[WK/1] T.a.C 0-0 v. .:Pain:. 0-0 (T.a.C wins)

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Old 11-02-2009, 01:01 AM   #1 (permalink)
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[WK/1] T.a.C 0-0 v. .:Pain:. 0-0 (T.a.C wins)


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Old 11-02-2009, 01:07 AM   #2 (permalink)
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You’re why X killed the league, yes my friend its true
You vs me in the rstl champ match,
I don’t blame him, if I thought you had a chance of champin my league I’d end it too
Against you in both leagues, so 2 wins I should maintain
But if I gotta read 2 verses you write, maybe I should be the one named .:Pain:.
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Find a cuter guy/dog combination than me and dog Jigga (HOV!).
Dudes got a lame dame, but this’ll cause laughter within his spouse
His nagger in a blouse named their dog Hov to have a rapper in this house
This bastards got no doubt, you got the FLF back our guarded ember
So trust, we ain’t lettin no motherfuckers pick on our retarded member
No point in trippin, fag, you should be quittin rap
But your nickname is fittin,chap because Jae Keeps spittin wack
Listen lad, you’re legacy is broke, schmuck
At least as long as you live, one person will think you don’t suck
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Old 11-06-2009, 03:03 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Number 1: You live in San Francisco with rich folks,
The gayest fuckin' city in the world, that's where he lives yo,
Number 2: You're a virgin, at least till monday, it seems,
Cuz this poor bastard will see he can get it in both leagues,
Number 3: You post more than anyone here could know,
You're fuckin' nineteen, go out, start drinkin' beers with hoes!
But he won't, do the addition, I don't hate the peeps, but tacky,
Just come out the closet, it's plain to see you're a faggot,
Let's see how many name plays this dude will poorly use,
"Keeps it wack," "I'm the one in pain,"
That's why we stopped expecting more from you,
FLF yep, you were brought in cuz you live life in bed with milk and tea,
I was brought in to give this bitch some writing credibility...
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You're fuckin' nineteen, go out, start drinkin' beers with hoes!

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You’re why X killed the league, yes my friend its true
You vs me in the rstl champ match,
I don’t blame him, if I thought you had a chance of champin my league I’d end it too
This bastards got no doubt, you got the FLF back our guarded ember
So trust, we ain’t lettin no motherfuckers pick on our retarded member

cool battle here, but I got tac taking this one with better material. His opener was solid & it was a personal which made it more effective, kinda fell off after that but the retard line got a chuckle out of me. Pain was ok but i wasnt feeling the 1,2,3 shit that took away from his verse. The personal I quoted was cool, but he really had no hard punches after that.

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Old 11-07-2009, 11:58 PM   #9 (permalink)
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This was a good battle, i got Tac winning this tho.

Pain you came coo tho.. i personally thougth the number shit was a nice leadup with potential to make a dope punch, but the length of the setup leading to the faggot ending in line 4 didnt amaze me as much as i thought it wouldv'e, besides that, you came wit a solid finish, this was the best line:

Let's see how many name plays this dude will poorly use,
"Keeps it wack," "I'm the one in pain,"
That's why we stopped expecting more from you,

Tac came pretty nice, the only real complaint i had was that some lines were a lil wordy. but, your punches still came out efffective. i thought these lines were good:

Against you in both leagues, so 2 wins I should maintain
But if I gotta read 2 verses you write, maybe I should be the one named .:Pain:.
No point in trippin, fag, you should be quittin rap
But your nickname is fittin,chap because Jae Keeps spittin wack

^thought those were good punches. good battle

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Old 11-08-2009, 04:57 PM   #10 (permalink)
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hmm...

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cool and consistent work here. the closer was good and the retard line got a smile out of me. however the problem with your verse was that it's not "vicious", for lack of better word. u played it kind of reserve...or at least it felt that way. also, when i first read ur verse, i sorta liked that "Pain" line until....

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(continuing from tac's verse)...this lines here, lol:
Let's see how many name plays this dude will poorly use,
"Keeps it wack," "I'm the one in pain,"
but on a side note, this could easily be considered 'feeding', but i'll give pain the benefit of the doubt cause i've been around him before and he aint shady like that. But back to the point, i probably could've overlooked that but the name play, as pain predicted, really wasn't that great.

