45. Copywritten 3-3 vs 46. VizzBlade 2-1

Serge dot T · 09-23-2003, 10:14 AM

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Copywritten · 09-23-2003, 06:19 PM

Holler.

09-23-2003, 06:35 PM

1. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...postid=7356858

2. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642304-61-klobb-sixteen-2-0-vs-62-muti-5-6-a-post7356876.html

3. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...postid=7358218

4. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...postid=7358255

5. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642301-57-star-struck-4-4-vs-58-courtesy-2-0-a-post7358406.html

09-24-2003, 03:12 AM

15-20 BARS MAX... I DID 15

that records awful fittin.. look at ya competition..
biters vote against me..cuz they cant 'get it, copywritten'
you can bet that ill be winning.. no matter the vote count..
cuz jeff'll see ur trash.. & this battle'll get thrown out..
im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro..
copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads..
ill slaughter you now, dont.. even bother to post..
cuz this season ill son u.. like fathers' that coach..
im rawer than most.. vizz is a blade..
i either shame the ill, or-son welles*.. LIKE CITIZEN KANE..
your verse is an 'accident profile'.. full of 'written mistakes'..
fourty sixth is the same.. position i been had..
ill still take u out the game, with a beating.. like gym class..
bitch ass, u wana mesh?? come get tossed into fences..
last week, u got beat like a girl.. when u lost to extensions..

*Orson Welles directed, wrote, and starred in Citizen Kane

Copywritten · 09-25-2003, 06:22 PM

<-Vizz

Saw Vizzes pic, face busted, no wonder he feels outta place
Never touched a bitch, nevermind second base
I'm wreckin' fakes, you ain't on my level blades
Cuz I score so much, I could play for the Devil Rays
Fuck tryin', that's all it takes...
I'd cook ya somethin', but ya chances is baked
Lyrical restraint, sayin' he's nice, still won't get crew calls
Stop playin', with yaself, before ya get blue balls
It’s true ya’ll, VB’s dick is miniature
IV told me, fah sure dawg, but it’s colossal…
Compared to the list’a wins in ya signature
This isn’t fair, this kid smells like poop, pew (bwahaha =X)
But I’d rather smell his ass, than look at him in a tutu (2-2)
Only 2 wins you’ll get, were no shows, it’s true too
Next week you can battle MADDRAPPER, but even he’ll do you
Woohoo!, your mom's sick of the siamese twins, that she made
Then cut Blade into two parts, and he still wouldn't B-Lade
(be laid)

Narsil · 09-25-2003, 08:09 PM

copy came pretty ok...but viz came nice...only weak point I saw with vizz was the or son thing I hate that type a wordplay it seems unnatural to me..but to each its own..the sonning thing was kinda played...everything else was coo some nice lines...copys verse had like half a step less of everything everywhere...it jus never really appealed...but it was still pretty decent

vote vizzzzz

Copywritten · 09-25-2003, 10:45 PM

^^^Uppin'

EnMity · 09-26-2003, 12:56 AM

Vizz - Pretty solid verse , i was feelin it thru out, I liked the Trash Line ...Hit hard...Fathers that coach line was Ok ..The written mistakes line was Ight ...
Last Bar was Good, pretty Good verse Overall...

7/10

Copy- Hmmm, started off a lil iffy , But really picked it up in the middle with the wins in ya signature line ...hit hard....tutu line was eh, But i did love the last bar ..The B-lade was creative,
6.9/10

overall i think Viz was a lil more consistent ...

Vote- Vizz

Vadik · 09-26-2003, 10:46 AM

Vizz came on point...flow was too nice...and most of the lines were good...Citizen Kane line was fresh as fuck.

Copy came not good at all....horrible lines like the tu-tu (& how the hell are you gonna laugh at your own lines in brackets? WTF?)....I've seen so much better from you dogg...

Vote = Vizz Blade v2.0

Tony Elbow · 09-26-2003, 10:59 AM

vizz blade had more consistant better flowing punches..copy had nice shit too but I found it a lil borin at times...

Best from VB:
im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro..
copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads..

best from copy:
But I’d rather smell his ass, than look at him in a tutu (2-2)

Vote: Vizz Blade

Wordage · 09-26-2003, 11:07 AM

vote= VB2

Vizz' flow was hot and had some nice concepts. Liked the "Fed download" and the opener the best. Had some good wordplay as well.

Copywritten wasn't as creative with his punches, flow was ok but lacked wordplay. Kinda liked the closer but that was all.

Goodluck to both of ya.

