57 Copywritten 3-4 vs 58 Smoke Trail 2-2

Insanevillian · 09-30-2003, 11:27 PM

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whyte hype · 10-01-2003, 04:36 PM

checkin in man..........goin like 12 - 16 lines

Copywritten · 10-01-2003, 05:06 PM

Sounds good to me, good luck.

whyte hype · 10-01-2003, 05:55 PM

ayo man you fuckin witha ringa
punch out your blocks, leave you fallin like Jenga/
so you can crash and burn
only way you hot if you was the F.B.I's greatest concern/
F.uck a B.I. Sexual dude
put a buncha faggots together and get Copywritten's Family Fued/
you think your hotter than me
come on man you cant de'feet' me im stoppin out your heat/
you like your eggs scrambled
im 'over' you 'easy', leavin you as the Mag's worst verse sample/
how many personals of yours will be fake
only mistake M. Crumb made was your post # should = your rank/
so you think your a true baller
only way thats real if your sig was your fuckin father/
to bad theres no word of the week
cause its only 'wins'day and im already beaten this geek/
so im gunna leave yall on this last com'mint'
you need to break ice kid, go pick up some icebreaker mints/

g luck, did this today, one

Will Include Votes in here when i do vote.....
1. klobb vs optix........http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646152-45-optix-3-0-vs-46-klobb-sixteen-3-0-a-post7402498.html
2.Tank vs Memento........http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646094-133-nolimit-tank14-vs-134-memento-post7402696.html
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Copywritten · 10-01-2003, 09:27 PM

Let me key this real quick...

This verse is about to take me 5 minutes
And I don't even need rhymes in it to win it
I mean, you wrote dog shit from start to finish
Understand, that when I say that was the whackest shit I've EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER witnessed
Killin' you, like it's nobody's business..
Your rhymes put you on the stake, and you ain't even religious
NOBODY knows who this kid is, there's no hope, the kid is whack
He wouldn't be hot, if someone blew smoke up his ass
I can't believe you posted that, it's kids like you I hate yo
But I gotta thank you..
For makin' me 4-4, and givin' me this KO
I STILL can't believe you posted that whack shit, but I don't want to make this kid sulk
But you are by far the worst, putting me against you's an insult

Sorry for the lack of effort..Just keyed this one =P

Milky Way · 10-02-2003, 04:05 PM

Wasnt a very good battle. Copy took this easily with way harder punches and some shit he had was nice. Smoke came with all basics, no twists or anything. Copy could have been more creative too. Pretty boring battle.

Best lines:
Smoke -----------
Copy: I mean, you wrote dog shit from start to finish
Understand, that when I say that was the whackest shit I've EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER witnessed
..decent

This line was sick right here:
NOBODY knows who this kid is, there's no hope, the kid is whack
He wouldn't be hot, if someone blew smoke up his ass

Vote: Copywritten

VerbalWeaponz · 10-02-2003, 08:00 PM

ok battle....not really feelin' either verse to well but copy took this bcuz he had harder punches n better creatvity.....other guy had some ok lines but as said pretty basic...

v-copywritten

Verbal

J Rocca · 10-02-2003, 08:13 PM

this wasn't a nice battle to read at alll....wheather it was copy lack of effort or smoke's lack of punches

vote=smoke
he had ok punches and had some flow to it.....copy didn't even try to make his flow so therfor i give this one to smoke

fav line:F.uck a B.I. Sexual dude
put a buncha faggots together and get Copywritten's Family Fued/

Narsil · 10-02-2003, 08:35 PM

thank both of you for an easy vote...vote copy...obvious reasons

I.deal · 10-02-2003, 10:45 PM

vote copy

no questions

Super. · 10-02-2003, 11:49 PM

v-copy

better punches structure
wordplay concepts
blah blah blah
everything

smoke trail came wack
with no real good concepts or any decent punches

I STILL can't believe you posted that whack shit, but I don't want to make this kid sulk
But you are by far the worst, putting me against you's an insult
^decent

trapezoidal. · 10-03-2003, 12:04 AM

smoke kilt this one. i think y'all are reading it wrong. even if smoke has the styles flow, it still came out nice. and even if the typing was ebonicized. nothing against copywritten but he didn't even put up a fight, and he should've.

vote = smoke.

maybe im reading this wrong. dope battle guys. pce.

The Grimm One · 10-03-2003, 01:40 AM

Vote-CopyWritten

Smoke Trail was decent....that post # = rank line was dope for real

It was said in the above replies...i agree--
Good battle guys

>>Grimm<<

Noggah · 10-03-2003, 03:28 AM

shiet..... Copy didnt even have that many good punches, just had flow and thats it...I think smoke definately got this wit the family fued line, every other line in both of ya'lls verses was just filler n weak...

vote = smoke

emcee_simple · 10-03-2003, 09:47 AM

this battle was gay..
both verses sucked big floppy donkey dick but still

copy took it

vote-copy

Copywritten · 10-03-2003, 03:48 PM

Votes are 7-3 me as of now. Nice battle smoke, no beef.

