitch fake,
Rankings? Only times u hear ‘Word up’ is in old DJ Clue mixtapes.

decent..

Chubby kid, I rag on this skeet hoe,
Has ‘chips on his shoulders’, lackin’ space in his arms for the other bags of Tostitos.

nice too



other kid:

C'mon kid, with verses like that, i woulda much rather seen you duck
I'll deliver slices in LESS than twenty minutes like workin at Pizza Hut

meh

It's simple kid, soon the whole league will know this guy's a fool
Cuz imma drop black quicker than principals at private schools

lol

And no need for quotations, kid imagine that
Plus ya name says it all...black is berry berry whack

wtf gay

from here on out it seemed like u jus didnt care..

so black wins.. son got a bit potential if he loses da played lines & finds his own wording



vote = Blackbarries

[Ninja Kid]

i didnt think they were that whack, both just neeeded a lot of work in flow and mayb use a bit better wording. neways, blackberry had more, hard-hitting punches, so my votes for him.

Call me ‘Picture’. You all know ‘an image is worth a thousand Words’.
^Very dope line

Vote - Blackberry

[montana Grimey]

And forget eatin this fool, imma fuckin consume him
Cuz if he spits state of the art, then im the fuckin union!
Ya lifes miserable son, you know that you dont really care
So once you and my blade meat, it'll all be grave-y from there
I got this on lock kiddie its actually quite easy to see
The whackness is all up to you...
..........and you musta been high when you keyed


^I likes...


BUT. Blackberries won this. better punches.. BLah kinda one-sided.

[Word-Scape]

Im just posting to say that whoever PM'ed me on RV asking if this was me, yes.
Now keep your mouth shut. ;)

[Bobby D]

Vote - Blackberries

I didn't dislike either verse, but i didn't like them either. some of black's concepts didn't really make any sense...and some of Word's concepts were played, but i felt Black's verse a little more.

[Super.]

upping.

[Ethiquette]

IM BLACKBERRIES, so here ya go with my votes:

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post10693432

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10702413

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post10702818

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...6#post10702886

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...5#post10702915

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10708173

[Exit Eight]

this was pretty bad....


that semen line was circa 2001 from BB


but word-scape was weak as hell, at least blackberries had some decent punches to back up the wack points of his verse, word scape was mediocre at best


V- Blackberries

[Kon Quest]

Black came very weak in the beginning, but then he picked it up about half way through. He actually had a couple of nice punches, but he needs to work on shortening up his lines a little. Either way, he came nicer than Word Scape this time.......so

Vote - BlackBerries