37. Nique 3-0 vs. 38. Tuke 3-1

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Old 10-05-2004, 02:18 AM   #1 (permalink)
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37. Nique 3-0 vs. 38. Tuke 3-1

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Old 10-05-2004, 04:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 10-05-2004, 05:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Tuke takes it up the butt!
Go 20..
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Old 10-05-2004, 10:14 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Tuke takes it up the butt!
For sakes.. Your lines aren't 'up to date'..
so your not a threat hun../
Or is it that..
Your lines are like you.. they cant get one?../
So Listen.. im not kidding..
and I aint tryna sound very rude../
But your mom only calls you a treasure..
Hoping that your dad'll bury you../
You cant even get guys.. online, and you often lie..
Plus your ass is not thick!../
But I wouldnt call you an ugly stick..
Its more like a fucken forest collapsed in your kicks../
And you dont dress cute.. so ill disrespect you..
And dont continue to play your part../
Cuz everybody knows..
Female rappers are either..
obese or trailor park../
But then again.. I bet you also have no friends..
Believe me.. I can tell../
And i also wouldnt doubt..
If your self portraits.. actually hung themselves../
Halloween is in a couple of weeks..
And you shouldnt be goin to homes../
Cuz the way that you look normally..
You should trick or treat over the phone../
Trust me hun, your an ugly mug..
And your straight geeky../
Cuz truthfully..
The only thing you've ever turned on.. was a pc../
So now.. ima state the facts.. your wack..
Plus your text career is so shit../
And its pointless..
Like telling knock knock jokes to the homeless../
Your verses sucked ass and you dropped enough trash..
You should be quitten soon../
Cuz your so in-tune with her wackness..
Hell.. its the only song you listen too../
Some kids wonder why the rbls shit?..
Its all because nique entered../
Cuz your multies aren't relatively wack..
There a god damn family member../
And you deserve to feel bad.. Cuz your living real sad..
I dont think it gets worse../
But really.... what kinda girl..
Would give up her friday nights.. just to post a text verse?../


G'luck nique..
no hard feelings
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Old 10-05-2004, 10:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Lmao. I'll edit this with my post.
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Old 10-06-2004, 07:19 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Trailer Park lines? ..

Half ya lines are badly worded; The other half won't hurt,
& I only call you Tuke with a T, cuz my P key no longer works..
I predict you're wack, can't spit, can't cipher, can't spark,
Kid tried to Free...& ended up a crowd member for 106th & Park

...

Had 2 no shows, 1 DQ, but now Tuke's the first to go,
Cuz u're fucked out of this win....with wine, condoms, & birth control.
No bitch would want you, u'll neva make it, no cuddle, no kiss,
Cuz you're dirrty & twice as wack, like a Nelly Double Disc.
I've faced the worst & the best, but Tuke's the best guy,
Why Tower Records or Circuit City...when Formal gave me the best bye..
I ain't even read ya shit, but you winning? U ain't serious,
I'm a female, so u know it's a given that'll I'll beat u.....period.
Keep up, your wack played verse, I'm quick to fold ya,
Cuz I'm STUCK on smacking this bitch, like a Rick James Poster.
You ain't bring the heat, no noise, no riots, no chance,
Tuke is so light-weighted..that he can start his own Atkins diet Plan.
Fuc this whiteboy, u'll never be top-notched, nique re-arrange ya,
Cuz I'm owning this white T, like the club banger.
Plus you're a skinny fuck, u hold no weight, so i rebuttal,
Your verse being bull-shit, is the only reason u have calf muscles.
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Old 10-06-2004, 09:37 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Quote:
For sakes.. Your lines aren't 'up to date'..
so your not a threat hun../
Or is it that..
Your lines are like you.. they cant get one?../
And you dont dress cute.. so ill disrespect you..
And dont continue to play your part../
Cuz everybody knows..
Female rappers are either..
obese or trailor park../
I dont think it gets worse../
But really.... what kinda girl..
Would give up her friday nights.. just to post a text verse?../
vs
Quote:
Half ya lines are badly worded; The other half won't hurt,
& I only call you Tuke with a T, cuz my P key no longer works..
I predict you're wack, can't spit, can't cipher, can't spark,
Kid tried to Free...& ended up a crowd member for 106th & Park
Had 2 no shows, 1 DQ, but now Tuke's the first to go,
Cuz u're fucked out of this win....with wine, condoms, & birth control.
Keep up, your wack played verse, I'm quick to fold ya,
Cuz I'm STUCK on smacking this bitch, like a Rick James Poster.
Fuc this whiteboy, u'll never be top-notched, nique re-arrange ya,
Cuz I'm owning this white T, like the club banger.


