obviously, i still have plenty of issues formulating a great battle verse..
it's kinda tough when everyone has their own perception / mixed reviews on the content they like to see in text battles.
below are some quotes from my battle vs iglos.
[didnt wanna appear as if i was swaying votes so i waited until today to make a post about it.]
sig:
what are you trying to prove, queer, besides that it's time to lose ??
all your punches are considered sheer sleepers, that's why I Get Lazy and Opt to Snooze
^again very simple, concept is dirt old
my fist's hit like Boom. you're out. your socks, they're out ya shoes
..and i don't doubt that you "got lots of skill", if the objective is blowin' dudes
^this was simple as well, gotta start getting creative bro.. these elementry concepts get you no where on here.
chikwon:
what are you trying to prove, queer, besides that it's time to lose ??
all your punches are considered sheer sleepers, that's why I Get Lazy and Opt to Snooze
nice wordplay here
my fist's hit like Boom. you're out. your socks, they're out ya shoes
..and i don't doubt that you "got lots of skill", if the objective is blowin' dudes
haha ok
rapantics:
my fist's hit like Boom. you're out. your socks, they're out ya shoes
..and i don't doubt that you "got lots of skill", if the objective is blowin' dudes
^that was cool, i was hoping to see more of this
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i'm sure there's a basic format in just completely humiliating an opponent, considering the usage for metaphors / punchlines / creative wordplays, etc. i'm still learning to properly design mine.
so, when yall say my shit is inconsistant it's because i'm trying to find a balance in my approach to text battles based on the way y'all vote and critique my shit.
any positive insights, opinions or comments are appreciated.
[other than the 'name vs name battle area'] there really should be another forum in the league intended as an rbl school, where indivuals that don't meet league requirements can go have a few practice battles in a structured format while actually learning / being taught a thing or two about the fundamentals. i believe some of the vets and legends owe it to themselves to participate in something like this. i know it will regenerate and preservate the art of text battle-ing...
ideas ??