[WK 14] 21. Caveat1 2-1 v. 22. criticize. 2-1 (Vote!)

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Old 07-21-2008, 09:58 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 07-21-2008, 03:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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you want to post early? or are you one of the hoes who waits til the last second to post, if at all?
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whats with emcees today their all dancing with ice fronts,
i liked it better when they just hated white cunts/


cause after this battle, even females will agree that cize(size) doesn't matter..

DOPE.. ................... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

..just playing. This is one of those nameplays that've been used against Crit 75 times.. so it has no impact anymore. Played.


t's fucked up that people tryin to cheat Crit out of it.

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Old 07-24-2008, 03:07 PM   #5 (permalink)
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20 huh?

im twice as good as you and the voters know il win believe me fuck,
while you got nuttin 2 lose like stuffing up sealing the deal w/ a easy slut/
you will be forced to bare the pain! this is the passion of christ,
your writing needs a mentore or 'add-visor' like fashion advice/
quick to ride the coat tails of a winner i bet u vote obama,
while i bomb on cave like marines trying to flush out osama/
no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
im making my way up the rankings at no cost rob and bash,
while your sloping out of the runnings like jamica's bob sled crash/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Caveat1 View Post
I Am Not Anyone Special Just A Kid With A Dream But Good Battle Indeed
beating crit dont b stupid! that dream will make ya knee's shake,
quit joking you need to get smart like the Steve Carell remake/
you will get killed in this match up consider it a touch of fate,
everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape/
i bet this pussy is scared of the monsters under the bed,
your set ups are the worst
so if we say your punchline was raw we mean underprepared/
you dont have the heart to squeeze on a trigger,
coz when it comes to push u'l cave...man like prehistoric niggaz/
aint pulling no shorties so its hookers or gays..if u wanna get laid,
so either your paying for ass..or your ass'-kin for aids/
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whats with emcees today their all dancing with ice fronts,
i liked it better when they just hated white cunts/


cause after this battle, even females will agree that cize(size) doesn't matter..

DOPE.. ................... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

..just playing. This is one of those nameplays that've been used against Crit 75 times.. so it has no impact anymore. Played.


t's fucked up that people tryin to cheat Crit out of it.

Vote - Criticize easy
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Old 07-24-2008, 11:03 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I Post Just Enough Ta Win, But Im Uninspired For Lame Hobbits.
I'd Write To His Level But The Postage Alone Would Break Pockets
THE BATTLE HAD PREDICTIONS..FOLK VOTED..I DOUBLED YA SUM
TILL YA GIRL HOPPED ON THE POLL..SO I GAVE HER A COUPLE OF ONES
CRITS GOT NO COURAGE...HES WILD NERVOUS SEE..
THIS KID GOT THE HEART OF JOHN Q BEFORE THE SURGERY
CAVS THE FUTURE..IM INNOVATIN AND YA HAVE TA WATCH
YOU SO FAR BEHIND THE CURVE YA STRUCK OUT IN THE BATTERS BOX
YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY
THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
YA 2 NO SHOW WINS MAKE EVERYONE LIKE YA LESS
FUCK WINS..YA GETTIN L'S OVER SQUARES LIKE KNIGHTS IN CHESS
DO I EVEN HAVE TO TRY? IM ON TRACK..BLAME YA LOSS
CUZ CAVS THE TERRORIST THREAT ON YA TRAIN OF THOUGHT
HE PROLLY PARTYS HARD..TIPSY AS HE SHAKES AND BENDS
YA DRINK LIKE A FISH..NOW I CAN DUMP YA BODY WHERE U'LL MAKE SOME FRIENDS
i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter
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Old 07-24-2008, 11:44 PM   #7 (permalink)
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you will be forced to bare the pain! this is the passion of christ,
your writing needs a mentore or 'add-visor' like fashion advice/
Lmao that was a bad
quick to ride the coat tails of a winner i bet u vote obama,
while i bomb on cave like marines trying to flush out osama/
no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
Those were decent
bet this pussy is scared of the monsters under the bed,
your set ups are the worst
so if we say your punchline was raw we mean underprepared/
U forget about rhyming?
aint pulling no shorties so its hookers or gays..if u wanna get laid,
so either your paying for ass..or your ass'-kin for aids/
LMAO BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooo ooooooooooo


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CRITS GOT NO COURAGE...HES WILD NERVOUS SEE..
THIS KID GOT THE HEART OF JOHN Q BEFORE THE SURGERY
CAVS THE FUTURE..IM INNOVATIN AND YA HAVE TA WATCH
YOU SO FAR BEHIND THE CURVE YA STRUCK OUT IN THE BATTERS BOX
YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY
^haha
THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
DO I EVEN HAVE TO TRY? IM ON TRACK..BLAME YA LOSS
CUZ CAVS THE TERRORIST THREAT ON YA TRAIN OF THOUGHT
HE PROLLY PARTYS HARD..TIPSY AS HE SHAKES AND BENDS
YA DRINK LIKE A FISH..NOW I CAN DUMP YA BODY WHERE U'LL MAKE SOME FRIENDS
i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter


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Vote Caveat.. he straight styled on that dude
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Old 07-25-2008, 12:24 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 07-25-2008, 01:35 AM   #9 (permalink)
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heh. coo line

guantanamo bay was ok. most of the verse didnt really hit strong. few decent shots. quoted line was the best tho

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CAVS THE FUTURE..IM INNOVATIN AND YA HAVE TA WATCH
YOU SO FAR BEHIND THE CURVE YA STRUCK OUT IN THE BATTERS BOX
YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY


lool

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THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES

HE PROLLY PARTYS HARD..TIPSY AS HE SHAKES AND BENDS
YA DRINK LIKE A FISH..NOW I CAN DUMP YA BODY WHERE U'LL MAKE SOME FRIENDS

coo

overall v/cav

his lines packed more than crits stronger lines and it didnt really have too many downfaults in the verse.
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Old 07-26-2008, 07:40 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Old 07-26-2008, 07:53 PM   #11 (permalink)
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im twice as good as you and the voters know il win believe me fuck,
while you got nuttin 2 lose like stuffing up sealing the deal w/ a easy slut/
no
you will be forced to bare the pain! this is the passion of christ,
your writing needs a mentore or 'add-visor' like fashion advice/
decent
quick to ride the coat tails of a winner i bet u vote obama,
while i bomb on cave like marines trying to flush out osama/
decent
no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
stretch
im making my way up the rankings at no cost rob and bash,
while your sloping out of the runnings like jamica's bob sled crash/
no


Quote:
Originally Posted by Caveat1
I Am Not Anyone Special Just A Kid With A Dream But Good Battle Indeed

beating crit dont b stupid! that dream will make ya knee's shake,
quit joking you need to get smart like the Steve Carell remake/
ok
you will get killed in this match up consider it a touch of fate,
everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape/
lol this was dope
i bet this pussy is scared of the monsters under the bed,
your set ups are the worst
so if we say your punchline was raw we mean underprepared/
decent
you dont have the heart to squeeze on a trigger,
coz when it comes to push u'l cave...man like prehistoric niggaz/
lol nice
aint pulling no shorties so its hookers or gays..if u wanna get laid,
so either your paying for ass..or your ass'-kin for aids/
ehh didn't like this...




I Post Just Enough Ta Win, But Im Uninspired For Lame Hobbits.
I'd Write To His Level But The Postage Alone Would Break Pockets
lol nice
THE BATTLE HAD PREDICTIONS..FOLK VOTED..I DOUBLED YA SUM
TILL YA GIRL HOPPED ON THE POLL..SO I GAVE HER A COUPLE OF ONES
lol nice
CRITS GOT NO COURAGE...HES WILD NERVOUS SEE..
THIS KID GOT THE HEART OF JOHN Q BEFORE THE SURGERY
ok
CAVS THE FUTURE..IM INNOVATIN AND YA HAVE TA WATCH
YOU SO FAR BEHIND THE CURVE YA STRUCK OUT IN THE BATTERS BOX
ok
YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY
aren't dashes between the multi's?
THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
ha nice
YA 2 NO SHOW WINS MAKE EVERYONE LIKE YA LESS
FUCK WINS..YA GETTIN L'S OVER SQUARES LIKE KNIGHTS IN CHESS
ehhh
DO I EVEN HAVE TO TRY? IM ON TRACK..BLAME YA LOSS
CUZ CAVS THE TERRORIST THREAT ON YA TRAIN OF THOUGHT
ok
HE PROLLY PARTYS HARD..TIPSY AS HE SHAKES AND BENDS
YA DRINK LIKE A FISH..NOW I CAN DUMP YA BODY WHERE U'LL MAKE SOME FRIENDS
ok
i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter
lol dope closer