Copywritten · 10-03-2003, 04:17 PM

Votes:

http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646094-133-nolimit-tank14-vs-134-memento-post7414379.html
http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646138-63-highpaw-cyst-2-0-vs-64-animatix-2-0-a-post7414502.html
http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646162-31-hash-brown-5-3-vs-32-charles-4-2-a-post7414557.html
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CATATONIC · 10-03-2003, 05:18 PM

vote= copywritten

pretty easy decision...

hes a better battler.

BiOnIc Mc 2.0 · 10-03-2003, 05:33 PM

vote=Copywritten

This was aight

afraid knot. · 10-03-2003, 06:11 PM

uummm vote = copywritten..
lol @ people voting for smoke trail.. this was one-sided..

but dope line @ make you fall like jenga

09-30-2003, 11:27 PM	#1 (permalink)
Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Oakland, Ca Posts: 16,322	57 Copywritten 3-4 vs 58 Smoke Trail 2-2 ..The RBL Rules & Regulations.. RBL Verses Due Friday, 12 Midnight: Eastern Time RBL Votes Due By Sunday, 11 o’clock PM: Eastern Time Each battler is entitled to up their thread ONCE. Upping includes counting votes, discussing votes, or replying period. Each time you up your thread more than once you'll lose 1 vote. You must vote on at least six battles EVERY week.. For every vote that you are missing, you will be deducted that number. Make sure to edit the links of the battles in your check-in post. If there is enough evidence or reason to suspect favoritism (dickriding) the person accused will be eliminated from the RBL. There are no crew or outside votes, meaning you must be in the RBL. An for the vote to count you must VOTE under your League name. NO ALIAS VOTING PEOPLE!! 4 Lines: Minimum; 30 Lines: Maximum, and the bar range, or amount must be agreed on by both battlers. You may edit your verse, ONLY if you’re the first cat to post ya verse and The 2nd guy hasn’t posted his shit yet. Word of the Week!!!! No Word This Week!!! Any head caught biting will be banned from the League or any RBL Tournaments. All questions go to: rapmusicnovel@yahoo.com __________________ ELITE

10-01-2003, 04:36 PM	#2 (permalink)
whyte hype DoNt TeSt Me Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: country of West Va Posts: 349	checkin in man..........goin like 12 - 16 lines __________________ A k A......Smoke Trail.........Thats it, neva on this name

10-01-2003, 05:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
whyte hype DoNt TeSt Me Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: country of West Va Posts: 349	My Verse G'luck ayo man you fuckin witha ringa punch out your blocks, leave you fallin like Jenga/ so you can crash and burn only way you hot if you was the F.B.I's greatest concern/ F.uck a B.I. Sexual dude put a buncha faggots together and get Copywritten's Family Fued/ you think your hotter than me come on man you cant de'feet' me im stoppin out your heat/ you like your eggs scrambled im 'over' you 'easy', leavin you as the Mag's worst verse sample/ how many personals of yours will be fake only mistake M. Crumb made was your post # should = your rank/ so you think your a true baller only way thats real if your sig was your fuckin father/ to bad theres no word of the week cause its only 'wins'day and im already beaten this geek/ so im gunna leave yall on this last com'mint' you need to break ice kid, go pick up some icebreaker mints/ g luck, did this today, one Will Include Votes in here when i do vote..... 1. klobb vs optix........http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646152-45-optix-3-0-vs-46-klobb-sixteen-3-0-a-post7402498.html 2.Tank vs Memento........http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646094-133-nolimit-tank14-vs-134-memento-post7402696.html 3. 4. 5. 6. __________________ A k A......Smoke Trail.........Thats it, neva on this name Last edited by whyte hype; 10-01-2003 at 10:55 PM.

10-02-2003, 04:05 PM	#6 (permalink)
Milky Way Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 15	Wasnt a very good battle. Copy took this easily with way harder punches and some shit he had was nice. Smoke came with all basics, no twists or anything. Copy could have been more creative too. Pretty boring battle. Best lines: Smoke ----------- Copy: I mean, you wrote dog shit from start to finish Understand, that when I say that was the whackest shit I've EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER witnessed ..decent This line was sick right here: NOBODY knows who this kid is, there's no hope, the kid is whack He wouldn't be hot, if someone blew smoke up his ass Vote: Copywritten Last edited by Milky Way; 10-02-2003 at 04:12 PM.

10-02-2003, 08:00 PM	#7 (permalink)
VerbalWeaponz Unholy-Syndicate Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 313 Posts: 254	ok battle....not really feelin' either verse to well but copy took this bcuz he had harder punches n better creatvity.....other guy had some ok lines but as said pretty basic... v-copywritten Verbal __________________ banned http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7417580

10-01-2003, 05:06 PM	#3 (permalink)
Copywritten Copy Me Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,570	Sounds good to me, good luck.

