[WK/1] Gramur 0-0 v. PhreshAir 0-0 (Gramur wins)

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Old 11-02-2009, 01:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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[WK/1] Gramur 0-0 v. PhreshAir 0-0 (Gramur wins)


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The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Saturday @ 11:59pm EST.
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Old 11-02-2009, 08:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 11-03-2009, 01:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Really tho, somebody hurry and ban this sir
forget an acid solution...I'm seeing Ph level with the amateurs
You're talentless clown, so I'm not worried
and Hell no I'm not scared of your flawless rec..who care's if you're O n 30
Dude your lame, and your game must of took a vacation
Women reject Air so much...1000s die from suffocation
You're nothing to me, no more than a tease
fuck wind. I'm the type of brees to shake, spin and blow by with ease


lil rusty but whatever....
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Old 11-03-2009, 06:04 PM   #4 (permalink)
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8 bars?! you MUST be in a hurry to lose...

i drop heat everytime, and your just another tragedy/
when it comes to reaching the heights of wack, you defy gravity/
its not just me, everybody hates you like we all failed english/
but truth is, i school kids even after the bells ringin/
your image of dope is what im tearing til it breaks/
so if i stare, its only cuz you have so many glaring mistakes/
your skill doesnt hold any weight, "UR" a "GRAM" this shits easy/
plus you sound like a herb, atleast your name isnt misleading/
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Really tho, somebody hurry and ban this sir
forget an acid solution...I'm seeing Ph level with the amateurs
Dude your lame, and your game must of took a vacation
Women reject Air so much...1000s die from suffocation

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your skill doesnt hold any weight, "UR" a "GRAM" this shits easy/
plus you sound like a herb, atleast your name isnt misleading/


decent little battle here, I got gramur taking this for having an extra quotbale.. & that sufforcation line it was the LOTB good name flip.

vote:gramur
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Really tho, somebody hurry and ban this sir
forget an acid solution...I'm seeing Ph level with the amateurs

Dude your lame, and your game must of took a vacation
Women reject Air so much...1000s die from suffocation

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your skill doesnt hold any weight, "UR" a "GRAM" this shits easy/
plus you sound like a herb, atleast your name isnt misleading/

gram had the PH line i liked, and the suffocation line was pretty creative. i was feeling both. phresh had the misleading line, but he had some problem with rhymes in his verse. english and ringing dont rhyme, lol

vote- gram
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Old 11-07-2009, 11:43 PM   #9 (permalink)
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i thought this was close, both had some hit and miss punches

gramur had a good opener, a coo closer, this line was the only real miss:

You're talentless clown, so I'm not worried
and Hell no I'm not scared of your flawless rec..who care's if you're O n 30


you had these lines that were the best IMO:

Really tho, somebody hurry and ban this sir
forget an acid solution...I'm seeing Ph level with the amateurs
Dude your lame, and your game must of took a vacation
Women reject Air so much...1000s die from suffocation

besides that a coo verse... wanted to see more

Phresh had some good lines as well, this was the only one i felt missed:

i drop heat everytime, and your just another tragedy/
when it comes to reaching the heights of wack, you defy gravity/

^coo flip but ive seen this done before

these lines were the best IMO:


its not just me, everybody hates you like we all failed english/
but truth is, i school kids even after the bells ringin/
your image of dope is what im tearing til it breaks/
so if i stare, its only cuz you have so many glaring mistakes/

good verse... again, i think it would have been better if yall went for atleast a good 10 lines.

i thought it was close, but im giving it to phreshair. Although gramur had a more solid finishing, Phresh came more consistent in my opinion.

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Old 11-08-2009, 04:39 PM   #10 (permalink)
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close battle here...

phresh
came with some decent punches. i like that glaring mistake line most from you. closer was a bit played lol cool. but there was something strange about the 3rd and 4th line. it was like you wrote the punch before the setup lol. Unless you had a concept that i just didn't catch on. but for an 8 line verse, this was iite.

Gramur
you had a decent verse as well. the opener i didnt really get but everybody else seem to. suffocation line was ill and a decent exercise in wordplay on that closer.

i find this battle kind of hard to decide on. Gram strength was consistency, i thought as every line delivered some kind of offense but his set up were kind of random. phresh went in with the stronger punch.

I'm gonna give this to Gramur because 1. consistency 2. although phresh had one strong punch....it, ultimately, became his only punch.
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I voted for Gramur because while Phresh had overall better name flips, he also had some shit that didn't rhyme, which I didn't like. haha
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Really tho, somebody hurry and ban this sir
forget an acid solution...I'm seeing Ph level with the amateurs
Dude your lame, and your game must of took a vacation
Women reject Air so much...1000s die from suffocation

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i drop heat everytime, and your just another tragedy/
when it comes to reaching the heights of wack, you defy gravity/

in comparrison, gramur was harder hitting. the nameplay/wordplays were right onpoint, executed nicely.

vote - gramur
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okay.. close

Really tho, somebody hurry and ban this sir
forget an acid solution...I'm seeing Ph level with the amateurs
- nice wp
You're talentless clown, so I'm not worried
and Hell no I'm not scared of your flawless rec..who care's if you're O n 30
-funny.. nice multi
Dude your lame, and your game must of took a vacation
Women reject Air so much...1000s die from suffocation
-nice wp again
You're nothing to me, no more than a tease
fuck wind. I'm the type of brees to shake, spin and blow by with ease
-to many wps on ari IMO

i drop heat everytime, and your just another tragedy/
when it comes to reaching the heights of wack, you defy gravity/
--nice diss here
its not just me, everybody hates you like we all failed english/
but truth is, i school kids even after the bells ringin/
-not hard hitin here..
your image of dope is what im tearing til it breaks/
so if i stare, its only cuz you have so many glaring mistakes/
-this was ok
your skill doesnt hold any weight, "UR" a "GRAM" this shits easy/
plus you sound like a herb, atleast your name isnt misleading/
-kinda forced to me

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Old 11-09-2009, 03:53 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Vote- Gramur

This battle was only close because they went the minimum number of lines. Gram had more quality punches than Phresh. Phresh had no real quotables as I didnt really even like the closing bar. Also, had one bar that didnt even fucking rhyme. That was 25% percent of the verse that was totally unnessacary. I think that Gram took this battle easily.
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