ARIZCATZ · 09-26-2003, 11:34 AM

VizzBlade's best
that records awful fittin.. look at ya competition..
biters vote against me..cuz they cant 'get it, copywritten'
you can bet that ill be winning.. no matter the vote count..
cuz jeff'll see ur trash.. & this battle'll get thrown out..
im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro..
copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads..
Man, that was all hot. Nice flow.
im rawer than most.. vizz is a blade..
i either shame the ill, or-son welles*.. LIKE CITIZEN KANE..
Line of the battle easy.

Copy's best
Saw Vizzes pic, face busted, no wonder he feels outta place
Never touched a bitch, nevermind second base
Pretty nice. Coulda been worded better.

Vizz takes this one easy. Much more consistent from top to bottom and the Citizen Kane line has to be in the mag this week. Fire.

Copywritten · 09-26-2003, 11:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vadik

Vizz came on point...flow was too nice...and most of the lines were good...Citizen Kane line was fresh as fuck.

Copy came not good at all....horrible lines like the tu-tu (& how the hell are you gonna laugh at your own lines in brackets? WTF?)....I've seen so much better from you dogg...

Vote = Vizz Blade v2.0

Hahaha, I was laughin' cuz I knew it was retarded.

The Grimm One · 09-26-2003, 02:20 PM

Vote=Vizz Blade....

Reason:
Because, to me, Copy just came with too much homo irrelevent homo shit, while Vizz just came raw....

Good battle all together y'all!

>>Grimm<<

Monolith · 09-26-2003, 03:08 PM

Vizz took this easily..

Copywritten didnt really have any lines I could feel..

vote=Vizz

Noggah · 09-26-2003, 03:37 PM

Vizz easily got this wit lines like

copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads..

shit along those lines, orson welles line was cool too... Overall he just had better punches n wordplay, etc.... Only Copywritten line i liked was the blue balls one, the rest just lacked...

so vote = Vizz

09-26-2003, 03:47 PM

fuck a count i win

Copywritten · 09-26-2003, 05:53 PM

Haha, good shit vizz...

R.A.M. · 09-26-2003, 06:41 PM

copy did come hella ill fo sho, but he wasnt able to edge vizz out. a very strong shwoing by vizz. some really ill shit. the feds/copwrite line was raw. some real clever shit

vote- vizz blade

IgloS · 09-26-2003, 07:42 PM

that records awful fittin.. look at ya competition..
biters vote against me..cuz they cant 'get it, copywritten'
^nice

im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro..
copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads..
^I liked this one too

im rawer than most.. vizz is a blade..
i either shame the ill, or-son welles*.. LIKE CITIZEN KANE..
^haha, that was some thing I havent seen before

Saw Vizzes pic, face busted, no wonder he feels outta place

VS

Only 2 wins you’ll get, were no shows, it’s true too
Next week you can battle MADDRAPPER, but even he’ll do you
^okay, worded strange tho
Woohoo!, your mom's sick of the siamese twins, that she made
Then cut Blade into two parts, and he still wouldn't B-Lade
^ehh, too forced for my taste

vote-Vizz

I don't know what to say coppy.. how can you expect to win by dropping set ups like this?

This isn’t fair, this kid smells like poop, pew (bwahaha =X)

09-23-2003, 10:14 AM	#1 (permalink)
Serge dot T You're in Serge country. Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 22,149	45. Copywritten 3-3 vs 46. VizzBlade 2-1 ..The RBL Rules & Regulations.. RBL Verses Due Friday, 12 Midnight: Eastern Time RBL Votes Due By Sunday, 11 o’clock PM: Eastern Time Each battler is entitled to up their thread ONCE. Upping includes counting votes, discussing votes, or replying period. Each time you up your thread more than once you'll lose 1 vote. You must vote on at least six battles EVERY week.. For every vote that you are missing, you will be deducted that number. Make sure to edit the links of the battles in your check-in post. If there is enough evidence or reason to suspect favoritism (dickriding) the person accused will be eliminated from the RBL. There are no crew or outside votes, meaning you must be in the RBL. An for the vote to count you must VOTE under your League name. NO ALIAS VOTING PEOPLE!! 4 Lines: Minimum; 30 Lines: Maximum, and the bar range, or amount must be agreed on by both battlers. You may edit your verse, ONLY if you’re the first cat to post ya verse and The 2nd guy hasn’t posted his shit yet. Word of the Week!!!! IV Any head caught biting will be banned from the League or any RBL Tournaments. All questions go to: rapmusicnovel@yahoo.com __________________ Mike Tyson "He was screaming like my wife." - On Tyrell Biggs “[He] called me a ‘rapist’ and a ‘recluse.’ I’m not a recluse.”- Defending his character "I can sell out Madison Square Garden masturbating."- Being real

09-23-2003, 06:35 PM	#3 (permalink)
Vizz Blade V2.0 Guest Posts: n/a	1. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...postid=7356858 2. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642304-61-klobb-sixteen-2-0-vs-62-muti-5-6-a-post7356876.html 3. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...postid=7358218 4. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...postid=7358255 5. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642301-57-star-struck-4-4-vs-58-courtesy-2-0-a-post7358406.html Last edited by Vizz Blade V2.0; 09-25-2003 at 11:33 PM.