10-01-2003, 09:27 PM	#5 (permalink)
Copywritten Copy Me Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,570	Let me key this real quick... This verse is about to take me 5 minutes And I don't even need rhymes in it to win it I mean, you wrote dog shit from start to finish Understand, that when I say that was the whackest shit I've EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER witnessed Killin' you, like it's nobody's business.. Your rhymes put you on the stake, and you ain't even religious NOBODY knows who this kid is, there's no hope, the kid is whack He wouldn't be hot, if someone blew smoke up his ass I can't believe you posted that, it's kids like you I hate yo But I gotta thank you.. For makin' me 4-4, and givin' me this KO I STILL can't believe you posted that whack shit, but I don't want to make this kid sulk But you are by far the worst, putting me against you's an insult Sorry for the lack of effort..Just keyed this one =P

10-02-2003, 08:13 PM	#8 (permalink)
J Rocca Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: sitting in my tub, contemplating murderous thoughts Posts: 2,687	this wasn't a nice battle to read at alll....wheather it was copy lack of effort or smoke's lack of punches vote=smoke he had ok punches and had some flow to it.....copy didn't even try to make his flow so therfor i give this one to smoke fav line:F.uck a B.I. Sexual dude put a buncha faggots together and get Copywritten's Family Fued/ __________________ Quality Circle Alumni Stigmata ft. Mac Flow "Arband dah ishmad kalah"

10-02-2003, 08:35 PM	#9 (permalink)
Narsil the unbreakable Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 273	thank both of you for an easy vote...vote copy...obvious reasons __________________ Most likely I dont take you serious

10-02-2003, 10:45 PM	#10 (permalink)
I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: HybridAngels Posts: 1,014	vote copy no questions

10-02-2003, 11:49 PM	#11 (permalink)
Super. Lovin' it Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: California Posts: 25,518	v-copy better punches structure wordplay concepts blah blah blah everything smoke trail came wack with no real good concepts or any decent punches I STILL can't believe you posted that whack shit, but I don't want to make this kid sulk But you are by far the worst, putting me against you's an insult ^decent

10-03-2003, 12:04 AM	#12 (permalink)
trapezoidal. dip - the wonder years. Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: maryland - the middle ground. Posts: 84	smoke kilt this one. i think y'all are reading it wrong. even if smoke has the styles flow, it still came out nice. and even if the typing was ebonicized. nothing against copywritten but he didn't even put up a fight, and he should've. vote = smoke. maybe im reading this wrong. dope battle guys. pce. __________________ whyfebeater #1.

10-03-2003, 01:40 AM	#13 (permalink)
The Grimm One No place like the ghetto. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Catch me in the hood. If you allowed there. Posts: 181	Vote-CopyWritten Smoke Trail was decent....that post # = rank line was dope for real It was said in the above replies...i agree-- Good battle guys >>Grimm<< __________________ The Crew DMeTRIUS - Cynacal aka Break it - Atreyu - Monolith - ROC-C - Dr. Perfect - 5 Starre - J Rocca - M.H. - simply amazing - The Grimm One

10-03-2003, 03:28 AM	#14 (permalink)
Noggah Politically Incorrect Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Da Dirty Posts: 159	shiet..... Copy didnt even have that many good punches, just had flow and thats it...I think smoke definately got this wit the family fued line, every other line in both of ya'lls verses was just filler n weak... vote = smoke __________________ The 1 and only...

10-03-2003, 09:47 AM	#15 (permalink)
emcee_simple Simply The Best Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 392	ewww this battle was gay.. both verses sucked big floppy donkey dick but still copy took it vote-copy __________________ Simplicity Wins

10-03-2003, 05:18 PM	#18 (permalink)
CATATONIC Blk Man Dat Gets Big Head Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 663	vote= copywritten pretty easy decision... hes a better battler. __________________ Who want what? I bring it to you beef uncut A fat slab of somenila- force feed you fucks You want the crown ya ••••• bring yo mutts So mines can eat yo's up press ya luck fucka, or ease on up "Undisputed"

10-03-2003, 05:33 PM	#19 (permalink)
BiOnIc Mc 2.0 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Detroit Schoolcraft Ave. Murda Block Come Fuck Wit Em I Live What U Talk Posts: 69	vote=Copywritten This was aight __________________ H20.....is the illest I was the first one to say all homo it's trademarked faggots My N igga Gave Me This Name.......Jeff Loves Me

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10-03-2003, 03:48 PM	#16 (permalink)
Copywritten Copy Me Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,570	Votes are 7-3 me as of now. Nice battle smoke, no beef.

10-03-2003, 04:17 PM	#17 (permalink)
Copywritten Copy Me Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,570	Votes: http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646094-133-nolimit-tank14-vs-134-memento-post7414379.html http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646138-63-highpaw-cyst-2-0-vs-64-animatix-2-0-a-post7414502.html http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646162-31-hash-brown-5-3-vs-32-charles-4-2-a-post7414557.html 4. 5. 6.

10-03-2003, 06:11 PM	#20 (permalink)
afraid knot. Mr. Get Jerk'd In The RBL Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 248	uummm vote = copywritten.. lol @ people voting for smoke trail.. this was one-sided.. but dope line @ make you fall like jenga

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