So with that said...i gotta go against the grain and vote Pain. His personals were harder, despite the lack of creativity, lol. But above all, he had the most important factor which was entertainment. i enjoyed Pain's verse more, simple as that. e z.
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Old 11-09-2009, 01:46 AM   #12 (permalink)
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up 2-1...Gopher your vote doesnt count, you need an explanation
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You’re why X killed the league, yes my friend its true
You vs me in the rstl champ match,
I don’t blame him, if I thought you had a chance of champin my league I’d end it too
ok opener

Against you in both leagues, so 2 wins I should maintain
But if I gotta read 2 verses you write, maybe I should be the one named .:Pain:.
nah

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Find a cuter guy/dog combination than me and dog Jigga (HOV!).
Dudes got a lame dame, but this’ll cause laughter within his spouse
His nagger in a blouse named their dog Hov to have a rapper in this house
rhyme scheme cool, content blah

This bastards got no doubt, you got the FLF back our guarded ember
So trust, we ain’t lettin no motherfuckers pick on our retarded member
this bastards got no doubt? ok, it rhymes...

No point in trippin, fag, you should be quittin rap
But your nickname is fittin,chap because Jae Keeps spittin wack
nah

Listen lad, you’re legacy is broke, schmuck
At least as long as you live, one person will think you don’t suck
what?

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Number 1: You live in San Francisco with rich folks,
The gayest fuckin' city in the world, that's where he lives yo,
ehh

Number 2: You're a virgin, at least till monday, it seems,
Cuz this poor bastard will see he can get it in both leagues,
thorough

Number 3: You post more than anyone here could know,
You're fuckin' nineteen, go out, start drinkin' beers with hoes!
lol

But he won't, do the addition, I don't hate the peeps, but tacky,
Just come out the closet, it's plain to see you're a faggot,
ehh

Let's see how many name plays this dude will poorly use,
"Keeps it wack," "I'm the one in pain,"
That's why we stopped expecting more from you,
lol

FLF yep, you were brought in cuz you live life in bed with milk and tea,
I was brought in to give this bitch some writing credibility...
ok close


overall, was feeling pain's verse more here. they both had some throwaway lines, but there was nothing from TaC that even resembled anything interesting.


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up 2-1...Gopher your vote doesnt count, you need an explanation
Ah, my bad.

I think Tac's "if you were champin my league, I'd end it too" was the nail in the coffin, and was a very good strategy to start out a verse with. Kind of hard to be personal in a text league, so props to Tac on that. On top of that, I didn't particularly care for Pain labeling his punches Numbers 1, 2, and 3.
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Old 11-09-2009, 12:44 PM   #15 (permalink)
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lmfao. botw. pain had a few dope lines, getting specific about his opponents and whatnot.
holy shit, tac just comitted homi !


Number 3: You post more than anyone here could know,
You're fuckin' nineteen, go out, start drinkin' beers with hoes!
FLF yep, you were brought in cuz you live life in bed with milk and tea,
I was brought in to give this bitch some writing credibility...

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tac's entire verse.

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You’re why X killed the league, yes my friend its true
You vs me in the rstl champ match,
I don’t blame him, if I thought you had a chance of champin my league I’d end it too
This bastards got no doubt, you got the FLF back our guarded ember
So trust, we ain’t lettin no motherfuckers pick on our retarded member

These were the only two worth quoting, everything else was pretty blah..that opener was pretty good. And that Retarded member line was jokes, lol...

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you really didn't have anything really worth quoting...the only one close was

Let's see how many name plays this dude will poorly use,
"Keeps it wack," "I'm the one in pain,"
That's why we stopped expecting more from you,

and it was kind of a feed off his verse...I've seen you come wayyyy harder than this Pain..step it back up sir

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Vote- TaC

I just liked his verse much better. With Pains verse I just didnt think that it was tight. Probably could have done it without the whoe "number one" thing. I didnt really think that there was anything quotable from either verse, but I did like the pick on the retarted member line. I thought that was the best line of both verses. Pretty decent battle but Tacky took this one.
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