89. Excel. vs 90. SmokaJoka666

TRAP. · 10-11-2004, 04:01 AM

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Excel. · 10-11-2004, 12:48 PM

Excel. · 10-11-2004, 01:41 PM

First Battle here,Lets go 6 bars.

I stay complex n neat,Man on text ya weak
make you my concept, u kno all my concepts are deep
bout 6 feet..your stepping to me, & now ya failing son
not only will i stab your forehead,but i'l nail your mum
My skill weighs a ton,Now im beatin you fast
il take you to dominos..n get a pizza your ass
Your confusin, damn,but its ure rep im abusin
Heard it sucks to lose..now he dosent mind losing
fuck a bullet, man il bomb ya..below my words like a comma
ure girlfriends award show..l'l put my dick honour
N you'll get broke through,coz man ure a joke too
Plus a 'fag' , il just let the gun smoke you

SmokaJoka666 · 10-12-2004, 10:18 PM

Ya got the weakest flows...fuck you here for? This the pros..
Excel?? Fat fuck......the only thing you'd XL in is ya clothes
Ya drop wack..cant drop bad habits??...but I'll spit the facts...
I'd pass a hint by quitting rap...but I'd have to clean up my ax
Ya elevation failed, no skills, now RBL'll watch em die there
Overthrone this kid so much..the kingdom got him a high chair
Wack bitch...ya dropped to let us know ya punches aint shit...
Even if I was SmokaPencil666....you'd still miss the point kid
...I made ya learn bitch, and that's not all...this is just the jist
Ya choices are: Get DQed..and/ore....let me rule with a iron fist
Ya done and you know Smoke's gotten under ya skin son...
Cuz it's not ya shouts...it's me they'll find at the top of ya lungs...

SmokaJoka666 · 10-12-2004, 10:19 PM

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shadows edge · 10-13-2004, 12:53 AM

v. smoka

not a great verse, the nameplay in the first bar was nice enough to take this though... excel you focused too much on multis, and all your punches are pretty played, weak and worded akwardly.

ephekt · 10-13-2004, 02:08 AM

u know this shit was close.. smoka started good but ended ok.. and excel started crappy but the last 3 bars were good..

im giving this to excel..he had better lines to me, his punches stood out more..

Vote . Excel

ArgonTheWise · 10-13-2004, 01:05 PM

Both of you used a lot of puns. Both of you had average flows. None of you had multies.

This was close.

I'm going to go with SmokaJoka here because I thought that Excel had too many corny punches (pizza, honour lines). Smoka just barely edged the punches due to lack of corniness and some ok punches like his opener.

Everything else was even.

Vote - Smoka in a rather disappointing battle.

Truth aka UBG · 10-14-2004, 04:52 PM

vote=smoka

just came a lil better in this one with the punches and flows
had a couple lines stuck out lil more than in excels's verse to me

overall a close battle, hard on todecide on

Savir · 10-15-2004, 03:19 AM

lol@excel biting the pizza that ass shit from SNL...

"here's your pizza mr. president"
"how bout a pizza that ass?"

Excel. · 10-15-2004, 06:53 AM

^ SNL ? an american show ? then nope we dont got that here.. anyway i didnt bite..its pretty weak w/p i guess thought of by myself , during my keyd up verse,looks similar but why would i bite that i know its weak lol..

3-1 , keep the votes comin..

tettris · 10-15-2004, 09:53 AM

this battle sucked...excel used some homo ass puns...some shit that i would see on ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~...hahahahahhahh...s hit was bad...the concept line in your opener coulda been fire...but you executed horribly...smoka came with a slightly better verse (i.e. no corny puns)...although the smoka pencil line was mad homo...blah...

vote - smoka

FalseHope · 10-15-2004, 11:15 AM

Jea. The battle was pretty crappy. I don't think either came very good at all but Smoka did come a little better like everyone said. Lets just hope that this isn't them trying and shizzle. Stay up though. But like I said.. the punches were weak or played. Smoka had slightly better but not a single good line in the whole battle.