Well this speaks for its self Nique came a lot harder. She would be a hell of a lot better if she didn't force her rhymes in some instances but she is getting a hell of a lot better. Tuke You just did a lot of forcing and had some weak ass punches. If u gonna survive any battle punches gotz go be hard and ur rhyme structure was real shitty and looked kinda stretched. In all this was a one person battle because Nique just proved to be the better opponent.

- Nique

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Old 10-06-2004, 11:53 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Nique came out firing with some nice lines (Period, Circuit City), but also some lines that just didn't connect (Rick James, Atkins, birth control).

Tuke on the other hand came with really short bars, which hurt him. His scheme was really messed up, no consistency in the structure. He did have multies though, which Nique did not. Wasn't enough for the win, however. Nique took this one on the strength of her punches.

Vote-Nique.
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Old 10-06-2004, 04:20 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Old 10-06-2004, 04:57 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Yeah Nique won. Fresh concepts & played ones. Her verse brought a lot more than the other dude. But her wording was nice. So..

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Old 10-06-2004, 07:11 PM   #11 (permalink)
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ionno wtf you people are reading...


nique had some garbage lines...

I predict you're wack, can't spit, can't cipher, can't spark,
Kid tried to Free...& ended up a crowd member for 106th & Park
Had 2 no shows, 1 DQ, but now Tuke's the first to go,
Cuz u're fucked out of this win....with wine, condoms, & birth control.

no punch

I've faced the worst & the best, but Tuke's the best guy,
Why Tower Records or Circuit City...when Formal gave me the best bye..

the setup... WTF??

a period line? how played you gonna get? rest of the lines were crap especially the closer...

actually wait, i liked the rick james line.


now i'm going to help everyone else with Tuke's verse

So Listen.. im not kidding.. and I aint tryna sound very rude../
But your mom only calls you a treasure.. Hoping that your dad'll bury you../

And you dont dress cute.. so ill disrespect you.. And dont continue to play your part../
Cuz everybody knows..
Female rappers are either.. obese or trailor park../
But then again.. I bet you also have no friends.. Believe me.. I can tell../
And i also wouldnt doubt.. If your self portraits.. actually hung themselves../
Halloween is in a couple of weeks.. And you shouldnt be goin to homes../
Cuz the way that you look normally.. You should trick or treat over the phone../
Trust me hun, your an ugly mug.. And your straight geeky../
Cuz truthfully.. The only thing you've ever turned on.. was a pc../
So now.. ima state the facts.. your wack.. Plus your text career is so shit../
And its pointless.. Like telling knock knock jokes to the homeless../
Your verses sucked ass and you dropped enough trash.. You should be quitten soon../
Cuz your so in-tune with her wackness.. Hell.. its the only song you listen too../
Some kids wonder why the rbls shit?.. Its all because nique entered../
Cuz your multies aren't relatively wack.. There a god damn family member../
And you deserve to feel bad.. Cuz your living real sad.. I dont think it gets worse../
But really.... what kinda girl..Would give up her friday nights.. just to post a text verse?../


honestly, what's wrong with this verse? these are some nice punches/disses.... and the wordplay and flow are way nicer then nique's...


whatever


vote-Tuke
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Old 10-06-2004, 07:21 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Tuke takes it up the butt!
Your verses sucked ass and you dropped enough trash..
You should be quitten soon../
Cuz your so in-tune with her wackness..
Hell.. its the only song you listen too../


It should of really been

Your verses sucked ass and you dropped enough trash..
You should be quitten soon../
Cuz your so in-tune with your wackness..
Hell.. its prolly the only song you listen too../


1-3 your way, cool verse
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Old 10-06-2004, 07:28 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by ArgonTheWise
Nique came out firing with some nice lines (Period, Circuit City), but also some lines that just didn't connect (Rick James, Atkins, birth control).