09-24-2003, 03:12 AM	#4 (permalink)
Vizz Blade V2.0 Guest Posts: n/a	15-20 BARS MAX... I DID 15 that records awful fittin.. look at ya competition.. biters vote against me..cuz they cant 'get it, copywritten' you can bet that ill be winning.. no matter the vote count.. cuz jeff'll see ur trash.. & this battle'll get thrown out.. im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro.. copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads.. ill slaughter you now, dont.. even bother to post.. cuz this season ill son u.. like fathers' that coach.. im rawer than most.. vizz is a blade.. i either shame the ill, or-son welles.. LIKE CITIZEN KANE.. your verse is an 'accident profile'.. full of 'written mistakes'.. fourty sixth is the same.. position i been had.. ill still take u out the game, with a beating.. like gym class.. bitch ass, u wana mesh?? come get tossed into fences.. last week, u got beat like a girl.. when u lost to extensions.. Orson Welles directed, wrote, and starred in Citizen Kane Last edited by Vizz Blade V2.0; 09-24-2003 at 06:03 PM. Reason: bar count/spelling errors

09-25-2003, 08:09 PM	#6 (permalink)
Narsil the unbreakable Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 273	copy came pretty ok...but viz came nice...only weak point I saw with vizz was the or son thing I hate that type a wordplay it seems unnatural to me..but to each its own..the sonning thing was kinda played...everything else was coo some nice lines...copys verse had like half a step less of everything everywhere...it jus never really appealed...but it was still pretty decent vote vizzzzz __________________ Most likely I dont take you serious

09-25-2003, 10:45 PM	#7 (permalink)
Copywritten Copy Me Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,570	^^^Uppin' Last edited by Copywritten; 09-26-2003 at 08:24 AM.

09-23-2003, 06:19 PM	#2 (permalink)
Copywritten Copy Me Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,570	Holler.

09-25-2003, 06:22 PM	#5 (permalink)
Copywritten Copy Me Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,570	<-Vizz Saw Vizzes pic, face busted, no wonder he feels outta place Never touched a bitch, nevermind second base I'm wreckin' fakes, you ain't on my level blades Cuz I score so much, I could play for the Devil Rays Fuck tryin', that's all it takes... I'd cook ya somethin', but ya chances is baked Lyrical restraint, sayin' he's nice, still won't get crew calls Stop playin', with yaself, before ya get blue balls It’s true ya’ll, VB’s dick is miniature IV told me, fah sure dawg, but it’s colossal… Compared to the list’a wins in ya signature This isn’t fair, this kid smells like poop, pew (bwahaha =X) But I’d rather smell his ass, than look at him in a tutu (2-2) Only 2 wins you’ll get, were no shows, it’s true too Next week you can battle MADDRAPPER, but even he’ll do you Woohoo!, your mom's sick of the siamese twins, that she made Then cut Blade into two parts, and he still wouldn't B-Lade (be laid)

09-26-2003, 12:56 AM	#8 (permalink)
EnMity Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Philly Posts: 10	Vizz - Pretty solid verse , i was feelin it thru out, I liked the Trash Line ...Hit hard...Fathers that coach line was Ok ..The written mistakes line was Ight ... Last Bar was Good, pretty Good verse Overall... 7/10 Copy- Hmmm, started off a lil iffy , But really picked it up in the middle with the wins in ya signature line ...hit hard....tutu line was eh, But i did love the last bar ..The B-lade was creative, 6.9/10 overall i think Viz was a lil more consistent ... Vote- Vizz __________________ RM Record 0-0

09-26-2003, 10:46 AM	#9 (permalink)
Vadik Registered User Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Game Over Posts: 5,736	Vizz came on point...flow was too nice...and most of the lines were good...Citizen Kane line was fresh as fuck. Copy came not good at all....horrible lines like the tu-tu (& how the hell are you gonna laugh at your own lines in brackets? WTF?)....I've seen so much better from you dogg... Vote = Vizz Blade v2.0 __________________ RIP Metheus - 12/23/2003 RIP Babak - 03/25/2006 RIP Melissa - 05/23/2006

09-26-2003, 10:59 AM	#10 (permalink)
Tony Elbow >><< Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Blah Posts: 2,092	vizz blade had more consistant better flowing punches..copy had nice shit too but I found it a lil borin at times... Best from VB: im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro.. copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads.. best from copy: But I’d rather smell his ass, than look at him in a tutu (2-2) Vote: Vizz Blade

09-26-2003, 11:07 AM	#11 (permalink)
Wordage The Coming of Age.... Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 288	vote= VB2 Vizz' flow was hot and had some nice concepts. Liked the "Fed download" and the opener the best. Had some good wordplay as well. Copywritten wasn't as creative with his punches, flow was ok but lacked wordplay. Kinda liked the closer but that was all. Goodluck to both of ya.