V/ Caveat1
Critcize, although outclassed in this match, had some decent ideas. The rape line and cave man line were pretty nice. My vote goes to Cav though, for just being way more consistent in his verse and he had some pretty creative lines. The closer was nice and his first two punches were sick.
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im twice as good as you and the voters know il win believe me fuck,
while you got nuttin 2 lose like stuffing up sealing the deal w/ a easy slut/
nuttin 2 lose, i suppose that concept coulda been good, but not like that
you will be forced to bare the pain! this is the passion of christ,
your writing needs a mentore or 'add-visor' like fashion advice/
nah it came off as kinda corny
quick to ride the coat tails of a winner i bet u vote obama,
while i bomb on cave like marines trying to flush out osama/
alright, not bad
no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
nice line, good shit
im making my way up the rankings at no cost rob and bash,
while your sloping out of the runnings like jamica's bob sled crash/
concept was good, but not the execution
beating crit dont b stupid! that dream will make ya knee's shake,
quit joking you need to get smart like the Steve Carell remake/
nah just wasn't that witty
you will get killed in this match up consider it a touch of fate,
everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape/
haha, pretty good man. u coulda made this better with a better setup related to the concept tho, but i still liked it
i bet this pussy is scared of the monsters under the bed,
your set ups are the worst
so if we say your punchline was raw we mean underprepared/
good concept but wasn't feelin' the execution of it
you dont have the heart to squeeze on a trigger,
coz when it comes to push u'l cave...man like prehistoric niggaz/
kinda simple but alright
aint pulling no shorties so its hookers or gays..if u wanna get laid,
so either your paying for ass..or your ass'-kin for aids/
ehhh nah

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I Post Just Enough Ta Win, But Im Uninspired For Lame Hobbits.
I'd Write To His Level But The Postage Alone Would Break Pockets
nah, its kinda played
THE BATTLE HAD PREDICTIONS..FOLK VOTED..I DOUBLED YA SUM
TILL YA GIRL HOPPED ON THE POLL..SO I GAVE HER A COUPLE OF ONES
ehh nah same as above
CRITS GOT NO COURAGE...HES WILD NERVOUS SEE..
THIS KID GOT THE HEART OF JOHN Q BEFORE THE SURGERY
alright, not bad
CAVS THE FUTURE..IM INNOVATIN AND YA HAVE TA WATCH
YOU SO FAR BEHIND THE CURVE YA STRUCK OUT IN THE BATTERS BOX
decent, tho u coulda done more with it
YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY
nah this is really played.. i know he did this on a few of his lines so it seems personal, but its been done on a lotta newbs that do that
THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
kinda simple but aight
YA 2 NO SHOW WINS MAKE EVERYONE LIKE YA LESS
FUCK WINS..YA GETTIN L'S OVER SQUARES LIKE KNIGHTS IN CHESS
personal is good but i think u coulda used it better
DO I EVEN HAVE TO TRY? IM ON TRACK..BLAME YA LOSS
CUZ CAVS THE TERRORIST THREAT ON YA TRAIN OF THOUGHT
nah train of thought lines are played
HE PROLLY PARTYS HARD..TIPSY AS HE SHAKES AND BENDS
YA DRINK LIKE A FISH..NOW I CAN DUMP YA BODY WHERE U'LL MAKE SOME FRIENDS
i used a line like this awhile ago n' prolly did it better.. its kinda played
i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter
good closer

Criticize, u had a few lines which were cool like the inmates and touch rape thing was kinda funny. Nameplays were aight but kinda simple. The rest was bad tho, u had some really corny stuff in there. Cav, ur biggest problem was playedness. Like most of ur bars were played so u gotta work on gettin' some better concepts. Also don't cap all ur stuff, its kinda newbish. I thought this was closer than some, but Cav was slightly more consistent, and I think the closer and behind the curve lines were decent and enough to take this.

Vote - Cav
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Old 07-27-2008, 01:30 AM   #13 (permalink)
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you will get killed in this match up consider it a touch of fate,
everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape
^LOL
no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
^cool

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THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
^clever
i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter
^funny

It's wierd voting for Cav because of the way he designs his verses.
with the caps and the wording at times. but he had a better verse
here, it was more entertaining. Crit had lines that were good but
he had lines that I completely wasn't feeeling and brought the
overall quality of his verse down.

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whats with emcees today their all dancing with ice fronts,
i liked it better when they just hated white cunts/


cause after this battle, even females will agree that cize(size) doesn't matter..

DOPE.. ................... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

..just playing. This is one of those nameplays that've been used against Crit 75 times.. so it has no impact anymore. Played.


t's fucked up that people tryin to cheat Crit out of it.

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Old 07-27-2008, 09:50 PM   #15 (permalink)
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everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape
This Was Funny/Nice
no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
Very nice


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THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
lol
i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter
Nice
YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY
probly played... but i liked it.


TAKE THE CAPS OFF ... i didnt enjoy readin the verse like that. but to each there own.
both came decent. no complaints. but ima have to give it to Cav. he had more consistancy in his rhymes. even if they were played.

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Cav:
yo that was a sick ass verse. i dont know why most of it was in CAPS, but not all of it. but it was fire. that closer was the highlight of the verse to me though if i had to pick one stand out line.. with the dump ya body line a close second.

crit:
looks like you still gotta lil work to do, but this wasnt a terrible drop. i cant really pick out one line that really stood out to me, but none were so bad i stopped reading. keep workin at it.

vote - cav pretty easily
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