Vote- Smoka

That Nucca · 10-15-2004, 12:13 PM

vote smoka...

he had the only subpar witty line in the battle...this sucked...bad

both were horrible everything used was wack or played

Excel. · 10-15-2004, 02:33 PM

Well yeea my verse wasnt great but it didnt 'suck' as a few ppl of put it..ive seen alot worse and no-ones said shit,maybe coz it was my first battle ppl gotta hate..you'll see better next week..6-1,im guessing hes won now.

SmokaJoka666 · 10-15-2004, 02:43 PM

<<didn't try....<insert sway here>

FLAMES. · 10-15-2004, 03:51 PM

Vote-Smokka

I wasn't really feeling this at all. His opener one it for me.

Deus-ex · 10-15-2004, 03:58 PM

v- Smokajokka.

This was a mediocre batle but smoka won because he can form a decent punch. Excels wording was horrible and he came with a lot of played concepts. due to that fact smola gets my vote

-Troublesome- · 10-16-2004, 02:15 AM

booooooooo

vote = smoka

no need for explanation

TRAP. · 10-16-2004, 04:24 AM

over no-shows ..

10-11-2004, 04:01 AM	#1 (permalink)
TRAP. i'm soo old school. Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: middle east. Posts: 25,545	89. Excel. vs 90. SmokaJoka666 The RBL Rules and Regulations Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return. No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff. Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations. -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN! -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN -You MUST vote on 6 battles EACH week & EDIT the vote links in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically. -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)! Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over ** In a 3-Way Battle The Maximum Line Limit Is 20 Lines/10 Couplets -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked. -NO 1 Sentence Voting MOD AIM CONTACTS: -Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell -TRAP. - jaysus chrLst __________________ whyfebeater #1.

10-11-2004, 12:48 PM	#2 (permalink)
Excel. Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 379	Chek

10-11-2004, 01:41 PM	#3 (permalink)
Excel. Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 379	First Battle here,Lets go 6 bars. I stay complex n neat,Man on text ya weak make you my concept, u kno all my concepts are deep bout 6 feet..your stepping to me, & now ya failing son not only will i stab your forehead,but i'l nail your mum My skill weighs a ton,Now im beatin you fast il take you to dominos..n get a pizza your ass Your confusin, damn,but its ure rep im abusin Heard it sucks to lose..now he dosent mind losing fuck a bullet, man il bomb ya..below my words like a comma ure girlfriends award show..l'l put my dick honour N you'll get broke through,coz man ure a joke too Plus a 'fag' , il just let the gun smoke you Last edited by Excel.; 10-11-2004 at 04:08 PM.

10-12-2004, 10:18 PM	#4 (permalink)
SmokaJoka666 PostmorteM Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: E-Dub Posts: 189	Ya got the weakest flows...fuck you here for? This the pros.. Excel?? Fat fuck......the only thing you'd XL in is ya clothes Ya drop wack..cant drop bad habits??...but I'll spit the facts... I'd pass a hint by quitting rap...but I'd have to clean up my ax Ya elevation failed, no skills, now RBL'll watch em die there Overthrone this kid so much..the kingdom got him a high chair Wack bitch...ya dropped to let us know ya punches aint shit... Even if I was SmokaPencil666....you'd still miss the point kid ...I made ya learn bitch, and that's not all...this is just the jist Ya choices are: Get DQed..and/ore....let me rule with a iron fist Ya done and you know Smoke's gotten under ya skin son... Cuz it's not ya shouts...it's me they'll find at the top of ya lungs... __________________ PostmorteM Soundclick PostmorteM Myspace

10-13-2004, 01:05 PM	#8 (permalink)
ArgonTheWise Just Call Me Argon Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 90	Both of you used a lot of puns. Both of you had average flows. None of you had multies. This was close. I'm going to go with SmokaJoka here because I thought that Excel had too many corny punches (pizza, honour lines). Smoka just barely edged the punches due to lack of corniness and some ok punches like his opener. Everything else was even. Vote - Smoka in a rather disappointing battle. __________________ Battle Skars Chaos Theory

10-12-2004, 10:19 PM	#5 (permalink)
SmokaJoka666 PostmorteM Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: E-Dub Posts: 189	Links Go Here.