Tuke on the other hand came with really short bars, which hurt him. His scheme was really messed up, no consistency in the structure. He did have multies though, which Nique did not. Wasn't enough for the win, however. Nique took this one on the strength of her punches.

Vote-Nique.

FUCK YOU son....wtf ..you judging his verse on his structure...we have short bars...so the fuck what?

GAY GAY GAY

just because his/our shit is unorthodox...you wanna fuckin base your judgment on that? your gay.

I dont even know this tuke cat..but i bet hes fuckin amazed at the gay hate against structure voting goin on here..argon your a flaming homo.

Vote/ Nique though..on harder punches... and thats real..i dont base my vote on structure.


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Old 10-06-2004, 07:50 PM   #14 (permalink)
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i cant fuckin beleive nique used a Free/106 park line...*sigh*

anyone, both verses were aiight, nique was pretty played a lot, tuke was a lil corny, tuke had the better flow, i just think nique had a few good lines, so my vote goes to nique..
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Old 10-06-2004, 09:16 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Wow... this was a nice battle... I didn't think Nique was gonna bring it after Tuke dropped some nice ish.. She did tho... Nice drops on both sides..


Either way tho... I ain't gonna drop a full breakdown.


Vote - Tuke


he barely took this... You both came real nice.... but i was feeling his verse more. Stay up both.
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I'm with TRP on this one. Tuke had some fresh concepts, a lot of nice punchs. Nique had some nice concepts but didn't execute them well, some lines were cool, some were played, some didn't really hit at all.

"Why Tower Records or Circuit City...when Formal gave me the best bye.."

^that was the nicest from Nique. But, Tuke was a lot more consistent, maybe you guys aren't seeing it cuz of his structure.


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5-3. And people, when you vote don't sway and don't argue in my thread. It really isn't that serious.
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Old 10-07-2004, 02:40 AM   #18 (permalink)
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So Listen.. im not kidding..
and I aint tryna sound very rude../
But your mom only calls you a treasure..
Hoping that your dad'll bury you../

and

But then again.. I bet you also have no friends..
Believe me.. I can tell../
And i also wouldnt doubt..
If your self portraits.. actually hung themselves../
Halloween is in a couple of weeks..
And you shouldnt be goin to homes../
Cuz the way that you look normally..
You should trick or treat over the phone../
Trust me hun, your an ugly mug..
And your straight geeky../
Cuz truthfully..
The only thing you've ever turned on.. was a pc../
So now.. ima state the facts.. your wack..
Plus your text career is so shit../
And its pointless..
Like telling knock knock jokes to the homeless../
Your verses sucked ass and you dropped enough trash..
You should be quitten soon../
Cuz your so in-tune with her wackness..
Hell.. its the only song you listen too../
Some kids wonder why the rbls shit?..
Its all because nique entered../
Cuz your multies aren't relatively wack..
There a god damn family member../

was nice or decent. nique had a lot of played concepts or lines that just didnt connect. i did like the rick james line tho.

vote tuke
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Old 10-07-2004, 04:00 AM   #19 (permalink)
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nique your opener was real........and that's about as real as it got for me. not enough consistancy throughout and like someone said, you had some really weak setups and some that didnt make any sense. not hating i'm just saying

tuke, i like the unorthadox style trying something different. cant believe these herbs are hatin' on that. none the less,

Cuz your multies aren't relatively wack..
There a god damn family member../

i was feelin this one for mild creativity and real hard hitting delivery.

and dont mistake me for hating, but nique said somethin in one line like "i'm a girl of course i'm gonna win"........that was lame shorty. and the 106 park line. eeeeeeeeeeeeek. props on that first punch though shit hit hard

vote tuke
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i think this was closer than most ppl are making it out to be.. uh,

tuke had some nice lines, started off real nice, and fell off the second half. the biggest problem i had was that ur 2 bars are really long.. and kinda uneven. use less words to express the same concepts? ionno. nique came alright, much more consistent than tuke, but it lacked that punching power in general.. and lol@ you using a period line, i woulda thought everyone and their mother have already used it on you. well anyhow,

v/ tuke.. close tho.


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