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11-02-2009, 12:55 AM
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TorrMup
Join Date: Aug 2008
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[WK/1] guywithanaxe 0-0 v. Sound 0-0 (Sound wins)
OFFICIAL RULES & REGULATIONS
DEADLINES
The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Saturday @ 11:59pm EST.
The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59pm EST.
VOTING
[04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
[05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
[06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
[07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
[08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
[09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
[10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.
VERSES
[11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
[12] - The second competitor must match or post less than the first competitor, but in no case can the second competitor exceed the first competitor.
[13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.
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Xquisite Facts
1) Before the boogeyman goes to sleep, he checks his closet for Xquisite
2) Xquisite can kill two stones with one bird
3) an Xquisite punchline is the preferred way of execution in 16 states
4) Xquisite can set ants on fire with a magnifying glass.....at night!
5) Xquisite is what Willis was talking about
If the sky is the limit, then why are there footprints on the moon?
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11-02-2009, 06:50 PM
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blegh
Join Date: May 2009
Posts: 205
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10-12
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11-02-2009, 08:51 PM
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ya heard?
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: capcity, va.
Posts: 107
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yep.
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11-04-2009, 07:24 PM
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blegh
Join Date: May 2009
Posts: 205
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keyd
How’s this dick sucker gonna compete with my swagger?
I saw this fucker’s photo and his lips dwarf Mick Jagger!
And his girl don’t know that he’s bringin home diseases,
Doesn’t this fool know that’s what left Rome in pieces!?
Sound Google’s “little kids” tryin to get his dick to grow,
Spends th next 10 min. behind his bitch imagining Disney shows!
Truth is You ARE a kid, and this Guy’s face is harrier,
I’ll deny Einstein as this Sound fails to break the barrier!
He start’s lookin at my rhymes like, “god damn, that’s witty”
Cuz he got as much originality as the fools who named CapCity
I’m the Transformers, when Sound’s glad to be Broke Back,
I get multiple views, while he only has fags that go back!
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11-06-2009, 02:30 AM
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ya heard?
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: capcity, va.
Posts: 107
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late night key.
some niggas never learn.
Ya fake & useless & it's time you face the music
you're the first guywithanaxe that's a bitch & afraid to use it
wbl, rbl, nbl. i could go on but that's irrelevent, pointless
just know i've champed leagues that you've never had the pleasure of joinin
let me inform you of somethin, A - you're weak as fuck
B - you suck - C - you idolize the all the vets i've beaten up
ain't on my level, this guy's stuck with that rook flow
if this faggot got's a pen & pad he ain't writin music - he's still taking footnotes
Ya dead for sure, trust me cause sound ain't fearin ya
i'll send this guyana's way - you'll find his body near south america
i'm on an entirely different plateau, ya spit boring lines
inferior verses? nah - that's just how voters compare yours to mine
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11-06-2009, 02:48 AM
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Fuck KingKong im KingDong
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 93,425
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guy:
Sound Google’s “little kids” tryin to get his dick to grow,
Spends th next 10 min. behind his bitch imagining Disney shows!
He start’s lookin at my rhymes like, “god damn, that’s witty”
Cuz he got as much originality as the fools who named CapCity
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sound:
Ya fake & useless & it's time you face the music
you're the first guywithanaxe that's a bitch & afraid to use it
wbl, rbl, nbl. i could go on but that's irrelevent, pointless
just know i've champed leagues that you've never had the pleasure of joinin
let me inform you of somethin, A - you're weak as fuck
B - you suck - C - you idolize the all the vets i've beaten up
ain't on my level, this guy's stuck with that rook flow
if this faggot got's a pen & pad he ain't writin music - he's still taking footnotes
vote- Sound
guywithanaxe had some nice punches, but sound killed his verse. most of his lines were quoteable. the capcity line was pretty good. one about leaving Rome in peices, i didnt get at all. idunno. but Sound dropped some heat on dude.
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Last edited by T.a.C; 11-07-2009 at 04:46 PM.
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11-06-2009, 02:54 AM
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Street Fonetiks
Join Date: May 2002
Location: Richmond,CA
Posts: 636
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I got sound winnin this, guy came coo too, but he didnt do enough to pull the win. I though you had some good lines, like this one:
Truth is You ARE a kid, and this Guy’s face is harrier,
I’ll deny Einstein as this Sound fails to break the barrier!
and then you had some weaker ones like the disney show line, good wording and all, but not hard hitting.
I felt sound was more direct and his punches carried a harder sting IMO, I liked these:
wbl, rbl, nbl. i could go on but that's irrelevent, pointless
just know i've champed leagues that you've never had the pleasure of joinin
Ya dead for sure, trust me cause sound ain't fearin ya
i'll send this guyana's way - you'll find his body near south america
i'm on an entirely different plateau, ya spit boring lines
inferior verses? nah - that's just how voters compare yours to mine
^good shit
vote=sound
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11-06-2009, 07:37 PM
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Registered User
Join Date: Apr 2009
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He start’s lookin at my rhymes like, “god damn, that’s witty”
Cuz he got as much originality as the fools who named CapCity
vs
wbl, rbl, nbl. i could go on but that's irrelevent, pointless
just know i've champed leagues that you've never had the pleasure of joinin
let me inform you of somethin, A - you're weak as fuck
B - you suck - C - you idolize the all the vets i've beaten up
ain't on my level, this guy's stuck with that rook flow
if this faggot got's a pen & pad he ain't writin music - he's still taking footnotes
^this was all solid.. pretty nice ish
This one was one sided in my eyes.. sound had consistant verse, with good punches & personals.. that guyana wordplay was a bit forced but creative none the less. guy came alright but wasnt on the same level as sound.
vote:sound
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11-07-2009, 04:25 PM
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TorrMup
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Earf
Posts: 2,167
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up 3-0
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Xquisite Facts
1) Before the boogeyman goes to sleep, he checks his closet for Xquisite
2) Xquisite can kill two stones with one bird
3) an Xquisite punchline is the preferred way of execution in 16 states
4) Xquisite can set ants on fire with a magnifying glass.....at night!