10-13-2004, 12:53 AM	#6 (permalink)
shadows edge Red Sox, bitch Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Urbana, IL Posts: 1,014	v. smoka not a great verse, the nameplay in the first bar was nice enough to take this though... excel you focused too much on multis, and all your punches are pretty played, weak and worded akwardly.

10-13-2004, 02:08 AM	#7 (permalink)
ephekt Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 70	u know this shit was close.. smoka started good but ended ok.. and excel started crappy but the last 3 bars were good.. im giving this to excel..he had better lines to me, his punches stood out more.. Vote . Excel

10-14-2004, 04:52 PM	#9 (permalink)
Truth aka UBG Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 78	vote=smoka just came a lil better in this one with the punches and flows had a couple lines stuck out lil more than in excels's verse to me overall a close battle, hard on todecide on

10-15-2004, 03:19 AM	#10 (permalink)
Savir ... Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 240	lol@excel biting the pizza that ass shit from SNL... "here's your pizza mr. president" "how bout a pizza that ass?"

10-15-2004, 06:53 AM	#11 (permalink)
Excel. Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 379	^ SNL ? an american show ? then nope we dont got that here.. anyway i didnt bite..its pretty weak w/p i guess thought of by myself , during my keyd up verse,looks similar but why would i bite that i know its weak lol.. 3-1 , keep the votes comin..

10-15-2004, 09:53 AM	#12 (permalink)
tettris weer goingg 2 huhwyiee! Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Richtown, VA Posts: 167	this battle sucked...excel used some homo ass puns...some shit that i would see on ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~...hahahahahhahh...s hit was bad...the concept line in your opener coulda been fire...but you executed horribly...smoka came with a slightly better verse (i.e. no corny puns)...although the smoka pencil line was mad homo...blah... vote - smoka __________________ THE INSTRUMENTALS VOL. 1 AVAILABLE SEPTEMBER 3RD!!! www.tettrisproductions.com {ChaosTheory}

10-15-2004, 11:15 AM	#13 (permalink)
FalseHope Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 11	Jea. The battle was pretty crappy. I don't think either came very good at all but Smoka did come a little better like everyone said. Lets just hope that this isn't them trying and shizzle. Stay up though. But like I said.. the punches were weak or played. Smoka had slightly better but not a single good line in the whole battle. Vote- Smoka

10-15-2004, 12:13 PM	#14 (permalink)
That Nucca run it Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 540	vote smoka... he had the only subpar witty line in the battle...this sucked...bad both were horrible everything used was wack or played __________________ Alter Vos Egenus Exaequo

10-15-2004, 02:33 PM	#15 (permalink)
Excel. Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 379	Well yeea my verse wasnt great but it didnt 'suck' as a few ppl of put it..ive seen alot worse and no-ones said shit,maybe coz it was my first battle ppl gotta hate..you'll see better next week..6-1,im guessing hes won now.

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10-15-2004, 02:43 PM	#16 (permalink)
SmokaJoka666 PostmorteM Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: E-Dub Posts: 189	<<didn't try....<insert sway here>

10-15-2004, 03:51 PM	#17 (permalink)
FLAMES. dboy fresh. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: 843. Posts: 11,760	Vote-Smokka I wasn't really feeling this at all. His opener one it for me.

10-15-2004, 03:58 PM	#18 (permalink)
Deus-ex Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 95	v- Smokajokka. This was a mediocre batle but smoka won because he can form a decent punch. Excels wording was horrible and he came with a lot of played concepts. due to that fact smola gets my vote

10-16-2004, 02:15 AM	#19 (permalink)
-Troublesome- Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Jersey Posts: 2,477	booooooooo vote = smoka no need for explanation __________________ 3x RBL Champ

10-16-2004, 04:24 AM	#20 (permalink)
TRAP. i'm soo old school. Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: middle east. Posts: 25,545	over no-shows .. __________________ whyfebeater #1.

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