09-26-2003, 11:34 AM	#12 (permalink)
ARIZCATZ Game Of Death Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Home of the scandalous, big, bad Los Angeles. Posts: 792	VizzBlade's best that records awful fittin.. look at ya competition.. biters vote against me..cuz they cant 'get it, copywritten' you can bet that ill be winning.. no matter the vote count.. cuz jeff'll see ur trash.. & this battle'll get thrown out.. im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro.. copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads.. Man, that was all hot. Nice flow. im rawer than most.. vizz is a blade.. i either shame the ill, or-son welles*.. LIKE CITIZEN KANE.. Line of the battle easy. Copy's best Saw Vizzes pic, face busted, no wonder he feels outta place Never touched a bitch, nevermind second base Pretty nice. Coulda been worded better. Vizz takes this one easy. Much more consistent from top to bottom and the Citizen Kane line has to be in the mag this week. Fire. __________________ http://www.myspace.com/gameofdeathstrikes http://www.soundclick.com/gameofdeath I open a hole right in ya chest Stick a knife in ya soul And take ya life after taking ya death.

09-26-2003, 02:20 PM	#14 (permalink)
The Grimm One No place like the ghetto. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Catch me in the hood. If you allowed there. Posts: 181	Vote=Vizz Blade.... Reason: Because, to me, Copy just came with too much homo irrelevent homo shit, while Vizz just came raw.... Good battle all together y'all! >>Grimm<< __________________ The Crew DMeTRIUS - Cynacal aka Break it - Atreyu - Monolith - ROC-C - Dr. Perfect - 5 Starre - J Rocca - M.H. - simply amazing - The Grimm One

09-26-2003, 03:08 PM	#15 (permalink)
Monolith slowly claps Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: The Heavens... Posts: 2,077	Vizz took this easily.. Copywritten didnt really have any lines I could feel.. vote=Vizz __________________ ~Monolith~ *~"I climb the Tower of Babble..and toss emcees from the balcony"* ~**

09-26-2003, 03:37 PM	#16 (permalink)
Noggah Politically Incorrect Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Da Dirty Posts: 159	Vizz easily got this wit lines like copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads.. shit along those lines, orson welles line was cool too... Overall he just had better punches n wordplay, etc.... Only Copywritten line i liked was the blue balls one, the rest just lacked... so vote = Vizz __________________ The 1 and only...

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09-26-2003, 03:47 PM	#17 (permalink)
Vizz Blade V2.0 Guest Posts: n/a	fuck a count i win Last edited by Vizz Blade V2.0; 09-28-2003 at 06:43 PM.

09-26-2003, 05:53 PM	#18 (permalink)
Copywritten Copy Me Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,570	Haha, good shit vizz...

09-26-2003, 06:41 PM	#19 (permalink)
R.A.M. Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: bigO Posts: 435	copy did come hella ill fo sho, but he wasnt able to edge vizz out. a very strong shwoing by vizz. some really ill shit. the feds/copwrite line was raw. some real clever shit vote- vizz blade

09-26-2003, 07:42 PM	#20 (permalink)
IgloS I. Got. Lots. Of. Skill Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Ca Posts: 1,438	that records awful fittin.. look at ya competition.. biters vote against me..cuz they cant 'get it, copywritten' ^nice im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro.. copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads.. ^I liked this one too im rawer than most.. vizz is a blade.. i either shame the ill, or-son welles*.. LIKE CITIZEN KANE.. ^haha, that was some thing I havent seen before Saw Vizzes pic, face busted, no wonder he feels outta place VS Only 2 wins you’ll get, were no shows, it’s true too Next week you can battle MADDRAPPER, but even he’ll do you ^okay, worded strange tho Woohoo!, your mom's sick of the siamese twins, that she made Then cut Blade into two parts, and he still wouldn't B-Lade ^ehh, too forced for my taste vote-Vizz I don't know what to say coppy.. how can you expect to win by dropping set ups like this? This isn’t fair, this kid smells like poop, pew (bwahaha =X)

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