5) Xquisite is what Willis was talking about
If the sky is the limit, then why are there footprints on the moon?
Last edited by Xquisite; 11-09-2009 at 01:42 AM.
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11-08-2009, 01:01 AM
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blegh
Join Date: May 2009
Posts: 205
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"afraid to use it" line.... i swear that shit has been used on me... word for word... but hey good verse all in all... more votes ya'll...
and i'll be back sunday to cast mine
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11-08-2009, 02:01 AM
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ya heard?
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: capcity, va.
Posts: 107
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a verse that weak i swear i...
nah i haven't seen one that weak.
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11-08-2009, 07:25 AM
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Registered User
Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 825
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gotta go with the masses here. sounds verse (both said to be keys) showed a higher mastery of the devices necessary to end in a superior position.
GWAA
How’s this dick sucker gonna compete with my swagger?
I saw this fucker’s photo and his lips dwarf Mick Jagger!
eh for an opener
And his girl don’t know that he’s bringin home diseases,
Doesn’t this fool know that’s what left Rome in pieces!?
barely ok
Sound Google’s “little kids” tryin to get his dick to grow,
Spends th next 10 min. behind his bitch imagining Disney shows!
nah
Truth is You ARE a kid, and this Guy’s face is harrier,
I’ll deny Einstein as this Sound fails to break the barrier!
relatively ok
He start’s lookin at my rhymes like, “god damn, that’s witty”
Cuz he got as much originality as the fools who named CapCity
decent
I’m the Transformers, when Sound’s glad to be Broke Back,
I get multiple views, while he only has fags that go back!
weak closer
SOUND
Ya fake & useless & it's time you face the music
you're the first guywithanaxe that's a bitch & afraid to use it
decent open
wbl, rbl, nbl. i could go on but that's irrelevent, pointless
just know i've champed leagues that you've never had the pleasure of joinin
lol
let me inform you of somethin, A - you're weak as fuck
B - you suck - C - you idolize the all the vets i've beaten up
NICE
ain't on my level, this guy's stuck with that rook flow
if this faggot got's a pen & pad he ain't writin music - he's still taking footnotes
eh
Ya dead for sure, trust me cause sound ain't fearin ya
i'll send this guyana's way - you'll find his body near south america
lmao
i'm on an entirely different plateau, ya spit boring lines
inferior verses? nah - that's just how voters compare yours to mine
nice close
sound pretty easily on this one
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11-08-2009, 11:12 AM
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Registered User
Join Date: Nov 2009
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Guywithanaxe and Sound!,
First of all, You don't have to cuss in the freestyle. You can both be a little more creative and clean with your lyricism, Real talk. Imagine if you were on the streets doing this and there are little children around or your grandmother was around. But because of the craft presented, Sound got this one cause of the closing and better punchline. But both of you can improve. That's my vote.
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11-08-2009, 01:31 PM
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ya heard?
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: capcity, va.
Posts: 107
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the guy above me is mentally retarded.
his vote doesn't count.
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11-08-2009, 03:20 PM
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Eye Glows
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Ca
Posts: 1,626
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guy.. you had a good name play.. some of your other stuff was just decent.. not very creative.. the Jagger lip line been done many times and better.. rhymes where decent.. I see room for improvement
sound.. good punches.. the champed leagues line was good 'cuz I know it's true.. the guyana way word play was dope and creative.. beat up your idiol was ok but been done and you already used a line to hype yourself up.. but you still came with more than guy
vote-sound
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11-08-2009, 05:08 PM
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The Angkorian
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 694
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Quote:
Originally Posted by UrbanBeatz
Guywithanaxe and Sound!,
First of all, You don't have to cuss in the freestyle. You can both be a little more creative and clean with your lyricism, Real talk. Imagine if you were on the streets doing this and there are little children around or your grandmother was around. But because of the craft presented, Sound got this one cause of the closing and better punchline. But both of you can improve. That's my vote.
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^^ WTF?
anywayz...
guy
the opener was that good bruh, lol! i did laugh at it, but for the wrong season. but that aside, u did have some decent lines tho. The Disney line had me chuckling a little. And i like the Capcity line also. overall, ur verse was decent.
sound
this is keyed? i'll take ur word for it, but if that's key, then u should be heading to the champ match very soon, i guess. verse was consistent with some nice stand out lines:
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let me inform you of somethin, A - you're weak as fuck
B - you suck - C - you idolize the all the vets i've beaten up
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the guyana line was a bit force, imo but....
Vote-Sound, who took this pretty comfortably. e z.
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